Looks very good, at least when you point out your little mistakes so u can improve much more next time you draw (I hope), a good way of getting it all in shape, not making things to big etc is just to draw very light scetches on the sheet before you think it looks good enough to start coloring and adding stronger lines
Like Ambberfox have done here..
This post has been edited by Fuzzy Knight: Aug 31 2005, 01:52 PM