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The Story Of Telina Delvanni |
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Tellie |
Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-November 05
From: Tel Delvanni

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The story of Telina Delvanni
Prolouge..
Like it or not, I chose to start this story, and were really inspired by the storys of OverrideB1, Alexander, Treydog and Minque.
I do not know how good this story is, and cant write all times,so if you start to like it, please be patient.I would be wery happy if people were to give me some comments, even constructive criticism.
I started my life in the dark brotherhood. As a child, mere 8 months my parents were killed by an unknown assasin.When the guards checed the house, they found me, and sold me to the dark brotherhood, as cheap labour.
But the brotherhood had other needs for me, and I started the training to become an assasin.My skills grew, and being a dark elf, my natural resistance to fire helped me many a time. At my age fo fifteen I started to study the arts of magic,but only usefull skills ofcourse. My skills with the short blade, wakizashis especially grew to be wery dangerous, and when I were twenty years old, I were the most dangerous assasin in Cyrodiil.
So many would think that I would soon rise to he top ranks, one of the masers of the guild, didn't like me, so he gave me a writ on a member of the royal family,but he tipped the guards of.So when I was about to enter the big mansion, the guards came.
"Stop you" he said. But one of the guards, had already struck down on me. I easly dodged the blow, and in return the guard felt how it is to get a dagger in his lung. In the cofusion I jumpede up on a wall, and took my poisonous darts out of my pack.
"Where is she"one yelled "there up on the""SPLAT" he had got the dart in his ugly face, and he fell dead to the floor, just as the others ran up on the wall. I unscheated my twin wakizhashis and ran upon them.In a whirlwhind of fast blows on guard dropped to the grund with a severed artery, meanwhile i stabbed my wakizhashis into the back of one, crushed his spinal column, while the other got it in his neck.
Thinking this was a good place not to be, I jumped down into the courtyard,only to get a hammerblow in my head,so I was knocked out cold.
Waking up three days lateder with an unspeakable headache, I were taken to the local magistrate.Beacuse one of the guards had stuck agains me first, my counter attacks counted as self defense, but I had though trespassed royal territory, and were given three years in prison, and when I had finished my time I would be taken to court again.
I remeber little of my days in prison, altough my skills dropped rapidly, I were still wery good with shortblades. One day I where put on a blindfold, and taken into a carridge,where I where for three days,until I were taken onto a ship, wich would take me to a place, far beyond my imaginations
This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Nov 11 2005, 12:17 PM
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Tellie |
Feb 5 2006, 06:30 PM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-November 05
From: Tel Delvanni

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After i arrived in vos, i had to ask one of the local guards where master Aryon resided.
-"His tower is on the top of that hill, mutshera".
i then started to trudge up the long steep hill, and I noticed that I had a lot of training in front of me, before I came back in shape. At last i reached the top, and was completely breathtaken. Up on the hill stood sometyhing that looked like a crossing between an imperial fort and a telvanni tower.
After a few minutes, I pulled myself together, and instead started to wonder how I could get up to him, without spending one of my preciouss potions. But after a minute, I took a carefully measured gulp of one of the potions, and walked up to the doorway, and entered.
I quickly found Aryon, he stood in the middle of his room, and greeted me with his arms open, but there was something about his smile, that worried me.
-"Ahh Telina, welcome". "I am, as you propably know Master Aryon, now I know you are searching for someone to be your patron, if you do a little job for me, I shall be your patron in the house".
-"Here is what you must do, in the town of Gnisis, there is a tower named Arvs-Drelen, in that tower is an ancient telvanni wizard, named Baladas, I want you to travel over there and convience him to join the telvanni council".
-"Yes, Master Aryon, I shall do so at once", with that I took my leave, and took a boat down to Sadrith-Mora, as I knew the fastest way, would be the guild travel. In there I was met by the same coldness as before, and without further complaints, I travelled to Ald-Rhuun.
