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minque
post Feb 18 2005, 11:36 PM
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This is the first chapter of the amazing story by OverrideB1, which has been posted in the ES-forums

So you want to know a little more about me, where I come from, how I got to be where I am? That seems a reasonable request and we should have plenty of time for me to tell my tale.
I go by the name of Sudhendra Vahl. That’s not my real name of course, but you’ll soon understand why. I’ll start at the beginning ~ I was raised in a small village about fifty miles west of Rihad, and I was born in the year 401 of the Third Era. What’s that?
Well, that is uncommonly kind of you to say so, although your flattery will gain you nothing. I come from a long-lived species and certain events (which I will relate) have conspired to provide me with a much longer life than is normal ~ even for one of my kind. Now, let me tell you my tale…

The Tale of Sudhendra Vahl :Prologue
I never knew my parents: my mother died giving birth to me and my father, from what I can discover, was an itinerant adventurer passing through on his way to somewhere adventurous from somewhere less adventurous. My mother, Gods rest her soul, caught his eye and there was a brief dalliance. Nine months later, along I came ~ a very short time after that, my mother departed this vale of tears. I have little, or no, recollection of what happened after that ~ although I have expended considerable resources over the years finding out.

Shortly after my mother’s death, I was taken in by the Stendarr temple and, from there, sent to foster parents to be raised. My foster-parents were Stendarrites, although the milk of his mercy ran thinly in their veins. I was just a source of income from the Temple for them and, when that ran out shortly after my tenth birthday, I became cheap labour for them around the farm. Well, I say cheap ~ unpaid would be a much better description. True, I had food and a bed: the food left over after they’d finished eating and a pile of straw atop the storage shed. It was a brief and unhappy childhood; not helped by the fact I was the only Dark Elf in the village.

I grew up being handy with my fists and feet and wasn’t above using my teeth if push came to shove. And when half-a-dozen jeering children, all of whom are better fed and stronger than you, surround you; shove comes surprisingly quickly. I quickly garnered a reputation as a surly and aggressive child among the villagers. Not that I had much of a problem with that: my foster-parents did, however and I was regularly beaten for “starting another fight”. Any attempt to explain that I’d been set upon by six or seven older, stronger children was conveniently ignored.

However, just so you don’t think that it was completely bad, I did have a wonderful forest near the house and, when my foster-parents were away at temple, I could wander through them to my hearts content. It was about this time that I developed quite the interest in the properties of various flora. I soon found a root, common in the woods, the juice of which alleviated the sting of my frequent bruises. I never made much of the interest other than secretly trading useful bits of root and flower to passing traders in exchange for coin or, more frequently, a tattered old book. I took great care not to be seen with the books as I struggled to learn my letters ~ I knew that they’d end up on the fire and I’d end up being punished again if I was caught.

It was probably around my twelfth year that my Talent appeared. I began to notice strange auras around certain things and the feeling that I almost knew what they were for. As the days passed, I began to notice more of these quicksilver flashes and occasionally, when a Noble or Knight rode through the village, a strange tugging sensation if they passed close to me. Obviously not something I could discuss with my foster-parents, I chose to discuss it with a wandering peddler I’d dealt with before. In exchange for some plants and one of my miserly horded golden Drakes, he explained that I was born under the sign of the Apprentice and that what I was seeing was a manifestation of that astrological sign’s influence on my life.

Over the next three years, my friend the peddler would come visit. In return for my identifying magical items, he taught me a couple of useful cantrips. A fire-touch spell, a spell that allowed me to walk on water, and (my personal favourite) a spirit I could summon that would act as a guardian. In secret, I began marking the fifteenth of Sun’s Height as my birthday.

I said that it was a short and bitter childhood, and the truth of that became apparent shortly after my fifteenth “birthday”. My foster-mother was away visiting her mother ~ a woman I’d never met, but who was reputed to be insanely rich and insanely eccentric. One night, deep in his cups, my foster-father came up into the loft of the storage shed and attempted to… well, I probably don’t need to draw you a diagram, do I? Needless to say, he got a fist in the face that broke his nose and a shovel across that back of the head that turned out his lights for a while. Gathering my few tattered clothes and the meagre stash of Drakes I’d accumulated, I took a sack-full of provender from the larder, the best horse from the yard and, bidding a farewell to my hidden books, I set off in the general direction of away.

