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The Story Of Kiln The Wanderer, Chapter 7 and on... |
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Kiln |
Aug 18 2005, 08:04 PM
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Joined: 22-June 05
From: Balmora, Eight Plates

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Alright for anyone who wishes to read the first six chapters, here's the link: http://www.waiting4oblivion.com/forums/ind...p?showtopic=675I would recommend reading them, they're likely the best of the story. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 7Kiln walked around town pointlessly until dark, he wasn't tired. He couldn't help but wonder what trouble York was in and how he needed his help. He walked back towards the Eight Plates and entered. Tomorrow he would go to the fort. It would be an awkward return even though he'd heard Larrius had left days before, off to Gnisis for his evaluation. Larrius was quite corrupt, perhaps he'd been discovered. Kiln sat with Rami and the drunks listening to them laugh and sing. He stared at Rami's face when she wasn't paying attention, amazed at her beauty. The most popular drink was likely flin but he drank what he always had, the bitter but effective mazte. He poured more of the drink for himself, watching the brown liquor flow softly from the opening and into the tall mug. At the moment everything seemed perfect but things never stayed like that for long in his experience. In the morning he would get his armor repaired, buy some supplies and food and wait until the following day to meet York at the fort. Kiln opened the journal and read more of it's pages, "Today I talked to Caius again, he wants me to speak with some stupid orc in the mage's guild about doing a favor or something, I'm nothing but an errand boy I swear..." Kiln thought for a moment, he'd met with the same orc...strange how their paths had led together so many times but it was probably nothing. For now he would sleep and worry more about that later, he put the journal back into it's pouch and lied it beside the bed. Rami walked in lying down beside him and he fell into a deep sleep holding her close to him. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sorry it's so short but my pain meds suck and I'm getting off soon. This post has been edited by Kiln: Feb 16 2006, 05:15 PM
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He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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Kiln |
Oct 9 2005, 11:51 AM
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Joined: 22-June 05
From: Balmora, Eight Plates

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I wasn't sure if I would continue this, but it feels strange for me to just stop this story. Everyone may have to wait some time between updates but I really want to continue this so here it goes. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Get up Kiln." A voice said as a stern hand grabbed his shoulder and shook him
Kiln sat up and looked around, his vision was blurred and he was confused.
He was lifted by the arms and pulled from the boat. Kiln could hear talking and scuffling around the tents nearby, eyes stared from small holes in the hide covers of the homes.
"This is my escort guard, he was wounded badly in a recent fight, please help him." A deep voice said as a dark skinned woman approached, Kiln thought she was a dark elf but was unsure of his vision since it kept fading in and out of focus.
The woman didn't appear to be pleased but seemed amused, behind her there were several armed men lined up wearing rough hide clothing.
"Bring him inside quickly, this one will take some work." She said softly
It had been only a few moments since their arrival at the wise woman's tent before everyone was forced out by the guards, including Jinx and York.
The wise woman stared at him for a few moments.
She chanted strange words and her hands glowed with a cold heat, if such a thing is possible. The wise woman closed her eyes as if she were carefully focusing on the healing. She moved her hands from his chest and the wounds were sealed, her soft hands moved up his chest and covered the deep cut on his shoulder.
Kiln relaxed as the pain began to fade, he was tired still and fell asleep.
After apparently hours of sleep, he woke and looked around the tent, it was not the wise woman's tent, he'd apparently been moved. He was still tired but knew he had to get up soon.
The wind blew outside and he could hear chimes around him. Kiln rolled to his stomach and slowly pushed himself off of the bedroll and onto his feet. Kiln stretched and walked to the doorway, pushing the cloth aside and shielding his eyes from the bright sun overhead.
The smell of the grass rushed into his nose as he breathed in and the warmth of the sun on his face was a relief. York sat by the fire eating some strange meat and Jinx drank some form of liquid from a bottle, children played and people moved about the camp. It was a wonderful sight and Kiln was thankful to be alive.
York turned and saw him as he stepped closer.
"Have a nice rest did ya Kiln?" He laughed
"For a few hours." He replied
"Hours? You slept for a day and a half." York said laughing
Kiln stood, he hadn't slept that well in a long time now, too much weighed on his mind at night for a good rest. He sat and began to eat and drink with Jinx as York stood and walked to the wise woman's yurt to meet with her.
Soon, their journey would begin, and York would have to prove himself to the tribe in some way. Hours had passed before he exited the tent area and returned to the fire. York grabbed his sword and all of his belongings and looked at Kiln and Jinx.
"Gather your things, we're leaving tomorrow." He said and walked away
Kiln wondered what they would be doing tomorrow but decided it would be better not to ask, he didn't really want the worry of it all.
He opened the journal and began to read.
"Today I met with the lizard informant, some men were bothering him and I couldn't convince them to leave him alone so I tried to take him out of the tavern with me to a safe place he knew. The men at the bar attacked us as we attempted to leave and I managed to subdue all but one of them which I was forced to kill. The ordinators arrived but the barkeep cleared our names, saying that the men started the fight and we were merely victims. Afterwords, the Argonian gave me the information I needed, I'll be glad to get out of this city, too damn big."