I walked through the guild, there, and heard some of the mages utter traitor so low, that I barely heard it. And then I bumped into the same woman who had so happily asked if I wanted to buy some Woid-walk spells, that kindness was now gone, but I did not care.
-"Hello, you still sell Woid-walk spells, right".
-"Yes, I still do", she implied with a little softer voice now.
-"So,how much will it cost for five"?
-"Five, that would be four thousand, septims".
"Hey, members get half price, right, you told me so, therefore, I should only pay two thousand septims". I started to take out septims from my pouch, while the woman looked like she had swallowed an entire mudcrab.
-"Ohh, right then", she screamed at me, " two-thousand septims, what locations, do you want"?
-"Lets see", I said to myself," i want one to Sadrith-Mora, one to Gnisis, one to Vos, one to Balmora and one to Ebonheart", I told her, and after some three hours, i was sure i knew the spells, in my head, so I tried out the one to Gnisis.
-"Jiksgarrup gsaba", It was a bright light, and suddenly i stood in the middle of Gnisis. I was still quite sick, when I entered Arvs-Drele, and I just managed to hold myself for vomiting.
After I had opned the first door, i was met by a huge rat, that ran straigt towards me. I quickly struck after it with the staff, and it exploded into a pool of blood and gore. I was looking at the staff with total awe, did it really have so much power in it, it was hard to understand.
When I came to a door after a long corridor, I tried to open it, but it was locked, and trapped, so I used the same tacktic as befor, and I used telekinesis on the door, while I stood further down the hall. When the door opned, a huge fireball, came out from it, and incinerated everything that stood ther, so now I could see into the wery rock features of the ground.
I opned walked through the door, and stopped, totally paralysed by the sight of the creature in front of me. There it stood....a huge deadroth, but it didn't do anything with me, it just stood there. With no small measure of fear, I walked past it, and at the top, I found Baladas.
He was.......mysterious, if I'm gonna use a word for him. He stood there in a manner that showed nothing but extreme power, and his eyes, his eyes had a mysterious look, that shoved centuries of wisdom,. All I could do was to stare, before I managed to speak.
-"B-Baladas", I asked.
-"Yes, outlander, I am Baladas Demnvanni, I have lived here for the last three-and-a-half-thousand years, now you better have a VERY good reason to be here", he said the last words, in such a commanding voice, that it was painfull to hear.
-"I'm sent here by Master Aryon, to ask you to join the telvanni council". I waited in exitement for his answer.
-"Right, Telina isnt it"?
-"Ye, hey how do you know my name", I asked in an agitated voice, enierly forgetting who I was talking to.
-"Ohh, I recognise those eyes anywhere ". "Your eyes, have the same astonishing effect of power, as your grandfather, Selendil Delvanni, he was an ancient telvanni wizard". "Now i knew he had a child but never found out who, all he told me before he died, for some years ago, was that his grandchild had survived an assasination, his own child and her wife had died though".
I was completly lost, so my grandfather was the ancient Salendil after all, I could not believe it, my grandfather was acctually one of the most powerfull wizards ever, it was unbelievable. The voice of Baladas broke through my thoughts again though.
-"I shall join the council for the next three centuries, but only if you do some chores for me, now go and get to bed, you're welcome to borrow mine, as you have a great day before you tomorrow, as for myself I will spend the night studying".
I went into his bed, and realised that I was dead tired, and without even undressing, I fell down ito the soft pillows, and was lost in the world of dreams.
I am soon almost though chapter one, I guess only one up to a maximum of three post remain so please feel free to post your meaning of the entire chapter, as I would like to know whats been good, and whats been bad, that was all for tonight.
This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Feb 5 2006, 10:27 PM
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Tellie The Story Of Telina Delvanni Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM mplantinga A good start. I'm curious how the law decided ... Nov 10 2005, 06:46 PM Jonajosa
You have some good influences.
Try this.
