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Kell-Reevor |
Mar 2 2006, 01:50 PM
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Just a short piece I put together out of boredom. Hope you like it.
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It is dark. Two figures traverse a well trodden path out of Suran. The first is a swordsman. The second... his would-be killer.
The swordsman knows of his follower's presence. He listens attentively as the assassin follows. He is clearly untrained, and this may be his first mark. There is no rattle of quarrels or arrows. It is likely the swordsman need not fear a ranged attack.
The swordsman has made an enemy in the Nobles of Suran, and was aware that eventually they would seek his life. But he is not afraid. As a swordsman, death has followed him as a companion he has developed a deep respect for.
His trained ears pick up a sound... a soft and smooth "whif" as a dagger is pulled from a belt.
Spotting a shrine by the road, he approaches. He has no love of the Dunmer, nor has he a love for their Temple, but he is a spiritual man and pays his repects nonetheless as his killer moves in.
He moves his thumb for the guard of his sword. Years of oiling grant it silence as he nudges it from his sheath.
In a flash, he grips the weapon. Rips it from its home. Then thrusts it back, cutting into the assassin's belly. Turning, he frees the weapon with a horizontal slice, then brings the weapon up for a finishing downward cut.
The ordeal is over in a mere span of two seconds. The swordsman flips his sword to remove any blood, then returns it to it's home. He kneels in respect to the life he had just ended. If the nobleman had hired a killer even a tad more competant, the outcome would have been drastically different. If his foe had been equipped with a bow, or maybe armor, or perhaps knowledge of magick, HE would have been the one to die tonight.
He closes the dead man's eyes, mutters a short prayer... then is on his way.
This post has been edited by Kell-Reevor: Mar 2 2006, 02:01 PM
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Kell-Reevor |
Mar 9 2006, 06:25 PM
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QUOTE Wow...That was a masterpiece just like your other one. Your short works always make a very bold statement and they are such a pleasure to read. Thanks. It turned out a little longer than I hoped it would though.
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Kell-Reevor One shot stories Mar 2 2006, 01:50 PM mplantinga A very intriguing short story. I particularly like... Mar 2 2006, 07:41 PM jack cloudy One thought popped up in my mind while reading it.... Mar 2 2006, 08:53 PM jchamber
sorry for being a little late on the reply with... Mar 3 2006, 01:46 AM Taillus I so whole heartedly agree with cloudy on this one... Mar 2 2006, 11:21 PM Kiln Very nice short story Kell, very nice indeed. I r... Mar 3 2006, 12:00 AM Kell-Reevor Thanks everyone, I'm glad you liked it.
If an... Mar 3 2006, 12:33 AM Taillus A solitary doe dips its head into a flowing stream... Mar 3 2006, 12:54 AM Kell-Reevor Well written Taillus, you described the envrionmen... Mar 3 2006, 02:11 AM Taillus Ha you hit the nail on the head Kell! Thanks B... Mar 3 2006, 03:42 AM Kell-Reevor
Sorry, guess I meant to answer this earlier.
Th... Mar 3 2006, 01:03 PM jack cloudy Not sure about how good this one is, but it is som... Mar 7 2006, 10:31 PM Agent Griff Interesting story. Since it tells of the full moon... Mar 8 2006, 11:12 AM Kell-Reevor Indeed, it does have the feeling of a small part o... Mar 8 2006, 12:40 PM Taillus Very much agreed Kell. It doesn't take a well ... Mar 8 2006, 03:55 PM jack cloudy Thank you and yes, Kell's story was really goo... Mar 8 2006, 09:09 PM Kell-Reevor Here's another "way of the sword" st... Mar 9 2006, 01:27 PM Taillus Wow...That was a masterpiece just like your other ... Mar 9 2006, 02:44 PM Agent Griff I must say Kell, if there is one story I would qua... Mar 9 2006, 06:39 PM jack cloudy Oh boy, this one was good. It was kind of sad thou... Mar 9 2006, 09:57 PM Taillus Four adventurers stand in one of the many rooms th... Mar 10 2006, 11:26 PM Agent Griff Interesting story Tallius. Basing a story on basic... Mar 11 2006, 08:27 AM Tellie Ok...here's mine....
Janus silently snuck f... Mar 11 2006, 12:55 PM Taillus I thought she was going to survive until the very ... Mar 11 2006, 03:50 PM jack cloudy Two nice stories. Taillus showed greed in its wors... Mar 11 2006, 04:17 PM Kell-Reevor Great work Taillus, you provided us with a very im... Mar 11 2006, 06:31 PM Agent Griff Nice story Telendil. A few grammar mistakes here a... Mar 11 2006, 07:30 PM Tellie Oh that one I enjoyed griffie, as always the ordin... Mar 11 2006, 09:24 PM Agent Griff Thanks for the kind words. I tried to capture the ... Mar 11 2006, 09:28 PM jack cloudy haha, how though are you now, Ordinator?! Well... Mar 12 2006, 07:22 PM Kell-Reevor Good story Griff. Ordinators were fun to pick on.... Mar 13 2006, 12:17 PM Tellie I cant believe why we suddenly stopped posting in ... Jul 12 2006, 05:56 PM jack cloudy Ouch, she's one nasty little bugger. And I mea... Jul 12 2006, 06:26 PM Tellie I think you misunderstood there a bit Cloudy....:)... Jul 12 2006, 06:34 PM jack cloudy Oh wait, my mistake. It was Telina who pulled out ... Jul 12 2006, 06:38 PM The Metal Mallet I just had this idea jumbling around in my head, j... Jul 25 2006, 06:15 PM Tellie hahaha....oh seriously that was funny. I must agre... Jul 25 2006, 06:32 PM Black Hand There is a what seemed to be a puzzle to me for ma... Aug 15 2006, 08:46 PM The Metal Mallet Ooooo very poetic Black Hand. Liked it. Aug 15 2006, 09:15 PM Agent Griff I hope no one minds if I resurrect an old thread (... Oct 23 2007, 07:46 PM minque
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