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jack cloudy
post Apr 17 2006, 12:25 PM
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Alright, this is my next fan fic. Know that I don't have the whole storyline thought out yet, so it might become a bit messy.

Also, it takes place approximately 2 years after the events of Oasis.


The cursed blood.

Chapter 1: The Celebration.

Seas around Vvardenfell.

Slowly, the ship drifted amongst the waves. The only sign of life were the torches burning on the bow and stern. Or was that all? No. At the bow one man stood, gazing at the sky. He was old, with long flowing hair as white as snow. He stood there like a statue, only moving on his heels to compensate for the boat’s movements.

A High Elf opened the door and looked over the deck. There was the man he’d been looking for. He took a quick glance at the sky and sighed. Then, he moved over to join the old man.

,,In a few nights, the moons will be full again.” He said. The Old man remained silent. Finally, after two long minutes, he spoke.
,,You know I don’t fear the servants of the moon.”
The High Elf touched an amulet hanging around his neck, lost in deep thought. The amulet was beautifully crafted and looked just like the moon.

,,I know, how could I forget? I was merely speaking to myself.”
,,Yes, so I noticed. We should reach the island before the moon is full. It has been a long time. Perhaps you should join the hunt once more.” The old man said.

,,I will think about it. We are drinking a bottle of whine below deck. If you like you may join us.” With those words, the High Elf left.

The old man however, remained behind. He didn’t go downstairs and instead waited till he saw the land appear on the horizon. The land had called him and he realized he had much to do with only little time. He smiled at the thought. It had been many years since he had last worried about not having enough time at his disposal.
,,So we’ll meet again, old friend.” He muttered and finally joined the people below deck.

Venim Manor.
The room looked as if a tornado had passed through it. Actually, that was exactly what had happened, with the only difference that the tornado was made out of two people rather than wind. One of the two was a Redguard who wielded her sword with precision, making sure that not a single movement was wasted. Her opponent, was different. Much younger, the Dunmer girl fought with the enthusiasm and unlimited stamina of youth.

The two went back and forth as their swords clashed over and over. In the end, the Dunmer girl got the upper hand and forced the Redguard against the wall. She smiled as she prepared to land the final blow. Her sword hit the wall instead of the Redguard who had dove around the blade and was now behind the Dunmer. Instead of feeling her sword hit the Redguard, the Dunmer felt the tip of a sword on her own neck.

,,Not bad, mylady. For a moment, I really thought I had much work to do. Most mainland people aren’t very experienced.” The Redguard said and smiled.
,,Admit it, you were worried that you were going to lose for a moment.” The Dunmer replied.
,,Now don’t go too far with your pride. Your technique still needs a lot of work and it will take a while before I can truly call you a warrior.”
The Redguard took the two swords and returned them to their weaponrack, after putting the rack back in the position it stood in before it was knocked over.

There was a polite knock on the door and after a few seconds, a Dunmer entered the room.
,,Tsk, are you busy again.” The man said and shook his head.
,,I know I can’t stop you from doing this, Jana. But please, don’t go challenging people to duels in the middle of the night. You two are keeping everyone awake with all that noise.”
The man continued with a smile that took the sharpness out of his words. He then turned to the Redguard.

,,So Neminda, how is she?”
,,Not too bad, but not too good either.” The Redguard responded. She didn’t knew what to think. Maybe it was stupid for her to have gone along with the idea of the young Dunmer, but that enthusiasm was simply contagious.

Athus Mirhtri had recently arrived from the mainland and taken residence in Venim manor. He was a high-ranking member of House Redoran but also a man who didn’t quite fit in with the rest of the house. The biggest problem that most people had with him was the fact that despite being in a House that demanded of its members that they knew how to fight, he’d never held a weapon in his entire life.

,,I see. Could you, teach her a few tricks perhaps? That should keep her satisfied and out of trouble. But not before the sun rises.” Athus turned around to leave.
,,By the way, your dress for the celebration just arrived. You might try it on to see if it fits. But first, go take a bad.” He said and walked out.


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jack cloudy
post Apr 25 2006, 07:08 PM
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Nah, I still pay attention during classes. It is just that I sometimes have like 50 minutes between one class and the next. That is way too long to walk up two stairs. So I sit down and start writing. Besides, I never feel like having lunch, so i get an extra 45 minutes just from that.

This is the first update. I am still working on the next one that I already wrote down on bits of paper. (Lots of free time at school.)
I just realized something. If there was a list that ranked fan fiction characters on their Uberdness factor, Aureus would be pretty high on the list. It is not so apparent in this update, but it will be in the next. evillol.sml.gif




Raxle Berne tried to swallow back his fear but failed miserably. Why was it his clan that the man decided to visit?
,,They went southwest, to Suran or Vivec. That is all I know, I swear. Now please let me live, I mean you no harm!”
Aureus looked at the vampire with cold eyes.
,,Don’t worry, for I shall not harm you. If however, you go too far with this wimpering behaviour, I might reconsider.” He said and the trails of magicka that whirled around him expanded in a thin mist that felt warm to the touch.

