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post Jun 20 2005, 05:45 AM
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Well I bot bored and started a new FF (And will work on it if people like it), dont worry though I will still work on my other, I am just too lazy to get the info I need *Hint hint*. So on with what I have so far!

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My name is Clangor, I am a Bosmer. Though I am not your run of the mill Bosmer, no I am quite different. For one thing I am very adept with medium armors, and I love my Long Swords. Maybe you would like to here more about me. Well I have shocking white hair, which I hear matches my eyes, or so the girls say. Many women say I am handsome, I don’t know for sure, it could just be flattery.

I grew up in my native land of Valenwood; I spent all my free time outside, usually in the trees. Like most of my race I am shorter then most others, but I am actually tall for a Bosmer, just shorter then an Imperial. Unlike most of my race I am also more suited to fighting close up, then the other Bosmer. Don’t get me wrong, I am very good with a bow, in fact I won multiple Archery contests in my youth.

Another thing that sets me apart from the other Bosmer it that fact that I have absolutely no since of direction. I would get lost many times a day in my youth, until I memorized the woods. I as so have far greater hearing then normal, the gods way of balancing me out? Who knows.

I sit here at my desk in my manor, which is in Mournhold. I only use this manor as a resting place when on business trips at the city.
I prefer my small house in the woods of Cyrodill, though not as great as Valenwood, it is the best I can have. You might wonder why someone of my standards would want to live in a forest, well I never really got used to the exile. I still here that voice in my dreams…

“Clangor of Valenwood. You are hereby sentenced to one year of manual labor in the Ebony mines of Morrowind, with the charges of, the smuggling of illegal narcotics, assaulting an officer of the Imperial army, resisting arrest, and disturbing the peace.”

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Well if anyone likes it I will do more work on it, so please comment. (You can acually make this Bosmer with a few mods.)

P.S. If anyone has a good name then please tell me.


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post Aug 28 2005, 05:31 AM
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Wow, I am really lazy... Well here is a new chapter for you all. Enjoy.

The Journey of Clangor

Chapter Four: Seyda Neen’s odd job man


Walking into the trade house I started to wonder just how much wealth there was to make on Vvardenfell. Not much I would bet, after seeing Seyda Neen, but it would have to be enough. Not having much money for spending I ignored everything in the first room, but instead walked up a set of stairs leading to a small bar.

Having a seat at the bar I asked the Redguard bartender about any “odd jobs” I might be able to do.

“I heard that Arrille needed someone to make a list of his inventory, he would pay very well too.” Phew, not cleaning.

“Really? I must have a chat with him soon, could you point him out to me?” So long as it’s not that one Wood Elf…

“He is the store owner, Altmer, down stairs and behind the desk, can’t miss him.” Well I already did once.

I walked down the stairs to this “Arrille” and talked to him about the small job he had to offer. Thankfully if was as simple as I thought it would be, come here tonight after all the customers left and write down how many of any given item he has for sale. Sounds easy right? Wrong, by the time I finished one bookcase full of junk Arrille came up to me with a basket of various herbs and such. Now as good as I am at Alchemy I hate going through all the different ingredients just to find the one away from the rest and right next to the lamp.

I barely got finished in time for the trade house to open, not even listening to the Altmer I tried to keep my eyes open while Arrille led me up to a free bed, telling me about the good job I did and how I could us one of the rentable beds free of charge. “Yeah right” I barely managed the think to my self, “He will just pay me less later on”.

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It was near six in the evening when I woke up the next day, after attempting to get my armor back (Quite unsuccessfully I might add) several times I gave up and walked down the stairs wearing only a pair of pants. Arrille caught up with me as I passed the counter and handed me a small and rather heavy bag which clinked when I grabbed it, making me think there was gold in it.

“For all of your troubles last night.” He whispered into my ear. I think “troubles” is a bit of an understatement.

“Thank you.” I replied with a short bow. Gods I hate bowing to an Altmer…

I quickly walked out the open door of the trade shop as though running was illegal and a crazy Nord was after me, I now know there was a crazy Nord after me, and his name is Hiskar.

I had barely gone twenty feet from the open doorway of the shop when I heard the sound of a rather large man running at top speed toward a certain Bosmer named Clangor. Needless to say I was twitchy and had my bow out and an arrow halfway notched before seeing the unarmed Nord before me.

“Hey! New guy!” Keep it down please! I am not much of a morning person.

“What did you just call me?” Well I know what the word means…

“Never mind that, I need to know if that Wood Elf got to you.” What are you talking about?

“Huh? What Wood Elf? What do you mean?” We are called Bosmer, get it right.

“The annoying one, Fargoth.” Oh him, go ahead and call him a Wood Elf.

“What about him?” Please say some horrible “accident” happened to him…

“Did he get all “buddy” “buddy” with you?” Please don’t remind me…

“He tried. Why?” Need a “accident” to happen?

“I need someone to find out where he keeps his “stash”.” You mean spying?

“Why exactly? Not in your “Yelling to someone across the island” voice please.

