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post Sep 10 2005, 01:46 AM
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Morrowfall Ch.1

I had done it. I had finally beaten it. Morrowind, the game that had occupied all my time for the past three months. Not particularly good, for my health or my college grades, but tonight was what it had all lead up to, I had beaten the game, United the houses, learned the truth about the temple, and defeated Dagoth Ur. Call me a geek, but I intended to celebrate.
And celebrate I did. I depleted my horde of liquor, including the Schmirnoff I had been saving for my birthday. I was good at saving things, but not at holding my liquor. These two things collided to spell my doom that night. The last thing I remember is my roommates coming back from the restaurant, me yelling at them for breathing too loud, and them falling off the loft’s edge, bottle of half-empty Captain Morgan’s still in hand.

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post Oct 9 2005, 09:05 PM
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Chapter 16

I pulled the sword from the mer's throat. His warm blood slid down the blade and onto my hand as the lifeless corpse kneeled, then slowly, ever so slowly, fell to the ground. I could hear all three of my swords fall to the ground, but I don't ever remember releasing them. I had killed a man. He might have had friends, family, parents, a wife. I snuffed him out of existence like I would a candle, although none had the means to relight this flame. His glazed, sightless eyes stared at me in shock and reproach. I had killed him.

And I had liked it.

The adrenaline coursing through me, the thrill of the battle, the feeling of invincibility as the cold steel slid into his throat like a knife into butter. There is nothing I can write that can describe that feeling. It was amazing, it was sensual, it was arousing.

And it was revolting. The joy of the kill quickly evolved to one of utter nausea and sickness. I turned to the side and emptied my stomach. Slightly relieved, I tore my gaze from the corpse and looked around me. I saw the Imperials around me and my opponent. They looked so tall, it took me a moment to realize that I was on my knees. Gravious and another, and Argonian, raised me up and half carried, half dragged me to stone on the edge of the courtyard and sat me down. In front of me I could see them stripping the bodies of the dunmer, just like we had planned.

As the cuirass of the dunmer nearest me came off, I saw a piece of jewelry come off his neck and fall near my feet. I picked up the locket and opened it. Inside was the picture of a young, beautiful woman. On the reverse side it read; to my dearest father... He was a father, he had a wife and kids, and we killed him.

The next thing I remember is waking up in a cave, Gravius at my side. I was unbound, so it must have worked. the rest of the army had no reason to doubt a troop of their own men escorting captured slaves north to the prison compound. Fifty of us were saved from certain death that night in Ebonhart, but at the cost of my own conscience. I had killed a man, and I would have to live with that for the rest of my life. An equal trade, you say? perhaps, but only time will tell.