Kiln closed the journal and put it away, he'd slept for some time and now he wasn't tired so he walked around the camp, wondering what the following day would have in store for him. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Hope everyone enjoys this part.
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He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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Kiln The Story Of Kiln The Wanderer Aug 18 2005, 08:04 PM minque Very nice Kiln....really . Good descriptions....I ... Aug 18 2005, 08:14 PM Kiln I fixed it Minque, I'm getting off for now...s... Aug 18 2005, 08:19 PM minque Awww are you ill? and still makes wonderful update... Aug 18 2005, 08:20 PM Kiln Nope no illness...I just got back from ear surgery... Aug 18 2005, 08:22 PM Soulseeker3.0 well good update Kiln, and hope you feel better. Aug 18 2005, 10:05 PM Kiln Kiln awoke the next day and slowly crawled out of ... Aug 19 2005, 02:20 AM Soulseeker3.0 lol oh well that was good kiln, granted you had th... Aug 19 2005, 03:25 AM BobV Very good updatesesss. Aug 19 2005, 10:17 AM minque Nice details here, the business with the armorer a... Aug 19 2005, 12:18 PM treydog Don't be too concerned about the "extra... Aug 19 2005, 01:35 PM Dantrag I think I've gotten rid of six years in a sent... Aug 19 2005, 01:46 PM Kiln Kiln hadn't slept a bit, he was worried about ... Aug 19 2005, 05:04 PM Kell-Reevor My usual statement....
Good as usual, keep it up... Aug 19 2005, 05:10 PM Soulseeker3.0 lol I wonder if he would have opened up you said y... Aug 19 2005, 07:20 PM minque Interesting development in this story I must say..... Aug 19 2005, 07:44 PM Kiln Warning:After reading this you'll never think ... Aug 19 2005, 10:28 PM minque Hehe......now wasnīt that sweet.....Kiln the Dance... Aug 19 2005, 10:57 PM Soulseeker3.0 lol ha good job kiln. Aug 19 2005, 11:28 PM Neck' Thall HELP ME!!!!! I MUST THINK OF S... Aug 20 2005, 12:18 AM Soulseeker3.0 don't know if this will help but banana phone? Aug 20 2005, 02:27 AM Lucidarius I really like your story, Kiln. Great idea to weav... Aug 20 2005, 03:25 PM treydog "The Story of Kiln the Not-Dancer" Hmm-... Aug 22 2005, 03:01 PM Kiln As they arrived at the silt strider and paid for t... Aug 22 2005, 05:42 PM Lucidarius Good update where we learn more about Kiln's b... Aug 22 2005, 07:47 PM Kiln There, all fixed. Thanks for pointing that out. :... Aug 22 2005, 08:04 PM Soulseeker3.0 Good job kiln please keep it up Aug 22 2005, 10:54 PM Neck' Thall Ditto...Thats now my favorite word cuz i cant wrig... Aug 23 2005, 12:49 AM Kiln If you have a complaint, feel free to voice it. I... Aug 23 2005, 01:07 AM Neck' Thall no i said compliments! Thats as in i like it b... Aug 23 2005, 01:11 AM Kiln The door creaked open slowly and a tall dunmer man... Aug 23 2005, 03:55 PM minque Ahh..ok so he met his old friend...well he surely ... Aug 23 2005, 04:00 PM treydog Nice additions showing Kiln's past. A very im... Aug 23 2005, 05:51 PM Soulseeker3.0 I was gonig to say something like when Trey said S... Aug 23 2005, 09:40 PM Neck' Thall I like...but a guy is wearing a skirt?!? i kn... Aug 24 2005, 06:06 AM Lucidarius Really good update. I like how Kiln at first doesn... Aug 24 2005, 09:12 AM Kiln A skirt is the piece of clothing he wears in the g... Aug 24 2005, 01:47 PM Kiln The clothing mission with my own little twist to i... Aug 24 2005, 02:47 PM Neck' Thall kool...but i'm wondering if the men are just s... Aug 24 2005, 03:40 PM treydog Interesting twist- I guess Kiln really can't ... Aug 24 2005, 04:09 PM minque Ayye......Poor Kiln, thatīs what you get when you ... Aug 24 2005, 07:29 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job kiln keep it up
