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The Wolf
post Sep 30 2005, 12:11 PM
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Hecerilar, the altmer hunter, sat on a bar stool. He was in a bar called 'Broken Sword', in western parts of Skyrim. It had been tough to get there, but he had finally made it. He was here to hunt the wolves.

Suddenly he realized, that he was surrounded by nords. As he sipped his mead, one of them spoke.

"What's this 'ere, a lonely elf in the land of frost? Feeling a bit... chilly, eh?" First the nord seemed offencive, but then, suddenly, he smiled warmly, and patted the altmer's back.

"Sorry about that." Quick exchange of glances between the nords. "You look like a good huntsman. Have you heard of the great Snow Wolf that lurks up the hills? We've seen sometimes it's tracks, which are huge, but we haven't found it nor seen it."

There was something strange going on here, Hecerilar knew, but he already could picture the beast's pelt as his helmet. It was far too great temptetion for him. He remained silent.

"Afraid, elf?" the nord mocked. "Don't go, elf." He whispered that, suddenly looking him with a strange look in his eyes. Was it pity, remorse? "Some others have done that, but have never returned."

Hecerilar just laughed.


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post Feb 9 2006, 08:04 PM
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Nightmares bothered him. Hecerilar walked the icy lanes of the small village, and saw his father across the street. He shouted to him, calling him to come. His father did not respond. He started to walk slowly to his father, speeding as he went. He yelled his father's name. Charislar.... Suddenly the voice started to echo. ....Hecerilar....

He woke up slowly from his deep slumber. The echo didn't die, but turned into loud voices calling someone. “Little elf! Where are you? Come out, we won't hurt you!” The last phrase sounded somehow.... Malicious. He could here more shouts little further away. He bounced off the bed and to the window.

Suddenly he realized something. The fire. He quickly took the bucket of water he had melted from the snow, and threw it to the fireplace. The fire hissed. Then he realized the full extent of his error. He had added the last wood to the fire late last night. There were only embers left in the fireplace, and he had just thrown a bucket full of water to it, extinguishing the fire to cease some little puff of smoke that it created, only to cause a large cloud of smoke to rise from the chimney.

He hoped that the – whoever they were – had not noticed it. If his guess was right, he would regret the fact that he would be found. He listened.

“Hey! Feros! Did you leave a fire burning to your forge?” Hecerilar cursed heavily under his breath, and tried to move as silently as he could. He picked up his outdoors clothes and put them on. Then he grabbed his potion bag. The voices were getting closer. He took a restore fatigue potion from the bag, and with some juggling managed to drop it. He froze. “Did you hear that?” Hecerilar cursed with extreme words now, and not under his breath anymore. He took another potion from the bag, and gulped it down. He expected the rush of energy to come. He checked the label. 'Restore fatigue', it said with large clear letters. No apparent effect. He shrugged, grabbed his sword and headed downstairs.

“Hey! Feros, your door's lock has been broken! The elf must be here! All, come! Remember, catch him alive! Mere fast death would not be enough for this one!” Hecerilar froze just down the stairs. He could see someone opening and closing the door, as if to see the damage done to it.

He made up his mind fast. There was no way out upstairs, and the windows were too small downstairs. There was only one way out of here. The door. He took a deep breath, and sneaked to the door. He could hear the man breathing outside, and see the breath from the little opening.

He kicked the door to the man's face and made a run for it. He could hear the man cursing behind him. He headed up to the hills, where the tracks lead. An arrow flurred past his head. He ran and ran until he was out of breath. He was away from the village now.


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post Feb 9 2006, 08:56 PM
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QUOTE(The Wolf @ Feb 9 2006, 07:04 PM)
Nightmares bothered him. Hecerilar walked the icy lanes of the small village, and saw his father across the street. He shouted to him, calling him to come. His father did not respond. He started to walk slowly to his father, speeding as he went. He yelled his father's name. Charislar.... Suddenly the voice started to echo. ....Hecerilar....

He woke up slowly from his deep slumber. The echo didn't die, but turned into loud voices calling someone. “Little elf! Where are you? Come out, we won't hurt you!” The last phrase sounded somehow.... Malicious. He could here more shouts little further away. He bounced off the bed and to the window.

Suddenly he realized something. The fire. He quickly took the bucket of water he had melted from the snow, and threw it to the fireplace. The fire hissed. Then he realized the full extent of his error. He had added the last wood to the fire late last night. There were only embers left in the fireplace, and he had just thrown a bucket full of water to it, extinguishing the fire to cease some little puff of smoke that it created, only to cause a large cloud of smoke to rise from the chimney.

He hoped that the – whoever they were – had not noticed it. If his guess was right, he would regret the fact that he would be found. He listened.

“Hey! Feros! Did you leave a fire burning to your forge?” Hecerilar cursed heavily under his breath, and tried to move as silently as he could. He picked up his outdoors clothes and put them on. Then he grabbed his potion bag. The voices were getting closer. He took a restore fatigue potion from the bag, and with some juggling managed to drop it. He froze. “Did you hear that?” Hecerilar cursed with extreme words now, and not under his breath anymore. He took another potion from the bag, and gulped it down. He expected the rush of energy to come. He checked the label. 'Restore fatigue', it said with large clear letters. No apparent effect. He shrugged, grabbed his sword and headed downstairs.

