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The Wolf
post Sep 30 2005, 12:11 PM
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Hecerilar, the altmer hunter, sat on a bar stool. He was in a bar called 'Broken Sword', in western parts of Skyrim. It had been tough to get there, but he had finally made it. He was here to hunt the wolves.

Suddenly he realized, that he was surrounded by nords. As he sipped his mead, one of them spoke.

"What's this 'ere, a lonely elf in the land of frost? Feeling a bit... chilly, eh?" First the nord seemed offencive, but then, suddenly, he smiled warmly, and patted the altmer's back.

"Sorry about that." Quick exchange of glances between the nords. "You look like a good huntsman. Have you heard of the great Snow Wolf that lurks up the hills? We've seen sometimes it's tracks, which are huge, but we haven't found it nor seen it."

There was something strange going on here, Hecerilar knew, but he already could picture the beast's pelt as his helmet. It was far too great temptetion for him. He remained silent.

"Afraid, elf?" the nord mocked. "Don't go, elf." He whispered that, suddenly looking him with a strange look in his eyes. Was it pity, remorse? "Some others have done that, but have never returned."

Hecerilar just laughed.


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To Be Continued.....


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The Wolf
post Oct 12 2005, 07:04 AM
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He ran, until he tripped over a tree root. Then Hecerilar sobbed, and tried to get up. He couldn't. He was too exhausted, too cold, too terrified. The howls started to close. He started to crawl forward, too scared to just stay there.

Then the howling stopped. They were close enough to attack, and kill. No reason to give up their whereabouts.

He lay down and tried to be as small and as silent as he could. Maybe they wouldn't find him.

Not a chance. He could hear them smell the air, catching his scent. The snowy trees stood around him, silently witnessing.

The werewolf bit his arm. He screamed. Something surprisingly answered his scream. The werewolf letted his arm go, and raised it's head. Then it was decapitated by a nordic silver axe. The nord with axe and torch walked over me and the corpse. Too bad that the werewolf wasn't alone after the altmer. Hecerilar tried to get up, sobbing, and fell down again, exhausted and scared.

The horrible noises conjured memories from the past, memories he had thought he had buried long time ago. Memories he did not want to re-live. The nord screamed in agony. It reminded him of another scream, another time, time when he had been unable to help the screamer, just like now. His father. Hecerilar whimpered on the ground, possessed by his memories.

The altmer boy hided in the chest, while his mother, highborn, locked and barred the door. His father stood by the door with his claymore, the one that was too heavy to play with. He had once tried to lift it, but he hadn't been even able to get it of the table. They had known what risk they had took when they moved to the central parts of Skyrim. It was tough life for an altmer used to luxuries of cities. They had to hunt for their living, and the trader came by only once a month. They were the first colonists that had come to this area. Others were supposed to come in few weeks ago, but none had appeared. Instead, the beast that even right now scratched at the door, searching for an entrance, had come. Then the scratching stopped. They could hear it moving in the night. Suddenly it punched it's fist through the window, and tried to reach in. It was hairy, long-clawed and dirty, and suddenly detached from it's host, as the claymore came to cut it. We could hear it's whimper in the dark, outside the house. His father, his foolish, foolish and arrogant father had decided to go out and end it's life. His screams had lasted so long... Later, when morning dawned, they had went out. They had found his father, gutted like a fish, an expression of terror and pain on his face. They had fled from Skyrim, not wanting ever to return.

But now he was here again. Hecerilar went unconcious.

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Not so long as I had thought, but I think I'll update faster next time (or not, I had an inspiration this morning...).


