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Dantrag |
Dec 23 2005, 12:15 AM
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Councilor

Joined: 13-February 05
From: The cellar of the fortress of the fuzz

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I was soon accepted into House Redoran, and my mother was pretty proud of me. Probably too proud. I didn't go to Athyn's class anymore, being too busy as councillor Venim's page. Or, at least until the fiery councillor died, and was replaced by his brother. All young hirelings in the House had to spend five years in a councillor's service, and I was no different. Close to the end of those years, my fourth, to be exact, I wondered why I was even in the House; I got no money for my service, being a page, and my family needed money. I should have gotten a job. There I was in Bolvyn's manor, getting fed and clothed while my family starved. My own damned fault. I paid for my selfishness.
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I'll put the actual story here in a while; I just needed to start this back up.
This post has been edited by Dantrag: Feb 8 2006, 02:47 AM
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"Its when murder is justice that martyrs are made"
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Jan 6 2006, 09:10 PM
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Councilor

Joined: 13-February 05
From: The cellar of the fortress of the fuzz

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about time for an update, no?
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He didn't believe it. He had seen her that very morning, early though it may have been. As he looked back, though, he realized the things that he hadn't really thought much of. He didn't think twice when he saw how skinny she looked. Or when she ate only the rat's tail. Did it even have any meat on it? He realized that she had starved herself so that he and Vysi could eat. It made him angry at himself, especially since he was eating well here in Bolvyn's manor and he had eaten some of his family's scarce food while his mother ate a rat's tail.
"Get up and go get your sister. You've been sitting there over an hour." Retin said in a demanding tone. "She's probably feeling as bad as you, and you're leaving her all alone in some Imperial fortress."
As much as Sel wanted to sit there in his self-loathing, he wanted as much to make sure his sister was okay. He didn't reply, but he did get up and make his way slowly towards Fort Buckmoth.
He gave the guard at the door his sword as they had asked; the Imperials feared House Redoran because of their haatred towards the outlanders coming into their land. As much as they hated it though, none of the House leaders would be dishonorable enough to murder any Imperials without good cause. Except maybe Councillor Venim.
"I'm here to take Vysi Vendas away." Sel told the guard.
"The little dunmer orphan?" the guard asked unthinkinkingly, "Ask the gaoler."
"The gaoler?" Sel asked incredulously. "You put my sister in a cell?"
The guard was suddenly glad that this Redoran's sword had been taken away. "It um-it wasn't my decisi- Just go down there and get her."
"I hope you burn in hell." Sel said as he walked down the steps, anger at himself and the Imperials mixed with the grief of his loss, forming a horrible tempest inside him.
My sister is no criminal; no danger to them, yet they choose to lock her in a cell. The only thing she's done is see her mother die today, but apparently that's a damned crime. Whoever was in charge here would never hear the end of this.
"I want my sister out." he said flatly to the much larger, stronger, and older Imperial gaoler standing in front of him.
"Who'd that be?"
"She's the only twelve year-old dunmer here, I'm sure. Now get her out." he demanded angrily.
The gaoler did as he was told, but he flashed Sel a look that said that the dunmer boy was pushing it.
Vysi came out, her face looking tear-stained and pitifully sad. Sel became more angry and more saddened. Who the hell do these people think they are, locking up twelve year-old girls in dark cells? Poor Vysi, having to stay here with the stench of prisoners and the darkness; hardly comforting after our mother died...and these damned soldiers did it to her.
"Come on, Vysi." he said, taking her hand and leading her out. He gave the gaoler a cold, murderous stare as he left, the same one that he gave the guard at the entrance as he took his sword back.
Sel stopped once they were outside and turned to face his sister. "Are you alright?" Sel asked, "Did they hurt you?"
Vysi shook her head, and only when he was sure she was telling the truth did he continue on back towards Ald'ruhn.
Sel had his first reason to hate the Empire.
This post has been edited by Dantrag: Jan 6 2006, 09:10 PM
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He he..I wonīt be that patient though! Danny... Jan 6 2006, 11:40 PM Dantrag Here you are.
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They buried their mother the ... Jan 8 2006, 05:28 AM Fuzzy Knight Great update Danny :) I really liked this one, ver... Jan 8 2006, 12:33 PM minque Thanks Danny for not letting me wait!....Iīll ... Jan 8 2006, 02:26 PM mplantinga It's good to see Sel demonstrating some indepe... Jan 9 2006, 07:01 PM Tellie Yes, more Sel, poor Vysi and Sel, I look forward t... Jan 12 2006, 11:49 AM Dantrag *Dantrag bows to his wonderfully small audience*
