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Tellie
post Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM
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The story of Telina Delvanni


Prolouge..

Like it or not, I chose to start this story, and were really inspired by the storys of OverrideB1, Alexander, Treydog and Minque.

I do not know how good this story is, and cant write all times,so if you start to like it, please be patient.I would be wery happy if people were to give me some comments, even constructive criticism.



I started my life in the dark brotherhood. As a child, mere 8 months my parents were killed by an unknown assasin.When the guards checed the house, they found me, and sold me to the dark brotherhood, as cheap labour.

But the brotherhood had other needs for me, and I started the training to become an assasin.My skills grew, and being a dark elf, my natural resistance to fire helped me many a time. At my age fo fifteen I started to study the arts of magic,but only usefull skills ofcourse. My skills with the short blade, wakizashis especially grew to be wery dangerous, and when I were twenty years old, I were the most dangerous assasin in Cyrodiil.

So many would think that I would soon rise to he top ranks, one of the masers of the guild, didn't like me, so he gave me a writ on a member of the royal family,but he tipped the guards of.So when I was about to enter the big mansion, the guards came.

"Stop you" he said. But one of the guards, had already struck down on me. I easly dodged the blow, and in return the guard felt how it is to get a dagger in his lung.
In the cofusion I jumpede up on a wall, and took my poisonous darts out of my pack.

"Where is she"one yelled "there up on the""SPLAT" he had got the dart in his ugly face, and he fell dead to the floor, just as the others ran up on the wall.
I unscheated my twin wakizhashis and ran upon them.In a whirlwhind of fast blows on guard dropped to the grund with a severed artery, meanwhile i stabbed my wakizhashis into the back of one, crushed his spinal column, while the other got it in his neck.

Thinking this was a good place not to be, I jumped down into the courtyard,only to get a hammerblow in my head,so I was knocked out cold.

Waking up three days lateder with an unspeakable headache, I were taken to the local magistrate.Beacuse one of the guards had stuck agains me first, my counter attacks counted as self defense, but I had though trespassed royal territory, and were given three years in prison, and when I had finished my time I would be taken to court again.

I remeber little of my days in prison, altough my skills dropped rapidly, I were still wery good with shortblades. One day I where put on a blindfold, and taken into a carridge,where I where for three days,until I were taken onto a ship, wich would take me to a place, far beyond my imaginations


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Tellie
post Jan 12 2006, 11:20 AM
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Hi, I was wondering, if there are anyone good at drawing or animation, wants to try to draw/make an animation, of Telina. If you do just post the answer here, and I'll PM you with a description of how she looks, I hope someone are interrested as I cant draw anything liker that. Looking forward for comments and answers.



The guard turned on me and looked on me with a very puzzled look in his deep
eyes.

-"So, did you kill an imperial legioneer, and in that case why"?

-"Well, yes I did kill one, I broke into someones house and stole some diamonds, so that a child could treat for her mothers treatmen on the hospital, but was cought and arrested, in jail the guards were bullying me and looking down on me propably beacuse I am a woman, so I killed the guard with a spell and got out of there". ( sorry for the long sentence here).

-"Ahh then it is alright" the guard said, " I shall escort you to the council hall and there you will join our house, that is all I'm asking from you".

-"But what of the punishment, I thought I was about to get arrested".

-"Yes well, first I dont care what you did in Balmaroa, as that is the Hlaalu's problem and not mine, and on the other side, this is going to stir it up real good in the legion, they might even go as far as attacking us, and then we'll have a couple of surprises for them".

Smirking widely the guard took my arm and started to move me towards the city. Suddenly I looked what cind of city this was, it consisted of houses made of giant mushrooms, and in the middle stood a tower so big that I couldnt see the top of it.

After some few astonishing fast minutes, I stood before an eacually impressive building with a sign named "Telvanni Council Hall".As I looked back to say goodbye to the guard, he was gone, and I therefore stepped into the hall.

I looked around me, the inside of the walls was as impressive as the outside,and something that got a place in mhy heart was all the circular passages and doors, and as I stepped forwards towards the door in front of me, a woman adressed me.

-"He-he-hello, i a-am, a h-hi-hireling of hou-house -T-T-Telvanni", she managed to stubber.

-"Pleased to meet you" I said, and then I just ignored her, and walked into the main room, where the council was.

I was met by an awesome sight, the room was a round room, with large crystals coming up from the middle, and on large platforms that stood against the walls, stood the councillors, I presumed.

I walked over to the closest one of them , a female with red hair, and a wery elegant skirt, that changed colours every second.

-"Hello, my name is Telina Delvanni, and I wish to join the house, are you one of the councillors"?

-"Hmmm, Delvanni is it, you wouldnt be the descendant of the old Telvanni master Salendil, would you", she answered back.

-"No, i dont know who my parents wore", I muttered low, more to myself than anyone else.

-"Well, you seem good enough, I am not a master, they are to busy to stand around ordering people, no we in here are the mouths, we speak for our masters and give other members assignments and advancement, do you wish to hear our rules"?

-"Yes, tell me the rules".

