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The Story Of Telina Delvanni |
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Tellie |
Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-November 05
From: Tel Delvanni

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The story of Telina Delvanni
Prolouge..
Like it or not, I chose to start this story, and were really inspired by the storys of OverrideB1, Alexander, Treydog and Minque.
I do not know how good this story is, and cant write all times,so if you start to like it, please be patient.I would be wery happy if people were to give me some comments, even constructive criticism.
I started my life in the dark brotherhood. As a child, mere 8 months my parents were killed by an unknown assasin.When the guards checed the house, they found me, and sold me to the dark brotherhood, as cheap labour.
But the brotherhood had other needs for me, and I started the training to become an assasin.My skills grew, and being a dark elf, my natural resistance to fire helped me many a time. At my age fo fifteen I started to study the arts of magic,but only usefull skills ofcourse. My skills with the short blade, wakizashis especially grew to be wery dangerous, and when I were twenty years old, I were the most dangerous assasin in Cyrodiil.
So many would think that I would soon rise to he top ranks, one of the masers of the guild, didn't like me, so he gave me a writ on a member of the royal family,but he tipped the guards of.So when I was about to enter the big mansion, the guards came.
"Stop you" he said. But one of the guards, had already struck down on me. I easly dodged the blow, and in return the guard felt how it is to get a dagger in his lung. In the cofusion I jumpede up on a wall, and took my poisonous darts out of my pack.
"Where is she"one yelled "there up on the""SPLAT" he had got the dart in his ugly face, and he fell dead to the floor, just as the others ran up on the wall. I unscheated my twin wakizhashis and ran upon them.In a whirlwhind of fast blows on guard dropped to the grund with a severed artery, meanwhile i stabbed my wakizhashis into the back of one, crushed his spinal column, while the other got it in his neck.
Thinking this was a good place not to be, I jumped down into the courtyard,only to get a hammerblow in my head,so I was knocked out cold.
Waking up three days lateder with an unspeakable headache, I were taken to the local magistrate.Beacuse one of the guards had stuck agains me first, my counter attacks counted as self defense, but I had though trespassed royal territory, and were given three years in prison, and when I had finished my time I would be taken to court again.
I remeber little of my days in prison, altough my skills dropped rapidly, I were still wery good with shortblades. One day I where put on a blindfold, and taken into a carridge,where I where for three days,until I were taken onto a ship, wich would take me to a place, far beyond my imaginations
This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Nov 11 2005, 12:17 PM
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Tellie |
Feb 7 2006, 09:12 PM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-November 05
From: Tel Delvanni

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I walked closer, standing up agains the wall, making no sound. To my left stood Haldin, my secret love, and to my right stood a new assassin, who was upposed to be trained up. We snuck over the wall, pressing ourselves down so that the guards wouldnt see us.
The guards passed, and we were ready to move on. "Haldin, what do you think"?I asked.
-"Well, I think you should go the difficoult way, up the tower, while I take this young rookie, with me so that he will learn some things".
Nodding, I slipped myself down into the courtyard, and ran over to the wall of the house, and jumped in between some crates, just as the guard passed me again. I started to climb up the wall, finding grip in the fine cavings of the walls. I climbed with the agileness of a cat, swift and no sounds.
I was half way up when I saw into the window, behind the curtain, the happy couple went to bed, and I sneaked into the room. I easily slit the throat of the guard in the room, and I then took out a lethally poisonous serpent, and slipped it into the bed.
I then opened the door, and stealthly made my way out, Suddenly I notice the shadows, of three guards coming up the staircase, with two prisoners. One of them were the new rookie, and the other one was my belowed Haldin, and from the sound of it, the rookie had revealed them both to the guards.
I took up three throwing daggers, and a rapid series of throws later, and the guards lay on the floor with a dagger each in their hearts.
-"Haldin get out of here, I'll handle the rest".
Following my advice, he and the newe assassin moved back out. I then walked further into the castle, and soon found the room I was searching from. The sole guard was easily despatched, and I made my way into the room.