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stargate525   Morrowfall   Sep 10 2005, 01:46 AM
Dantrag   kinda short, but I think it will turn out funny. (...   Sep 10 2005, 01:53 AM
stargate525   of course I'm not finished. I'm trying to...   Sep 10 2005, 02:07 AM
Kell-Reevor   Very good, I'll be looking forward to more.   Sep 10 2005, 05:00 AM
stargate525   good, so am I. :D :huh: :blink: *walks awa...   Sep 10 2005, 06:02 AM
stargate525   *walks back* here's more... Chapter 3 I w...   Sep 10 2005, 06:29 AM
Neck' Thall   :lol: I Like! Thats a Nice start...did you ha...   Sep 11 2005, 06:03 PM
stargate525   is it realistic? I've actually never been dru...   Sep 11 2005, 07:44 PM
stargate525   more of the story, more of the story... Chapter ...   Sep 11 2005, 09:11 PM
minque   Hehe..that´s a good thing....don´t be later on e...   Sep 11 2005, 08:57 PM
stargate525   oh, his fate will get far worse...   Sep 11 2005, 09:12 PM
stargate525   more story! Chapter 5 My head hurt. Either i...   Sep 13 2005, 12:11 AM
stargate525   :huh: come on, no advice, no imprsssions of the ...   Sep 16 2005, 04:02 AM
Kell-Reevor   *flames* Not really... its great so far. Good wo...   Sep 16 2005, 11:27 AM
Wolfie   Hehe this is great :D   Sep 16 2005, 01:17 PM
stargate525   thanks, any other comments, like how you think...   Sep 17 2005, 05:21 PM
stargate525   Chapter 6 Sunset in Vivec, a beautiful time of th...   Sep 18 2005, 08:38 PM
mplantinga   An interesting story; I'll keep an eye on this...   Sep 24 2005, 12:15 AM
stargate525   thank you.   Sep 24 2005, 01:54 AM
minque   Oh ayye....poor Lizard.....hey it´s very interstin...   Sep 25 2005, 07:00 PM
stargate525   thanks. It's going to get more serious coming...   Sep 25 2005, 10:12 PM
stargate525   More Story! Chapter 9 Now, fully healed and ...   Sep 28 2005, 02:05 AM
mplantinga   An interesting twist, to have Nerevar be a "t...   Sep 28 2005, 08:27 PM
stargate525   I shall, If i have time to copy them you might ge...   Sep 28 2005, 11:02 PM
mplantinga   An impressive escape. I do hope they manage to fin...   Sep 29 2005, 02:16 AM
stargate525   well...read on. Chater 11 Even Ebonhart was dif...   Sep 29 2005, 08:34 PM
mplantinga   You must be cruel, to leave us without knowing wha...   Sep 30 2005, 05:44 AM
minque   Ahhhh...so many updates all very interesting, and ...   Sep 30 2005, 06:51 PM
stargate525   yeah, very cruel. I'm a master of cliffhanger...   Sep 30 2005, 11:08 PM
Wolfie   Looking good so far Stargate :D   Sep 30 2005, 11:12 PM
D7Unknown   Great story you have here, very original. I'm ...   Oct 1 2005, 03:01 AM
stargate525   omg Serenity was AMAZING. Everyone who has any lo...   Oct 1 2005, 03:13 AM
stargate525   now don't everybody jump up at once... Chapte...   Oct 1 2005, 05:45 AM
mplantinga   Another interesting development. I wonder when we...   Oct 1 2005, 04:50 PM
stargate525   thank ye. Can't give yeh all the answers at o...   Oct 1 2005, 05:37 PM
The Wolf   Excellent job! I like it. :goodjob:   Oct 1 2005, 05:45 PM
minque   Stargate....thy name is "teaser"..you be...   Oct 1 2005, 07:32 PM
stargate525   Oh thank you. I have a title now, Stargate the Te...   Oct 2 2005, 12:33 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Funny story... Well written, keep it up ;)   Oct 1 2005, 08:34 PM
D7Unknown   Another great update. Keep them coming.   Oct 2 2005, 02:13 AM
mplantinga   With each new entry, this story continues to get m...   Oct 2 2005, 03:02 AM
stargate525   S.G.M? Some Great Manuscript? Super Genious Ma...   Oct 2 2005, 03:09 AM
stargate525   boy you guys are lucky, three updates in 12 hours....   Oct 2 2005, 05:34 AM
minque   Haha....Story.Good.More......an old treydog-ish ...   Oct 2 2005, 05:15 PM
stargate525   okay. Expect an update soon.   Oct 2 2005, 05:20 PM
mplantinga   Another excellent update. I'm excited to see w...   Oct 2 2005, 08:43 PM
stargate525   you should be somewhat knowing of this guy's ...   Oct 3 2005, 01:01 AM
stargate525   well, it'll be here tommorow. If it isn't...   Oct 5 2005, 02:39 AM
mplantinga   Unless you are a witch, there will be no burning a...   Oct 5 2005, 07:22 PM
stargate525   ah, because then you wouldn't hear the end of...   Oct 6 2005, 12:07 AM
stargate525   As promised; Chapter 15 Although some of the off...   Oct 6 2005, 01:43 AM
Ryden294   Another update..finally, lol. Great job once again...   Oct 6 2005, 03:34 AM
mplantinga   A very interesting use for a tail. It's clear ...   Oct 6 2005, 06:33 PM
stargate525   :huh: um.... yeah.... *furiously rewrites chap...   Oct 7 2005, 02:21 AM
mplantinga   Hey! I thought you said he was going to get a ...   Oct 10 2005, 05:48 PM
stargate525   secret plot twist with the sword. as for the name...   Oct 10 2005, 08:44 PM
mplantinga   It looks like you did. :blink: Perhaps you ha...   Oct 11 2005, 12:20 AM
stargate525   I meant the 'sword' as 'sword being w...   Oct 11 2005, 02:59 AM
stargate525   Chapter 17 During the days that followed I learne...   Oct 15 2005, 11:45 PM
mplantinga   Well, I guess we can wait until the next chapter t...   Oct 10 2005, 08:53 PM
stargate525   *double post*   Oct 10 2005, 11:29 PM
stargate525   Who told you about that? :| Really though, who ...   Oct 10 2005, 11:30 PM
minque   The plot tightens now.....so dwelling in a cave ne...   Oct 16 2005, 08:36 AM
chips   wow this is terrible tsk...tsk..tsk.. only joking...   Oct 16 2005, 06:20 PM
stargate525   :sad: :glare: :mad: >:) just kidding.   Oct 16 2005, 06:28 PM
mplantinga   Another great update. Once again, you have left us...   Oct 17 2005, 06:34 PM
stargate525   suspence? why, whatever do you mean? :D Glad i...   Oct 17 2005, 08:49 PM
stargate525   Chapter 18 Once again I found myself in the Arena...   Oct 26 2005, 11:18 PM
mplantinga   A curious development, to be sure. I'll look f...   Oct 27 2005, 12:08 AM
stargate525   just wanted to say that this isn't dead, and t...   Dec 23 2005, 05:23 AM


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