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post Sep 10 2005, 01:46 AM
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Morrowfall Ch.1

I had done it. I had finally beaten it. Morrowind, the game that had occupied all my time for the past three months. Not particularly good, for my health or my college grades, but tonight was what it had all lead up to, I had beaten the game, United the houses, learned the truth about the temple, and defeated Dagoth Ur. Call me a geek, but I intended to celebrate.
And celebrate I did. I depleted my horde of liquor, including the Schmirnoff I had been saving for my birthday. I was good at saving things, but not at holding my liquor. These two things collided to spell my doom that night. The last thing I remember is my roommates coming back from the restaurant, me yelling at them for breathing too loud, and them falling off the loft’s edge, bottle of half-empty Captain Morgan’s still in hand.

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post Sep 29 2005, 02:16 AM
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An impressive escape. I do hope they manage to find their way to freedom.
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post Sep 29 2005, 08:34 PM
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QUOTE(mplantinga @ Sep 28 2005, 09:16 PM)
An impressive escape. I do hope they manage to find their way to freedom.
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well...read on.

Chater 11

Even Ebonhart was different from the morrowind I remembered. Where the docks once stood were burnt and charred rubble. The dragon statue was in peices, around which were built a thick palisade of wood from all sorts of places. Behind that, the keep and the imperial tower were both severely damaged as well. The men that were on the palisade were haggard and worn, what armor they had a sad motly of chain, bonemold, chitin, and cloth.

This could not be a good thing.

We came out of the water and in front of the plalisade. "Who's in charge here?" asked the old Imperial, now with an air of impatience. They took us inside the palisade, to the burnt husk of the tavern that once stood in the courtyard. He asked his question again.

"I am," a young man said, his once handsome face now covered with the scars of battle his beard didn't quite completely cover. "I think."

"Well then, as former commander of Seyda Neen, I'm comandeering this fort."

Commander? Seyda Neen? There was no fort in Seyda Neen.

"Then Seyda Neen has fallen then?"

"Ay. They burned the Blacklight and killed most of the garrison. We were the lucky ones."

"Then who are these?" He cast a distainful eye over the other slaves, taking me in with it.

"This man," he clapped me on the shoulder, "courageously, without regard to his own life, single-handedly saved us from our predicament." to me he said, "If you ever come to Cyrodiil, you will certainly have a place in my house. These," he gestured to the others, "were our fellow slaves."

"As you can see sir," the young commander said, "they have destroyed our ships and have blockaded both sides of this penninsula, we get daily attacks, we are low on supllies and even lower on morale."

"Out of the frying pan and into the fire then," The older one said. Oddly enough, those were my exact sentiments. "I will do what I can tomorrow, right now, we are cold, tired, and hungry."

They fed us what they could spare and replaced our clothes. The most sickly of the slaves were found places inside the intact barracks, while the rest of us were left to find a comfortable position in amongst the wreckage and rubble that was once the courtyard to sleep.

I, however, had something to investigate. I slipped up the broken stairs and across the nearly collapsed bridge to the Imperial Chapel. the roof was gone and most of the walls were now only waist high, but what I was looking for was still there and, even better, what I had hidden behind it was still there.

But, I never hid these here, this wasn't may savegame. For all intents and purposes, this was reality. I had left these here after I had gotten cured of...

Oh God. If I was right, this explained alot, and if I was right, things were about to become alot more difficult.


