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Tellie
post Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM
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The story of Telina Delvanni


Prolouge..

Like it or not, I chose to start this story, and were really inspired by the storys of OverrideB1, Alexander, Treydog and Minque.

I do not know how good this story is, and cant write all times,so if you start to like it, please be patient.I would be wery happy if people were to give me some comments, even constructive criticism.



I started my life in the dark brotherhood. As a child, mere 8 months my parents were killed by an unknown assasin.When the guards checed the house, they found me, and sold me to the dark brotherhood, as cheap labour.

But the brotherhood had other needs for me, and I started the training to become an assasin.My skills grew, and being a dark elf, my natural resistance to fire helped me many a time. At my age fo fifteen I started to study the arts of magic,but only usefull skills ofcourse. My skills with the short blade, wakizashis especially grew to be wery dangerous, and when I were twenty years old, I were the most dangerous assasin in Cyrodiil.

So many would think that I would soon rise to he top ranks, one of the masers of the guild, didn't like me, so he gave me a writ on a member of the royal family,but he tipped the guards of.So when I was about to enter the big mansion, the guards came.

"Stop you" he said. But one of the guards, had already struck down on me. I easly dodged the blow, and in return the guard felt how it is to get a dagger in his lung.
In the cofusion I jumpede up on a wall, and took my poisonous darts out of my pack.

"Where is she"one yelled "there up on the""SPLAT" he had got the dart in his ugly face, and he fell dead to the floor, just as the others ran up on the wall.
I unscheated my twin wakizhashis and ran upon them.In a whirlwhind of fast blows on guard dropped to the grund with a severed artery, meanwhile i stabbed my wakizhashis into the back of one, crushed his spinal column, while the other got it in his neck.

Thinking this was a good place not to be, I jumped down into the courtyard,only to get a hammerblow in my head,so I was knocked out cold.

Waking up three days lateder with an unspeakable headache, I were taken to the local magistrate.Beacuse one of the guards had stuck agains me first, my counter attacks counted as self defense, but I had though trespassed royal territory, and were given three years in prison, and when I had finished my time I would be taken to court again.

I remeber little of my days in prison, altough my skills dropped rapidly, I were still wery good with shortblades. One day I where put on a blindfold, and taken into a carridge,where I where for three days,until I were taken onto a ship, wich would take me to a place, far beyond my imaginations


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post Feb 6 2006, 05:47 AM
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Nice, an update so soon again, I like this different viewpoint of the game. Is quite refreshing goodjob.gif