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The Wolf   Hunter Or The Hunted?   Sep 30 2005, 12:11 PM
Aki   Sounds interesting... The descritpion of the wolf...   Oct 1 2005, 12:54 AM
The Wolf   Night was starting to fall. The last rays of sunli...   Oct 1 2005, 07:12 AM
The Wolf   I am certainly NOT gonna post the ending before at...   Oct 2 2005, 07:00 AM
Aki   I need to pay more attention to the fan-fiction fo...   Oct 9 2005, 08:03 AM
minque   Yes Aki! please do.....there are some really ...   Oct 9 2005, 12:09 PM
minque   Heey man!...Please be patient....there are so ...   Oct 2 2005, 05:22 PM
The Wolf   Yes, yes, I was just trying to figure out whethe...   Oct 3 2005, 05:31 AM
The Wolf   Hecerilar got up, and took last long look at the t...   Oct 3 2005, 06:03 AM
The Wolf   Hecerilar, the altmer hunter, sat on a bar stool. ...   Oct 4 2005, 04:18 PM
Neck' Thall   Nice story man. I bet that the nords are the were...   Oct 9 2005, 06:21 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Very good... Werewolf tales are always nice :D Goo...   Oct 9 2005, 01:40 PM
mplantinga   An interesting story. The idea of an Altmer hunter...   Oct 11 2005, 10:31 PM
mplantinga   A great update. I like how you've tried to tie...   Oct 12 2005, 06:56 PM
Aki   Ooh..interesting. Wonder who that random nord was...   Oct 12 2005, 11:50 PM
The Wolf   You'll see it on the next update... I promis...   Oct 13 2005, 06:17 AM
D7Unknown   I'm liking this story and am anxious to see wh...   Oct 13 2005, 01:43 AM
Jonajosa   Exactly how I feel. Please! I must know...   Oct 15 2005, 05:58 PM
minque   okies....keep your promise then....and please upda...   Oct 13 2005, 11:36 PM
The Wolf   I'd by the way like to submit this to the shor...   Oct 16 2005, 04:11 PM
chips   awesome story man! i thought the nords were th...   Oct 16 2005, 05:35 PM
ike the imp   yeah its brill!!.hey chips u got bunny in ...   Oct 17 2005, 08:07 PM
The Wolf   His body gave the altmer only two options: wake up...   Oct 22 2005, 01:09 PM
mplantinga   So, he is now infected. I hope he manages to get h...   Oct 22 2005, 04:51 PM
The Wolf   Trees flickered past Hecerilar as he sped through ...   Oct 28 2005, 07:19 AM
mplantinga   Someone is clearly going to a lot of trouble to se...   Oct 31 2005, 09:08 PM
The Wolf   Okay, I've almost written an another update (*...   Dec 3 2005, 07:55 PM
Aki   Yes! :D   Dec 3 2005, 10:44 PM
mplantinga   Yes; I would definitely like to know what happens....   Dec 4 2005, 08:01 PM
The Wolf   Very well then, back to the writing... I'll t...   Dec 5 2005, 08:24 AM
The Wolf   When he got up, he had made up his mind. He read t...   Dec 6 2005, 08:06 PM
mplantinga   He certainly is determined. I am a bit concerned a...   Dec 6 2005, 08:20 PM
pete tong   ohh please hurry up, ive been coming over here(thi...   Feb 9 2006, 05:31 PM
The Wolf   Nightmares bothered him. Hecerilar walked the icy ...   Feb 9 2006, 08:04 PM
pete tong   ohh yeah :D thanks, i wonder were those people un...   Feb 9 2006, 08:56 PM
pete tong   whens the next update???????   Feb 19 2006, 05:22 PM
mplantinga   Thanks for the update; it's been a while in co...   Mar 1 2006, 12:22 AM
pete tong   ohh come on, more story more story...   May 27 2006, 12:54 PM
The Wolf   I don't know.... I haven't been working on...   May 27 2006, 01:14 PM
DarkHunter   The rest of us don't!... just kidding. Any...   May 30 2006, 11:13 AM
Lord Revan   likewise, but what's wrong with vampires?...   Jun 14 2006, 10:59 PM
pete tong   damm live always getting in the way of things....   Aug 2 2006, 07:03 PM
minque   I know exactly how it is! You write a story, t...   Aug 20 2006, 03:29 PM


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