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Tellie The Story Of Telina Delvanni Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM mplantinga A good start. I'm curious how the law decided ... Nov 10 2005, 06:46 PM Jonajosa
You have some good influences.
Try this.
I ... Nov 11 2005, 07:42 AM Tellie First Mplantinga I have decided to make the story ... Nov 11 2005, 08:49 AM Tellie When I was on that hatefull ship, I fell asleep al... Nov 11 2005, 10:28 AM Tellie Comments would be nice, both me and Telina would b... Nov 11 2005, 10:53 PM minque Ye both would huh? :D
Okies....First itīs a goo... Nov 11 2005, 11:02 PM Tellie Chapter one:A new life
I walked into the office, ... Nov 11 2005, 11:14 PM![]() Jonajosa Much better. Nice detail on your suroundings in th... Nov 12 2005, 10:39 PM Tellie Thank you. I will propably dont be able to write b... Nov 12 2005, 11:30 PM Tellie So, do you like it. I shall write more tomorrow ni... Nov 14 2005, 09:44 PM Tellie So sorry I havent been ableto write in the last da... Nov 15 2005, 09:35 PM mplantinga This is definitely a good story which gets better ... Nov 15 2005, 10:08 PM Jonajosa Nice fight with Fargoth. Thought it was rather enj... Nov 16 2005, 02:13 AM Tellie "Hello lassie, please, don't be afraid I ... Nov 16 2005, 12:45 PM![]() Jonajosa So... many... commas. Try and cut down on those. I... Nov 22 2005, 12:36 AM mplantinga I'm glad to see that the fall from the lightho... Nov 16 2005, 06:04 PM minque Nice story! Glad you keep it up, always nice w... Nov 18 2005, 11:22 PM Tellie Alrigth, I've been away for a while (I was at ... Nov 21 2005, 11:47 AM mplantinga Sorry to hear that you were at the hospital. No ap... Nov 21 2005, 06:56 PM Tellie So sorry, I was at the hospital again, I have been... Nov 28 2005, 09:17 PM mplantinga Thanks for another great update. I'm glad the ... Nov 28 2005, 09:46 PM Tellie Comments would be nice please. And can anyone give... Nov 29 2005, 09:46 AM minque I like your story a lot..but you wanted tips how t... Nov 29 2005, 10:16 PM Tellie Hey guys, I'm feeling much better now, and I h... Dec 2 2005, 12:44 PM Jonajosa Liked it.
One tip though. Read your story out lou... Dec 3 2005, 01:43 AM mplantinga Quick thinking with the fireball. Another great in... Dec 3 2005, 01:48 AM Tellie :D Hi again, my health is increasing more and more... Dec 7 2005, 03:12 PM mplantinga Wow; that was certainly an unexpected and unique w... Dec 7 2005, 07:16 PM Tellie Hello, another on is coming up. I have now complet... Dec 14 2005, 04:51 PM mplantinga I certainly wasn't expecting the kind of behav... Dec 14 2005, 09:30 PM minque Oh dear....now I must be honest....I did not like ... Dec 14 2005, 09:39 PM Tellie First, I would like to explain Telina's histor... Dec 16 2005, 11:31 AM mplantinga A rather rapid turn-around for Telina, to go from ... Dec 16 2005, 05:58 PM minque Oh dear me! Now I feel guilty..I was too harsh... Dec 16 2005, 09:50 PM Tellie :D Thanks Minque and mplantinga, I have no bad fee... Dec 17 2005, 12:21 AM![]() Jonajosa
