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| stargate525 |
 Sep 10 2005, 01:46 AM
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Read it, comment on it, suggest for improvement on it, etc. more will follow.
Morrowfall Ch.1 I had done it. I had finally beaten it. Morrowind, the game that had occupied all my time for the past three months. Not particularly good, for my health or my college grades, but tonight was what it had all lead up to, I had beaten the game, United the houses, learned the truth about the temple, and defeated Dagoth Ur. Call me a geek, but I intended to celebrate. And celebrate I did. I depleted my horde of liquor, including the Schmirnoff I had been saving for my birthday. I was good at saving things, but not at holding my liquor. These two things collided to spell my doom that night. The last thing I remember is my roommates coming back from the restaurant, me yelling at them for breathing too loud, and them falling off the loft’s edge, bottle of half-empty Captain Morgan’s still in hand. This post has been edited by stargate525: Sep 11 2005, 07:43 PM -------------------- these forums taste almost, but not quite, completely unlike tea.
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| mplantinga |
Oct 17 2005, 06:34 PM
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Another great update. Once again, you have left us in great suspense. I'm assuming you do this on purpose; leaving out a critical detail just so we'll want to read more. Well, it certainly is working. I will look forward to finding out who this person is that they need to find, and how he/she will get them out of this mess.
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| stargate525 |
Oct 17 2005, 08:49 PM
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QUOTE(mplantinga @ Oct 17 2005, 01:34 PM) Another great update. Once again, you have left us in great suspense. I'm assuming you do this on purpose; leaving out a critical detail just so we'll want to read more. Well, it certainly is working. I will look forward to finding out who this person is that they need to find, and how he/she will get them out of this mess.  suspence? why, whatever do you mean?  Glad it's working. -------------------- these forums taste almost, but not quite, completely unlike tea.
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stargate525 Morrowfall Sep 10 2005, 01:46 AM
Dantrag kinda short, but I think it will turn out funny. (... Sep 10 2005, 01:53 AM
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of course I'm not finished. I'm trying to... Sep 10 2005, 02:07 AM Kell-Reevor Very good, I'll be looking forward to more. Sep 10 2005, 05:00 AM stargate525
good, so am I. :D
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*walks awa... Sep 10 2005, 06:02 AM stargate525
*walks back*
here's more...
Chapter 3
I w... Sep 10 2005, 06:29 AM Neck' Thall :lol: I Like! Thats a Nice start...did you ha... Sep 11 2005, 06:03 PM stargate525
is it realistic? I've actually never been dru... Sep 11 2005, 07:44 PM stargate525 more of the story, more of the story...
Chapter ... Sep 11 2005, 09:11 PM minque
Hehe..that´s a good thing....don´t be later on e... Sep 11 2005, 08:57 PM stargate525
oh, his fate will get far worse... Sep 11 2005, 09:12 PM stargate525 more story!
Chapter 5
My head hurt. Either i... Sep 13 2005, 12:11 AM stargate525 :huh:
come on, no advice, no imprsssions of the ... Sep 16 2005, 04:02 AM Kell-Reevor *flames*
Not really... its great so far. Good wo... Sep 16 2005, 11:27 AM Wolfie Hehe this is great :D Sep 16 2005, 01:17 PM stargate525
thanks, any other comments, like how you think... Sep 17 2005, 05:21 PM stargate525 Chapter 6
Sunset in Vivec, a beautiful time of th... Sep 18 2005, 08:38 PM mplantinga An interesting story; I'll keep an eye on this... Sep 24 2005, 12:15 AM stargate525
thank you. Sep 24 2005, 01:54 AM minque Oh ayye....poor Lizard.....hey it´s very interstin... Sep 25 2005, 07:00 PM stargate525
thanks. It's going to get more serious coming... Sep 25 2005, 10:12 PM stargate525 More Story!
Chapter 9
Now, fully healed and ... Sep 28 2005, 02:05 AM mplantinga An interesting twist, to have Nerevar be a "t... Sep 28 2005, 08:27 PM stargate525
I shall, If i have time to copy them you might ge... Sep 28 2005, 11:02 PM mplantinga An impressive escape. I do hope they manage to fin... Sep 29 2005, 02:16 AM stargate525
well...read on.