I ... Nov 11 2005, 07:42 AM Tellie First Mplantinga I have decided to make the story ... Nov 11 2005, 08:49 AM Tellie When I was on that hatefull ship, I fell asleep al... Nov 11 2005, 10:28 AM Tellie Comments would be nice, both me and Telina would b... Nov 11 2005, 10:53 PM minque Ye both would huh? :D
Okies....First itīs a goo... Nov 11 2005, 11:02 PM Tellie Chapter one:A new life
I walked into the office, ... Nov 11 2005, 11:14 PM Jonajosa Much better. Nice detail on your suroundings in th... Nov 12 2005, 10:39 PM Tellie Thank you. I will propably dont be able to write b... Nov 12 2005, 11:30 PM Tellie So, do you like it. I shall write more tomorrow ni... Nov 14 2005, 09:44 PM Tellie So sorry I havent been ableto write in the last da... Nov 15 2005, 09:35 PM mplantinga This is definitely a good story which gets better ... Nov 15 2005, 10:08 PM Jonajosa Nice fight with Fargoth. Thought it was rather enj... Nov 16 2005, 02:13 AM Tellie "Hello lassie, please, don't be afraid I ... Nov 16 2005, 12:45 PM Jonajosa So... many... commas. Try and cut down on those. I... Nov 22 2005, 12:36 AM mplantinga I'm glad to see that the fall from the lightho... Nov 16 2005, 06:04 PM minque Nice story! Glad you keep it up, always nice w... Nov 18 2005, 11:22 PM Tellie Alrigth, I've been away for a while (I was at ... Nov 21 2005, 11:47 AM mplantinga Sorry to hear that you were at the hospital. No ap... Nov 21 2005, 06:56 PM Tellie So sorry, I was at the hospital again, I have been... Nov 28 2005, 09:17 PM mplantinga Thanks for another great update. I'm glad the ... Nov 28 2005, 09:46 PM Tellie Comments would be nice please. And can anyone give... Nov 29 2005, 09:46 AM minque I like your story a lot..but you wanted tips how t... Nov 29 2005, 10:16 PM Tellie Hey guys, I'm feeling much better now, and I h... Dec 2 2005, 12:44 PM Jonajosa Liked it.
One tip though. Read your story out lou... Dec 3 2005, 01:43 AM mplantinga Quick thinking with the fireball. Another great in... Dec 3 2005, 01:48 AM Tellie :D Hi again, my health is increasing more and more... Dec 7 2005, 03:12 PM mplantinga Wow; that was certainly an unexpected and unique w... Dec 7 2005, 07:16 PM Tellie Hello, another on is coming up. I have now complet... Dec 14 2005, 04:51 PM mplantinga I certainly wasn't expecting the kind of behav... Dec 14 2005, 09:30 PM minque Oh dear....now I must be honest....I did not like ... Dec 14 2005, 09:39 PM Tellie First, I would like to explain Telina's histor... Dec 16 2005, 11:31 AM mplantinga A rather rapid turn-around for Telina, to go from ... Dec 16 2005, 05:58 PM minque Oh dear me! Now I feel guilty..I was too harsh... Dec 16 2005, 09:50 PM Tellie :D Thanks Minque and mplantinga, I have no bad fee... Dec 17 2005, 12:21 AM Jonajosa
While I do see how you would misunderstand Minq... Dec 17 2005, 09:22 AM Tellie -"Oh no", I yelled. I ran out the door, ... Dec 20 2005, 07:42 PM Tellie But but but. Where is everybody? I know this is pr... Dec 22 2005, 05:10 PM minque Hey, Ok, itīs a good update...I like it...really, ... Dec 22 2005, 06:42 PM Tellie HELLO. finally it comes, the next update on Telina... Dec 23 2005, 04:22 PM Elidor Well done, this story is great! This is starti... Dec 24 2005, 02:04 PM Tellie Oh hi. Nice that you like my story Elidor. PS: wel... Dec 25 2005, 07:09 PM minque Right there Telina! Now