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post Aug 18 2005, 08:04 PM
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Alright for anyone who wishes to read the first six chapters, here's the link: http://www.waiting4oblivion.com/forums/ind...p?showtopic=675
I would recommend reading them, they're likely the best of the story.
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Chapter 7

Kiln walked around town pointlessly until dark, he wasn't tired. He couldn't help but wonder what trouble York was in and how he needed his help. He walked back towards the Eight Plates and entered.

Tomorrow he would go to the fort. It would be an awkward return even though he'd heard Larrius had left days before, off to Gnisis for his evaluation. Larrius was quite corrupt, perhaps he'd been discovered.

Kiln sat with Rami and the drunks listening to them laugh and sing. He stared at Rami's face when she wasn't paying attention, amazed at her beauty. The most popular drink was likely flin but he drank what he always had, the bitter but effective mazte.

He poured more of the drink for himself, watching the brown liquor flow softly from the opening and into the tall mug. At the moment everything seemed perfect but things never stayed like that for long in his experience.

In the morning he would get his armor repaired, buy some supplies and food and wait until the following day to meet York at the fort.

Kiln opened the journal and read more of it's pages,

"Today I talked to Caius again, he wants me to speak with some stupid orc in the mage's guild about doing a favor or something, I'm nothing but an errand boy I swear..."

Kiln thought for a moment, he'd met with the same orc...strange how their paths had led together so many times but it was probably nothing. For now he would sleep and worry more about that later, he put the journal back into it's pouch and lied it beside the bed.

Rami walked in lying down beside him and he fell into a deep sleep holding her close to him.
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Sorry it's so short but my pain meds suck and I'm getting off soon.

This post has been edited by Kiln: Feb 16 2006, 05:15 PM


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He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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post Oct 31 2005, 03:12 AM
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York can't remember exactly where the bow is located because he was drunk when he was told the directions.
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Kiln had just started to rest when his companions stood and Jinx opened the door slowly and looked inside.

"Come on Kiln, we don't have all day." Jinx said over his shoulder

York pushed the door the rest of the way open and stepped through, Jinx followed closely behind him. Afraid to stay alone, Kiln pushed himself to his feet and rushed after his friends and listened as York talked to himself.

Kiln was amazed at the sight of the room, below them the room was filled with water. He admired the huge stone column in the middle of the room and a slick rock path circled it leading upwards into the darkness. The light mist felt wonderful as Kiln breathed it in but the moment was interrupted by York thinking aloud.

"Did he say to go to the top? Perhaps the floor below? Where would I be if I was a bow?" York continued to mumble for several minutes as he walked up the stone path

"York, do you even know where we're going?" Kiln asked in despiration

"Of course I do boy...we're going to the top cavern to search for the bow." York said with a fleeting smile

"He had no idea." Jinx said looking at Kiln

"Could you boys at least act like you're trying to keep up?" York asked

Kiln quickened his pace to keep up with York, Jinx started to fall behind a little and struggled to climb with his heavy equipment.

At last they'd reached the top tomb, the climb had seemed like hours to Kiln's sore legs but he knew that it had only been a few moments in reality. By the look on York's face, he'd heard something beyond the next door.

York violently pulled his blade from its pouch and accidentally dropped the torch, it fell, bouncing off the cavern walls and eventually landing in the water below leaving them in the darkness. What happened next was hard to tell, in a split second Jinx's voice began to ring out through the rock walls of the cavern.

"HELP ME!" Jinx yelled

"HANG ON!" Kiln yelled searching blindly with his hands in front of him for Jinx

"I can't hang on much longer!" Jinx yelled from the darkness

In the struggle to grab the torch, Jinx had slipped on the wet footing and was barely hanging onto the ledge. Kiln struggled to grab him in the darkness but was unable to find his hands.

The two remaining on the edge searched quickly for their friend's hands knowing that every moment that passes Jinx is closer to falling to his death. Kiln felt his hand at last and began pulling.

"OUCH! Be bloody careful with that!" Jinx yelled

"York, over here!" Kiln yelled as he felt his grip begin to loosen

Kiln gasped as he lost his grip and let go, everything stopped moving in his mind as his companion yelled. All at once he felt as cold and helpless as he'd felt as he sat beside his dying mother, knowing there was nothing he could do. Just as he felt the worst he heard York grunting and felt a hand land on his shoulder pulling up from the ledge.

"Don't worry, I've got you." York said

Kiln guessed that he'd grabbed ahold of Jinx just as he'd let go and for that he was thankful. Jinx breathed heavily for a moment as he was pulled the rest of the way up, he sprawled out on the path and recovered from the near-death experience.

Jinx took an unlit torch from his pack and lit it with magic.

"You guys just go on without me...I can't handle anything else right now." Jinx said handing them the torch

"What if skelet..." Kiln started but was interrupted by Jinx

"Don't worry about me, I'll be fine." Jinx said

York grabbed the torch and Kiln's arm.

"Let's just get this over with so we can get out of here." York said sternly as he pulled Kiln through the door

Kiln didn't know what he was more afraid of, York or the burial guardians. Both seemed to be extremely angry at him at the moment. Kiln felt angry at himself for not being able to hold Jinx...if York hadn't been there...


