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post Mar 29 2006, 06:55 PM
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Chapter 2. Of mad wizards duty and faith.



The Tale of Telina Delvanni. Chapter 3. In the footsteps of Vehk.

Ok, so the new chapter is up, and this will be a chapter which will have MANY artistic liberties from my part, enjoy it.


I felt rather dodgy when I woke up the next morning, I had fallen asleep with my face in a book, and I was nearly frustrated by the way my hair had been lately, so I decided to follow Serene’s suggestion to visit Milie Hastien in Balmora, so I took up my brown walking stick, and translocated to Balmora.
Milie’s shop wasn’t to difficult to find, and I was overjoyed when I saw the full closets and shelves with exquisite clothing.

-“Hmm…ok, I’ll have one of those, a little of those, two of these and a lot more”…I quickly realised what I was doing…I was a woman…a woman on a shopping spree. Something I had not done in a long time, so I enjoyed my self to the limit of breakdown of happiness…although the fact that my pouch was quite weightless now than it had been when I came in here, took away some of the delight, but no matter. Fixing my hair was a simple matter, I had previously had my hair in a long ponytail, that was gone now, and my hair was shortened so it reached just a little below my shoulders.

I said that one of my employees would return later to pick up my new clothes, and would give her the password sadalab, in order to get the clothes.

Meanwhile, I somehow felt that I had to get down to Caius…I don’t know what in the names of the tribunes made me feel that, but I did it anyway. I knocked on the door, trying to be polite…

-“Shhh…ennntrr, shhheeeee doohor isssh open”, he stubbed forth. Oh great, what drunk again…I was getting tired of dumping him in the river, but a splash and a quick run up to his house again, got him into remarkable health.

-“Wha…wha you did that for, huh”?, he screamed.

-“Because when I wish to talk to you, I’d rather do that when you are sober…understand me”?. I grabbed up the skooma bottles, the skooma pipe and the moon sugar bags, and threw them into the fireplace.

-“NOOO….MY MOON SUGAR…NOOOOOOO”, he threw himself at the floor, sobbing hysterically, at my feet.

-“Oh come on…it’s not that big a loss, you need to quit with that before you get killed…remember I saved you once, but since I don’t live here I cant watch over you all the time ok”.

HE looked up at me, thinking at what I had told him…the tears was still flowing but he seemed to have established a grip on himself.

-“You know what, you’re absolutely right, now I do have some orders for you…would you be willing to do them straight away”?, Without even waiting for the answer, he continued. “I want some notes from a man called Hasbat Antabolis, but you will have to do a little favour for him first…probably a dirty one I think”.

I mumbled something as “sure”, and walked back out…I had heard of this Hasbat, and knew that he was a member of the fighters guild here in town. True enough, I found him at the bottom of the guildhall, and I had only managed to utter the word Caius, before he started to ramble out of a dwemer puzzle box that he wanted, and that also was to be found in the ruin of Arkhngthand, just outside the imperial fort.

OK, so now I had to pass right by a fort that was probably a bit angry on me still….great. I took the difficult way, and wandered over the hill,, right behind Caius’s house, and not so long after I found the big dwemer bridge that led to the ruin, I was just walking normally over the bridge, when a man on the other side, obviously a battle mage, summoned forth a skeleton, as a warning to me.

I walked closer to him, with my hands in the air, intent on speaking to the man…or let’s say tease him a bit. I stood about ten/eleven paces away from him, when I lowered my arms, and smiled before I opened my mouth.

-“So...interesting, you’re a summoner…me to”, then I spoke the syllables of my summon storm atronach, and again the spell caused three instead of one to be summoned…I did not think something was right…but no time for that now. The skeleton looked at the three large daedras standing before him, before he gave away a bony smile ( the only smile he could give ), and turned tail, and ran like the lords of Oblivion was behind him. The atronachs stormed into the man, and started to batter him around, then they parted up, and started to play what looked a lot like some kind of ballgame with him. Finally he managed to get loose, and he ran as fast as he could forward…a long fall, and a meaty thud later made me turn over the railing and look down. The sight made me loose the little lunch I had eaten earlier today…the man had crushed his head, and all manner of entrails and blood was lying around.

The atronachs had disappeared while I was puking my brains out, so I was all alone again. I started the walk towards the entrance of the ruin again, and I was astonished…the door was blocked by a gigantic stone sphere…a little search later and I turned on a crank that would undoubtly take me in…indeed it did, and I quickly entered the ruin before the turning sphere crushed me flat. The inside was dark, and what little light there was, came from the strange dwemer lamps. I had searched the ruin for hours I thought, before I noticed a single door that I hadn’t searched…sake for the door that would lead down into the lower levels of the ruin…those who would be blocked off, until we managed to assemble the puzzle box

The door led into a room called hollow hands, and in the room, there was of course another bandit…but the Monarch was convinced that his head looked better lying on the ground. Finding the puzzle box wasn’t that difficoult, deciding what to do was something else…so I decided to do something a little mean, but hey one must have a little fun in life.

I translocated myself back to Baladas, who was more than happy to make a copy out of it, but he changed about half of the images on the copy, so poor Hasbat wouldn’t get entrance to the lower parts I’m afraid…but we would. I was particularly happy when I gave Caius the notes, so he gave me a little something…that turned out to be a ring with a nice paralyzing spell on it, so I thanked him, and told him I would drop by soon..yeah like that’ll ever happen, and then I transported myself to the Ald Rhuun temple.

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post Mar 30 2006, 10:01 PM
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Nice update Tellie, I liked your variations of the temple quests, though the way the false incarnate was treated was rather ruthless and violent it was still good. The description of the book that the character was given was funny and made me smile and I can also see that you spared our minds from the words of the dremora at the shrine, a wise choice. Fine update Tellie, please continue.