While I do see how you would misunderstand Minq... Dec 17 2005, 09:22 AM Tellie -"Oh no", I yelled. I ran out the door, ... Dec 20 2005, 07:42 PM Tellie But but but. Where is everybody? I know this is pr... Dec 22 2005, 05:10 PM minque Hey, Ok, itīs a good update...I like it...really, ... Dec 22 2005, 06:42 PM Tellie HELLO. finally it comes, the next update on Telina... Dec 23 2005, 04:22 PM Elidor Well done, this story is great! This is starti... Dec 24 2005, 02:04 PM Tellie Oh hi. Nice that you like my story Elidor. PS: wel... Dec 25 2005, 07:09 PM minque Right there Telina! Now youīve had it..hehe Jo... Dec 29 2005, 10:57 PM MerGirl I have only read the prologue, and I think you are... Dec 30 2005, 09:14 PM![]() Tellie Is English your native language (please don't ... Dec 31 2005, 01:29 PM Tellie -"Telina, you have been progressing well... Dec 31 2005, 03:48 PM Elidor Aha another update, and a good one it is! :go... Jan 1 2006, 03:02 AM mplantinga Excellent updates. It was an interesting twist to ... Jan 2 2006, 07:47 PM Tellie for the first time, I travelled, by magic. I felt ... Jan 6 2006, 10:45 AM minque "Ahhh Telina my child! So Azura speaks to... Jan 6 2006, 03:28 PM mplantinga It's good to see the legion and the locals sho... Jan 6 2006, 06:47 PM Tellie Hi, I was wondering, if there are anyone good at d... Jan 12 2006, 11:20 AM mplantinga I was very amused by the approach taken by the Tel... Jan 12 2006, 05:52 PM Tellie As I stood on the deck, I watched the water below ... Jan 16 2006, 07:00 PM minque Ah Telina! you courageous woman! you have ... Jan 16 2006, 10:46 PM Tellie Sure Minkey, you and all others can have some more... Jan 26 2006, 10:27 AM mplantinga Glad to see you back and feeling better. I've ... Jan 26 2006, 06:41 PM Tellie As promised, by the way have anyone checked out Ge... Jan 28 2006, 01:12 AM minque Eeeewwww......that was a good read! Telina is ... Jan 28 2006, 02:24 PM Tellie It's coming more tonight, I guess in about 5ho... Jan 28 2006, 04:27 PM mplantinga A unique and amusing solution to the "Therana... Jan 30 2006, 09:22 PM Tellie Oki, I know, that I wasn't able to post, like ... Jan 31 2006, 02:10 PM Tellie As promised.
Zurin, was sitting on the chair by t... Jan 31 2006, 10:01 PM mplantinga Very interesting. An unusual idea to give a young ... Jan 31 2006, 10:15 PM Tellie I have now edited the rest of the post, that was s... Feb 1 2006, 03:00 PM mplantinga I had assumed that Zurin was probably going to die... Feb 2 2006, 06:11 PM Tellie This one I dedicate for Planty, may he heal well. ... Feb 3 2006, 09:02 PM Elidor Ah how i loved doing the Telvanni quests. Some ver... Feb 4 2006, 03:01 PM Tellie After i arrived in vos, i had to ask one of the lo... Feb 5 2006, 06:30 PM minque Oh dear me! First you are very industrious, yo... Feb 5 2006, 07:50 PM Elidor Nice, an update so soon again, I like this differe... Feb 6 2006, 05:47 AM mplantinga I was really great to learn a little about Telina... Feb 6 2006, 06:54 PM Tellie hey, planty, I'd not expect to see you back so... Feb 6 2006, 08:57 PM mplantinga You may call us fans; well, I guess I can't sp... Feb 6 2006, 10:30 PM Tellie Hi, more will come later this night, all I wanted ... Feb 7 2006, 02:33 PM mplantinga Screenies! Please give us screenies! Actio... Feb 7 2006, 07:22 PM Tellie I walked closer, standing up agains the wall, maki... Feb 7 2006, 09:12 PM mplantinga I wondered why that first part was in a different ... Feb 7 2006, 10:11 PM minque You are gifted Tellie! great update as usual... Feb 7 2006, 10:51 PM Tellie I found the bookstore, and entered. In there I saw... Feb 8 2006, 07:03 PM Tellie Edit: sorry, i thought i had pushed the edit butto... Feb 10 2006, 02:04 PM minque Oh Tellie!! You are amazing! (En kempe... Feb 11 2006, 03:28 PM mplantinga That was truly an amazing installment. I laughed s... Feb 11 2006, 08:50 PM
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