... Jan 15 2006, 07:44 AM minque *Bowing gratefully at Danny* An update....how wond... Jan 15 2006, 03:52 PM mplantinga *applause* The audience, hanging on every word fro... Jan 16 2006, 06:12 PM MerGirl *claps* :D Yay! Updates, me very happy! ... Jan 17 2006, 12:44 AM Dantrag It's that time....
Yeah you're about as e... Jan 23 2006, 05:01 PM mplantinga Sel sure has gotten himself into quite a pickle. I... Jan 24 2006, 07:11 PM minque Ok Doctor Danny! If doctorīs appointments were... Jan 24 2006, 10:57 PM Soulseeker3.0 WOW, i got bored today so I desided to read anothe... Jan 26 2006, 12:40 AM Dantrag boop!
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Sel's eyes were watering, ... Jan 28 2006, 02:38 AM minque Now what a relief! Sel not being deprived of h... Jan 28 2006, 02:18 PM Soulseeker3.0 Great update Dantrag, A close call. Jan 28 2006, 05:42 PM mplantinga Definitely a close call, but it sounds like Sel an... Jan 30 2006, 09:25 PM Dantrag *Note*
I realized a major inconsistency within m... Feb 8 2006, 03:01 AM Dantrag Sel gathered up random dwemer items that Aldaril a... Feb 13 2006, 09:20 PM Kiln Finally you update, been waiting for some time now... Feb 13 2006, 09:46 PM jack cloudy First time I read this one. And I have to admit on... Feb 13 2006, 10:05 PM minque Ahhh.....an update! yay! As always a vivid... Feb 13 2006, 10:10 PM Soulseeker3.0 yay took long enough, nice addition to the story a... Feb 13 2006, 10:43 PM Taillus Very well written and well composed. Not to mentio... Feb 13 2006, 10:54 PM Dantrag Boo!
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"I'm home." he call... Feb 15 2006, 11:58 PM Taillus The nerve! Banning Sel like that. What an outr... Feb 16 2006, 01:17 AM minque Awww......those Venim-brothers....all alike, mean,... Feb 16 2006, 07:53 PM Tellie Yo're doing just as you always do.......AMAZIN... Feb 16 2006, 08:22 PM jack cloudy Glad I don't drink coffee. But my nerves, plea... Feb 16 2006, 08:34 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow, Amazing! I had something thought up but I... Feb 16 2006, 11:02 PM Kiln Ooohhhh...I am just dying to find out how Sel make... Feb 17 2006, 06:22 PM mplantinga While I understand the strength of Sel's react... Mar 1 2006, 12:08 AM Dantrag welcome back.
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"This is really good.... Mar 12 2006, 11:42 PM minque Awwwww.....Iīm getting worried now, it seems as th... Mar 12 2006, 11:48 PM jack cloudy Yay, update. :) Sel is getting rather stressed. H... Mar 13 2006, 05:12 PM treydog It is to my sorrow that I have not kept up with on... Mar 15 2006, 05:10 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow, great story Dantrag. I hope Sel gets through... Mar 16 2006, 03:50 AM MerGirl Oh, dear! Poor little Sel and Vysi! :( *... Mar 25 2006, 09:30 PM Dantrag Well, I hope I wasn't gone so long that everyo... Apr 15 2006, 07:44 AM Fuzzy Knight
Cool Danny! ;D Apr 15 2006, 09:33 AM Tellie
Now danny...shame on you...how would you even th... Apr 15 2006, 01:29 PM Red
*Ends his lurking spree*
I've really been e... Apr 15 2006, 03:47 PM minque
Yay!!! An update is coming....this i... Apr 15 2006, 09:31 PM Dantrag I promised, so here it is. I'm a (young) man o... Apr 16 2006, 11:35 PM minque Ok....you had to didnīt you? Leave me wondering wh... Apr 16 2006, 11:46 PM MerGirl Ooooh, yay! :) An update and I've been t... Apr 17 2006, 01:58 AM Dantrag Well, it wasn't supposed to be a cliffhanger, ... Apr 17 2006, 04:24 AM jack cloudy yay, an update. I like it. Apr 17 2006, 12:22 PM minque
Hmmm.....ok, but Iīm so worried about Vysi....Sad... Apr 17 2006, 02:39 PM treydog Excellent update, Dantrag! I love the persona... Apr 19 2006, 05:17 PM Dantrag forgot all about this...sorry.
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Sel wo... Apr 20 2006, 11:38 PM minque Ha! yessss an update...but still we have to wo... Apr 21 2006, 01:07 AM Dantrag
It wasn't really an update...merely what I d... Apr 21 2006, 01:09 AM minque Whatever......it took the story a tad forwards any... Apr 21 2006, 04:28 PM Soulseeker3.0 great story Dantrag, please continue making update... Apr 22 2006, 06:24 PM minque
OMG!!!!! Have you noticed how... Apr 22 2006, 10:11 PM  Soulseeker3.0
hmm random? :D
but yeah I agree with Kiln... or ... Apr 25 2006, 04:25 AM Kiln *Kiln taps his foot*
We need an update here mate,... Apr 25 2006, 01:10 AM Dantrag Here you are
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Sel, Vysi, and Aldaril arriv... May 1 2006, 01:08 AM jack cloudy Yay, update! A nice one. Now Aldaril probably ... May 1 2006, 10:52 AM minque Ohohohooo......Now they have a problem......I love... May 1 2006, 12:35 PM DarkHunter Fighting with Divanath? not a good idea... he does... May 1 2006, 07:13 PM mplantinga Imagine my surprise to find several great updates ... May 1 2006, 07:13 PM treydog Short, but wonderfully described. I love the twis... May 2 2006, 12:45 AM Dantrag wow. It's been awhile. (I'm such a slacker... May 19 2006, 04:11 PM treydog More Sel! Hooray! Glad to see you back, ... May 19 2006, 04:26 PM Tellie Wohoo...finally we have some more of good'ol S... May 19 2006, 04:30 PM minque Ha! Good old Sel! Clever as usual....some ... May 19 2006, 06:55 PM Dantrag I kinda missed Sel, so here you go.
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