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Tellie   The Tale of Telina Delvanni. Chapter 3.   Mar 29 2006, 06:55 PM
jack cloudy   Ha ha, I liked that. You started the main quest a ...   Mar 29 2006, 07:23 PM
minque   Hehe.....really very amusing! I do like your w...   Mar 29 2006, 08:09 PM
Kiln   Great update, as usual Tellie. Sorry that I hadn...   Mar 30 2006, 02:46 PM
Taillus   Poor Caius. But a refreshing dunk in the water is ...   Mar 30 2006, 03:57 PM
Tellie   When I walked in, I realised that Tuls had been ex...   Mar 30 2006, 08:55 PM
jack cloudy   Ah, poor people. It must be bad to hear that your ...   Mar 30 2006, 09:04 PM
Agent Griff   I have gotten to reading your story and I must say...   Apr 1 2006, 08:33 AM
minque   Telina!!! you really have more hardnes...   Apr 1 2006, 04:43 PM
Tellie   Hehe...I thought some would find that funny.:) ...   Apr 1 2006, 08:34 PM
Agent Griff   Interesting update. You spelt the Dwemer Centurion...   Apr 1 2006, 08:42 PM
Tellie   Oh...i know in general it is called animunculi.....   Apr 1 2006, 09:31 PM
Tellie   Ok, so I have been a little to happy today, so I w...   Apr 2 2006, 12:54 AM
Agent Griff   Great update, I'm really starting to love this...   Apr 2 2006, 07:52 AM
jack cloudy   That was great. Interesting riddles. And the part ...   Apr 2 2006, 06:23 PM
Tellie   Ok, this is the part where the artistic liberties ...   Apr 5 2006, 04:32 PM
Agent Griff   Oh great! Ordinators! I always wanted to j...   Apr 5 2006, 05:33 PM
jack cloudy   Brilliant! And Telina is a Dunmer, so she can ...   Apr 5 2006, 05:49 PM
Ola Martin   Your story is great tellie :D It would be cool wit...   Apr 5 2006, 06:52 PM
Tellie   True enough. The day afterwards must have been one...   Apr 8 2006, 11:36 PM
Agent Griff   Wonderful update! I really liked the raid into...   Apr 9 2006, 05:10 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Haven't kept up with many fan fictions here si...   Apr 9 2006, 05:11 PM
minque   Holy muffin! Tellie an Ordinator? Now that is ...   Apr 9 2006, 06:11 PM
Tellie   Hehe..nice to see you back fuzzy...and you minkey....   Apr 9 2006, 07:47 PM
Agent Griff   Great update! I loved it how Telina beat those...   Apr 9 2006, 08:33 PM
jack cloudy   She joined the High Inquisition? Does this mean th...   Apr 9 2006, 09:07 PM
Elidor   Excellent as usual:goodjob: I liked the mind contr...   Apr 11 2006, 03:04 AM
DarkHunter   poor Casius... i've had that done to me by som...   Apr 11 2006, 12:22 PM
Taillus   Muahaha the mind control was hilarous. Poor guy di...   Apr 11 2006, 02:27 PM
Tellie   I'mjust going to infor that the next update is...   Apr 11 2006, 03:49 PM
DarkHunter   Nice :evil: I think the nercomancer learned his ...   Apr 11 2006, 03:58 PM
Kiln   Gah, I just noticed that there were new posts here...   Apr 14 2006, 08:56 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Superb :D Very nice as always, keep it up - Noth...   Apr 14 2006, 09:05 PM
Tellie   Ok, here comes the long awaited, (hopefully) updat...   Apr 15 2006, 07:04 PM
Red   Awesome Update Tellie and yes it has been long awa...   Apr 16 2006, 12:19 AM
jack cloudy   Ouch, remind me to recall the moment the Ordinator...   Apr 16 2006, 11:37 AM
Agent Griff   Great update. Telina's career is blosoming. Le...   Apr 16 2006, 01:26 PM
Tellie   Hehe....I do so know Griffie...but the Ordinators ...   Apr 16 2006, 01:42 PM
Agent Griff   That's exactly what I was saying. Because they...   Apr 16 2006, 07:46 PM
minque   Ehhh yes.....Mr Oven just said it all......my my...   Apr 16 2006, 09:01 PM
tymestrike   *cowers in a corner of the room* Telina scares me ...   Apr 17 2006, 05:43 AM
Konradude   :P Finally caught up on it, great job. :) Nice ac...   Apr 18 2006, 07:49 PM
Kiln   Great update Tellie, this chapter was just as inte...   Apr 19 2006, 12:31 AM
Tellie   This one, I write in memory of Jonajosa, a dear fo...   Apr 19 2006, 04:49 PM
Konradude   He's dead! And we were just getting to kno...   Apr 19 2006, 05:00 PM
jack cloudy   No, not Haldin! :( Beyond the tragic death, ...   Apr 19 2006, 05:37 PM
Konradude   I do feel that with killing off Haldin you have st...   Apr 20 2006, 06:05 PM
Tellie   Ok, today is only a little short one...but I do ho...   Apr 20 2006, 06:42 PM
Konradude   Ah...moving onto a main quest are we? I didn't...   Apr 20 2006, 06:44 PM
minque   This is deep Tellie! Oh my, I was very sorry t...   Apr 20 2006, 09:57 PM
Agent Griff   Oh, moving on to Mournhold are we? Great. The past...   Apr 21 2006, 07:59 AM
Tellie   I'm sorry griffie, I cant do that...since the ...   Apr 21 2006, 09:42 AM


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