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The Story Of Telina Delvanni |
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Tellie |
Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-November 05
From: Tel Delvanni

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The story of Telina Delvanni
Prolouge..
Like it or not, I chose to start this story, and were really inspired by the storys of OverrideB1, Alexander, Treydog and Minque.
I do not know how good this story is, and cant write all times,so if you start to like it, please be patient.I would be wery happy if people were to give me some comments, even constructive criticism.
I started my life in the dark brotherhood. As a child, mere 8 months my parents were killed by an unknown assasin.When the guards checed the house, they found me, and sold me to the dark brotherhood, as cheap labour.
But the brotherhood had other needs for me, and I started the training to become an assasin.My skills grew, and being a dark elf, my natural resistance to fire helped me many a time. At my age fo fifteen I started to study the arts of magic,but only usefull skills ofcourse. My skills with the short blade, wakizashis especially grew to be wery dangerous, and when I were twenty years old, I were the most dangerous assasin in Cyrodiil.
So many would think that I would soon rise to he top ranks, one of the masers of the guild, didn't like me, so he gave me a writ on a member of the royal family,but he tipped the guards of.So when I was about to enter the big mansion, the guards came.
"Stop you" he said. But one of the guards, had already struck down on me. I easly dodged the blow, and in return the guard felt how it is to get a dagger in his lung. In the cofusion I jumpede up on a wall, and took my poisonous darts out of my pack.
"Where is she"one yelled "there up on the""SPLAT" he had got the dart in his ugly face, and he fell dead to the floor, just as the others ran up on the wall. I unscheated my twin wakizhashis and ran upon them.In a whirlwhind of fast blows on guard dropped to the grund with a severed artery, meanwhile i stabbed my wakizhashis into the back of one, crushed his spinal column, while the other got it in his neck.
Thinking this was a good place not to be, I jumped down into the courtyard,only to get a hammerblow in my head,so I was knocked out cold.
Waking up three days lateder with an unspeakable headache, I were taken to the local magistrate.Beacuse one of the guards had stuck agains me first, my counter attacks counted as self defense, but I had though trespassed royal territory, and were given three years in prison, and when I had finished my time I would be taken to court again.
I remeber little of my days in prison, altough my skills dropped rapidly, I were still wery good with shortblades. One day I where put on a blindfold, and taken into a carridge,where I where for three days,until I were taken onto a ship, wich would take me to a place, far beyond my imaginations
This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Nov 11 2005, 12:17 PM
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Tellie |
Feb 3 2006, 09:02 PM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-November 05
From: Tel Delvanni

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This one I dedicate for Planty, may he heal well. So I hope you like it.
*Offers a toast for planty*
I walked on in the council hall, and stopped before the mouth Arara Uvalas, the mouth of master Neloth.
-"Hello, mutshera, I see that you're progressing, I do have two chores that I would like to have done, are you interested"?
-"Yes, I'm very interested, what are they"?
-"Well, master Neloth wants five sload soaps, and the staff of silver dawn". "The staff I think you will find in the hands of one of the mages guild members at Wolverine Hall, the soap you should be able to buy from the apothecary Anis Seloth". He then gave me a bag with eighty ten-septim coins, with my ensurances that I would deliver the remaining moneys to him.
With that I took my leave, and as opned the door quickly in my entuhsiasm, it hit somone, and I heard loud swearing from outside the door.
-"D*** be that person who did this". He looked at me and realised that I had pushed the door at him.
-"Do you know what you just did...SCUM", he said, vith a voice that got increasingly louder.
-"Ohh yes, I pushed the door into a stupid idiot, who instead of opening the door stood outside it, and obviously waiting for it to opening itself".
-"Do you know who you're talking to, B*** "
-"There is no need for that language, so call me that again, and you shall regret it".
-"I'm the Arch Magiter of the house, and threaten me again, and I shall personally cut off you, uurrrhg"
I had with the speed of a lightning, pushed the staff of Magnus, up aganst his throat and pushed him up to the wall, while I was slowly choking him. In my hand that I held inches from his face, a big sphere of highly electric lightning, was getting increasingly bigger.
-"Don't ever threaten me again, or I shall not be as forgiving as I'm now".
With that I walked out of the council hall. The weather outsidefitted my mood at the moment, gray and rainy. The happiness of getting advanced was lost, and inside me I had a cold feeling, that messing with the Arch Magister would sooner or later have it's concequenses. I was walking down the street,and I barely notice that the people of Sadrith-Mora was more friendly with me now, some even called me Ser-Delvanni or Miss-Telina, and after a few minutes, I entered the apothecary of Anis Seloth.
-"Greetings, outlander, I think I've heard of you before, now was there anything you wanted from my shop"?
-"Yes, I want five portions of sload soap, for master Neloth", I added.
-"Oh it's for, Neloth, in that case, you shall get the new discount system we have, anything bought for a master, you get for half price, if you can prove it".
My luck, had to be with me, first the soap, wouldnt cost more that two-hundred septims, before the discount and the fact that I had a letter with me, saying that master Neloth wished five portions of sload soap.
I gave her the letter, and and after a little discussion, I walked out of the shop, with five soaps bought for less than a hundred-septims, a real bargain.
I enclosed upon the fort in wolverine hall, and was fo a little while surprised by the lack of guards, before I remembered the fact that the guards couldn't possibly be replaced within three days, and the old ones was still in the slave market. With a big grin I entered the imperial cult, for then getting into the Mages-guild.
-"What are you doing here...Telvanni"? one of them asked in a voice that clearly dripped with intimidation.
-"I'm looking for the staff of silver dawn", I answered back, with a tone that was no better than that which had adressed me.
-"I have the staff, but there is no way that I'm going to part myself with it", she then extended her hand, which shoved that she wanted money for it.
I took up first five ten-septim coins, and then another five, followed by fiteen. At that point she nearly threw it at me.
-"Here, It's not that great a loss", and then she went back to her studies.
I walked back to the council hall, nodding to some of the guards as I went, there in the council hall, I delivered the items to Arara.
-"Fine,now where is the rest of the money"?
-"Spent", I said, barely managing to hold away a big grin.
-"Spent, do you say that you spent eight-hundred-septims, on five soaps and a staff"?
-"Yes, the soap was cheap, but the staff was more difficoult, first I had to bribe two persons to actually tell me who had the staff, and then I had to convience the woman who had it, to seperate herself from it".
-"Well, I guess that would cost a bit yes, now would you want me to teach how to use Mark and recall, and also how to blind your enemies"?
We spent a tme together, untill I had learned the spell, and as revard I was gifted by a glass dagger, and three-hundred septims.
-"Well, arent I going to get some advancement for this"?
-"Oh yes, I advance you to become a lawman of house Telvanni, but you cant advance further, if you dont get a patron to support you further".
I then took my leave, and asked the mouth of master Aryon, Galos Mathendis, if I could have Aryon as my patron.
-"Yes, I believe so, it would give me time to finish my studies, he lives in the tower of Te-Vos, outside of the city Vos, go now I shall send word of your arrival".
I walked back into the pouring rain, and ordered a boat trip to Vos.
So, that was all for tonight, but i shall post another update on Sunday( If I get some replyes that is) or Saturday, so hope you liked it. And again Planty, good luck at surgery, I shall miss you. Replies are welcome as always.
This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Feb 5 2006, 06:30 PM
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