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gamer10
post Jan 3 2006, 10:29 PM
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Luna Lioria is a story written from the perspective of a rebellious, and somewhat foolish, young Imperial girl named Luna who decides that she can no longer live with her "controlling" parents, and decides to run off on her own. To where, she doesn't know, and reality ultimately takes her by surprise. This first chapter encompasses her time spent in and around the Imperial City.

Morndas, 6th of Evening Star, Late Evening


I looked about me, the soft glow of the candle on the bedside table comforting as my gaze drifted towards the window, the panes of glass seemed barely able to hold out against the chilling winds that struck it so cruelly.

Glad I'm not a window.

I shook my head, what a silly thought, my exhaustion was getting the better of me and I felt as if I was only vaguely aware of my surroundings.

Not good, not good.

I had to stay awake, but I knew that I couldn't resist the tempting lure of a good nights sleep, and I would eventually have to give up the struggle, the enemy so relentless.

Why not leave in the morning?

My mother and father would never let me leave, let me go. I had to strike out when they were deep in their dreams. To them I was yet a child, but I knew myself to be different. I was fifteen, no longer a child, but not yet an adult. I was in between, the best stage of life for learning and experience.

I picked up my small bag containing some food, and a quill and paper, which I had taken from my mother’s desk. She would not mind I knew, because she would be nearly dead with worry over where I had gone. I felt guilty for this, but I couldn't help but wonder what awaited me as I stepped out the door into the slushy streets of Cyrodiil. Sleep could wait out the night.

The lantern I held in one hand lit the darkness that descended upon me, and it let me see my way around the familiar city.

The great houses, built solid and high, surrounded me, but provided little comfort. I could hardly see them anyway, night had set hours ago.

I had left my parents softly snoring in their bed, as I strode into a new era for myself, an era in my life of adventure. This era, I hoped, would be filled with mystifying times and tribulations for me to explore. Yet I felt wary as well, of what exactly I did not know, but I suppose it was the whole idea of leaving the Imperial Province, and journeying to a foreign land.

The night air was crisp and dry, I stood for a moment just a block or so by my judgment from my home. Gazing excitedly about me, I pondered deeply.

What if I am never to come back?

Brushing the ominous thought aside, I took a step further into the dark.

My hand took the brunt of a brick building and the lantern fell to the ground breaking open upon the icy street as the light I had been so grateful to have faded. I was thrust into the dark city of Cyrodiil, alone and without guidance. This was it, I knew, this was adventure, or at least the start of one. My stomach lurched, I was fearful, for all I had learned, all the knowledge I had gathered to this point, could not prepare me for survival on my own without others. I had no one now, I was really truly alone. The familiarity of the city drifted, and I found that I no longer knew what I thought I had.

Am I alone?

I froze, realizing that there may yet be someone who would see to it that I was not alone, and for the first time as well, I hoped to the gods that I was. The spell of fear I felt quickly left me, in a mere matter of seconds, and I regained most of the confident mental stability I had been overtaken by just a minute ago. The deepening fear had only subsided temporarily, I recognized, and it lingered with me in the back of my mind. It was the kind of fear someone got when they were about to get caught doing something they shouldn't be doing.

Without thinking, and hardly a second passed, my hand flew to my belt and my sword slashed through the air. Someone grabbed my hand, placing their own hand over my mouth. My sword however, contacted someone. I heard a shout of pain, and the collapse of a body. My hand was wet, but from what I could not see in the dark, though I guessed it to be blood.

My heart pounded as I dashed through the streets, desperate to find refuge and hide myself from the terrors that wandered here in the Imperial city.

I was barely aware of myself as I ran, panic had taken over. My sword still swung loosely from my hand as I slowed myself. I contemplated turning around and finding my way home, but I couldn't, I couldn't make myself now.

Eventually I managed to come to a complete halt, but now I was in a foreign part of the city. I had never wandered here before, and I wish I hadn't now.

There was nobody out, but I still felt my skin crawl as a shiver ran from my head to my toes. I stood there trembling, my eyes darting wildly back and forth.

A hand landed on my shoulder.

I spun around and kicked, ferociously attacking my stalker.

"Hold, hold!"

I stopped suddenly as the man kneeled, holding a hand to his stomach, his face a grimace.

"Quite a kick you've got there, is that how you greet everyone?"

I frowned, nearly sick "Do you often sneak up on young girls at night?" I asked accusingly, my hand resting on the hilt of my sword.

