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Dantrag
post Dec 23 2005, 12:15 AM
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I was soon accepted into House Redoran, and my mother was pretty proud of me. Probably too proud. I didn't go to Athyn's class anymore, being too busy as councillor Venim's page. Or, at least until the fiery councillor died, and was replaced by his brother. All young hirelings in the House had to spend five years in a councillor's service, and I was no different. Close to the end of those years, my fourth, to be exact, I wondered why I was even in the House; I got no money for my service, being a page, and my family needed money. I should have gotten a job. There I was in Bolvyn's manor, getting fed and clothed while my family starved. My own damned fault. I paid for my selfishness.

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I'll put the actual story here in a while; I just needed to start this back up.

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post Feb 15 2006, 11:58 PM
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Boo!

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"I'm home." he called in the classic sing-song voice as he walked through the door.

"Sel!" Vysi exclaimed, dropping the clothes she was carrying to run towards and embrace her brother. "I'm glad you're home." she said, but her tone quickly changed. "I'm still mad at you though." she said flatly. "Why do you need such a dangerous job? Look at those cuts on your neck! You almost died on your first day!"

"It wasn't that bad." Sel said, "And I love you too, Sis." he said with a wide grin. "Look at this." he said, convieniently changing the subject as he put his bag of gold in Vysi's hand.

"Wow, Sel, this is a lot." she said, staring wide-eyed into the pouch.

"And Aldaril said that he owes me more." he added.

"And when do you go back again?" Vysi asked, obviously worried about him leaving again.

"Not for another week or two." he answered. "So I can spend time with you, and still have some money." he said, messing her hair.

"Come on, let's go to the Rat in the Pot. You look hungry."

After their lunch, Sel went to the Venim Manor with his sister to speak with Arsyn about his absence the previous two days, and his future ones.

When he was caled into Arsyn's chambers, Vysi stayed in the main chambers while he walked in the door.

"Sel, here to explain yourself, I presume?" Arsyn said in his typical noble tone.

"Yes, Sir." Sel replied, seating himself in the customary seat in front of Arsyn.

"Well?" the dead Bolvyn's brother prompted.

"As you already know, Arsy- Councillor Venim, my mother died, and I have to take care of my family in her place."

"Get on with it."

Sel couldn't help but give Arsyn an angry look. He hated how these nobles could take hours of everyone's time, but if someone else took an ounce of theirs, they went crazy. Instead of voicing his thoughts, he said. "Yes Sir."

"I was forced to get a job, and will not be able to attend to all of my House duties, though I will try my hardest." Sel continued.

"Alright then, I hereby release you from your duties as a page." Arsyn said flatly.

"What? I'm not having these four years I spent here wased. Especially since my mother starrved because I wasn't paid, nor was I able to work for any extra money. I swear by the dead Almalexia, that if you go through with this, your House will have many problems to work out."

Arsyn stood angrily. "I have just heard heresy toward the gods and threats toward this House in the same sentence! One spoken by a brat too young to lift a sword!"

"The rumors of Almalexia's death have been circulating for over a year and a half now, and she still hasn't shown herself to prove the rumors wrong." Sel retorted. "Only House Redoran fools itself by insisting that she lives. You're all too cowardly to face the truth. The truth that the gods you spent years serving were all frauds! And if you-"

"Enough!" Arsyn interrupted with an explosive shout. "Even if I hadn't already banned you from our House, I would do so now, after that speech. Now get out of my home before I force you."

"You'll regret this." Sel promised, as he rose slowly to leave.

"And don't even think of going to your childhood friend Athyn. He cannot help you. Just as he was a coward when my brother was here, he's a coward now." Arsyn said just before Sel slammed the door.

He doesn't need to. I can help myself. And Athyn's no coward.

"Come on, Vysi, we're leaving." he said, not stopping to wait for her.

Vysi ran to catch up with her fiery brother. "What is going on, Sel?" she asked with concern.

"That bastarde in there just banished me from the house."

"Sel! Watch your mouth!" Vysi reprimanded.

"This is not the time, Vysi." he said, trying to calm himself. He needed to vent his anger, but not on someone undeserving like his sister.


