 The life of Nethemi Ocatu [WIP:P] |
| Konji |
 Apr 14 2006, 09:56 PM
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After a long time away from writing I'm ready to tell of Nethemi's life, starting with his birth, childhood and relative history, all the way to the reason and reasoning behind why he enered the Imperial prison.
 Also just done 4 sides of A4 notes on his first few encounters in the ayleid ruins across the from the starting sewers...still haven't found what's at the end.  Watch this space. This post has been edited by Konradude: Apr 14 2006, 09:56 PM --------------------   |
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| Kiln |
Apr 17 2006, 11:44 PM
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Oh I'd already read the first part Konrad, just that I was waiting on more content and I didn't notice that you'd added so much sense I had last checked this thread. Sorry man, its a good read with a good balance of drama and plot building so please continue.
-------------------- He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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Konradude The life of Nethemi Ocatu [WIP:P] Apr 14 2006, 09:56 PM
Konradude The life of Nethemi Ocatu I
As my last breath bl... Apr 14 2006, 10:08 PM Konradude I can but smile at the irony of it. From a birth r... Apr 16 2006, 11:56 PM treydog This is great writing. I really like the new race... Apr 17 2006, 04:59 PM Konradude Sorry for this boring bit but I feel it is needed ... Apr 17 2006, 09:20 PM Konradude Well it's finally starting to pick up.
It wa... Apr 17 2006, 09:57 PM Konradude Getting exciting now!! Heck, maybe someone... Apr 17 2006, 10:44 PM Konradude The journey within the catacombs was extensive and... Apr 17 2006, 11:54 PM Konradude Another update...I can't help but double post.... Apr 18 2006, 07:18 PM Konradude On a completely unrelated note, can you claim comp... Apr 18 2006, 10:39 PM MerGirl *clap* Very good! :) I liked how you added a ... Apr 19 2006, 12:01 AM Konradude Thanks! The whole bit from the cell to leaving... Apr 19 2006, 12:09 AM
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Ah, yes, I know how that feels (trying to recall... Apr 19 2006, 12:15 AM Konradude A nice small update
It must have been reaching s... Apr 19 2006, 03:02 PM Konradude The next Installment
I crawled up to the lip of t... Apr 19 2006, 10:59 PM Tellie So...sorry for not answering sooner...I like the s... Apr 20 2006, 07:16 PM Konradude thanks for the comments! A more humorous updat... Apr 20 2006, 09:40 PM minque This is one remarkable story, so vivid description... Apr 20 2006, 10:53 PM treydog You have really captured the wonder and feel of Ob... Apr 21 2006, 05:36 PM Konradude thanks for all your comments - just checked, and i... Apr 21 2006, 07:18 PM jack cloudy Ah, finally caught up with it. And I like it! Apr 22 2006, 08:18 PM sins_to_dark Yeah ive been following this story and i really li... Jul 2 2006, 05:34 PM |
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