-"First if you steal from another member, and live to tell the tale, yuo are obviously more worthy to have that which you took, if you kill another member we are propably not going to care, as that would prove you were the better one, as always you can get expelled here as in every other faction, but most Telvanni will just amend you and get you into the house againg, does this appeal to you"?

-"Yes, do you have any assignements for me"?

-"You are hereby Telina Delvanni, hireling of house Telvanni, I am Felissa Ulessen, the mouth of mistress Therana, but you wanted chores"."Well, I need this skirt to be delivered to my mistress in person, so take this skirt to my mistress in Tel-Branora, and by the way, take these two almsivi-intervention-scrolls, as dhe can get a little off...sometimes".

I walked out of the hall again, and started to walk downwards to the docks, when I heard screams, from down the fort, and I quickly went to investigate. When I got there, I saw the imperial legioneers, shouting at eachother, and in the end ran towards the Telvanni guards, with weapons raised high.

Suddenly the telvanni guards threw spells at the imperials, and each of the legioneers, was floating in the air. Piece by piece, they started tho pick of their armour and clothes to the great saitsfaction of the people who were gathered around the guards.

I quickly turned around, and bolted as fast I could towards the dock, while trying not to fall over by the sheer amusement of seing the race whoe had made three years of my life a living hell, being bullied like that, without having a single chance to retaliate.

Well over at the docks, I was greeted by a friendly mer.

-"Good morning, mutshera, what may I do for you"?

-"A boat trip to Tel-Branora please".