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Kiln   The Story Of Kiln The Wanderer   Aug 18 2005, 08:04 PM
minque   Very nice Kiln....really . Good descriptions....I ...   Aug 18 2005, 08:14 PM
Kiln   I fixed it Minque, I'm getting off for now...s...   Aug 18 2005, 08:19 PM
minque   Awww are you ill? and still makes wonderful update...   Aug 18 2005, 08:20 PM
Kiln   Nope no illness...I just got back from ear surgery...   Aug 18 2005, 08:22 PM
Soulseeker3.0   well good update Kiln, and hope you feel better.   Aug 18 2005, 10:05 PM
Kiln   Kiln awoke the next day and slowly crawled out of ...   Aug 19 2005, 02:20 AM
Soulseeker3.0   lol oh well that was good kiln, granted you had th...   Aug 19 2005, 03:25 AM
BobV   Very good updatesesss.   Aug 19 2005, 10:17 AM
minque   Nice details here, the business with the armorer a...   Aug 19 2005, 12:18 PM
treydog   Don't be too concerned about the "extra...   Aug 19 2005, 01:35 PM
Dantrag   I think I've gotten rid of six years in a sent...   Aug 19 2005, 01:46 PM
Kiln   Kiln hadn't slept a bit, he was worried about ...   Aug 19 2005, 05:04 PM
Kell-Reevor   My usual statement.... Good as usual, keep it up...   Aug 19 2005, 05:10 PM
Soulseeker3.0   lol I wonder if he would have opened up you said y...   Aug 19 2005, 07:20 PM
minque   Interesting development in this story I must say.....   Aug 19 2005, 07:44 PM
Kiln   Warning:After reading this you'll never think ...   Aug 19 2005, 10:28 PM
minque   Hehe......now wasnīt that sweet.....Kiln the Dance...   Aug 19 2005, 10:57 PM
Soulseeker3.0   lol ha good job kiln.   Aug 19 2005, 11:28 PM
Neck' Thall   HELP ME!!!!! I MUST THINK OF S...   Aug 20 2005, 12:18 AM
Soulseeker3.0   don't know if this will help but banana phone?   Aug 20 2005, 02:27 AM
Lucidarius   I really like your story, Kiln. Great idea to weav...   Aug 20 2005, 03:25 PM
treydog   "The Story of Kiln the Not-Dancer" Hmm-...   Aug 22 2005, 03:01 PM
Kiln   As they arrived at the silt strider and paid for t...   Aug 22 2005, 05:42 PM
Lucidarius   Good update where we learn more about Kiln's b...   Aug 22 2005, 07:47 PM
Kiln   There, all fixed. Thanks for pointing that out. :...   Aug 22 2005, 08:04 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Good job kiln please keep it up   Aug 22 2005, 10:54 PM
Neck' Thall   Ditto...Thats now my favorite word cuz i cant wrig...   Aug 23 2005, 12:49 AM
Kiln   If you have a complaint, feel free to voice it. I...   Aug 23 2005, 01:07 AM
Neck' Thall   no i said compliments! Thats as in i like it b...   Aug 23 2005, 01:11 AM
Kiln   The door creaked open slowly and a tall dunmer man...   Aug 23 2005, 03:55 PM
minque   Ahh..ok so he met his old friend...well he surely ...   Aug 23 2005, 04:00 PM
treydog   Nice additions showing Kiln's past. A very im...   Aug 23 2005, 05:51 PM
Soulseeker3.0   I was gonig to say something like when Trey said S...   Aug 23 2005, 09:40 PM
Neck' Thall   I like...but a guy is wearing a skirt?!? i kn...   Aug 24 2005, 06:06 AM
Lucidarius   Really good update. I like how Kiln at first doesn...   Aug 24 2005, 09:12 AM
Kiln   A skirt is the piece of clothing he wears in the g...   Aug 24 2005, 01:47 PM
Kiln   The clothing mission with my own little twist to i...   Aug 24 2005, 02:47 PM
Neck' Thall   kool...but i'm wondering if the men are just s...   Aug 24 2005, 03:40 PM
treydog   Interesting twist- I guess Kiln really can't ...   Aug 24 2005, 04:09 PM
minque   Ayye......Poor Kiln, thatīs what you get when you ...   Aug 24 2005, 07:29 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job kiln keep it up stupid corrupt guards ...   Aug 24 2005, 09:44 PM
Kiln   Completely inspired by him Minque, that's his ...   Aug 24 2005, 09:51 PM
Soulseeker3.0   LOL nice dream KIln. and keep up the good work...   Aug 24 2005, 09:58 PM
minque   You continue this very well.....lots of good updat...   Aug 24 2005, 10:05 PM
Kiln   While near the fire, Kiln removed the journal from...   Aug 24 2005, 11:33 PM
minque   Ah another good one..just perfect before going to ...   Aug 24 2005, 11:38 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job KIln :goodjob:   Aug 24 2005, 11:40 PM
treydog   Interesting dream-sequence. Rotten Camonna Tong p...   Aug 25 2005, 02:24 PM
Lucidarius   You update fast, great. I like the way you put in ...   Aug 25 2005, 03:33 PM
