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jack cloudy Oasis Feb 11 2006, 11:49 AM
Tellie Nice, start. This story have the potential of beco... Feb 11 2006, 08:05 PM mplantinga An interesting start. I like how you've given ... Feb 11 2006, 09:03 PM Kiln I like how the story is exploding with the charact... Feb 11 2006, 09:30 PM jack cloudy Thanks for the comments. I just finished the chara... Feb 11 2006, 09:46 PM Taillus You have a good story going so far. I like how you... Feb 11 2006, 10:02 PM Kiln This is a good read, I like how the character does... Feb 11 2006, 10:13 PM minque Hehe....nice and amusing! A refreshing harshne... Feb 11 2006, 10:31 PM Tellie You, keep getting better Oasis, I really like the ... Feb 12 2006, 12:39 AM jack cloudy Just a short update. I've got a few ideas I... Feb 12 2006, 12:45 PM Tellie You're still going well, and I'm still rea... Feb 12 2006, 02:53 PM jack cloudy First walk outside town is done. I've also don... Feb 12 2006, 05:55 PM mplantinga I present to you the offficial "planty award ... Feb 12 2006, 09:09 PM Kiln Wow the impersonation of the tax collector was a m... Feb 12 2006, 09:18 PM minque *chuckles* A quite amusing approach 'i´d say..... Feb 12 2006, 10:29 PM jack cloudy *bows humbly and accepts the reward* Thank you all... Feb 13 2006, 08:11 AM Kiln Very good update. I liked how the character dealt... Feb 13 2006, 04:22 PM jack cloudy Thank you. That line just kind of popped up in my ... Feb 13 2006, 09:44 PM Taillus I am loving it! I just wish I had a following ... Feb 13 2006, 09:48 PM jack cloudy What follows has been written for no good reason o... Feb 14 2006, 08:17 AM Kiln Hehe, I really like the character's little sch... Feb 14 2006, 02:28 PM Taillus That will show Fargoth that slimy little bugger... Feb 14 2006, 03:37 PM Tellie HAHA,i'm rolling on the floor laughing. I was ... Feb 14 2006, 04:28 PM jack cloudy Thank you all for the nice comments. And don't... Feb 14 2006, 09:13 PM Kiln Great update, I really do like the way you breathe... Feb 14 2006, 10:13 PM Elidor Haha I love this spunky character, hes definately ... Feb 15 2006, 11:09 AM Sinder Velvin It's called Oasis, yet neither of the Gallaghe... Feb 15 2006, 06:52 PM Taillus Cain Cossack! That was a riot. Your character ... Feb 15 2006, 08:31 PM jack cloudy Thank you, thank you. Ok, question answer time... Feb 15 2006, 09:34 PM minque Huh? :D Oh aye......muhahaha...hmm can´t say I´... Feb 16 2006, 08:15 PM jack cloudy I never listen to music and all, so I didn't k... Feb 16 2006, 08:22 PM Tellie Hi, you're getting better and better every pos... Feb 17 2006, 12:25 PM mplantinga An excellent chapter. I've enjoyed your unique... Mar 1 2006, 12:03 AM 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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