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Tellie   The Story Of Telina Delvanni   Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM
mplantinga   A good start. I'm curious how the law decided ...   Nov 10 2005, 06:46 PM
Jonajosa   You have some good influences. Try this. I ...   Nov 11 2005, 07:42 AM
Tellie   First Mplantinga I have decided to make the story ...   Nov 11 2005, 08:49 AM
Tellie   When I was on that hatefull ship, I fell asleep al...   Nov 11 2005, 10:28 AM
Tellie   Comments would be nice, both me and Telina would b...   Nov 11 2005, 10:53 PM
minque   Ye both would huh? :D Okies....First itīs a goo...   Nov 11 2005, 11:02 PM
Tellie   Chapter one:A new life I walked into the office, ...   Nov 11 2005, 11:14 PM
Jonajosa   Much better. Nice detail on your suroundings in th...   Nov 12 2005, 10:39 PM
Tellie   Thank you. I will propably dont be able to write b...   Nov 12 2005, 11:30 PM
Tellie   So, do you like it. I shall write more tomorrow ni...   Nov 14 2005, 09:44 PM
Tellie   So sorry I havent been ableto write in the last da...   Nov 15 2005, 09:35 PM
mplantinga   This is definitely a good story which gets better ...   Nov 15 2005, 10:08 PM
Jonajosa   Nice fight with Fargoth. Thought it was rather enj...   Nov 16 2005, 02:13 AM
Tellie   "Hello lassie, please, don't be afraid I ...   Nov 16 2005, 12:45 PM
Jonajosa   So... many... commas. Try and cut down on those. I...   Nov 22 2005, 12:36 AM
mplantinga   I'm glad to see that the fall from the lightho...   Nov 16 2005, 06:04 PM
minque   Nice story! Glad you keep it up, always nice w...   Nov 18 2005, 11:22 PM
Tellie   Alrigth, I've been away for a while (I was at ...   Nov 21 2005, 11:47 AM
mplantinga   Sorry to hear that you were at the hospital. No ap...   Nov 21 2005, 06:56 PM
Tellie   So sorry, I was at the hospital again, I have been...   Nov 28 2005, 09:17 PM
mplantinga   Thanks for another great update. I'm glad the ...   Nov 28 2005, 09:46 PM
Tellie   Comments would be nice please. And can anyone give...   Nov 29 2005, 09:46 AM
minque   I like your story a lot..but you wanted tips how t...   Nov 29 2005, 10:16 PM
Tellie   Hey guys, I'm feeling much better now, and I h...   Dec 2 2005, 12:44 PM
Jonajosa   Liked it. One tip though. Read your story out lou...   Dec 3 2005, 01:43 AM
mplantinga   Quick thinking with the fireball. Another great in...   Dec 3 2005, 01:48 AM
Tellie   :D Hi again, my health is increasing more and more...   Dec 7 2005, 03:12 PM
mplantinga   Wow; that was certainly an unexpected and unique w...   Dec 7 2005, 07:16 PM
Tellie   Hello, another on is coming up. I have now complet...   Dec 14 2005, 04:51 PM
mplantinga   I certainly wasn't expecting the kind of behav...   Dec 14 2005, 09:30 PM
minque   Oh dear....now I must be honest....I did not like ...   Dec 14 2005, 09:39 PM
Tellie   First, I would like to explain Telina's histor...   Dec 16 2005, 11:31 AM
mplantinga   A rather rapid turn-around for Telina, to go from ...   Dec 16 2005, 05:58 PM
minque   Oh dear me! Now I feel guilty..I was too harsh...   Dec 16 2005, 09:50 PM
Tellie   :D Thanks Minque and mplantinga, I have no bad fee...   Dec 17 2005, 12:21 AM
Jonajosa   While I do see how you would misunderstand Minq...   Dec 17 2005, 09:22 AM
Tellie   -"Oh no", I yelled. I ran out the door, ...   Dec 20 2005, 07:42 PM
Tellie   But but but. Where is everybody? I know this is pr...   Dec 22 2005, 05:10 PM
minque   Hey, Ok, itīs a good update...I like it...really, ...   Dec 22 2005, 06:42 PM
Tellie   HELLO. finally it comes, the next update on Telina...   Dec 23 2005, 04:22 PM
Elidor   Well done, this story is great! This is starti...   Dec 24 2005, 02:04 PM
Tellie   Oh hi. Nice that you like my story Elidor. PS: wel...   Dec 25 2005, 07:09 PM
minque   Right there Telina! Now youīve had it..hehe Jo...   Dec 29 2005, 10:57 PM
MerGirl   I have only read the prologue, and I think you are...   Dec 30 2005, 09:14 PM
Tellie   Is English your native language (please don't ...   Dec 31 2005, 01:29 PM
Tellie   -"Telina, you have been progressing well...   Dec 31 2005, 03:48 PM
Elidor   Aha another update, and a good one it is! :go...   Jan 1 2006, 03:02 AM
mplantinga   Excellent updates. It was an interesting twist to ...   Jan 2 2006, 07:47 PM
Tellie   for the first time, I travelled, by magic. I felt ...   Jan 6 2006, 10:45 AM
minque   "Ahhh Telina my child! So Azura speaks to...   Jan 6 2006, 03:28 PM
mplantinga   It's good to see the legion and the locals sho...   Jan 6 2006, 06:47 PM
mplantinga   I was very amused by the approach taken by the Tel...   Jan 12 2006, 05:52 PM
Tellie   As I stood on the deck, I watched the water below ...   Jan 16 2006, 07:00 PM
mplantinga   An unusual way to find Skullcrusher. I'm curio...   Jan 16 2006, 07:17 PM
minque   Ah Telina! you courageous woman! you have ...   Jan 16 2006, 10:46 PM
Tellie   Sure Minkey, you and all others can have some more...   Jan 26 2006, 10:27 AM
mplantinga   Glad to see you back and feeling better. I've ...   Jan 26 2006, 06:41 PM
Tellie   As promised, by the way have anyone checked out Ge...   Jan 28 2006, 01:12 AM
minque   Eeeewwww......that was a good read! Telina is ...   Jan 28 2006, 02:24 PM
Tellie   It's coming more tonight, I guess in about 5ho...   Jan 28 2006, 04:27 PM
mplantinga   A unique and amusing solution to the "Therana...   Jan 30 2006, 09:22 PM
Tellie   Oki, I know, that I wasn't able to post, like ...   Jan 31 2006, 02:10 PM
Tellie   As promised. Zurin, was sitting on the chair by t...   Jan 31 2006, 10:01 PM
mplantinga   Very interesting. An unusual idea to give a young ...   Jan 31 2006, 10:15 PM
Tellie   I have now edited the rest of the post, that was s...   Feb 1 2006, 03:00 PM
mplantinga   I had assumed that Zurin was probably going to die...   Feb 2 2006, 06:11 PM
Tellie   This one I dedicate for Planty, may he heal well. ...   Feb 3 2006, 09:02 PM
Elidor   Ah how i loved doing the Telvanni quests. Some ver...   Feb 4 2006, 03:01 PM
Tellie   After i arrived in vos, i had to ask one of the lo...   Feb 5 2006, 06:30 PM
minque   Oh dear me! First you are very industrious, yo...   Feb 5 2006, 07:50 PM
Elidor   Nice, an update so soon again, I like this differe...   Feb 6 2006, 05:47 AM
mplantinga   I was really great to learn a little about Telina...   Feb 6 2006, 06:54 PM
Tellie   hey, planty, I'd not expect to see you back so...   Feb 6 2006, 08:57 PM
mplantinga   You may call us fans; well, I guess I can't sp...   Feb 6 2006, 10:30 PM
Tellie   Hi, more will come later this night, all I wanted ...   Feb 7 2006, 02:33 PM
mplantinga   Screenies! Please give us screenies! Actio...   Feb 7 2006, 07:22 PM
Tellie   I walked closer, standing up agains the wall, maki...   Feb 7 2006, 09:12 PM
mplantinga   I wondered why that first part was in a different ...   Feb 7 2006, 10:11 PM
minque   You are gifted Tellie! great update as usual...   Feb 7 2006, 10:51 PM
Tellie   I found the bookstore, and entered. In there I saw...   Feb 8 2006, 07:03 PM
Tellie   Edit: sorry, i thought i had pushed the edit butto...   Feb 10 2006, 02:04 PM
minque   Oh Tellie!! You are amazing! (En kempe...   Feb 11 2006, 03:28 PM
mplantinga   That was truly an amazing installment. I laughed s...   Feb 11 2006, 08:50 PM


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