Master
Joined: 18-February 05
From: From "not where you are"-ville
You also should use spell check and check your grammer and the usage of words. If all of your sentences in the story are like the wrong "Write" in your topic then people will be discouraged (right word?) to read your story. Well good luck and I hope to see something new eventually.
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SKA
This was pretty unusual, because most children at his age wanted to become great warriors, known all through time as saviors of, well, anything - Toroabok