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Dantrag   Sel, Chapter 3   Dec 23 2005, 12:15 AM
minque   Wonderful! More Sel.....woah.....I canīt wait...   Dec 23 2005, 12:19 AM
Dantrag   here's your least favorite story on the forums...   Dec 23 2005, 02:25 AM
minque   Quite wonderful update Danny.....you really make y...   Dec 23 2005, 02:01 PM
Tellie   Oh yes, more Sel. I have been waiting in patience ...   Dec 23 2005, 02:49 PM
Dantrag   Here you go, Telendil; please don't hurt your ...   Dec 26 2005, 07:56 PM
minque   O_o.....now itīs getting exciting, with lilīVysi r...   Dec 26 2005, 10:36 PM
Dantrag   It's late, I'm not tired, so I'm liste...   Dec 28 2005, 08:17 AM
minque   Ahh yes.....very good as usual.....I somehow feel ...   Dec 28 2005, 07:32 PM
MerGirl   Yay! *claps* Awesome update. :) Sel's s...   Dec 30 2005, 09:05 PM
Dantrag   Ever wanted to just crawl into a hole and never co...   Jan 3 2006, 10:59 PM
minque   OMG! Nooooooooo......itīs terrible! no no....   Jan 3 2006, 11:08 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Well I've finally had some time to catch up wi...   Jan 4 2006, 10:44 PM
Dantrag   about time for an update, no? ---- He didn't...   Jan 6 2006, 09:10 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice story telling there Danny. Good written as al...   Jan 6 2006, 10:20 PM
minque   Awww-........really....itīs so sad.....but Sel rea...   Jan 6 2006, 10:37 PM
mplantinga   Silly me; I didn't notice you had started chap...   Jan 6 2006, 11:31 PM
minque   He he..I wonīt be that patient though! Danny...   Jan 6 2006, 11:40 PM
Dantrag   Here you are. ---- They buried their mother the ...   Jan 8 2006, 05:28 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Great update Danny :) I really liked this one, ver...   Jan 8 2006, 12:33 PM
minque   Thanks Danny for not letting me wait!....Iīll ...   Jan 8 2006, 02:26 PM
mplantinga   It's good to see Sel demonstrating some indepe...   Jan 9 2006, 07:01 PM
Tellie   Yes, more Sel, poor Vysi and Sel, I look forward t...   Jan 12 2006, 11:49 AM
Dantrag   *Dantrag bows to his wonderfully small audience* ...   Jan 15 2006, 07:44 AM
minque   *Bowing gratefully at Danny* An update....how wond...   Jan 15 2006, 03:52 PM
mplantinga   *applause* The audience, hanging on every word fro...   Jan 16 2006, 06:12 PM
MerGirl   *claps* :D Yay! Updates, me very happy! ...   Jan 17 2006, 12:44 AM
Dantrag   It's that time.... Yeah you're about as e...   Jan 23 2006, 05:01 PM
mplantinga   Sel sure has gotten himself into quite a pickle. I...   Jan 24 2006, 07:11 PM
minque   Ok Doctor Danny! If doctorīs appointments were...   Jan 24 2006, 10:57 PM
Soulseeker3.0   WOW, i got bored today so I desided to read anothe...   Jan 26 2006, 12:40 AM
Dantrag   boop! ------- Sel's eyes were watering, ...   Jan 28 2006, 02:38 AM
minque   Now what a relief! Sel not being deprived of h...   Jan 28 2006, 02:18 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Great update Dantrag, A close call.   Jan 28 2006, 05:42 PM
mplantinga   Definitely a close call, but it sounds like Sel an...   Jan 30 2006, 09:25 PM
Dantrag   *Note* I realized a major inconsistency within m...   Feb 8 2006, 03:01 AM
Dantrag   Sel gathered up random dwemer items that Aldaril a...   Feb 13 2006, 09:20 PM
Kiln   Finally you update, been waiting for some time now...   Feb 13 2006, 09:46 PM
jack cloudy   First time I read this one. And I have to admit on...   Feb 13 2006, 10:05 PM
minque   Ahhh.....an update! yay! As always a vivid...   Feb 13 2006, 10:10 PM
Soulseeker3.0   yay took long enough, nice addition to the story a...   Feb 13 2006, 10:43 PM
Taillus   Very well written and well composed. Not to mentio...   Feb 13 2006, 10:54 PM
Dantrag   Boo! ----- "I'm home." he call...   Feb 15 2006, 11:58 PM
Taillus   The nerve! Banning Sel like that. What an outr...   Feb 16 2006, 01:17 AM
minque   Awww......those Venim-brothers....all alike, mean,...   Feb 16 2006, 07:53 PM
Tellie   Yo're doing just as you always do.......AMAZIN...   Feb 16 2006, 08:22 PM
jack cloudy   Glad I don't drink coffee. But my nerves, plea...   Feb 16 2006, 08:34 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow, Amazing! I had something thought up but I...   Feb 16 2006, 11:02 PM
