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Kell-Reevor
post Mar 2 2006, 01:50 PM
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Just a short piece I put together out of boredom. Hope you like it.

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It is dark. Two figures traverse a well trodden path out of Suran. The first is a swordsman. The second... his would-be killer.

The swordsman knows of his follower's presence. He listens attentively as the assassin follows. He is clearly untrained, and this may be his first mark. There is no rattle of quarrels or arrows. It is likely the swordsman need not fear a ranged attack.

The swordsman has made an enemy in the Nobles of Suran, and was aware that eventually they would seek his life. But he is not afraid. As a swordsman, death has followed him as a companion he has developed a deep respect for.

His trained ears pick up a sound... a soft and smooth "whif" as a dagger is pulled from a belt.

Spotting a shrine by the road, he approaches. He has no love of the Dunmer, nor has he a love for their Temple, but he is a spiritual man and pays his repects nonetheless as his killer moves in.

He moves his thumb for the guard of his sword. Years of oiling grant it silence as he nudges it from his sheath.

In a flash, he grips the weapon. Rips it from its home. Then thrusts it back, cutting into the assassin's belly. Turning, he frees the weapon with a horizontal slice, then brings the weapon up for a finishing downward cut.

The ordeal is over in a mere span of two seconds. The swordsman flips his sword to remove any blood, then returns it to it's home. He kneels in respect to the life he had just ended. If the nobleman had hired a killer even a tad more competant, the outcome would have been drastically different. If his foe had been equipped with a bow, or maybe armor, or perhaps knowledge of magick, HE would have been the one to die tonight.

He closes the dead man's eyes, mutters a short prayer... then is on his way.

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post Mar 9 2006, 06:25 PM
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Wow...That was a masterpiece just like your other one. Your short works always make a very bold statement and they are such a pleasure to read.


