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davion
post Dec 15 2005, 08:40 PM
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I approached my window, listening to the sound of my feet echoing in the darkness, like a million silloetts that will remain forever in darkness and missery. I opened my window and peered out, but the cool, fresh air did little to aid my spirits. I was a warrior, forever damned to go from town to town, civilization to civilization, with a unquenchable thurst that my spirit longed for to get rid of.

The Daedra had taken everything away from me. . . even my lifelessness. I suffered their slings and hurls, only to be spat on by those who I once called friends. I was nothing. . . just another nameless warrior passing by this world to desperately meet with the one which they called fate.

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post Dec 19 2005, 06:53 PM
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I think I'll have to read that again if I hope to follow everything that's been packed into this unusually dense installment. Definitely a great installment, which shows careful planning and excellent delivery. I still don't have a good sense of where this story is going (or, for that matter, where it came from), but I think that is part of its unique charm. Keep up the great work.
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