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The Story Of Telina Delvanni |
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Tellie |
Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-November 05
From: Tel Delvanni

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The story of Telina Delvanni
Prolouge..
Like it or not, I chose to start this story, and were really inspired by the storys of OverrideB1, Alexander, Treydog and Minque.
I do not know how good this story is, and cant write all times,so if you start to like it, please be patient.I would be wery happy if people were to give me some comments, even constructive criticism.
I started my life in the dark brotherhood. As a child, mere 8 months my parents were killed by an unknown assasin.When the guards checed the house, they found me, and sold me to the dark brotherhood, as cheap labour.
But the brotherhood had other needs for me, and I started the training to become an assasin.My skills grew, and being a dark elf, my natural resistance to fire helped me many a time. At my age fo fifteen I started to study the arts of magic,but only usefull skills ofcourse. My skills with the short blade, wakizashis especially grew to be wery dangerous, and when I were twenty years old, I were the most dangerous assasin in Cyrodiil.
So many would think that I would soon rise to he top ranks, one of the masers of the guild, didn't like me, so he gave me a writ on a member of the royal family,but he tipped the guards of.So when I was about to enter the big mansion, the guards came.
"Stop you" he said. But one of the guards, had already struck down on me. I easly dodged the blow, and in return the guard felt how it is to get a dagger in his lung. In the cofusion I jumpede up on a wall, and took my poisonous darts out of my pack.
"Where is she"one yelled "there up on the""SPLAT" he had got the dart in his ugly face, and he fell dead to the floor, just as the others ran up on the wall. I unscheated my twin wakizhashis and ran upon them.In a whirlwhind of fast blows on guard dropped to the grund with a severed artery, meanwhile i stabbed my wakizhashis into the back of one, crushed his spinal column, while the other got it in his neck.
Thinking this was a good place not to be, I jumped down into the courtyard,only to get a hammerblow in my head,so I was knocked out cold.
Waking up three days lateder with an unspeakable headache, I were taken to the local magistrate.Beacuse one of the guards had stuck agains me first, my counter attacks counted as self defense, but I had though trespassed royal territory, and were given three years in prison, and when I had finished my time I would be taken to court again.
I remeber little of my days in prison, altough my skills dropped rapidly, I were still wery good with shortblades. One day I where put on a blindfold, and taken into a carridge,where I where for three days,until I were taken onto a ship, wich would take me to a place, far beyond my imaginations
This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Nov 11 2005, 12:17 PM
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Tellie |
Feb 8 2006, 07:03 PM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-November 05
From: Tel Delvanni

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I found the bookstore, and entered. In there I saw tonnes of books, and I had an extreme urge to just stay there for many hours.
-"May, I help you friend", said the kindly bookeeper.
-"Oh, yes please, I'm looking for three books, the first one is Nchunak's fire and faith, the second is the Anteccendants of the dwemer law, and the last is the Chronicles of Nchuleft, do you have any of these books"?
-"I'm afraid I dont have the two last books you are talking about, but fire and faith, will be yours for two-hundred septims".
I counted up twenty ten-septim coins, and layed them down on the desk. She quickly grabbed them, and gave me the book, for after shoving me out of her store. -"Hlaalu", I mumbled with an angry tone.
Then I came up with an idea, and after some fiveminutes of thinking, I went to the other side of the town, and walked into the house of Caius Cosades. I was met by the stench of a strong narcotic powder, known as moon-sugar. And on the floor lay Caius, gulping up blood, mixed with vomit.
Without thinking, I laid my hand upon his chest, and felt the inside of him, his heart was on its way of stopping, and the lungs was filled with all manner of highly intoxicating drugs. I felt a small warmt through my hands, and I started to move his heart back and forth in my mind, and slowly his heavy breathing eased, and the heart was beating normally again. The lungs aws a different matter, and the only way possible to rid them of the drugs that was feasting on them, was to boil up the toxic bittergreen-petals, mixed with a small but dangerous snake venom, that I had carried with me, and let him brathe in the poisonous clouds.
He harked, and opned his eyes, and with a small look upon me, he suddenly ran out and vomited the few remains of his earlier food. I walked outside, and looked on him in a stern matter, I could not talk with him in this state, so I grabbed him in the arm, and started to walk over to the other side of town again.
When we stood on the middle of the bridge, I suddenly pushed him with all my force, and he toppled and fell into the river. I saw him fight to get really concious for some few minutes, and then I walked over to his house, and started to clean up the mess. I had just finished cleaning when he came in again, and this time, he was as awake as a free spirit.
-"What was the point of that"? he asked angrily.
