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Konji
post Apr 14 2006, 09:56 PM
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After a long time away from writing I'm ready to tell of Nethemi's life, starting with his birth, childhood and relative history, all the way to the reason and reasoning behind why he enered the Imperial prison. smile.gif

Also just done 4 sides of A4 notes on his first few encounters in the ayleid ruins across the from the starting sewers...still haven't found what's at the end. tongue.gif

Watch this space.

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Konji
post Apr 19 2006, 03:02 PM
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A nice small update


It must have been reaching seven in the evening when I stepped cautiously onto the planks of the jetty. As I walked to the end of it I shivered gently, peering down at the water below me. The river glistened in the brilliance of the glow from the appearing stars, reflecting Secunda perfectly in its calm waters. I would have to swim in that shortly, if I was going to get anything done for the day…or find a place where I wasn’t going to freeze to death. A small boat was beached by the side of the jetty, but without oars and in its position it would take me hours to get it in the water then the only good it would do me would be getting me lost at sea.

I strapped my various pouches up tightly, wary of the damage water could do. I decided not to jump in, but walk slowly in from the side with my bow, quiver and scrolls above my head. This would keep some of my more fragile items safe, while making sure I didn’t drown myself in the shock of jumping into freezing water. I slowly stepped into the water, barely holding back a cure as the thin liquid seeped through my threadbare trousers and chilled my skin. I kept my arms straight as I delved deeper down into the depths, standing on tiptoes until it was impossible and kicking out with my legs to paddle across slowly. I had to thank my mother for teaching me how to swim – I suppose living in the waterfront was a good thing after all.

Finally, as the land rose once more to meet the open air, my feet scurried up the embankment and I collapsed in a heap on the floor. My legs were aching, but my equipment was in the best condition possible. That would make it easier for them to sell, and I could get myself some real toys to play with.

I strapped my bow back onto my side and slipped the quiver over my head. It was time to investigate.


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Konradude   The life of Nethemi Ocatu [WIP:P]   Apr 14 2006, 09:56 PM
Konradude   The life of Nethemi Ocatu I As my last breath bl...   Apr 14 2006, 10:08 PM
Konradude   I can but smile at the irony of it. From a birth r...   Apr 16 2006, 11:56 PM
treydog   This is great writing. I really like the new race...   Apr 17 2006, 04:59 PM
Konradude   Sorry for this boring bit but I feel it is needed ...   Apr 17 2006, 09:20 PM
Konradude   Well it's finally starting to pick up. It wa...   Apr 17 2006, 09:57 PM
Konradude   Getting exciting now!! Heck, maybe someone...   Apr 17 2006, 10:44 PM
Kiln   Oh I'd already read the first part Konrad, jus...   Apr 17 2006, 11:44 PM
Konradude   The journey within the catacombs was extensive and...   Apr 17 2006, 11:54 PM
Konradude   Another update...I can't help but double post....   Apr 18 2006, 07:18 PM
Konradude   On a completely unrelated note, can you claim comp...   Apr 18 2006, 10:39 PM
MerGirl   *clap* Very good! :) I liked how you added a ...   Apr 19 2006, 12:01 AM
Konradude   Thanks! The whole bit from the cell to leaving...   Apr 19 2006, 12:09 AM
MerGirl   Ah, yes, I know how that feels (trying to recall...   Apr 19 2006, 12:15 AM
Konradude   The next Installment I crawled up to the lip of t...   Apr 19 2006, 10:59 PM
Tellie   So...sorry for not answering sooner...I like the s...   Apr 20 2006, 07:16 PM
Konradude   thanks for the comments! A more humorous updat...   Apr 20 2006, 09:40 PM
minque   This is one remarkable story, so vivid description...   Apr 20 2006, 10:53 PM
treydog   You have really captured the wonder and feel of Ob...   Apr 21 2006, 05:36 PM
Konradude   thanks for all your comments - just checked, and i...   Apr 21 2006, 07:18 PM
jack cloudy   Ah, finally caught up with it. And I like it!   Apr 22 2006, 08:18 PM
sins_to_dark   Yeah ive been following this story and i really li...   Jul 2 2006, 05:34 PM


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