Chater 11
Even Ebonhart was dif... Sep 29 2005, 08:34 PM mplantinga You must be cruel, to leave us without knowing wha... Sep 30 2005, 05:44 AM minque Ahhhh...so many updates all very interesting, and ... Sep 30 2005, 06:51 PM stargate525
yeah, very cruel. I'm a master of cliffhanger... Sep 30 2005, 11:08 PM Wolfie Looking good so far Stargate :D Sep 30 2005, 11:12 PM D7Unknown Great story you have here, very original. I'm ... Oct 1 2005, 03:01 AM stargate525
omg Serenity was AMAZING. Everyone who has any lo... Oct 1 2005, 03:13 AM stargate525 now don't everybody jump up at once...
Chapte... Oct 1 2005, 05:45 AM mplantinga Another interesting development. I wonder when we... Oct 1 2005, 04:50 PM stargate525
thank ye. Can't give yeh all the answers at o... Oct 1 2005, 05:37 PM The Wolf Excellent job! I like it. :goodjob: Oct 1 2005, 05:45 PM minque Stargate....thy name is "teaser"..you be... Oct 1 2005, 07:32 PM stargate525
Oh thank you. I have a title now, Stargate the Te... Oct 2 2005, 12:33 AM Fuzzy Knight Funny story... Well written, keep it up ;) Oct 1 2005, 08:34 PM D7Unknown Another great update. Keep them coming. Oct 2 2005, 02:13 AM mplantinga With each new entry, this story continues to get m... Oct 2 2005, 03:02 AM stargate525
S.G.M?
Some Great Manuscript?
Super Genious Ma... Oct 2 2005, 03:09 AM stargate525 boy you guys are lucky, three updates in 12 hours.... Oct 2 2005, 05:34 AM minque
Haha....Story.Good.More......an old treydog-ish ... Oct 2 2005, 05:15 PM stargate525
okay. Expect an update soon. Oct 2 2005, 05:20 PM mplantinga Another excellent update. I'm excited to see w... Oct 2 2005, 08:43 PM stargate525
you should be somewhat knowing of this guy's ... Oct 3 2005, 01:01 AM stargate525
well, it'll be here tommorow. If it isn't... Oct 5 2005, 02:39 AM mplantinga Unless you are a witch, there will be no burning a... Oct 5 2005, 07:22 PM stargate525
ah, because then you wouldn't hear the end of... Oct 6 2005, 12:07 AM stargate525 As promised;
Chapter 15
Although some of the off... Oct 6 2005, 01:43 AM Ryden294 Another update..finally, lol. Great job once again... Oct 6 2005, 03:34 AM mplantinga A very interesting use for a tail. It's clear ... Oct 6 2005, 06:33 PM stargate525
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um.... yeah....
*furiously rewrites chap... Oct 7 2005, 02:21 AM stargate525 here ya go.
Chapter 16
I pulled the sword from ... Oct 9 2005, 09:05 PM mplantinga Hey! I thought you said he was going to get a ... Oct 10 2005, 05:48 PM stargate525
secret plot twist with the sword. as for the name... Oct 10 2005, 08:44 PM mplantinga
It looks like you did. :blink: Perhaps you ha... Oct 11 2005, 12:20 AM stargate525
I meant the 'sword' as 'sword being w... Oct 11 2005, 02:59 AM stargate525 Chapter 17
During the days that followed I learne... Oct 15 2005, 11:45 PM mplantinga Well, I guess we can wait until the next chapter t... Oct 10 2005, 08:53 PM stargate525 *double post* Oct 10 2005, 11:29 PM stargate525
Who told you about that? :|
Really though, who ... Oct 10 2005, 11:30 PM minque The plot tightens now.....so dwelling in a cave ne... Oct 16 2005, 08:36 AM chips wow this is terrible tsk...tsk..tsk..
only joking... Oct 16 2005, 06:20 PM stargate525
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just kidding. Oct 16 2005, 06:28 PM stargate525 Chapter 18
Once again I found myself in the Arena... Oct 26 2005, 11:18 PM mplantinga A curious development, to be sure. I'll look f... Oct 27 2005, 12:08 AM stargate525 just wanted to say that this isn't dead, and t... Dec 23 2005, 05:23 AM |
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