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Dantrag
post Dec 23 2005, 12:15 AM
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I was soon accepted into House Redoran, and my mother was pretty proud of me. Probably too proud. I didn't go to Athyn's class anymore, being too busy as councillor Venim's page. Or, at least until the fiery councillor died, and was replaced by his brother. All young hirelings in the House had to spend five years in a councillor's service, and I was no different. Close to the end of those years, my fourth, to be exact, I wondered why I was even in the House; I got no money for my service, being a page, and my family needed money. I should have gotten a job. There I was in Bolvyn's manor, getting fed and clothed while my family starved. My own damned fault. I paid for my selfishness.

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I'll put the actual story here in a while; I just needed to start this back up.

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post Dec 26 2005, 07:56 PM
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Here you go, Telendil; please don't hurt your head anymore! sad.gif

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"Take it." Sel insisted, shoving a bag of gold pieces in his mother's hand.

"No. It's yours, you earned it."

"And I'm giving it to you! I can do what I want with my own money!" Sel retorted. The money was actually money given to him indirectly from Arsyn Venim to buy new weapons. He had been stealing from House Redoran for awhile trying to help his family, and his mother never even suspected.

Valia sighed, and muttered something about him being just like his father. That angered Sel to a point. He wasn't like that bastarde at all! He would never abandon his family!

"Well, is there something I could buy from you?" Sel asked. "I've really got to go, but I still won't leave until you take this money."

Valia wouldn't have minded if her son never left, but he did need to go back to the Venim Manor where he could make a better future for himself and Vysi.

"As a matter of fact, I do." she replied. She walked into one of the only two rooms in the hut that served as her bedroom and opened a chest that she had told her children never to look inside. Needless to say, Sel had tried many times, but could never get the lock off. She walked back to Sel, holding a sword that was resting in its scabbard. The scabbard was nothing special; just black leather, but Sel didn't care; he would take anything as long as his mother would take the money.

"I would have sold it years ago." Valia said. "But your father told me to give it to you when you were old enough. He never said I couldn't sell it to you." she said with a wink.

Sel grabbed the sword from her and dropped the bag into her hand. "It isn't much, mom, but it'll help." he said, almost as an apology.

"You better get going after you say good-bye to your sister." Valia said.

"I would, but she ran off; I guess she's mad that I'm leaving again. Would you tell her I said good-bye?"

"Sure." Valia said, giving her son a hug and sending him off.

Sel trudged along, somewhat glad he was leaving home, and somewhat disappointed. He actually lkied the training he was required to do, but he hated all the ceremonial aspects of being a part of House Redoran, and he hated leaving his family to fend for itself. His mother was having trouble getting any sort of job; even jobs cleaining houses were taken. He was so busy thinking that he didn't notice the sound of footsteps trailing him...

Sel approached Under Skar, and walked inside the huge crab shell. He made his way along the rope bridges to the Venim Manor. As he was about to open the door to his home away from home, he heard a guard shout something to the effect of "What are you doing here?" Startled, Sel turned around to find out that the guard wasn't talking to him; he was talking to...Vysi?

With a loud sigh, Sel walked to where the two stood.

"Well, little girl?" the guard asked angrily.

"She's with me." Sel said hastily; he didn't want Vysi geting scared.

"Alright, but I don't know if Councillor Venim will allow her to stay with you." the guard replied.

"Don't worry, she's just visiting." Sel assured the guard.

"No I'm not! I'm staying with you!" Vysi protested.

"Alright, fine." Sel said in a tone that said that he was only saying whatever it took to calm Vysi down. "Come on, Sis."

Vysi followed, and once they were in his room, Sel turned on her. "What the hell are you doing?"

"Coming with you, stupid." Vysi said with a disarming smile. Even though she had just insulted him, he couldn't make himself be angry at her with that smile on her face.

"Alright, you can stay for a couple days, but then you're going home." Sel said, fearing that Venim wouldn't let her stay.

Vysi hopped on the bed next to Sel's and made herself comfortable. "That's Retin's bed." Sel said. "Take a nap on mine. I'll be right back."

Talking Arsyn into letting her stay would be the hardest thing about this situation even if he was one of the councillor's favorites. Arsyn was a hard man and tough like his brother Bolvyn, but was nowhere near as cold-hearted, so Sel didn't know how the councillor would react.