"Calm down miss, I didn't mean you any harm." The man looked up and grinned maliciously, I noticed, though his face was hardly visible, "You can stop shaking."

I took a few steps back.

The man's smile disappeared, "Now hold on a second, you wait right there!"

I turned in a hurry, and dashed off, only to get several feet before backing up again, as a man passed out of the shadows.

"You heard him," the strange man said, he held a sword in hand, "Stay right there."

I unsheathed my sword and lunged, luckily taking the stranger by surprise. The man didn't have time to dodge as the blade passed through him. I drew it out, and the body collapsed to the ground. Once again I found myself scurrying through the city.

It was sick; I knew what they would do to a young lady such as me, the pervasive nature of the drunks out this time of night.

I was freezing; the snow was coming down fast, wetting my clothes.

I must find somewhere to wait out the night.

Where?


I collapsed on the street, the ice and slush viciously biting at me as I pulled my knees to me and placed my head on them, noticeably shaking and shivering as my breath came in short gasps.

What am I, a child? Giving up so easily.

Yes, a child .


The world seemed so cold, both literally and metaphorically, and I had to struggle to hold my tears back.

The grim cruelty of reality took me, and I can't recall when or even how I managed to drift off into sleep as the freezing cold continued to assault me.

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gamer10
post Mar 29 2006, 10:06 PM
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This is perhaps the biggest update ever, since the first post, and it was written in a time span of forty minutes or so without any previous planning as I’d done up till then. I know where I’m going with this story, and it should only continue to develop and grow from here on out. Enjoy, and beware the many typos that probably still exist, as I haven’t taken the time to edit it.

-Gamer10

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It was getting worse, I could tell. It may not yet have been apparent to Edward, or, if Windswept was capable of realizing such things, him as well. The crew seemed to me to have taken on an intimidating air. It didn’t do to calm my nerves, nor the captain, who noticed something, thought not quite sure what, was out of place, and approached me about it as I was preparing to approach her.

The usually bright and relaxed face of Captain Ponius was filled with obvious worry as she advanced toward where I was laying in my hammock, staring impassively up at the damp wooden ceiling, and listening to the sound of Windswept breathing.

“Where’s Edward?” She asked suddenly, a hint of concern flowing out with her words as she stood above me.

I didn’t answer, because I hadn’t heard her, but she repeated herself, this time in a firm, demanding manner, which immediately secured my attention. She’d spoken as never before, her voice a mixture of anxiety, ferocity, and a surprising uncertainty.

“Luna, damn it, pay attention. Where the hell is Edward?”

I raised my head, supporting myself with my elbow as I sat up. “I don’t know, on deck I suppose, fooling around,” I told her, then shrugged.

She yanked me up by my shoulders, and I winced and pushed her off. To my surprise she grabbed hold of me tighter.

“Luna you have to find Edward now, there’s trouble, I know it. Bring Edward and yourself to my cabin, and make haste.” She hurried off, her hand drifting regularly past the hilt of her sword, which was tucked in its sheath.

I stood up and hurried to the deck, where I saw Edward leaning against a mast and talking to one of the shipmen. I quickly made my way over to him, and he stopped talking and glanced hesitantly at me, and I met his gaze and realized for a moment there that he did realize there was something happening.

“Luna,” he told me once we were alone by the mast as the other man chuckled and sauntered off, “Something terrible is happening, I heard them.”

I shot him an apprehensive glare, “Whatever, hurry up we need to get to the Captain’s cabin, then you can tell me whatever you feel like.”

He flinched at my stare, but followed after me as I made my way to the Captain’s cabin.

We entered and I let Edward enter first, shutting the door behind me and turning the lock. Captain Ponius was seated at a table and she beckoned for us to come. I took the remaining seat, and Edward sat on the ground, which was probably more comfortable anyway.

“Now I’m gonna cut to the point real quick here, I fear that we might not have much time.” I nodded, and Edward just went about looking even more frightened.

“Some of you might have noticed it, but then again you might not have, but the crew has been acting rather rowdy lately, even to the point of disobeying direct commands from myself.” She paused and lifted a goblet to her lips, then continued. “I was listening at the door of my cabin last night, and I overheard the crew, judging by what I heard that night I take it their planning to mutiny.”

I shook my head, and mouthed “no.”

“I’m afraid so Luna, there’s no possible way they were discussing anything else, I mean what else-“ she stopped, and I stopped listening. Turning our heads, we looked directly at Edward, his head was buried in his hands and he was sobbing, near silently.