I figured that everyone would think I’d headed towards Rihad so that was the last direction I wanted. North lay Taneth and, beyond that, the wilds of Hammerfell. East lay the border with Cyrodiil, as it would if I headed south. Cyrodiil it was then and, angling roughly southeast, I rode off into the night. A few days later, hungry and dusty, I crossed into Sutch. There it became obvious that the supply of coin I had wouldn’t last too long and so, with some reluctance, I sold my steed and blended into the crowds.
Over the course of the next ten years I drifted from town to town, never staying in one spot for long, making a passable living identifying useful plants or identifying ensorcelled items. Naturally, I picked up a few useful skills along the way: my years of chopping wood proved to be handy as I found I could wield a pretty mean axe and I taught myself the rudiments of fighting with a long-blade. I won’t say I led a blameless existence, but I was no more of a thief, cutpurse, or mugger than anyone else of my station. Truth be told, I tried to avoid stealing things except when needs must: often I was the only Dark Elf in the town and knew that suspicion would fall on me pretty quickly.

So I drifted along, wandering from town to town with nary a care in the world. However, it was in one town that I happened to overhear a couple of Legion types asking about a Dark Elf named “Mishkin” who was wanted for assault and theft in Hammerfell. Heart pounding, I ran back to my hideout, collected my sparse belongings and got out of town pretty damn’ sharply, I can tell you. In a panic, I made the cardinal mistake – isolating myself with no options. I hit Anvil running, and booked myself passage on the first ship to very far away from here. It virtually emptied my purse, but I got passage on a vessel sailing to a port near Rimmen. I knew nothing about the place except that it was in Elsweyr and it was very far away from Hammerfell. Sounded perfect.

The journey took a couple of months, and I was more than happy to step off the boat in the bustling port and blend once more into the crowds. Of course, I’d forgotten how quickly bad news could spread, how persistent the Empire is in punishing wrongdoers, and the spitefulness of my foster-parents. I’d travelled under the name of “Vahl” and used the first name “Sudhendra” if I had to ~ it was a name I’d read in a book at sometime and it struck me as being a pretty name, certainly better than Mishkin. There I was, in a foreign place, with no money and a false identity. That’s when I made cardinal mistake number two.

My only excuse is that I was exhausted. I’d been running around trying to gather up some much needed coin and had pushed myself over the limit. I purchased a little bread and meat and sat in a pretty little park to eat my meal. Next thing I know, I’m being shaken awake by a burly guard who was being watched with some amusement by his three equally burly compatriots.

“You can’t sleep here,” he said. “What’s your name?”

I told you I was tired, I automatically answered “Mishkin Dark-Skin”.

“Says here you’re Sudhendra Vahl and, wait, did you say Mishkin Dark-Skin?”

The four of them fell on me like a landslide, hitting me with their short wooden clubs before dragging me, battered and bruised, to the local lockup. Where I spend a very uncomfortable night before being hauled before the local Imperial magistrate. The charges were ridiculous, to say the least: “Assault on a village Elder”, “Theft of three hundred Drakes”, “Theft of a prize stallion”, “Assuming a false Identity”, “Vagrancy”. Oh, and my personal favourite, “Resisting arrest”.

I might just have talked my way out of the first five charges but that resisting arrest one? That one was the clinching offence: the whole trial took under thirty minutes, I wasn’t given a single chance to refute the charges or make a defence and found myself sentenced to ten years in the Imperial prison at Alabaster.

I’d been in prison for a year when things took a turn for the very strange. During my sentence, I’d been a good girl; following orders, staying out of trouble, that sort of thing. Unlikely though it was, there was a very remote chance I might get a reprieve if I showed that I was a model citizen. So, I bowed and scraped, cleaned out the latrines, washed, cooked, and did all the usual stuff they make you do in jail. In addition, I kept in shape as best as I could. Then, one night, the door to my cell slammed open and I was grabbed and dragged out into the courtyard. A cloaked and hooded figure looked at me from the dark recess of his hood and muttered something to the commandant. Next thing I knew I was being hustled into a coach and driven out of the prison. We stopped but once, and I was made to stand there while my original abductors drove off in the coach and another, plainer coach was brought in. The hooded figure turned to me and said something that sounded like “Somnus” and a sudden blackness descended.


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Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)

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minque
post Feb 18 2005, 11:58 PM
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The morning was bright and clear as I stepped out of Dura gra-Bol’s house and made my way to the ‘Eight Plates’. It had become my habit, when in Balmora, to break my fast there. After a brief chat with the patron, I cast a Void-Walk spell and travelled to Sadrith Mora.