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Dantrag   Sel, Chapter 3   Dec 23 2005, 12:15 AM
minque   Wonderful! More Sel.....woah.....I canīt wait...   Dec 23 2005, 12:19 AM
Dantrag   here's your least favorite story on the forums...   Dec 23 2005, 02:25 AM
minque   Quite wonderful update Danny.....you really make y...   Dec 23 2005, 02:01 PM
Tellie   Oh yes, more Sel. I have been waiting in patience ...   Dec 23 2005, 02:49 PM
minque   O_o.....now itīs getting exciting, with lilīVysi r...   Dec 26 2005, 10:36 PM
Dantrag   It's late, I'm not tired, so I'm liste...   Dec 28 2005, 08:17 AM
minque   Ahh yes.....very good as usual.....I somehow feel ...   Dec 28 2005, 07:32 PM
MerGirl   Yay! *claps* Awesome update. :) Sel's s...   Dec 30 2005, 09:05 PM
Dantrag   Ever wanted to just crawl into a hole and never co...   Jan 3 2006, 10:59 PM
minque   OMG! Nooooooooo......itīs terrible! no no....   Jan 3 2006, 11:08 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Well I've finally had some time to catch up wi...   Jan 4 2006, 10:44 PM
Dantrag   about time for an update, no? ---- He didn't...   Jan 6 2006, 09:10 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice story telling there Danny. Good written as al...   Jan 6 2006, 10:20 PM
minque   Awww-........really....itīs so sad.....but Sel rea...   Jan 6 2006, 10:37 PM
mplantinga   Silly me; I didn't notice you had started chap...   Jan 6 2006, 11:31 PM
minque   He he..I wonīt be that patient though! Danny...   Jan 6 2006, 11:40 PM
Dantrag   Here you are. ---- They buried their mother the ...   Jan 8 2006, 05:28 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Great update Danny :) I really liked this one, ver...   Jan 8 2006, 12:33 PM
minque   Thanks Danny for not letting me wait!....Iīll ...   Jan 8 2006, 02:26 PM
mplantinga   It's good to see Sel demonstrating some indepe...   Jan 9 2006, 07:01 PM
Tellie   Yes, more Sel, poor Vysi and Sel, I look forward t...   Jan 12 2006, 11:49 AM
Dantrag   *Dantrag bows to his wonderfully small audience* ...   Jan 15 2006, 07:44 AM
minque   *Bowing gratefully at Danny* An update....how wond...   Jan 15 2006, 03:52 PM
mplantinga   *applause* The audience, hanging on every word fro...   Jan 16 2006, 06:12 PM
MerGirl   *claps* :D Yay! Updates, me very happy! ...   Jan 17 2006, 12:44 AM
Dantrag   It's that time.... Yeah you're about as e...   Jan 23 2006, 05:01 PM
mplantinga   Sel sure has gotten himself into quite a pickle. I...   Jan 24 2006, 07:11 PM
minque   Ok Doctor Danny! If doctorīs appointments were...   Jan 24 2006, 10:57 PM
Soulseeker3.0   WOW, i got bored today so I desided to read anothe...   Jan 26 2006, 12:40 AM
Dantrag   boop! ------- Sel's eyes were watering, ...   Jan 28 2006, 02:38 AM
minque   Now what a relief! Sel not being deprived of h...   Jan 28 2006, 02:18 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Great update Dantrag, A close call.   Jan 28 2006, 05:42 PM
mplantinga   Definitely a close call, but it sounds like Sel an...   Jan 30 2006, 09:25 PM
Dantrag   *Note* I realized a major inconsistency within m...   Feb 8 2006, 03:01 AM
Dantrag   Sel gathered up random dwemer items that Aldaril a...   Feb 13 2006, 09:20 PM
Kiln   Finally you update, been waiting for some time now...   Feb 13 2006, 09:46 PM
jack cloudy   First time I read this one. And I have to admit on...   Feb 13 2006, 10:05 PM
minque   Ahhh.....an update! yay! As always a vivid...   Feb 13 2006, 10:10 PM
Soulseeker3.0   yay took long enough, nice addition to the story a...   Feb 13 2006, 10:43 PM
Taillus   Very well written and well composed. Not to mentio...   Feb 13 2006, 10:54 PM
Dantrag   Boo! ----- "I'm home." he call...   Feb 15 2006, 11:58 PM
Taillus   The nerve! Banning Sel like that. What an outr...   Feb 16 2006, 01:17 AM
minque   Awww......those Venim-brothers....all alike, mean,...   Feb 16 2006, 07:53 PM
Tellie   Yo're doing just as you always do.......AMAZIN...   Feb 16 2006, 08:22 PM
jack cloudy   Glad I don't drink coffee. But my nerves, plea...   Feb 16 2006, 08:34 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow, Amazing! I had something thought up but I...   Feb 16 2006, 11:02 PM
