 Excerpts From The Green Book Of Poems, Don't Look I'm Working On It In Here! |
| Wurlon |
 Sep 4 2005, 08:25 PM
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Excerpts From The Green Book Of Poems
By Wurlon Firethorn (I'm Using This As A Writing Station Please) (Brb Later, Out Of Ideas For now) The Horse And The Rider So sat the knight, whom was dressed in gray mail, perched on a horse so through wind he would sail! But through battle and war, his horse would bleed, so the rider gave armor to his steed! But heavy and thick, the horse made a jump, and the rider fell a thunderous thump! But through anger and hurt, he was still sane, and simply smacked the horse on it's mane! This post has been edited by Wurlon: Nov 6 2005, 06:45 PM -------------------- Sic Semper Tyrannis
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| minque |
Nov 9 2005, 10:10 PM
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 Wise Woman  Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
QUOTE(stargate525 @ Nov 6 2005, 05:02 AM) hah, you have no idea how fast I can edit something when I'm in a hurry.  Really? I´m impressed! QUOTE(vaanic~one @ Nov 8 2005, 08:36 PM) That's not a good thing to think. As far as I can tell, no-one has bothered to read any of my stories either, but that's nothing to go by. No replies does not necessarily mean no reading. So incredibly true!......No replies to my story on the TES-forums..but ppl are still reading it! QUOTE(Wurlon @ Nov 9 2005, 09:46 PM) It does for me  Actually...it does for me too!  -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| stargate525 |
Nov 9 2005, 11:00 PM
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 Finder  Joined: 10-April 05 From: wisconsin; land of cheese, beer, and bratwurst! |
QUOTE(minque @ Nov 9 2005, 04:10 PM) Really? I´m impressed! of course, the chance of me missing something is inversely proportional to how fast I go... -------------------- these forums taste almost, but not quite, completely unlike tea.
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Wurlon Excerpts From The Green Book Of Poems Sep 4 2005, 08:25 PM
Soulseeker3.0 not to bad. I don't like poems to much but yea... Sep 5 2005, 01:54 AM
Wurlon
Thanks I changed that and it does sound better.
... Sep 5 2005, 02:04 AM stargate525 I tried reading them to myself, but found them kin... Sep 6 2005, 10:44 PM Wurlon
I"m not done, and I haven't been able t... Sep 7 2005, 08:38 PM stargate525
just a suggestion, not an accusation. Sep 7 2005, 09:43 PM Wurlon
Well naturally as the writer I can't see my ... Sep 10 2005, 06:54 PM Soulseeker3.0 well good luck wurlon Sep 5 2005, 02:06 AM Wurlon
There's no way I could win, I submitted a st... Sep 5 2005, 02:27 AM Soulseeker3.0
no problem just have fun. :D Sep 5 2005, 03:13 AM stargate525
Sure. Take this one for example...
... and obs... Sep 14 2005, 05:03 PM Wurlon
Grr I have to work to do, I'll get back to t... Sep 17 2005, 12:08 AM Wurlon
How about if I just make the first line longer ... Nov 6 2005, 02:18 AM Wurlon Sorry guys I've been very busy with schoolwork... Sep 24 2005, 02:20 PM Wurlon Forget it I can't do poetry right now, .. you ... Nov 2 2005, 09:54 PM stargate525
oh c'mon. Those are good. Better than most of... Nov 2 2005, 09:59 PM vaanic~one
What makes you think that? Nov 3 2005, 09:00 PM Wurlon Well now there is no point, it would be late to se... Nov 4 2005, 11:21 PM stargate525
NO! The due date is for the competition ONLY.... Nov 4 2005, 11:28 PM Wurlon
ohhh when is that lol? Nov 5 2005, 03:42 PM stargate525
about a half-hour after we get ready to playtest ... Nov 5 2005, 05:01 PM Wurlon
But I though you guys were going to edit the sto... Nov 6 2005, 02:14 AM stargate525
hah, you have no idea how fast I can edit somethi... Nov 6 2005, 05:02 AM vaanic~one
That's not a good thing to think.
As far ... Nov 8 2005, 08:36 PM Wurlon
It does for me :mellow: Nov 9 2005, 09:46 PM Wurlon Once again I'm sticking these here for referen... Nov 6 2005, 06:36 PM Ola Martin I think your poems are great :D Mar 15 2006, 05:12 PM Wurlon
I think your poems are great :D
Lol thanks.. k... Jul 20 2006, 06:59 PM |
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