“Edward,” I asked calmly, suspecting it to be a fit of fear, “What’s the matter?”

He said nothing for a long while, and as I sat there I began to get nervous, then all of a sudden he spoke up, but it was quiet and he sounded sick through his sobbing.

“I’m –sorr-rry,” he muttered, looking up at me with teary eyes and then burying his face in his hands again.

“Edward?” I asked, “Sorry for what?”

“I’m sorry.” He repeated, and he stopped crying, but his head was still protected by his hands.

“Edward, what was it you were going to tell me on deck, what were you going to say?”

He didn’t answer and I quickly grew impatient, the situation did not require this complication. I knelt in front of him, leaving my chair, and pulled his hands away from his face. “Edward, look at me and tell what this is about.”

He used his hands to push himself away from me, as if he was fleeing from danger, “I knew, Luna, I knew.”

The first question that came to mind was, “For how long?”

“Ever since – before – before you kissed me, I knew,” and he broke down sobbing again.

I was up in a moment, and I approached him rapidly, my mind racing with spite. “You knew,” I spat angrily, “You knew and you couldn’t tell me. I’d of thought that you loved me, I thought I mattered to you Edward, the same way you mattered to me.”

“You do matter to me Luna, please don’t-“ he cowered as I kicked out at him.
“Shut up!” I yelled, “Just shut up. You know what’s going to happen to us now; we’re probably going to be killed. We’re going to die because of you, because you didn’t tell us, we couldn’t escape. I hate you!”

I was on him in a fury, my hand in a fist as I pounded his face and all the rest of him I could find. All I heard was the revolting sobs of a traitor who deserved no more than death. I barely realized that I wasn’t hitting anything moments later, that I’d been pulled away by someone much stronger than myself, that I’d been thrown to the ground away from Edward. I only came to my senses when the tip of a blade was at my throat, at first I though Edward had managed to throw me off him and draw his sword, but I knew that this wasn’t his sword. It belonged to the Captain.

“Enough you stupid girl! This is not the time for such irrational behavior as you have displayed. He has admitted to his guilt, and needs sympathy, not pain. There is more than what he’s told us, I’m sure.” She sheathed her sword and offered her hand, “Indeed, Edward is not a traitor, but more of an honest, yet fearful young man caught between dire circumstances, and unsure of which path to take.”

I was breathing heavily, and I took her hand as I struggled to regain my breath. As I stood I realized my hands were wet, and I glanced down at them. At this point I nearly bent over sick, they were smeared with blood, and I glanced over at Edward, who was staring up at me in such a manner of shock that I immediately pitied him.

I started to speak “Edward-“, knowing that what I’d done was far beyond my power to repair. He’d have to forgive me of his own free will, and I mustn’t beg for forgiveness. So I said no more but felt uncomfortable as he sat there wiping his various cuts with the back of his hand and looking at the blood that’d smeared there.

“Luna,” the Captain said firmly, and my attention shifted to her. “We have a lot to do, or we will certainly face death, come now sit and let us speak. Edward will be okay, he’s not as bad as he looks, and seeing as how the ships doctor is probably involved in the mutiny, we must not call for him.”

I retook my seat, and the plotting began.