Kiln   Ooohhhh...I am just dying to find out how Sel make...   Feb 17 2006, 06:22 PM
mplantinga   While I understand the strength of Sel's react...   Mar 1 2006, 12:08 AM
Dantrag   welcome back. ------ "This is really good....   Mar 12 2006, 11:42 PM
minque   Awwwww.....Iīm getting worried now, it seems as th...   Mar 12 2006, 11:48 PM
jack cloudy   Yay, update. :) Sel is getting rather stressed. H...   Mar 13 2006, 05:12 PM
treydog   It is to my sorrow that I have not kept up with on...   Mar 15 2006, 05:10 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow, great story Dantrag. I hope Sel gets through...   Mar 16 2006, 03:50 AM
MerGirl   Oh, dear! Poor little Sel and Vysi! :( *...   Mar 25 2006, 09:30 PM
Dantrag   Well, I hope I wasn't gone so long that everyo...   Apr 15 2006, 07:44 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Cool Danny! ;D   Apr 15 2006, 09:33 AM
Tellie   Now danny...shame on you...how would you even th...   Apr 15 2006, 01:29 PM
Red   *Ends his lurking spree* I've really been e...   Apr 15 2006, 03:47 PM
minque   Yay!!! An update is coming....this i...   Apr 15 2006, 09:31 PM
Dantrag   I promised, so here it is. I'm a (young) man o...   Apr 16 2006, 11:35 PM
minque   Ok....you had to didnīt you? Leave me wondering wh...   Apr 16 2006, 11:46 PM
MerGirl   Ooooh, yay! :) An update and I've been t...   Apr 17 2006, 01:58 AM
Dantrag   Well, it wasn't supposed to be a cliffhanger, ...   Apr 17 2006, 04:24 AM
jack cloudy   yay, an update. I like it.   Apr 17 2006, 12:22 PM
minque   Hmmm.....ok, but Iīm so worried about Vysi....Sad...   Apr 17 2006, 02:39 PM
treydog   Excellent update, Dantrag! I love the persona...   Apr 19 2006, 05:17 PM
Dantrag   forgot all about this...sorry. ---------- Sel wo...   Apr 20 2006, 11:38 PM
minque   Ha! yessss an update...but still we have to wo...   Apr 21 2006, 01:07 AM
Dantrag   It wasn't really an update...merely what I d...   Apr 21 2006, 01:09 AM
minque   Whatever......it took the story a tad forwards any...   Apr 21 2006, 04:28 PM
Soulseeker3.0   great story Dantrag, please continue making update...   Apr 22 2006, 06:24 PM
minque   OMG!!!!! Have you noticed how...   Apr 22 2006, 10:11 PM
Soulseeker3.0   hmm random? :D but yeah I agree with Kiln... or ...   Apr 25 2006, 04:25 AM
Kiln   *Kiln taps his foot* We need an update here mate,...   Apr 25 2006, 01:10 AM
Dantrag   Here you are ------ Sel, Vysi, and Aldaril arriv...   May 1 2006, 01:08 AM
jack cloudy   Yay, update! A nice one. Now Aldaril probably ...   May 1 2006, 10:52 AM
minque   Ohohohooo......Now they have a problem......I love...   May 1 2006, 12:35 PM
DarkHunter   Fighting with Divanath? not a good idea... he does...   May 1 2006, 07:13 PM
mplantinga   Imagine my surprise to find several great updates ...   May 1 2006, 07:13 PM
treydog   Short, but wonderfully described. I love the twis...   May 2 2006, 12:45 AM
Dantrag   wow. It's been awhile. (I'm such a slacker...   May 19 2006, 04:11 PM
treydog   More Sel! Hooray! Glad to see you back, ...   May 19 2006, 04:26 PM
Tellie   Wohoo...finally we have some more of good'ol S...   May 19 2006, 04:30 PM
minque   Ha! Good old Sel! Clever as usual....some ...   May 19 2006, 06:55 PM
Dantrag   I kinda missed Sel, so here you go. ---------- ...   May 29 2006, 02:58 AM
minque   O-o.....hmmm annoying Divayth Fyr are we huh? Was ...   May 29 2006, 08:22 PM
treydog   Loved the comparison of Sel's "No thank y...   May 30 2006, 03:17 PM
Soulseeker3.0   hmm, don't you just love mind games? wrong ans...   May 30 2006, 05:09 PM
mplantinga   It was interesting that he dismissed Fyr's off...   May 30 2006, 05:41 PM
Dantrag   Fyr will get even later. ;) --------------- Sel ...   Jun 3 2006, 04:15 AM
minque   Ahhhh......more Sel! That hammer.....was it Vo...   Jun 5 2006, 01:15 AM
mplantinga   I also will be curious to see what Sel buys for Vy...   Jun 5 2006, 08:29 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Ahhhh......more Sel! That hammer.....was it V...   Aug 26 2006, 02:40 AM


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