stupid corrupt guards ... Aug 24 2005, 09:44 PM Kiln Completely inspired by him Minque, that's his ... Aug 24 2005, 09:51 PM Soulseeker3.0 LOL nice dream KIln. and keep up the good work... Aug 24 2005, 09:58 PM minque You continue this very well.....lots of good updat... Aug 24 2005, 10:05 PM Kiln While near the fire, Kiln removed the journal from... Aug 24 2005, 11:33 PM minque Ah another good one..just perfect before going to ... Aug 24 2005, 11:38 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job KIln :goodjob: Aug 24 2005, 11:40 PM treydog Interesting dream-sequence. Rotten Camonna Tong p... Aug 25 2005, 02:24 PM Lucidarius You update fast, great. I like the way you put in ... Aug 25 2005, 03:33 PM Kiln The dream sequence was somewhat meant to confuse y... Aug 25 2005, 07:00 PM minque O-o.....beware of the nixies......there are storie... Aug 25 2005, 07:05 PM Megil Tel-Zeke "He looked about as a treestump crashed nearb... Aug 25 2005, 07:32 PM Kiln Alright then, I'll have a look at those things... Aug 25 2005, 07:46 PM Megil Tel-Zeke For future reference, just now that instead of rep... Aug 25 2005, 08:28 PM Kiln Ahhhhhh....soooo hard to please Megil....read it a... Aug 25 2005, 10:02 PM Megil Tel-Zeke not hard to please, just trying to be helpful ^ ^.... Aug 25 2005, 10:07 PM Soulseeker3.0 well I thought it was nice.... Aug 25 2005, 10:49 PM Kiln Kiln glanced nervously from hound to hound, waitin... Aug 26 2005, 05:01 PM Megil Tel-Zeke Very impressive addition. i was acutally worried ... Aug 26 2005, 06:24 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow nice Kiln! Aug 26 2005, 09:53 PM treydog Some good action sequences there. I like the fact... Aug 27 2005, 12:41 PM Kiln Thanks everyone. :D
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"as he lie there" should be ... Aug 27 2005, 07:48 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job kiln. Aug 27 2005, 08:02 PM Kiln Fine then, I guess I'll put laid rather than l... Aug 27 2005, 08:04 PM minque Superb as always Kiln....You really put life into ... Aug 28 2005, 10:28 AM Kiln Chapter 8
York stood in the open doorway, waiting ... Aug 28 2005, 07:47 PM Megil Tel-Zeke alas, no complaints. at least none yet, I'll r... Aug 28 2005, 09:30 PM Lucidarius Your story is good and the character and actions o... Aug 28 2005, 10:14 PM Soulseeker3.0 very well done Kiln please keep it up. Aug 28 2005, 11:26 PM treydog More good additions; I particularly liked the way ... Aug 29 2005, 02:56 PM Kiln As York and Jinx rowed the boat closer and closer ... Sep 1 2005, 09:14 PM Kiln After some time of doing nothing, Kiln fell asleep... Sep 3 2005, 06:21 PM Fuzzy Knight Interesting... :)
Good writing as always, well w... Sep 3 2005, 06:26 PM Wurlon Heh I like it, especially since it's tied to t... Sep 3 2005, 09:56 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow great stuff kiln. please keep up the good work... Sep 3 2005, 10:59 PM mplantinga Great story. Please, sir, can I have some more? Sep 24 2005, 01:29 AM Neck' Thall Nice writing man. I wonder what'll happen nex... Sep 24 2005, 09:57 PM Megil Tel-Zeke I do believe kiln has said the story was postponed... Sep 28 2005, 06:28 PM mplantinga That would be very sad; but real life happens. All... Sep 28 2005, 08:20 PM minque Ahhh! Iīm so happy you decided to continue....... Oct 9 2005, 12:08 PM Neck' Thall Yay!! great story! Oct 9 2005, 04:03 PM Soulseeker3.0 YAY! more Kiln! good job Oct 9 2005, 08:27 PM mplantinga Thanks for finding some time to continue the story... Oct 10 2005, 05:41 PM Kiln Kiln had walked for hours at and around the camp, ... Oct 21 2005, 01:39 AM Soulseeker3.0 very good Kiln, I like it alot. good thing you fou... Oct 21 2005, 02:04 AM mplantinga An interesting development. I like how you've ... Oct 21 2005, 06:00 PM Kiln They walked the dark tunnels before them slowly, t... Oct 27 2005, 11:43 PM mplantinga A great update, as always. I was a little worried ... Oct 27 2005, 11:55 PM Soulseeker3.0 I liked it Kiln, please continue the story. When w... Oct 28 2005, 10:54 PM Kiln York can't remember exactly where the bow is l... Oct 31 2005, 03:12 AM mplantinga Sounds like an excellent case of team effort; hope... Oct 31 2005, 09:28 PM Soulseeker3.0
well thats about right.... DITTO That was an exel... Oct 31 2005, 10:51 PM Kiln My own variant of the battle with the ghost in the... Dec 7 2005, 03:48 AM mplantinga Thanks for the great update. You captured quite we... Dec 7 2005, 07:11 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow, I agree with mplantinga. Very nice addition K... Dec 7 2005, 10:40 PM Kiln This scene was incredibly difficult for me to writ... Dec 31 2005, 04:02 AM Soulseeker3.0 I see how it was difficult, fight scenes are usual... Dec 31 2005, 04:50 AM
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