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Tellie   The Story Of Telina Delvanni   Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM
mplantinga   A good start. I'm curious how the law decided ...   Nov 10 2005, 06:46 PM
Jonajosa   You have some good influences. Try this. I ...   Nov 11 2005, 07:42 AM
Tellie   First Mplantinga I have decided to make the story ...   Nov 11 2005, 08:49 AM
Tellie   When I was on that hatefull ship, I fell asleep al...   Nov 11 2005, 10:28 AM
Tellie   Comments would be nice, both me and Telina would b...   Nov 11 2005, 10:53 PM
minque   Ye both would huh? :D Okies....First itīs a goo...   Nov 11 2005, 11:02 PM
Tellie   Chapter one:A new life I walked into the office, ...   Nov 11 2005, 11:14 PM
Jonajosa   Much better. Nice detail on your suroundings in th...   Nov 12 2005, 10:39 PM
Tellie   Thank you. I will propably dont be able to write b...   Nov 12 2005, 11:30 PM
Tellie   So, do you like it. I shall write more tomorrow ni...   Nov 14 2005, 09:44 PM
Tellie   So sorry I havent been ableto write in the last da...   Nov 15 2005, 09:35 PM
mplantinga   This is definitely a good story which gets better ...   Nov 15 2005, 10:08 PM
Jonajosa   Nice fight with Fargoth. Thought it was rather enj...   Nov 16 2005, 02:13 AM
Tellie   "Hello lassie, please, don't be afraid I ...   Nov 16 2005, 12:45 PM
Jonajosa   So... many... commas. Try and cut down on those. I...   Nov 22 2005, 12:36 AM
mplantinga   I'm glad to see that the fall from the lightho...   Nov 16 2005, 06:04 PM
minque   Nice story! Glad you keep it up, always nice w...   Nov 18 2005, 11:22 PM
Tellie   Alrigth, I've been away for a while (I was at ...   Nov 21 2005, 11:47 AM
mplantinga   Sorry to hear that you were at the hospital. No ap...   Nov 21 2005, 06:56 PM
Tellie   So sorry, I was at the hospital again, I have been...   Nov 28 2005, 09:17 PM
mplantinga   Thanks for another great update. I'm glad the ...   Nov 28 2005, 09:46 PM
Tellie   Comments would be nice please. And can anyone give...   Nov 29 2005, 09:46 AM
minque   I like your story a lot..but you wanted tips how t...   Nov 29 2005, 10:16 PM
Tellie   Hey guys, I'm feeling much better now, and I h...   Dec 2 2005, 12:44 PM
Jonajosa   Liked it. One tip though. Read your story out lou...   Dec 3 2005, 01:43 AM
mplantinga   Quick thinking with the fireball. Another great in...   Dec 3 2005, 01:48 AM
Tellie   :D Hi again, my health is increasing more and more...   Dec 7 2005, 03:12 PM
mplantinga   Wow; that was certainly an unexpected and unique w...   Dec 7 2005, 07:16 PM
Tellie   Hello, another on is coming up. I have now complet...   Dec 14 2005, 04:51 PM
mplantinga   I certainly wasn't expecting the kind of behav...   Dec 14 2005, 09:30 PM
minque   Oh dear....now I must be honest....I did not like ...   Dec 14 2005, 09:39 PM
Tellie   First, I would like to explain Telina's histor...   Dec 16 2005, 11:31 AM
mplantinga   A rather rapid turn-around for Telina, to go from ...   Dec 16 2005, 05:58 PM
minque   Oh dear me! Now I feel guilty..I was too harsh...   Dec 16 2005, 09:50 PM
Tellie   :D Thanks Minque and mplantinga, I have no bad fee...   Dec 17 2005, 12:21 AM
Jonajosa   While I do see how you would misunderstand Minq...   Dec 17 2005, 09:22 AM
Tellie   -"Oh no", I yelled. I ran out the door, ...   Dec 20 2005, 07:42 PM
Tellie   But but but. Where is everybody? I know this is pr...   Dec 22 2005, 05:10 PM
minque   Hey, Ok, itīs a good update...I like it...really, ...   Dec 22 2005, 06:42 PM
Tellie   HELLO. finally it comes, the next update on Telina...   Dec 23 2005, 04:22 PM
Elidor   Well done, this story is great! This is starti...   Dec 24 2005, 02:04 PM
Tellie   Oh hi. Nice that you like my story Elidor. PS: wel...   Dec 25 2005, 07:09 PM
minque   Right there Telina! Now youīve had it..hehe Jo...   Dec 29 2005, 10:57 PM
MerGirl   I have only read the prologue, and I think you are...   Dec 30 2005, 09:14 PM
Tellie   Is English your native language (please don't ...   Dec 31 2005, 01:29 PM
Tellie   -"Telina, you have been progressing well...   Dec 31 2005, 03:48 PM
Elidor   Aha another update, and a good one it is! :go...   Jan 1 2006, 03:02 AM
mplantinga   Excellent updates. It was an interesting twist to ...   Jan 2 2006, 07:47 PM
Tellie   for the first time, I travelled, by magic. I felt ...   Jan 6 2006, 10:45 AM
minque   "Ahhh Telina my child! So Azura speaks to...   Jan 6 2006, 03:28 PM
mplantinga   It's good to see the legion and the locals sho...   Jan 6 2006, 06:47 PM
Tellie   Hi, I was wondering, if there are anyone good at d...   Jan 12 2006, 11:20 AM
mplantinga   I was very amused by the approach taken by the Tel...   Jan 12 2006, 05:52 PM
Tellie   As I stood on the deck, I watched the water below ...   Jan 16 2006, 07:00 PM
mplantinga   An unusual way to find Skullcrusher. I'm curio...   Jan 16 2006, 07:17 PM
minque   Ah Telina! you courageous woman! you have ...   Jan 16 2006, 10:46 PM
Tellie   Sure Minkey, you and all others can have some more...   Jan 26 2006, 10:27 AM
mplantinga   Glad to see you back and feeling better. I've ...   Jan 26 2006, 06:41 PM
Tellie   As promised, by the way have anyone checked out Ge...   Jan 28 2006, 01:12 AM
minque   Eeeewwww......that was a good read! Telina is ...   Jan 28 2006, 02:24 PM
Tellie   It's coming more tonight, I guess in about 5ho...   Jan 28 2006, 04:27 PM
mplantinga   A unique and amusing solution to the "Therana...   Jan 30 2006, 09:22 PM
Tellie   Oki, I know, that I wasn't able to post, like ...   Jan 31 2006, 02:10 PM
Tellie   As promised. Zurin, was sitting on the chair by t...   Jan 31 2006, 10:01 PM
mplantinga   Very interesting. An unusual idea to give a young ...   Jan 31 2006, 10:15 PM
Tellie   I have now edited the rest of the post, that was s...   Feb 1 2006, 03:00 PM
mplantinga   I had assumed that Zurin was probably going to die...   Feb 2 2006, 06:11 PM
Tellie   This one I dedicate for Planty, may he heal well. ...   Feb 3 2006, 09:02 PM
Elidor   Ah how i loved doing the Telvanni quests. Some ver...   Feb 4 2006, 03:01 PM
Tellie   After i arrived in vos, i had to ask one of the lo...   Feb 5 2006, 06:30 PM
minque   Oh dear me! First you are very industrious, yo...   Feb 5 2006, 07:50 PM
mplantinga   I was really great to learn a little about Telina...   Feb 6 2006, 06:54 PM
Tellie   hey, planty, I'd not expect to see you back so...   Feb 6 2006, 08:57 PM
mplantinga   You may call us fans; well, I guess I can't sp...   Feb 6 2006, 10:30 PM
Tellie   Hi, more will come later this night, all I wanted ...   Feb 7 2006, 02:33 PM
mplantinga   Screenies! Please give us screenies! Actio...   Feb 7 2006, 07:22 PM
Tellie   I walked closer, standing up agains the wall, maki...   Feb 7 2006, 09:12 PM
mplantinga   I wondered why that first part was in a different ...   Feb 7 2006, 10:11 PM
minque   You are gifted Tellie! great update as usual...   Feb 7 2006, 10:51 PM
Tellie   I found the bookstore, and entered. In there I saw...   Feb 8 2006, 07:03 PM
Tellie   Edit: sorry, i thought i had pushed the edit butto...   Feb 10 2006, 02:04 PM
minque   Oh Tellie!! You are amazing! (En kempe...   Feb 11 2006, 03:28 PM
mplantinga   That was truly an amazing installment. I laughed s...   Feb 11 2006, 08:50 PM


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