As I made my way up from the slave-market, I was stopped by a larger than normal Argonian. He said he was a pilgrim and, when I asked what his pilgrimage was, he replied that he was seeking a saviour for his people. This Argonian even went as far as to state that I might be the saviour he was looking for but, if so, I had a grand destiny to fulfil. That cheered me immensely and kept me chuckling all the way to Wolverine Hall. The only destiny I have is to earn a sizeable sum of money and settle down somewhere comfortable and safe.

Hrundi was pleased to see me and, after expressing his utter lack of surprise at Sondaale’s irresponsible behaviour, he paid me five hundred Septims for escorting her and, as he put it, ‘keeping her skinny Altmer asse safe’. “Now,” he said after I’d scooped the money into my purse, “I’ve got another wee job lassie, but it’s nae one ye’re goin’ tae like.”

I knew immediately that it wasn’t ~ Hrundi’s accent had become broader than normal, and that was always a sign that he was under some stress. I indicated that he should continue telling me about the job he had. “It’s a bounty,” he said, “on a Wood Elf name a’ Engaer. Yon haunless bugger is a mercenary frae Master Neloth if ye please. An’ we’ve been given a bounty on him.”

“Why is that a problem,” I asked. “I mean, I don’t like bounty work very much, but it’s a necessary job.”

“Ach weel,” he responded despondently. “See you, this Engaer is a mercenary frae Master Neloth right? Master Neloth as in Telvanni Master Neloth ~ ye ken, them long-lived buggers that let us wee folk live here under sufferance? Now, hae d’ye think he’s goin’ tae feel about us when we whack one a’ his mercenaries? In three words Sudhendra: blod rasende over!”

“Very angry?” I hazarded.

He grinned and said, “Close enough lassie, close enough.”

“Well,” I suggested, “why don’t we just ignore the bounty?”

“An’ let the problem go away? Would nae be that simple lass,” he responded. “See, the bounty has been put on Engaer by Arch-Magister Gothren: the head o’ the whole House. An’ guess what he’s going tae be if we dinnae complete the bounty?”

“Three words?” I said cheekily. He laughed aloud at that and nodded.

“Aye. Damned if we do an’ damned if we dinnae.”

“I’ll need some supplies,” I said. “A good sharp dagger, a couple of chameleon potions, and some poison.” I listed when Hrundi asked me what I needed.

“I cannae help you with the potions or poison lass,” he said, “but the dagger? Here, take this.” With that he handed me a viciously sharp dagger of a design I’d never seen before, made of a very lightweight, dull grey metal. “Adamantium,” he explained when I raised an eyebrow at him. “Very light and takes a wicked sharp edge. As for yer potions? Try old Plebo downstairs. Get yerself a couple o’ levitation potions too, from what I hear Engaer is up on the top-level o’ the tower. Now, for poisons, I suggest you try…”

“…Dirty Muriel’s” I finished for him. He nodded and smiled. I scooped up the dagger and went to make my purchases. I had no trouble getting the requisite potions from the apothecary in the chapel and, after a little haggling; I managed to lay my hands on a small vial of Brown Spider Poison from a shady character in the local hostelry. While not as… immediate as I would have liked, it was virulent enough stuff to stop the heart of a Wood Elf fairly quickly.

My plan had the elegance of simplicity, and it went like clockwork. Almost like clockwork. Downing a levitation potion, I walked air to the top of the tower and touched down on a sort of balcony affair at the top. There was only the once entrance from here ~ a round wooden door that led into the upper reaches of Tel Naga. Walking up to the door, I swung it open with one hand whilst draining the phial of chameleon potion with the other. Stepping inside, I yelled “Engaer!” at the top of my voice. One of the figures in the chamber to my right spun around and looked for whoever had called him.

Sticking to the shadows (and there were plenty of those in this gloomy place), I raced around behind him and drove the envenomed dagger into the middle of his back. See, elegant and simple? As the Bosmer started to froth at the mouth and convulse, I headed back the way I’d come. Only to have my chameleon potion wear off just at the same moment a large and heavily armoured guard stepped into the doorway. Oh, how the Gods do enjoy their little japes.

“Assassin,” he rumbled threateningly.

“No,” I said quickly. “Fighters Guild.”

“Ahh,” this human mountain said slowly. “You must be here after the bounty on Engaer then? Right.” And, with that, this walking crag simply turned around and strode off. Even more surprisingly, the room’s other two occupants ~ both of whom had started to draw their weapons ~ simply sheathed them and turned away as though nothing had happened. I was, to put it mildly, completely taken aback.

“What the frell happened in there?” I asked Hrundi.