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stargate525   Morrowfall   Sep 10 2005, 01:46 AM
Dantrag   kinda short, but I think it will turn out funny. (...   Sep 10 2005, 01:53 AM
stargate525   of course I'm not finished. I'm trying to...   Sep 10 2005, 02:07 AM
Kell-Reevor   Very good, I'll be looking forward to more.   Sep 10 2005, 05:00 AM
stargate525   good, so am I. :D :huh: :blink: *walks awa...   Sep 10 2005, 06:02 AM
stargate525   *walks back* here's more... Chapter 3 I w...   Sep 10 2005, 06:29 AM
Neck' Thall   :lol: I Like! Thats a Nice start...did you ha...   Sep 11 2005, 06:03 PM
stargate525   is it realistic? I've actually never been dru...   Sep 11 2005, 07:44 PM
stargate525   more of the story, more of the story... Chapter ...   Sep 11 2005, 09:11 PM
minque   Hehe..that´s a good thing....don´t be later on e...   Sep 11 2005, 08:57 PM
stargate525   oh, his fate will get far worse...   Sep 11 2005, 09:12 PM
stargate525   more story! Chapter 5 My head hurt. Either i...   Sep 13 2005, 12:11 AM
stargate525   :huh: come on, no advice, no imprsssions of the ...   Sep 16 2005, 04:02 AM
Kell-Reevor   *flames* Not really... its great so far. Good wo...   Sep 16 2005, 11:27 AM
Wolfie   Hehe this is great :D   Sep 16 2005, 01:17 PM
stargate525   thanks, any other comments, like how you think...   Sep 17 2005, 05:21 PM
stargate525   Chapter 6 Sunset in Vivec, a beautiful time of th...   Sep 18 2005, 08:38 PM
mplantinga   An interesting story; I'll keep an eye on this...   Sep 24 2005, 12:15 AM
stargate525   thank you.   Sep 24 2005, 01:54 AM
minque   Oh ayye....poor Lizard.....hey it´s very interstin...   Sep 25 2005, 07:00 PM
stargate525   thanks. It's going to get more serious coming...   Sep 25 2005, 10:12 PM
stargate525   More Story! Chapter 9 Now, fully healed and ...   Sep 28 2005, 02:05 AM
mplantinga   An interesting twist, to have Nerevar be a "t...   Sep 28 2005, 08:27 PM
stargate525   I shall, If i have time to copy them you might ge...   Sep 28 2005, 11:02 PM
mplantinga   You must be cruel, to leave us without knowing wha...   Sep 30 2005, 05:44 AM
minque   Ahhhh...so many updates all very interesting, and ...   Sep 30 2005, 06:51 PM
stargate525   yeah, very cruel. I'm a master of cliffhanger...   Sep 30 2005, 11:08 PM
Wolfie   Looking good so far Stargate :D   Sep 30 2005, 11:12 PM
D7Unknown   Great story you have here, very original. I'm ...   Oct 1 2005, 03:01 AM
stargate525   omg Serenity was AMAZING. Everyone who has any lo...   Oct 1 2005, 03:13 AM
stargate525   now don't everybody jump up at once... Chapte...   Oct 1 2005, 05:45 AM
mplantinga   Another interesting development. I wonder when we...   Oct 1 2005, 04:50 PM
stargate525   thank ye. Can't give yeh all the answers at o...   Oct 1 2005, 05:37 PM
The Wolf   Excellent job! I like it. :goodjob:   Oct 1 2005, 05:45 PM
minque   Stargate....thy name is "teaser"..you be...   Oct 1 2005, 07:32 PM
stargate525   Oh thank you. I have a title now, Stargate the Te...   Oct 2 2005, 12:33 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Funny story... Well written, keep it up ;)   Oct 1 2005, 08:34 PM
D7Unknown   Another great update. Keep them coming.   Oct 2 2005, 02:13 AM
mplantinga   With each new entry, this story continues to get m...   Oct 2 2005, 03:02 AM
stargate525   S.G.M? Some Great Manuscript? Super Genious Ma...   Oct 2 2005, 03:09 AM
stargate525   boy you guys are lucky, three updates in 12 hours....   Oct 2 2005, 05:34 AM
minque   Haha....Story.Good.More......an old treydog-ish ...   Oct 2 2005, 05:15 PM
stargate525   okay. Expect an update soon.   Oct 2 2005, 05:20 PM
mplantinga   Another excellent update. I'm excited to see w...   Oct 2 2005, 08:43 PM
stargate525   you should be somewhat knowing of this guy's ...   Oct 3 2005, 01:01 AM
stargate525   well, it'll be here tommorow. If it isn't...   Oct 5 2005, 02:39 AM
mplantinga   Unless you are a witch, there will be no burning a...   Oct 5 2005, 07:22 PM
stargate525   ah, because then you wouldn't hear the end of...   Oct 6 2005, 12:07 AM
stargate525   As promised; Chapter 15 Although some of the off...   Oct 6 2005, 01:43 AM
Ryden294   Another update..finally, lol. Great job once again...   Oct 6 2005, 03:34 AM
mplantinga   A very interesting use for a tail. It's clear ...   Oct 6 2005, 06:33 PM
stargate525   :huh: um.... yeah.... *furiously rewrites chap...   Oct 7 2005, 02:21 AM
stargate525   here ya go. Chapter 16 I pulled the sword from ...   Oct 9 2005, 09:05 PM
mplantinga   Hey! I thought you said he was going to get a ...   Oct 10 2005, 05:48 PM
stargate525   secret plot twist with the sword. as for the name...   Oct 10 2005, 08:44 PM
mplantinga   It looks like you did. :blink: Perhaps you ha...   Oct 11 2005, 12:20 AM
stargate525   I meant the 'sword' as 'sword being w...   Oct 11 2005, 02:59 AM
stargate525   Chapter 17 During the days that followed I learne...   Oct 15 2005, 11:45 PM
mplantinga   Well, I guess we can wait until the next chapter t...   Oct 10 2005, 08:53 PM
stargate525   *double post*   Oct 10 2005, 11:29 PM
stargate525   Who told you about that? :| Really though, who ...   Oct 10 2005, 11:30 PM
minque   The plot tightens now.....so dwelling in a cave ne...   Oct 16 2005, 08:36 AM
chips   wow this is terrible tsk...tsk..tsk.. only joking...   Oct 16 2005, 06:20 PM
stargate525   :sad: :glare: :mad: >:) just kidding.   Oct 16 2005, 06:28 PM
mplantinga   Another great update. Once again, you have left us...   Oct 17 2005, 06:34 PM
stargate525   suspence? why, whatever do you mean? :D Glad i...   Oct 17 2005, 08:49 PM
stargate525   Chapter 18 Once again I found myself in the Arena...   Oct 26 2005, 11:18 PM
mplantinga   A curious development, to be sure. I'll look f...   Oct 27 2005, 12:08 AM
stargate525   just wanted to say that this isn't dead, and t...   Dec 23 2005, 05:23 AM


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