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The Story Of Telina Delvanni |
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Tellie |
Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-November 05
From: Tel Delvanni

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The story of Telina Delvanni
Prolouge..
Like it or not, I chose to start this story, and were really inspired by the storys of OverrideB1, Alexander, Treydog and Minque.
I do not know how good this story is, and cant write all times,so if you start to like it, please be patient.I would be wery happy if people were to give me some comments, even constructive criticism.
I started my life in the dark brotherhood. As a child, mere 8 months my parents were killed by an unknown assasin.When the guards checed the house, they found me, and sold me to the dark brotherhood, as cheap labour.
But the brotherhood had other needs for me, and I started the training to become an assasin.My skills grew, and being a dark elf, my natural resistance to fire helped me many a time. At my age fo fifteen I started to study the arts of magic,but only usefull skills ofcourse. My skills with the short blade, wakizashis especially grew to be wery dangerous, and when I were twenty years old, I were the most dangerous assasin in Cyrodiil.
So many would think that I would soon rise to he top ranks, one of the masers of the guild, didn't like me, so he gave me a writ on a member of the royal family,but he tipped the guards of.So when I was about to enter the big mansion, the guards came.
"Stop you" he said. But one of the guards, had already struck down on me. I easly dodged the blow, and in return the guard felt how it is to get a dagger in his lung. In the cofusion I jumpede up on a wall, and took my poisonous darts out of my pack.
"Where is she"one yelled "there up on the""SPLAT" he had got the dart in his ugly face, and he fell dead to the floor, just as the others ran up on the wall. I unscheated my twin wakizhashis and ran upon them.In a whirlwhind of fast blows on guard dropped to the grund with a severed artery, meanwhile i stabbed my wakizhashis into the back of one, crushed his spinal column, while the other got it in his neck.
Thinking this was a good place not to be, I jumped down into the courtyard,only to get a hammerblow in my head,so I was knocked out cold.
Waking up three days lateder with an unspeakable headache, I were taken to the local magistrate.Beacuse one of the guards had stuck agains me first, my counter attacks counted as self defense, but I had though trespassed royal territory, and were given three years in prison, and when I had finished my time I would be taken to court again.
I remeber little of my days in prison, altough my skills dropped rapidly, I were still wery good with shortblades. One day I where put on a blindfold, and taken into a carridge,where I where for three days,until I were taken onto a ship, wich would take me to a place, far beyond my imaginations
This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Nov 11 2005, 12:17 PM
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Tellie |
Jan 31 2006, 10:01 PM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-November 05
From: Tel Delvanni

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As promised.
Zurin, was sitting on the chair by the table, with his eyes closed.
-"Well, Telina, what I will show you is not much, as my time is nearly out, here". "The staff is not for me, it is yours, and it shall become a symbol of your authority, the staff is not only a wizards staff, it is the staff of magnus".
-"Before we start, I shall only teach you of one of the three elements, spark, frost or fire wich one do you choose"?
-"I choose spark", I said, eager to learn.
He instructed me in the first of his spell, Boethia's judgment, it took me two hours to master the spell, and I was only given five minutes, to relx before we went on to the next one, called Forked lightning of Tzheentch, and the last spell, the Comet of Kassondra took me over four hours, totally spent I walked up into the guest room inthe second floor and jumped into a comfortable bed.
A little while later, I heard the sound of someone chrashing into the dining table, and I realised what was going on. without a sound, I took up the Skullchrusher, and hid myself up in one of the beams supporting the roof.
A little minute later, three shapes of someone standing under me, stopped and I quickly dropped myself to the floor, chrishing the skull of one of the obvious assasins as i fell.
The two others turned around, to face me, but I was aleredy gone, behind the closet.
-"Quickly, split up, the Night-Mother will kill us if we dont kill Delvanni", one of them said.
And after a little while, one started to walk down the stairs. I sprung out, and smashed the skull chrusher down on the head of one of them, and hid myself again. By the time the last assasin came to his fellow assasin, he was aleredy dead, his head smashed of by the chrusher.
-"I do not believe it" I said to myself, "I waws one of the best in the brotherhood, and now they try to kill me, it's outrageous".
And then I was struck with a terrible thought, Zurin was downstairs, had the assasins killed him? I ran down the stairs, and made sure that I stepped on the assasins, while I was on the way. In Zurins bedroom, I found him on the floor, with blood gushing out of his wounds.
-"Telina" he asid in a weak voice, "there was nothing more that I could teach you, in the chest by the bed, lies a book, named "the Book of forgotten magic", and another book named " Lieber Mortis". "None of the books, will open themselves to you, before you have proven yourselves". "now go, save the people from the curse, that befest us, and prove yourselves for the book's".
And then his eyes, closed and Zurin was gone from the world.
-"NOOOO", I screamed as tears, flowed out of my eyes, I cryed over the man, he had shoved me something no other had shoved me, love. He had cared of me like a friend, and helped me with his council, and now the brotherhood had killed him.
I heard lightning bolts, more powerfull than any other I had heard, and the sky was illuminated by the flashes, that raced across the sky, almost like the lightnings was screaming with anger and pain, in symphony with myself.
I then left the old mer, and walked back to the assasins, and lifted up their right sleves, I saw the tatto of the Dark Brotherhood, clear as light on their wrist, and my heart filled itselves with hatred to powerfull to understand. Butn then again i felt attached to the armour, that I myself had used before, so I took all the armour parts, of the shortest one of them, sake for the helmet and put it on. And after taking a simple black robe over me, and the staff of Magnus in my hand, I walked into the stormy night.
Out there,I walked over to the boatsman, and ordered a trip to Sadrith-Mora. While on the boat, I first examined the staff of magnus, enjoing its strong power, that filled my own powers up as well. After that I looked at the outside of the books, which appeared to be ancient, and the spell on themmade it clear, that the book would not open before it found the carrier of it worthy, with that I fell asleep.
When I woke up, I felt amazingly better in shape, and my sack did not seem so heavy anymore, and as I looked at it, i also found out that my spells, was easyer to cast. After some thirty minutes, I stood on the dock of Sadrith-Mora. and I walked directly to the council-hall, smirking as I saw some of the earlier legioneers, standing naked in the slave cages.
In the council hall, I was greeted by Felissa Ulessen. -"Well, Delvanni, did you succeed, in yor mission"? "Wait, is that staff, is that staff the staff of Magnus"?
-"Yes, it is "the staff of Magnus", now will I get any advancement for this?
-"S-su-sure, I mean getting "the staff of Magnus", thats l-l-legendary, I name thee Telina Delvanni Oathman of house Telvanni, now do you know how to use Mark and Recall"?
-"No, can you teach me"? I answerd back in a humble tone.
She taugth me how to use the spell, and after that, I went over to another mouth.
I'm sorry for this immensly long post, but i needed to clear up the things, hope you enjoyed it. Replyes is welcome as always.
This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Feb 5 2006, 06:31 PM
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