I stood over the bed, with my wakasashi, held up high, downward pointing for maximum stabbing potential. Just as I drove the lethal blade down, the person in the bed moved, and the blanket over it, fell down, revealing a small child no more than five years old. The blade descended into its chest, and I felt the warm spray of blood against my face.....-"Noo, I screamed", as I woke up, I had been wakened one time before by that old memory, where I murdered a little child while it was asleep. -"Telina, are you alright, did something happen"? the voice of Baladas, said to me. -"No, it-it was just a bad dream", I told him. -"Well, since it's morning, you eat your breakfast, and I'll tell you what you have to do after it". I sat up, and then walked slowly towards the table, and sat down, and looked down at the food standing on the plate before me. Fried ash-jam, with cooked cwama-egg's, and when I was finished with that, I was given a big piece of guar-beef, and a loaf of bread. -"Nmm, it was delicious, Baladas, where did you learn to make food like that"? -"Oh, thank you Telina, I have never made food like that before, I just summoned it forth". "But now, I want you to go get me a couple of books that I need for my studies". "The books I need, are Nchunak's fire and faith, anteccendants of the dwemer law, and the Cronicles of Nchuleft, are you willing to go get those books, for me"? I accepted, and walked over to the silt strider, there I suddenly realised that I did not need to travel anywhere with that at the moment, so I decided to try another of my new spells. -"Jiksgarrup Blmarna", I was instantly travveled over to Balmora, and found myself standing otside the temple. I asked the closest guard, with an extremely overdone tone of humbleness ( I did not know if they had forgotten my little thievery earlier ), where the closets bookshop where. -"Oh, it is just down the street opposite the figthers guild, outlander", he answered back in a directly venomous tone, that shoved me that he had not forgotten a single thing. Ok, thats all for today, and next post you'll get some screenies(hopefully, as I dont know how to put them in , yet).Hope you liked getting a small look of how Telina was, before she came away from the brotherhood. AS alway replies are most welcome.
PS: Good luck at surgery planty.
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Tellie The Story Of Telina Delvanni Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM mplantinga A good start. I'm curious how the law decided ... Nov 10 2005, 06:46 PM Jonajosa
You have some good influences.
Try this.
I ... Nov 11 2005, 07:42 AM Tellie First Mplantinga I have decided to make the story ... Nov 11 2005, 08:49 AM Tellie When I was on that hatefull ship, I fell asleep al... Nov 11 2005, 10:28 AM Tellie Comments would be nice, both me and Telina would b... Nov 11 2005, 10:53 PM minque Ye both would huh? :D
Okies....First itīs a goo... Nov 11 2005, 11:02 PM Tellie Chapter one:A new life
I walked into the office, ... Nov 11 2005, 11:14 PM Jonajosa Much better. Nice detail on your suroundings in th... Nov 12 2005, 10:39 PM Tellie Thank you. I will propably dont be able to write b... Nov 12 2005, 11:30 PM Tellie So, do you like it. I shall write more tomorrow ni... Nov 14 2005, 09:44 PM Tellie So sorry I havent been ableto write in the last da... Nov 15 2005, 09:35 PM mplantinga This is definitely a good story which gets better ... Nov 15 2005, 10:08 PM Jonajosa Nice fight with Fargoth. Thought it was rather enj... Nov 16 2005, 02:13 AM Tellie "Hello lassie, please, don't be afraid I ... Nov 16 2005, 12:45 PM Jonajosa So... many... commas. Try and cut down on those. I... Nov 22 2005, 12:36 AM mplantinga I'm glad to see that the fall from the lightho... Nov 16 2005, 06:04 PM minque Nice story! Glad you keep it up, always nice w... Nov 18 2005, 11:22 PM Tellie Alrigth, I've been away for a while (I was at ... Nov 21 2005, 11:47 AM mplantinga Sorry to hear that you were at the hospital. No ap... Nov 21 2005, 06:56 PM Tellie So sorry, I was at the hospital again, I have been... Nov 28 2005, 09:17 PM mplantinga Thanks for another great update. I'm glad the ... Nov 28 2005, 09:46 PM Tellie Comments would be nice please. And can anyone give... Nov 29 2005, 09:46 AM minque I like your story a lot..but you wanted tips how t... Nov 29 2005, 10:16 PM Tellie Hey guys, I'm feeling much better now, and I h... Dec 2 2005, 12:44 PM Jonajosa Liked it.