“He has not been paying his taxes, but that does not matter, can you do it?” Old Fargoth is a cheapskate huh?

“So long as you have the money to pay for it.” By money I mean actual gold, not “furs”.

The Nord proceeded to tell me every detail of his plan in his loud booming voice, giving me a headache by the time we were half way through. It was a simple plan, hide on top of the lighthouse around ten o’clock, watch Fargoth stash his money, jump down off the lighthouse (Hopefully without breaking something.), get the stuff in the stash, return the stash to Hiskar. Like I said, simple. To bad simple is not always better.



Well now I can start a new story tommarow in peace of mind knowing I have kept my promise.

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Zelda_Zealot   No name FF   Jun 20 2005, 05:45 AM
Zelda_Zealot   Well I got a name... not to great though. Oh and h...   Jun 20 2005, 08:26 AM
minque   I like it, I like your slightly humouristic writin...   Jun 20 2005, 09:09 AM
Dantrag   Minor grammatical errors, but other than that, gre...   Jun 20 2005, 02:42 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Well spell check cant pick op everything, and some...   Jun 20 2005, 04:05 PM
Dantrag   Well spell check cant pick op everything, and some...   Jun 20 2005, 04:11 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Dont worry, I understand. Thanks for the CC though...   Jun 20 2005, 04:33 PM
gamer10   Yay, someone else who writes first person. :go...   Jun 20 2005, 04:34 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Yum. You could call my other FF first person, in s...   Jun 20 2005, 04:35 PM
Konradude   http://www-users.cs.york.ac.uk/~susan/sf/tv/clange...   Jun 20 2005, 06:13 PM
Zelda_Zealot   :shocked: What is that from!?   Jun 20 2005, 06:14 PM
gamer10   OULSHGDIFL Well, as long as were being silly. ...   Jun 21 2005, 06:01 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Who said anything about being silly?   Jun 21 2005, 06:05 PM
gamer10   http://www-users.cs.york.ac.uk/~susan/sf/tv/clange...   Jun 21 2005, 06:06 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Wonder what? FYI I did not get the name from that.   Jun 21 2005, 06:07 PM
gamer10   Wonder what? FYI I did not get the name from that....   Jun 21 2005, 06:08 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Oh. Will I guess it is, I cant really see it that ...   Jun 21 2005, 06:09 PM
Mazuk   Nice story. Please continue.   Jun 21 2005, 09:27 PM
treydog   First person is my favorite style- it just seems m...   Jun 22 2005, 03:42 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Yeah! My life is complete. :) I am working on th...   Jun 22 2005, 06:49 PM
Dantrag   we have all dealt with that chatty co-worker, sal...   Jun 22 2005, 07:06 PM
MerGirl   *giggles* I like this Bosmer very much! :D He's ...   Jun 22 2005, 07:25 PM
Konradude   Mergirl, please give meee some costructive critis...   Jun 22 2005, 07:26 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Thats the idea. Anyway heres the next chapter. ...   Jun 22 2005, 07:49 PM
Konradude   Why is it 'of course' that it stank?   Jun 22 2005, 07:59 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Huh? It says "Of course it stank to high heaven", ...   Jun 22 2005, 08:42 PM
Konradude   Why is it an obviouse fact that it stunk? Is it in...   Jun 22 2005, 08:46 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Hla Od is in the bitter coast, so it must stink. I...   Jun 22 2005, 08:52 PM
treydog   A good addition. We get to see more of Clangor's ...   Jun 23 2005, 04:02 PM
Zelda_Zealot   That sounds good, though if anything is in a swamp...   Jun 23 2005, 06:57 PM
Zelda_Zealot   After god knows how long I finally got the next ch...   Jul 10 2005, 05:10 AM
treydog   Clangor continues to grow on me. Rather like a sk...   Jul 11 2005, 01:27 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Yey! You just compleat my life treydog! Th...   Jul 11 2005, 03:49 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Sorry for the double post but this is better then ...   Jul 15 2005, 10:26 PM
minque   Congrats then Zelda! And we are here waiting ...   Jul 16 2005, 04:32 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Well I am back, thanks to minque for the whachamac...   Jul 24 2005, 09:21 PM
gamer10   Yay, more stories. :D   Jul 24 2005, 09:28 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice Zelda.. your story is very nice, at least to ...   Jul 24 2005, 09:41 PM
MerGirl   Oh, my goodness! :blink: How did I miss this...   Jul 24 2005, 11:01 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Wow... erm... like my character a little? Or are...   Jul 25 2005, 07:05 AM
Zelda_Zealot   Sorry for being gone so long, my internet desided ...   Aug 2 2005, 05:27 AM
Lucidarius   Wonderful story. I smiled and laughed several time...   Aug 28 2005, 10:51 PM
treydog   So happy to see this updated. I really enjoy Clan...   Aug 29 2005, 02:09 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Sorry about leaving this ff here, I kinda got into...   Oct 24 2005, 06:04 AM


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