Kiln   The dream sequence was somewhat meant to confuse y...   Aug 25 2005, 07:00 PM
minque   O-o.....beware of the nixies......there are storie...   Aug 25 2005, 07:05 PM
Megil Tel-Zeke   "He looked about as a treestump crashed nearb...   Aug 25 2005, 07:32 PM
Kiln   Alright then, I'll have a look at those things...   Aug 25 2005, 07:46 PM
Megil Tel-Zeke   For future reference, just now that instead of rep...   Aug 25 2005, 08:28 PM
Kiln   Ahhhhhh....soooo hard to please Megil....read it a...   Aug 25 2005, 10:02 PM
Megil Tel-Zeke   not hard to please, just trying to be helpful ^ ^....   Aug 25 2005, 10:07 PM
Soulseeker3.0   well I thought it was nice....   Aug 25 2005, 10:49 PM
Kiln   Kiln glanced nervously from hound to hound, waitin...   Aug 26 2005, 05:01 PM
Megil Tel-Zeke   Very impressive addition. i was acutally worried ...   Aug 26 2005, 06:24 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow nice Kiln!   Aug 26 2005, 09:53 PM
treydog   Some good action sequences there. I like the fact...   Aug 27 2005, 12:41 PM
Kiln   Thanks everyone. :D -----------------------------...   Aug 27 2005, 07:38 PM
Megil Tel-Zeke   good. "as he lie there" should be ...   Aug 27 2005, 07:48 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job kiln.   Aug 27 2005, 08:02 PM
Kiln   Fine then, I guess I'll put laid rather than l...   Aug 27 2005, 08:04 PM
minque   Superb as always Kiln....You really put life into ...   Aug 28 2005, 10:28 AM
Kiln   Chapter 8 York stood in the open doorway, waiting ...   Aug 28 2005, 07:47 PM
Megil Tel-Zeke   alas, no complaints. at least none yet, I'll r...   Aug 28 2005, 09:30 PM
Lucidarius   Your story is good and the character and actions o...   Aug 28 2005, 10:14 PM
Soulseeker3.0   very well done Kiln please keep it up.   Aug 28 2005, 11:26 PM
treydog   More good additions; I particularly liked the way ...   Aug 29 2005, 02:56 PM
Kiln   As York and Jinx rowed the boat closer and closer ...   Sep 1 2005, 09:14 PM
Kiln   After some time of doing nothing, Kiln fell asleep...   Sep 3 2005, 06:21 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Interesting... :) Good writing as always, well w...   Sep 3 2005, 06:26 PM
Wurlon   Heh I like it, especially since it's tied to t...   Sep 3 2005, 09:56 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow great stuff kiln. please keep up the good work...   Sep 3 2005, 10:59 PM
mplantinga   Great story. Please, sir, can I have some more?   Sep 24 2005, 01:29 AM
Neck' Thall   Nice writing man. I wonder what'll happen nex...   Sep 24 2005, 09:57 PM
Megil Tel-Zeke   I do believe kiln has said the story was postponed...   Sep 28 2005, 06:28 PM
mplantinga   That would be very sad; but real life happens. All...   Sep 28 2005, 08:20 PM
Kiln   I wasn't sure if I would continue this, but it...   Oct 9 2005, 11:51 AM
minque   Ahhh! Iīm so happy you decided to continue.......   Oct 9 2005, 12:08 PM
Neck' Thall   Yay!! great story!   Oct 9 2005, 04:03 PM
Soulseeker3.0   YAY! more Kiln! good job   Oct 9 2005, 08:27 PM
mplantinga   Thanks for finding some time to continue the story...   Oct 10 2005, 05:41 PM
Kiln   Kiln had walked for hours at and around the camp, ...   Oct 21 2005, 01:39 AM
Soulseeker3.0   very good Kiln, I like it alot. good thing you fou...   Oct 21 2005, 02:04 AM
mplantinga   An interesting development. I like how you've ...   Oct 21 2005, 06:00 PM
Kiln   They walked the dark tunnels before them slowly, t...   Oct 27 2005, 11:43 PM
mplantinga   A great update, as always. I was a little worried ...   Oct 27 2005, 11:55 PM
Soulseeker3.0   I liked it Kiln, please continue the story. When w...   Oct 28 2005, 10:54 PM
mplantinga   Sounds like an excellent case of team effort; hope...   Oct 31 2005, 09:28 PM
Soulseeker3.0   well thats about right.... DITTO That was an exel...   Oct 31 2005, 10:51 PM
Kiln   My own variant of the battle with the ghost in the...   Dec 7 2005, 03:48 AM
mplantinga   Thanks for the great update. You captured quite we...   Dec 7 2005, 07:11 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow, I agree with mplantinga. Very nice addition K...   Dec 7 2005, 10:40 PM
Kiln   This scene was incredibly difficult for me to writ...   Dec 31 2005, 04:02 AM
Soulseeker3.0   I see how it was difficult, fight scenes are usual...   Dec 31 2005, 04:50 AM
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