-"First, I must ask you of something important, so you couldnt be in that statement, secondly i did it for the sheer amusement", I answered with a big smile across my face.
-"Let me see if I got this straight, you come in my house and ripps me out of my good dreams, then you throw me in the river, and then yoo got the nerve to ask me for a favour", he said with a rising voice.
-"Yep, something like that yes", I said in an extremely irritating tone. "You were on the way of dying, so you owe me your life, all I ask for return, is your help on a little task that heve been given me".
I then explained him about the problem I was facing, and he came up with a brilliant idea. I was given a small phial, with some unknown material for me in it. I was then going to head down to the temple in Vivec, and enter the hall of justice. There I had to find a good hiding place for it, and ignite the fuse, and walk into the office of the watch.
When the fuse had burnt up, a large explosion would erup, and I would plai dead, while the rest of the people in the office ran out, to get away. I would then pick the lock of a trapdoor, and find the temple's secret library and get the books.
I had asked if it was no simpler way, but Caius told me that the bookstore of Jobasha, had burned down, and with it the last books left of those I needed.
I was nearly dripping of cold-swet, and was about to start shaking uncrontrollably when I entered the hall of justice. I faked a stumble, so the guard that was watching me wouldn't get suspicious, of me leaning dow, and I quickly hid the phial on a plant, and used a small on-touch fire spell on the fuse. I then walked into the office of the watch.
-"What are you doing here outlander", asked a man in the same golden armour, that I had seen on the other guards in this marvellous city.
-"I'm going to ask you abou.........BOOOOM!!!!!!!
I did not have to fake a deathe, as I was thrown across the room, and hit one of the shelvees with a sickening chrunch. The people in the room, ran as fast as they could out of the room, and after half a minute two more people came out of the trapdoor.
After hearing the door close, I rose myself up, and walked slowly towards the trap door, and walked down. When I had walked through the second door there, I found the empty library, and after a few minutes, I had found the books I was searching for. I stuffed them in my bag, but just as I was about to walk away, the title of another book caught my eye, on it stood the irresistible title How to become a GOD.....I was greatly atracted to this book, so I took that one as well.
Just as I said the spellthat would take me to Gnisis, the door opned and one of the guards came in. I just hoped that he had'nt got a good look at me, as I walked up the steps to the upper room in Baladas tower.
-"Ahh so good to see you, Telina". "Do you want a cup of tea"?
We sat down by his table, and soon he had explained a great bit about himself and his good frien Aryon. And my eyes filled themselves with tears, as I left the second man in this place, that had acted lice a friend to me.
After arriving in Vos, i nearly sprinted ut the hill towards Tel-Vos, and I realised that my shape was getting increasingly better. I walked into the study room to Master Aryon, only to be met by Master Aryon, who looked extremely happy with himselves, I noticed the three huge chest's filled with gold and diamonds. also in the room stood the master who I guessed was Neloth, and the mer who looked more happy and thriumphant than anyone else was Arch-Magister Gothren.
This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Feb 9 2006, 10:13 PM
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Tellie The Story Of Telina Delvanni Nov 10 2005, 02:49 PM mplantinga A good start. I'm curious how the law decided ... Nov 10 2005, 06:46 PM Jonajosa
You have some good influences.
Try this.
I ... Nov 11 2005, 07:42 AM Tellie First Mplantinga I have decided to make the story ... Nov 11 2005, 08:49 AM Tellie When I was on that hatefull ship, I fell asleep al... Nov 11 2005, 10:28 AM Tellie Comments would be nice, both me and Telina would b... Nov 11 2005, 10:53 PM minque Ye both would huh? :D
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One tip though. Read your story out lou... Dec 3 2005, 01:43 AM mplantinga Quick thinking with the fireball. Another great in... Dec 3 2005, 01:48 AM Tellie :D Hi again, my health is increasing more and more... Dec 7 2005, 03:12 PM mplantinga Wow; that was certainly an unexpected and unique w... Dec 7 2005, 07:16 PM Tellie Hello, another on is coming up. I have now complet... Dec 14 2005, 04:51 PM mplantinga I certainly wasn't expecting the kind of behav... Dec 14 2005, 09:30 PM minque Oh dear....now I must be honest....I did not like ... Dec 14 2005, 09:39 PM Tellie First, I would like to explain Telina's histor... Dec 16 2005, 11:31 AM mplantinga A rather rapid turn-around for Telina, to go from ... Dec 16 2005, 05:58 PM minque Oh dear me! Now I feel guilty..I was too harsh... Dec 16 2005, 09:50 PM Tellie :D Thanks Minque and mplantinga, I have no bad fee... Dec 17 2005, 12:21 AM Jonajosa
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