One tip though. Read your story out lou... Dec 3 2005, 01:43 AM mplantinga Quick thinking with the fireball. Another great in... Dec 3 2005, 01:48 AM Tellie :D Hi again, my health is increasing more and more... Dec 7 2005, 03:12 PM mplantinga Wow; that was certainly an unexpected and unique w... Dec 7 2005, 07:16 PM Tellie Hello, another on is coming up. I have now complet... Dec 14 2005, 04:51 PM mplantinga I certainly wasn't expecting the kind of behav... Dec 14 2005, 09:30 PM minque Oh dear....now I must be honest....I did not like ... Dec 14 2005, 09:39 PM Tellie First, I would like to explain Telina's histor... Dec 16 2005, 11:31 AM mplantinga A rather rapid turn-around for Telina, to go from ... Dec 16 2005, 05:58 PM minque Oh dear me! Now I feel guilty..I was too harsh... Dec 16 2005, 09:50 PM Tellie :D Thanks Minque and mplantinga, I have no bad fee... Dec 17 2005, 12:21 AM Jonajosa
While I do see how you would misunderstand Minq... Dec 17 2005, 09:22 AM Tellie -"Oh no", I yelled. I ran out the door, ... Dec 20 2005, 07:42 PM Tellie But but but. Where is everybody? I know this is pr... Dec 22 2005, 05:10 PM minque Hey, Ok, itīs a good update...I like it...really, ... Dec 22 2005, 06:42 PM Tellie HELLO. finally it comes, the next update on Telina... Dec 23 2005, 04:22 PM Elidor Well done, this story is great! This is starti... Dec 24 2005, 02:04 PM Tellie Oh hi. Nice that you like my story Elidor. PS: wel... Dec 25 2005, 07:09 PM minque Right there Telina! Now youīve had it..hehe Jo... Dec 29 2005, 10:57 PM MerGirl I have only read the prologue, and I think you are... Dec 30 2005, 09:14 PM Tellie Is English your native language (please don't ... Dec 31 2005, 01:29 PM Tellie -"Telina, you have been progressing well... Dec 31 2005, 03:48 PM Elidor Aha another update, and a good one it is! :go... Jan 1 2006, 03:02 AM mplantinga Excellent updates. It was an interesting twist to ... Jan 2 2006, 07:47 PM Tellie for the first time, I travelled, by magic. I felt ... Jan 6 2006, 10:45 AM minque "Ahhh Telina my child! So Azura speaks to... Jan 6 2006, 03:28 PM mplantinga It's good to see the legion and the locals sho... Jan 6 2006, 06:47 PM Tellie Hi, I was wondering, if there are anyone good at d... Jan 12 2006, 11:20 AM mplantinga I was very amused by the approach taken by the Tel... Jan 12 2006, 05:52 PM Tellie As I stood on the deck, I watched the water below ... Jan 16 2006, 07:00 PM mplantinga An unusual way to find Skullcrusher. I'm curio... Jan 16 2006, 07:17 PM minque Ah Telina! you courageous woman! you have ... Jan 16 2006, 10:46 PM Tellie Sure Minkey, you and all others can have some more... Jan 26 2006, 10:27 AM mplantinga Glad to see you back and feeling better. I've ... Jan 26 2006, 06:41 PM Tellie As promised, by the way have anyone checked out Ge... Jan 28 2006, 01:12 AM minque Eeeewwww......that was a good read! Telina is ... Jan 28 2006, 02:24 PM Tellie It's coming more tonight, I guess in about 5ho... Jan 28 2006, 04:27 PM mplantinga A unique and amusing solution to the "Therana... Jan 30 2006, 09:22 PM Tellie Oki, I know, that I wasn't able to post, like ... Jan 31 2006, 02:10 PM Tellie As promised.
Zurin, was sitting on the chair by t... Jan 31 2006, 10:01 PM mplantinga Very interesting. An unusual idea to give a young ... Jan 31 2006, 10:15 PM Tellie I have now edited the rest of the post, that was s... Feb 1 2006, 03:00 PM mplantinga I had assumed that Zurin was probably going to die... Feb 2 2006, 06:11 PM Tellie This one I dedicate for Planty, may he heal well. ... Feb 3 2006, 09:02 PM Elidor Ah how i loved doing the Telvanni quests. Some ver... Feb 4 2006, 03:01 PM Tellie After i arrived in vos, i had to ask one of the lo... Feb 5 2006, 06:30 PM minque Oh dear me! First you are very industrious, yo... Feb 5 2006, 07:50 PM Elidor Nice, an update so soon again, I like this differe... Feb 6 2006, 05:47 AM mplantinga I was really great to learn a little about Telina... Feb 6 2006, 06:54 PM Tellie hey, planty, I'd not expect to see you back so... Feb 6 2006, 08:57 PM mplantinga You may call us fans; well, I guess I can't sp... Feb 6 2006, 10:30 PM Tellie Hi, more will come later this night, all I wanted ... Feb 7 2006, 02:33 PM mplantinga Screenies! Please give us screenies! Actio... Feb 7 2006, 07:22 PM mplantinga I wondered why that first part was in a different ... Feb 7 2006, 10:11 PM minque You are gifted Tellie! great update as usual... Feb 7 2006, 10:51 PM Tellie I found the bookstore, and entered. In there I saw... Feb 8 2006, 07:03 PM Tellie Edit: sorry, i thought i had pushed the edit butto... Feb 10 2006, 02:04 PM minque Oh Tellie!! You are amazing! (En kempe... Feb 11 2006, 03:28 PM mplantinga That was truly an amazing installment. I laughed s... Feb 11 2006, 08:50 PM
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