“Hey! Feros, your door's lock has been broken! The elf must be here! All, come! Remember, catch him alive! Mere fast death would not be enough for this one!” Hecerilar froze just down the stairs. He could see someone opening and closing the door, as if to see the damage done to it.

He made up his mind fast. There was no way out upstairs, and the windows were too small downstairs. There was only one way out of here. The door. He took a deep breath, and sneaked to the door. He could hear the man breathing outside, and see the breath from the little opening.

He kicked the door to the man's face and made a run for it. He could hear the man cursing behind him. He headed up to the hills, where the tracks lead. An arrow flurred past his head. He ran and ran until he was out of breath. He was away from the village now.
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ohh yeah biggrin.gif thanks, i wonder were those people untransformed werewolf's and how did they know our hero ???
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The Wolf   Hunter Or The Hunted?   Sep 30 2005, 12:11 PM
Aki   Sounds interesting... The descritpion of the wolf...   Oct 1 2005, 12:54 AM
The Wolf   Night was starting to fall. The last rays of sunli...   Oct 1 2005, 07:12 AM
The Wolf   I am certainly NOT gonna post the ending before at...   Oct 2 2005, 07:00 AM
Aki   I need to pay more attention to the fan-fiction fo...   Oct 9 2005, 08:03 AM
minque   Yes Aki! please do.....there are some really ...   Oct 9 2005, 12:09 PM
minque   Heey man!...Please be patient....there are so ...   Oct 2 2005, 05:22 PM
The Wolf   Yes, yes, I was just trying to figure out whethe...   Oct 3 2005, 05:31 AM
The Wolf   Hecerilar got up, and took last long look at the t...   Oct 3 2005, 06:03 AM
The Wolf   Hecerilar, the altmer hunter, sat on a bar stool. ...   Oct 4 2005, 04:18 PM
Neck' Thall   Nice story man. I bet that the nords are the were...   Oct 9 2005, 06:21 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Very good... Werewolf tales are always nice :D Goo...   Oct 9 2005, 01:40 PM
mplantinga   An interesting story. The idea of an Altmer hunter...   Oct 11 2005, 10:31 PM
The Wolf   He ran, until he tripped over a tree root. Then He...   Oct 12 2005, 07:04 AM
mplantinga   A great update. I like how you've tried to tie...   Oct 12 2005, 06:56 PM
Aki   Ooh..interesting. Wonder who that random nord was...   Oct 12 2005, 11:50 PM
The Wolf   You'll see it on the next update... I promis...   Oct 13 2005, 06:17 AM
D7Unknown   I'm liking this story and am anxious to see wh...   Oct 13 2005, 01:43 AM
Jonajosa   Exactly how I feel. Please! I must know...   Oct 15 2005, 05:58 PM
minque   okies....keep your promise then....and please upda...   Oct 13 2005, 11:36 PM
The Wolf   I'd by the way like to submit this to the shor...   Oct 16 2005, 04:11 PM
chips   awesome story man! i thought the nords were th...   Oct 16 2005, 05:35 PM
ike the imp   yeah its brill!!.hey chips u got bunny in ...   Oct 17 2005, 08:07 PM
The Wolf   His body gave the altmer only two options: wake up...   Oct 22 2005, 01:09 PM
mplantinga   So, he is now infected. I hope he manages to get h...   Oct 22 2005, 04:51 PM
The Wolf   Trees flickered past Hecerilar as he sped through ...   Oct 28 2005, 07:19 AM
mplantinga   Someone is clearly going to a lot of trouble to se...   Oct 31 2005, 09:08 PM
The Wolf   Okay, I've almost written an another update (*...   Dec 3 2005, 07:55 PM
Aki   Yes! :D   Dec 3 2005, 10:44 PM
mplantinga   Yes; I would definitely like to know what happens....   Dec 4 2005, 08:01 PM
The Wolf   Very well then, back to the writing... I'll t...   Dec 5 2005, 08:24 AM
The Wolf   When he got up, he had made up his mind. He read t...   Dec 6 2005, 08:06 PM
mplantinga   He certainly is determined. I am a bit concerned a...   Dec 6 2005, 08:20 PM
pete tong   ohh please hurry up, ive been coming over here(thi...   Feb 9 2006, 05:31 PM
pete tong   whens the next update???????   Feb 19 2006, 05:22 PM
mplantinga   Thanks for the update; it's been a while in co...   Mar 1 2006, 12:22 AM
pete tong   ohh come on, more story more story...   May 27 2006, 12:54 PM
The Wolf   I don't know.... I haven't been working on...   May 27 2006, 01:14 PM
DarkHunter   The rest of us don't!... just kidding. Any...   May 30 2006, 11:13 AM
Lord Revan   likewise, but what's wrong with vampires?...   Jun 14 2006, 10:59 PM
pete tong   damm live always getting in the way of things....   Aug 2 2006, 07:03 PM
minque   I know exactly how it is! You write a story, t...   Aug 20 2006, 03:29 PM


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