Kiln   Ooohhhh...I am just dying to find out how Sel make...   Feb 17 2006, 06:22 PM
mplantinga   While I understand the strength of Sel's react...   Mar 1 2006, 12:08 AM
Dantrag   welcome back. ------ "This is really good....   Mar 12 2006, 11:42 PM
minque   Awwwww.....Iīm getting worried now, it seems as th...   Mar 12 2006, 11:48 PM
jack cloudy   Yay, update. :) Sel is getting rather stressed. H...   Mar 13 2006, 05:12 PM
treydog   It is to my sorrow that I have not kept up with on...   Mar 15 2006, 05:10 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow, great story Dantrag. I hope Sel gets through...   Mar 16 2006, 03:50 AM
MerGirl   Oh, dear! Poor little Sel and Vysi! :( *...   Mar 25 2006, 09:30 PM
Dantrag   Well, I hope I wasn't gone so long that everyo...   Apr 15 2006, 07:44 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Cool Danny! ;D   Apr 15 2006, 09:33 AM
Tellie   Now danny...shame on you...how would you even th...   Apr 15 2006, 01:29 PM
Red   *Ends his lurking spree* I've really been e...   Apr 15 2006, 03:47 PM
minque   Yay!!! An update is coming....this i...   Apr 15 2006, 09:31 PM
Dantrag   I promised, so here it is. I'm a (young) man o...   Apr 16 2006, 11:35 PM
minque   Ok....you had to didnīt you? Leave me wondering wh...   Apr 16 2006, 11:46 PM
MerGirl   Ooooh, yay! :) An update and I've been t...   Apr 17 2006, 01:58 AM
Dantrag   Well, it wasn't supposed to be a cliffhanger, ...   Apr 17 2006, 04:24 AM
jack cloudy   yay, an update. I like it.   Apr 17 2006, 12:22 PM
minque   Hmmm.....ok, but Iīm so worried about Vysi....Sad...   Apr 17 2006, 02:39 PM
treydog   Excellent update, Dantrag! I love the persona...   Apr 19 2006, 05:17 PM
Dantrag   forgot all about this...sorry. ---------- Sel wo...   Apr 20 2006, 11:38 PM
minque   Ha! yessss an update...but still we have to wo...   Apr 21 2006, 01:07 AM
Dantrag   It wasn't really an update...merely what I d...   Apr 21 2006, 01:09 AM
minque   Whatever......it took the story a tad forwards any...   Apr 21 2006, 04:28 PM
Soulseeker3.0   great story Dantrag, please continue making update...   Apr 22 2006, 06:24 PM
minque   OMG!!!!! Have you noticed how...   Apr 22 2006, 10:11 PM
Soulseeker3.0   hmm random? :D but yeah I agree with Kiln... or ...   Apr 25 2006, 04:25 AM
Kiln   *Kiln taps his foot* We need an update here mate,...   Apr 25 2006, 01:10 AM
Dantrag   Here you are ------ Sel, Vysi, and Aldaril arriv...   May 1 2006, 01:08 AM
jack cloudy   Yay, update! A nice one. Now Aldaril probably ...   May 1 2006, 10:52 AM
minque   Ohohohooo......Now they have a problem......I love...   May 1 2006, 12:35 PM
DarkHunter   Fighting with Divanath? not a good idea... he does...   May 1 2006, 07:13 PM
mplantinga   Imagine my surprise to find several great updates ...   May 1 2006, 07:13 PM
treydog   Short, but wonderfully described. I love the twis...   May 2 2006, 12:45 AM
Dantrag   wow. It's been awhile. (I'm such a slacker...   May 19 2006, 04:11 PM
treydog   More Sel! Hooray! Glad to see you back, ...   May 19 2006, 04:26 PM
Tellie   Wohoo...finally we have some more of good'ol S...   May 19 2006, 04:30 PM
minque   Ha! Good old Sel! Clever as usual....some ...   May 19 2006, 06:55 PM
Dantrag   I kinda missed Sel, so here you go. ---------- ...   May 29 2006, 02:58 AM
minque   O-o.....hmmm annoying Divayth Fyr are we huh? Was ...   May 29 2006, 08:22 PM
treydog   Loved the comparison of Sel's "No thank y...   May 30 2006, 03:17 PM
Soulseeker3.0   hmm, don't you just love mind games? wrong ans...   May 30 2006, 05:09 PM
mplantinga   It was interesting that he dismissed Fyr's off...   May 30 2006, 05:41 PM
Dantrag   Fyr will get even later. ;) --------------- Sel ...   Jun 3 2006, 04:15 AM
minque   Ahhhh......more Sel! That hammer.....was it Vo...   Jun 5 2006, 01:15 AM
mplantinga   I also will be curious to see what Sel buys for Vy...   Jun 5 2006, 08:29 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Ahhhh......more Sel! That hammer.....was it V...   Aug 26 2006, 02:40 AM


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