 Nameless, Part 1 |
| davion |
 Dec 15 2005, 08:40 PM
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I approached my window, listening to the sound of my feet echoing in the darkness, like a million silloetts that will remain forever in darkness and missery. I opened my window and peered out, but the cool, fresh air did little to aid my spirits. I was a warrior, forever damned to go from town to town, civilization to civilization, with a unquenchable thurst that my spirit longed for to get rid of. The Daedra had taken everything away from me. . . even my lifelessness. I suffered their slings and hurls, only to be spat on by those who I once called friends. I was nothing. . . just another nameless warrior passing by this world to desperately meet with the one which they called fate. This post has been edited by davion: Dec 15 2005, 08:45 PM -------------------- The lazy man can, what the lazy man plans.
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| Jonajosa |
Dec 16 2005, 07:45 AM
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Evoker Joined: 12-October 05 From: Western N.C. mountains. |
Nice to have you back.
I would lengthen the chapters. Tie your sections together into larger plots so you can do this. Great Style. Can't wait for the next update.  -------------------- America's Army. Download it and join the ranks of the many who fight aginst the people know as the enemy, or Cobra for you GI JOE fans.
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davion Nameless Dec 15 2005, 08:40 PM
davion Chapter One
Night after night, dream after dream,... Dec 15 2005, 08:58 PM davion Chapter Two
Azura abandoned me in the cold, dark... Dec 15 2005, 09:09 PM mplantinga This story is off to a great start. I'm intrig... Dec 15 2005, 10:22 PM davion Chapter Three
I took but little solice in the fac... Dec 15 2005, 11:16 PM Dantrag Very good start, as mplantinga said, ingtriguing. ... Dec 16 2005, 01:46 AM minque Excellent! really nice story....hmm like Danny... Dec 16 2005, 09:53 PM davion I know but my computer was acting up the day i typ... Dec 16 2005, 10:45 PM davion Chapter Four
"This story goes out to all the... Dec 19 2005, 08:48 AM
mplantinga I think I'll have to read that again if I hope... Dec 19 2005, 06:53 PM |
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