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gamer10   Luna Lioria   Jan 3 2006, 10:29 PM
minque   Ohhh......nice gamer!....very well and suggest...   Jan 3 2006, 10:36 PM
Kiln   Very interesting story Gamer, I like the way reali...   Jan 4 2006, 12:21 AM
Dantrag   Is this over, or is it going to be continued? Gr...   Jan 4 2006, 01:04 AM
Disasterpiece449   Very, very well done. Great start, you get into th...   Jan 4 2006, 09:31 PM
mplantinga   To have so much "reality" hit her in one...   Jan 6 2006, 01:30 AM
gamer10   [u]Tirdas, 7th of Evening Star, Early Morning Whe...   Jan 8 2006, 02:45 AM
mplantinga   Why is it that all the writers on this forum like ...   Jan 9 2006, 09:12 PM
Florodine of Hlaalu   Wow this is a must-read, i enjoyed the story a lot...   Jan 10 2006, 01:06 AM
Kiln   Very nice addition Gamer, the strong point of this...   Jan 11 2006, 01:40 AM
Dantrag   Nice. not much to say, other than "Who is thi...   Jan 11 2006, 02:56 AM
gamer10   I cocked an eyebrow, “You mean you’re nameless?” I...   Jan 11 2006, 10:59 PM
Kiln   Very nice piece Gamer, interesting way in which th...   Jan 11 2006, 11:22 PM
mplantinga   A very intriguing installment. I will admit that t...   Jan 12 2006, 12:11 AM
gamer10   He was sitting muttering to the dog when I tiptoed...   Jan 13 2006, 11:09 PM
mplantinga   Well, it's good to see that the two of them ha...   Jan 13 2006, 11:39 PM
Dantrag   Good installment. Maybe he was so quick to come ...   Jan 13 2006, 11:43 PM
gamer10   Their trek brought them to a port, where the leade...   Jan 21 2006, 02:17 AM
Dantrag   Nice update. Mr. Nameless' moodswings are pret...   Jan 23 2006, 04:40 PM
mplantinga   It sounds like Nameless is concealing a great dept...   Jan 24 2006, 07:15 PM
gamer10   The next morning, when I awoke, dressed and preced...   Jan 28 2006, 02:38 AM
Dantrag   good update. Lots of emotion, and the mystery of N...   Jan 28 2006, 02:41 AM
gamer10   The ship sailed on for several hours, and I went t...   Jan 28 2006, 09:06 PM
Kiln   Wonderful update Gamer, I can't wait until I f...   Jan 29 2006, 11:05 PM
mplantinga   If every installment continues to increase the dep...   Jan 30 2006, 09:19 PM
minque   I´ve just read through this whole story.....and I´...   Jan 30 2006, 10:20 PM
gamer10   “Luna?” No, no, no! “Luna?” A hand grasped...   Jan 31 2006, 07:19 PM
mplantinga   There is definitely more to this dog than meets th...   Jan 31 2006, 08:02 PM
minque   what mplantinga said! I second that fully. And...   Jan 31 2006, 09:17 PM
Kiln   Argh...it is too bad we'll have to wait for th...   Jan 31 2006, 11:09 PM
Neck' Thall   I Like This Story as well, It is very well written...   Feb 1 2006, 05:44 AM
gamer10   The ship wasn't as ominous when it came close ...   Feb 4 2006, 01:07 AM
minque   Yay! This I like, a cocky female captain....wo...   Feb 5 2006, 02:53 PM
Neck' Thall   Again, another awesome update, It's getting be...   Feb 5 2006, 04:46 PM
Kiln   Nice update Gamer, I also wonder about the captain...   Feb 5 2006, 05:46 PM
gamer10   The bunks were merely large sheets tied together, ...   Feb 6 2006, 06:51 AM
mplantinga   Excellent updates. The great depth of pain felt by...   Feb 6 2006, 06:47 PM
gamer10   I think I’ll play on the relationship forming betw...   Feb 7 2006, 06:18 AM
mplantinga   Playing indeed, you little tease. Thanks for givin...   Feb 7 2006, 07:20 PM
minque   may you be cursed......evil, thy name is "gam...   Feb 7 2006, 10:54 PM
gamer10   “Okay, well, I can’t quite remember all of it clea...   Feb 9 2006, 06:22 AM
tymestrike   Nice work. Why do I have the feeling that the flam...   Feb 9 2006, 09:34 AM
Tellie   Good Gamer really good. I wonder what will happen...   Feb 10 2006, 03:09 PM
mplantinga   Once again, you've given us just enough to get...   Feb 12 2006, 09:15 PM
gamer10   Luna.PNG Perhaps it is just my intuition that the...   Feb 17 2006, 08:23 PM
minque   Oh....amazingly thrilling.....you reeally got your...   Feb 17 2006, 09:18 PM
Kiln   It's like you enjoy leaving off in the most he...   Feb 17 2006, 10:21 PM
gamer10   “Luna?” I heard the anxious whisper of a recogniza...   Feb 24 2006, 11:14 PM