He just shrugged and shook his head as he counted out my one thousand Septims bounty money. “Strange people these Telvanni,” he said, “with some very odd attitudes to things. I really can’t explain it ~ sometimes they react like you’d expect them to: other times they do something completely inexplicable. Like that.

“Well,” he said ruefully, “looks like you’ve cleaned me out a’ work lass. I’ve got nothing except a wild Kwama-Egg hunt left.”

“A what?” I asked, visions of someone wandering through egg-mines picking up eggs going through my mind.

“There’s this old tale,” Hrundi said, “of a Kwama Queen that lays golden eggs. This queen supposedly lays one gold egg once every hundred years. ‘Tis said that the Pudai Mine was found by a lucky young man eight hundred years ago who took some golden eggs and made himself a fortune from them. Now we have a very wealthy Telvanni collector from Necrom who’s looking for the seven eggs that the queen has laid since then.

“The problem is, the whole thing is a fairy tale, the sort of thing mothers tell their bairns o’ a night.”

I laughed and told Hrundi that, should I ever stumble across this lost egg-mine, I’d be sure to bring him back seven golden eggs. We then spoke a little about the situation within the guild. He confirmed that the guild was riddled with Camonna Tong sympathisers, including the Guild-Masters at Balmora and Vivec City. He urged me to be very careful whom I dealt with. Assuring him that I would be, I went to Dirty Muriel’s for a libation and a think.

I’d left Balmora because of the Camonna Tong problems there, I reflected as I sipped a glass of Sujamma. So, I wasn’t too anxious to run straight to Vivec City and get involved in the subterfuges there. That only left Percius Mercius in Ald’ruhn ~ and I had a pretty good idea that he’d want me to be out there fighting the Camonna Tong influence in the guild. And that, at the moment, was quite beyond me. Despite my recent improved skills with an axe and my fledgling attempts at magic, I was still woefully under skilled: and likely to be serious outclassed if I went against some of the higher ranking members of the Fighter’s Guild. As I sat wondering where, exactly, that left me, I overheard a conversation.


Here Ends Part 1[b][/b]


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minque   Sudhendra Vahl, the first chapter   Feb 18 2005, 11:36 PM
minque   Chapter One: A Stranger in a strange place A soft...   Feb 18 2005, 11:38 PM
minque   With a rusty creaking noise, the wooden door swung...   Feb 18 2005, 11:39 PM
minque   I awoke, rested and somewhat refreshed, just a lit...   Feb 18 2005, 11:40 PM
minque   After breaking my fast by eating everything edible...   Feb 18 2005, 11:41 PM
minque   Feeling rather achy, and shaking off the residue o...   Feb 18 2005, 11:42 PM
minque   My nightmare, which I don’t remember, shook me awa...   Feb 18 2005, 11:43 PM
Lucidarius   Dear moderators, The above post (shortened in qu...   Aug 1 2005, 09:03 PM
minque   “These agents, Alynu Aralen, Sathasa Nerothren, Fo...   Feb 18 2005, 11:44 PM
minque   When I awoke, I sat up and surveyed my surrounding...   Feb 18 2005, 11:44 PM
minque   The following morning I was up bright and early, s...   Feb 18 2005, 11:45 PM
minque   I crossed the dusty track that passed for a road i...   Feb 18 2005, 11:46 PM
minque   I won’t pretend that I had a pleasant night: that ...   Feb 18 2005, 11:47 PM
minque   The club proved to be very hard indeed, studded me...   Feb 18 2005, 11:48 PM
minque   So it was bleary eyed and stiff after a most uncom...   Feb 18 2005, 11:48 PM
minque   After breaking my fast at the ‘Eight Plates’, I wa...   Feb 18 2005, 11:49 PM
minque   Hrundi and I broke our fast together before I star...   Feb 18 2005, 11:51 PM
minque   The tomb was as dark as… well, the grave to be hon...   Feb 18 2005, 11:52 PM
minque   Sometimes you get a lucky break, and that was what...   Feb 18 2005, 11:53 PM
minque   I made my way upstairs to the Mages Guildhall ~ wh...   Feb 18 2005, 11:54 PM
minque   Sadrith Mora was my destination this morning; I ne...   Feb 18 2005, 11:55 PM
minque   I almost gagged as the door opened under my tentat...   Feb 18 2005, 11:57 PM
Dantrag   Well, I'm only a bout a fourth of the way through ...   Feb 23 2005, 10:22 PM
Mazuk   Only thing I can say is awesome. Great story. Ke...   Aug 1 2005, 09:11 PM
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