youīve had it..hehe Jo... Dec 29 2005, 10:57 PM MerGirl I have only read the prologue, and I think you are... Dec 30 2005, 09:14 PM Tellie Is English your native language (please don't ... Dec 31 2005, 01:29 PM Tellie -"Telina, you have been progressing well... Dec 31 2005, 03:48 PM Elidor Aha another update, and a good one it is! :go... Jan 1 2006, 03:02 AM mplantinga Excellent updates. It was an interesting twist to ... Jan 2 2006, 07:47 PM Tellie for the first time, I travelled, by magic. I felt ... Jan 6 2006, 10:45 AM minque "Ahhh Telina my child! So Azura speaks to... Jan 6 2006, 03:28 PM mplantinga It's good to see the legion and the locals sho... Jan 6 2006, 06:47 PM Tellie Hi, I was wondering, if there are anyone good at d... Jan 12 2006, 11:20 AM mplantinga I was very amused by the approach taken by the Tel... Jan 12 2006, 05:52 PM Tellie As I stood on the deck, I watched the water below ... Jan 16 2006, 07:00 PM mplantinga An unusual way to find Skullcrusher. I'm curio... Jan 16 2006, 07:17 PM minque Ah Telina! you courageous woman! you have ... Jan 16 2006, 10:46 PM Tellie Sure Minkey, you and all others can have some more... Jan 26 2006, 10:27 AM mplantinga Glad to see you back and feeling better. I've ... Jan 26 2006, 06:41 PM Tellie As promised, by the way have anyone checked out Ge... Jan 28 2006, 01:12 AM minque Eeeewwww......that was a good read! Telina is ... Jan 28 2006, 02:24 PM Tellie It's coming more tonight, I guess in about 5ho... Jan 28 2006, 04:27 PM mplantinga A unique and amusing solution to the "Therana... Jan 30 2006, 09:22 PM Tellie Oki, I know, that I wasn't able to post, like ... Jan 31 2006, 02:10 PM Tellie As promised.
Zurin, was sitting on the chair by t... Jan 31 2006, 10:01 PM mplantinga Very interesting. An unusual idea to give a young ... Jan 31 2006, 10:15 PM Tellie I have now edited the rest of the post, that was s... Feb 1 2006, 03:00 PM mplantinga I had assumed that Zurin was probably going to die... Feb 2 2006, 06:11 PM Tellie This one I dedicate for Planty, may he heal well. ... Feb 3 2006, 09:02 PM Elidor Ah how i loved doing the Telvanni quests. Some ver... Feb 4 2006, 03:01 PM minque Oh dear me! First you are very industrious, yo... Feb 5 2006, 07:50 PM Elidor Nice, an update so soon again, I like this differe... Feb 6 2006, 05:47 AM mplantinga I was really great to learn a little about Telina... Feb 6 2006, 06:54 PM Tellie hey, planty, I'd not expect to see you back so... Feb 6 2006, 08:57 PM mplantinga You may call us fans; well, I guess I can't sp... Feb 6 2006, 10:30 PM Tellie Hi, more will come later this night, all I wanted ... Feb 7 2006, 02:33 PM mplantinga Screenies! Please give us screenies! Actio... Feb 7 2006, 07:22 PM Tellie I walked closer, standing up agains the wall, maki... Feb 7 2006, 09:12 PM mplantinga I wondered why that first part was in a different ... Feb 7 2006, 10:11 PM minque You are gifted Tellie! great update as usual... Feb 7 2006, 10:51 PM Tellie I found the bookstore, and entered. In there I saw... Feb 8 2006, 07:03 PM Tellie Edit: sorry, i thought i had pushed the edit butto... Feb 10 2006, 02:04 PM minque Oh Tellie!! You are amazing! (En kempe... Feb 11 2006, 03:28 PM mplantinga That was truly an amazing installment. I laughed s... Feb 11 2006, 08:50 PM
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