Kiln   Great first chapter Gamer, there seems to be some ...   Feb 26 2006, 12:29 AM
gamer10   Chapter 2 Over the oceans dark waters, above the...   Feb 26 2006, 10:33 PM
Sirin   Hahahahahahahahahaha!!!! :D :D ...   Feb 27 2006, 12:21 AM
Kiln   Very nice Gamer, I'm never sure what exactly t...   Feb 27 2006, 02:17 AM
gamer10   I dreaded having to wake up several hours later an...   Feb 27 2006, 07:42 PM
Kiln   I don't think it slows the story Gamer, emoti...   Feb 27 2006, 11:37 PM
gamer10   “Edward – ?! What are you doing?” He turned ...   Feb 28 2006, 07:01 PM
Tellie   + Ohhh really, it's getting better this story,...   Feb 28 2006, 07:36 PM
mplantinga   Just got caught up, and wow, this story has really...   Mar 2 2006, 12:39 AM
minque   Oh...I´m so sorry I´ve missed a lot of your update...   Mar 2 2006, 12:44 AM
gamer10   Sometimes new things can be wonderful, but on the ...   Mar 14 2006, 10:52 PM
Tellie   I'll be waiting...thanks for updatin Gamer...I...   Mar 15 2006, 04:04 PM
minque   For the sake of Azura! Another one I´ve appare...   Mar 17 2006, 09:17 PM
gamer10   It was in the early hours of the morning the follo...   Mar 28 2006, 05:49 AM
treydog   Great to see an update. The writing is sure and c...   Mar 28 2006, 04:50 PM
minque   Very nice update!.....I agree with Master trey...   Mar 29 2006, 08:18 PM
Kiln   Very nice addition here Gamer, lots of content her...   Mar 29 2006, 10:30 PM
minque   Excellent update gamer! it´s thrilling and I e...   Apr 1 2006, 04:55 PM
gamer10   WARNING: This section of the story contains severa...   Apr 2 2006, 06:27 AM
treydog   Your story is moving forward nicely- again we have...   Apr 3 2006, 02:56 PM
gamer10   And he stood up. His eyes were alight with enthus...   Apr 4 2006, 10:47 PM
Kiln   Great end to the second chapter mate, really want ...   Apr 5 2006, 03:06 AM
treydog   And the tension and excitement build... Excellent...   Apr 5 2006, 02:16 PM
Fethenwen   Wow, wow, wow, five trouple wow! (not sure if ...   Apr 19 2006, 01:12 PM
gamer10   By the time it was all over, I was in complete mis...   Apr 21 2006, 01:16 AM
Kiln   Short but just as well Gamer, I do wish I knew wha...   Apr 21 2006, 02:32 AM
minque   Well written gamer! I like it...continue pleas...   Apr 21 2006, 07:50 PM
Fethenwen   No matter if it's short, it's still someth...   Apr 22 2006, 05:17 PM
treydog   Another good addition- and another problem for our...   Apr 25 2006, 04:47 PM
mplantinga   Why does it seem that with every new installment, ...   May 1 2006, 07:16 PM
gamer10   The boat floated on for hours . . which, very unfo...   May 5 2006, 04:58 AM
Kiln   Great update Gamer, a glimmer of hope shows throug...   May 6 2006, 03:23 AM
minque   Hmm...poor Edward....I do hope he will get trough ...   May 6 2006, 08:52 PM
gamer10   Someone was groaning, muttering, tossing violently...   May 28 2006, 05:26 AM
Kiln   Great stuff, very emotional update this one. Alot...   May 28 2006, 06:39 AM
gamer10   “You hear that, someone’s snoring.” a young mans v...   May 29 2006, 09:34 PM
mplantinga   Interesting developments; it doesn't seem like...   May 30 2006, 05:39 PM
treydog   New twists and turns here- they need to be careful...   May 31 2006, 04:20 PM
gamer10   Camp indeed. . . A very large manor it was, I no...   Jun 6 2006, 04:10 AM
treydog   Another interesting update- I hope Edward will be ...   Jun 6 2006, 02:49 PM
gamer10   I sat on the bed, staring out the window, thinking...   Jun 6 2006, 10:37 PM
gamer10   Here is the foundation for the fourth chapter. Sor...   Jul 11 2006, 05:29 AM
The Metal Mallet   Yay! A post from this wonderful Fic! I r...   Jul 11 2006, 10:13 PM
jack cloudy   Oops, bad timing. :D Maybe he's got a good ex...   Jul 12 2006, 02:37 PM
minque   Ah yes....Luna! Very good as always gamer...   Jul 12 2006, 09:51 PM
gamer10   I'm terribly sorry to everyone for not being a...   Jan 6 2007, 08:01 AM
The Metal Mallet   I'm glad to hear of the resurrection of this s...   Jan 6 2007, 04:45 PM
jack cloudy   A good return indeed. I hope that her drop down th...   Jan 6 2007, 04:53 PM


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