Thanks. It turned out a little longer than I hoped it would though.
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Kell-Reevor   One shot stories   Mar 2 2006, 01:50 PM
mplantinga   A very intriguing short story. I particularly like...   Mar 2 2006, 07:41 PM
jack cloudy   One thought popped up in my mind while reading it....   Mar 2 2006, 08:53 PM
jchamber   sorry for being a little late on the reply with...   Mar 3 2006, 01:46 AM
Taillus   I so whole heartedly agree with cloudy on this one...   Mar 2 2006, 11:21 PM
Kiln   Very nice short story Kell, very nice indeed. I r...   Mar 3 2006, 12:00 AM
Kell-Reevor   Thanks everyone, I'm glad you liked it. If an...   Mar 3 2006, 12:33 AM
Taillus   A solitary doe dips its head into a flowing stream...   Mar 3 2006, 12:54 AM
Kell-Reevor   Well written Taillus, you described the envrionmen...   Mar 3 2006, 02:11 AM
Taillus   Ha you hit the nail on the head Kell! Thanks B...   Mar 3 2006, 03:42 AM
Kell-Reevor   Sorry, guess I meant to answer this earlier. Th...   Mar 3 2006, 01:03 PM
jack cloudy   Not sure about how good this one is, but it is som...   Mar 7 2006, 10:31 PM
Agent Griff   Interesting story. Since it tells of the full moon...   Mar 8 2006, 11:12 AM
Kell-Reevor   Indeed, it does have the feeling of a small part o...   Mar 8 2006, 12:40 PM
Taillus   Very much agreed Kell. It doesn't take a well ...   Mar 8 2006, 03:55 PM
jack cloudy   Thank you and yes, Kell's story was really goo...   Mar 8 2006, 09:09 PM
Kell-Reevor   Here's another "way of the sword" st...   Mar 9 2006, 01:27 PM
Taillus   Wow...That was a masterpiece just like your other ...   Mar 9 2006, 02:44 PM
Agent Griff   I must say Kell, if there is one story I would qua...   Mar 9 2006, 06:39 PM
jack cloudy   Oh boy, this one was good. It was kind of sad thou...   Mar 9 2006, 09:57 PM
Taillus   Four adventurers stand in one of the many rooms th...   Mar 10 2006, 11:26 PM
Agent Griff   Interesting story Tallius. Basing a story on basic...   Mar 11 2006, 08:27 AM
Tellie   Ok...here's mine.... Janus silently snuck f...   Mar 11 2006, 12:55 PM
Taillus   I thought she was going to survive until the very ...   Mar 11 2006, 03:50 PM
jack cloudy   Two nice stories. Taillus showed greed in its wors...   Mar 11 2006, 04:17 PM
Kell-Reevor   Great work Taillus, you provided us with a very im...   Mar 11 2006, 06:31 PM
Agent Griff   Nice story Telendil. A few grammar mistakes here a...   Mar 11 2006, 07:30 PM
Tellie   Oh that one I enjoyed griffie, as always the ordin...   Mar 11 2006, 09:24 PM
Agent Griff   Thanks for the kind words. I tried to capture the ...   Mar 11 2006, 09:28 PM
jack cloudy   haha, how though are you now, Ordinator?! Well...   Mar 12 2006, 07:22 PM
Kell-Reevor   Good story Griff. Ordinators were fun to pick on....   Mar 13 2006, 12:17 PM
Tellie   I cant believe why we suddenly stopped posting in ...   Jul 12 2006, 05:56 PM
jack cloudy   Ouch, she's one nasty little bugger. And I mea...   Jul 12 2006, 06:26 PM
Tellie   I think you misunderstood there a bit Cloudy....:)...   Jul 12 2006, 06:34 PM
jack cloudy   Oh wait, my mistake. It was Telina who pulled out ...   Jul 12 2006, 06:38 PM
The Metal Mallet   I just had this idea jumbling around in my head, j...   Jul 25 2006, 06:15 PM
Tellie   hahaha....oh seriously that was funny. I must agre...   Jul 25 2006, 06:32 PM
Black Hand   There is a what seemed to be a puzzle to me for ma...   Aug 15 2006, 08:46 PM
The Metal Mallet   Ooooo very poetic Black Hand. Liked it.   Aug 15 2006, 09:15 PM
Agent Griff   I hope no one minds if I resurrect an old thread (...   Oct 23 2007, 07:46 PM
minque   I hope no one minds if I resurrect an old thread ...   Oct 23 2007, 08:54 PM
mplantinga   A good story. It was satisfying to see the Breton...   Oct 23 2007, 09:35 PM
Agent Griff   Well, I've had a fascination with mercenaries ...   Oct 24 2007, 09:30 AM
jack cloudy   A rather long one-shotter, but a good one none the...   Oct 24 2007, 08:23 PM
The Metal Mallet   Vivid battle scene, great characterizations. What...   Oct 25 2007, 07:03 AM
Agent Griff   Since the political intrigue of my fan fic is gett...   Nov 11 2007, 05:19 PM
jack cloudy   Reminds me of the Illias, with the description of ...   Nov 11 2007, 08:58 PM
The Metal Mallet   Very detailed and descriptive. Me likey!   Nov 11 2007, 10:07 PM
Olen   Yup. Its good. I wander if the mages were suffic...   Nov 11 2007, 10:50 PM
Agent Griff   This is the second and final installment of my lit...   Nov 12 2007, 09:19 PM
jack cloudy   Again, I was reminded of the Illias. Only with mor...   Nov 12 2007, 09:38 PM
Agent Griff   I can feel the parasite of "school lecture...   Nov 12 2007, 09:48 PM
Olen   That was a good finish to the battle, I like how y...   Nov 13 2007, 12:44 PM
mplantinga   An interesting story; I think we can forgive the f...   Nov 13 2007, 04:21 PM
Agent Griff   Well, if we were to discuss a strictly realistic b...   Nov 13 2007, 07:39 PM
jack cloudy   That looks like solid reasoning to me, Griff. Now ...   Nov 24 2007, 09:18 PM
canis216   Journal of an Imperial "Courier": Mornda...   Nov 26 2007, 06:54 AM
jack cloudy   So Al went to Cyrodiil now? And he's gotten ol...   Nov 26 2007, 07:11 PM
canis216   A little older. I set this in 3E:432, so I think t...   Nov 27 2007, 12:20 AM
Agent Griff   Hm, Nice story Jack. For some reason, I didn't...   Nov 28 2007, 05:41 PM
Olen   'Lanark... if only to admire its beauty and pe...   Nov 28 2007, 08:50 PM
Agent Griff   To clarify a little, the two rivals, Lord Regnier ...   Nov 28 2007, 10:00 PM
jack cloudy   That, and they technically were still guests. Even...   Nov 28 2007, 10:19 PM
Olen   Well its a long time since I did any writing which...   Dec 6 2007, 11:50 PM
The Metal Mallet   Note to self: Never work on the Dark Brotherhood...   Dec 7 2007, 09:11 AM
minque   Ahhhh..so many good stories here....I only wish I ...   Dec 10 2007, 11:54 PM
Agent Griff   So, this is the next part of this long short story...   Dec 20 2007, 10:23 PM
minque   So at last...I´m posting something again...Enjoy...   Dec 31 2007, 06:34 PM
treydog   Obviously, I like this one. First, it helps move ...   Jan 1 2008, 06:50 PM
blockhead   This one is a Guild Wars fanfic, not an Elder Scro...   Jan 11 2008, 12:00 AM
The Metal Mallet   Wow, that was such a touching story. Even I'm...   Jan 11 2008, 07:49 AM
Marcel Rhodes   The old Imperial walked along in the sunset, bow o...   Jan 18 2008, 08:55 AM
jack cloudy   Short, but nice. I am rather surprised at how a su...   Jan 19 2008, 11:30 AM
The Metal Mallet   Maybe he was beginning to go senile?   Jan 19 2008, 06:40 PM
Marcel Rhodes   Good point. I was thinking more of the contrast b...   Jan 21 2008, 12:33 PM
minque   Nice Marcel! really! Ahh, finally I...   Jan 22 2008, 12:50 AM
Agent Griff   Hm, I liked the story with the old imperial archer...   Feb 16 2008, 09:35 PM
canis216   I can't seem to find the old "Temple of L...   Aug 9 2008, 07:48 PM
Black Hand   They put that in my sub-forum, Ive been meaning to...   Aug 10 2008, 10:27 AM
Jac   Thadius knelt over Lorit's body, the red line ...   Nov 2 2008, 05:24 AM
seerauna   Lorit is not a very nice lady :-/o. Poor Thadius, ...   Nov 2 2008, 05:35 AM
Jac   True, but Thadius should have educated himself bet...   Nov 2 2008, 03:33 PM


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