Raxle Berne looked at the dead vampire against the wall once the two had left. At least it wasn’t him who had been killed by the man. Odd, the corpse didn’t look like a vampire at all. He then looked at his own hands and realized what had happened. He had been cured.
,,NOOO!!!” He screamed.

Outside, they were greeted by the sight of a campfire with a few lumps of meat hanging above it. Next to the fire, an Altmer sat who was whistling a tune while cooking the meat.
,,Really, how am I supposed to keep up with you if you go running all over the island?” Jalin said and shook his head.

,,Something came up.” Aureus responded and turned around.
,,Now we will talk about you, girl. You will go straight back to Ald’rhun where you shall remain and forget about all this. This is my task and I can’t be bothered to look after another Mirhtri! You both have this horrible talent for getting into trouble.” Jana’s mouth fell wide open. She’d gotten so used to his polite manners that this blunt way of talking was simply shocking. And there was something else.
,,How did you know my name?”

,,I observe and draw my conclusions. You don’t look like your father, but you share the same spirit. And Athus wouldn’t just give his sword to anyone. Now get your feet on the road back to Ald’rhun, you have nothing to do with this and I would like to keep it that way. Jalin, pack that meat and put out the fire. We’re leaving.” Aureus said and began to walk to the south with the Altmer soon following.

Jana stood in front of the vampire’s lair for a while. As she thought of it, she got very angry with the whole situation.
,,Now wait a minute. It is my father who has been killed and not his. Besides, who in the name of Akatosh does he think he is?” She muttered and ran off in the direction the two men were headed.

,,Wait up!” The two men stopped and turned around when they heard the voice. Behind them, the Dunmer girl skidded to a halt and stood there gasping for breath.
,,I’m going with you, like it or not.” She said with a defiant tone.
Jalin frowned. He’d seen the first signs of vampirism. Why were it always the scary types that met up with the old man?
,,Just do it, Aureus. Your not going to get rid of her. Besides, she’s just your type.” He said with a chuckle. Aureus shrugged and began to walk again. He waved his hand to tell them to follow.

,,Jalin, go and look up on some clues. We’re looking for a Silver Eye and a Dunmer with one hand. Jana, you will need some better clothes, so follow me.” Aureus said once they’d barely put a foot within the city of Suran. He then pushed the girl into the nearest clothier.

,,Good morning, can I hel….Out! I don’t want vampires here! Out, or I’ll call the gua…” The clothier was cut off by a cloud of magicka that entered his mouth. When he next opened his mouth, no sound came out. Jana was looking unhappy. Was it already visible? She ran a finger across her teeth and noticed to her horror that they had grown.

Another cloud of magicka sailed towards the clothier.
,,You will help this girl with finding a hooded cloak of good quality. You won’t call the guards or try anything else. We’ll be gone here soon.” Aureus then pulled a large bag of gold out of nowhere and put it down on the counter. ,,Here’s a small compensation.”

The clothier was still silenced when he moved away from the counter and directed the girl to a rack filled with cloaks in all kinds of colours. Jana wandered across the racks like a small child at her birthday. Should she take the red one or the blue one?
,,Have you decided?” Aureus asked after at least an hour.
,,Umm, yes. I’ll take the ….black one.”

Jalin was sitting on a bench and was busy with cleaning his crossbow that was slightly bloodstained.
,,Finally done? I’ve figured out where our vampire went. Too bad I had to put a bolt into a drunkard from point-blank range. Anyway, our friend is headed towards Vivec.” The Altmer said without looking up.
Aureus looked in the direction of the city and noticed the first few rays of the sun looming over the mountains.

,,We’ll take a siltstrider after nightfall. In the meantime, I’ll find a place where we can get our guest out of the sun.” He said and pointed at Jana.
Jalin rolled his eyes. ,,Sorry, but I’ll pass on this one. No fleas for me. I’ll walk. See you there.” He said, got up and wandered out of the gate.

,,Now, I suggest you stay in your room. I’ll bring you some diner when it is time. Sorry about this, but I am going to put you on a bloodless diet. Your looks won’t improve, but it won’t hurt your conscience.” The old man told her when he shoved her into a room. The room had been paid for by a big bag of gold just like the one he gave to the clothier. Where did he get those from?

Jana looked around the room. It was small, dirty and there was nothing to do. She moved to the nearby mirror and recoiled in horror at the sight. Her vampirism had indeed progressed. Her skin had taken on a sickening light green and her eyes were now pink rather than red. Her teeth were longer and sharper and worst of all, she looked a few hundred years older than she actually was. She smashed the mirror with her sword in frustration. ,,I hate vampires!”

Aureus in the meantime was sitting in the tavern doing something he hadn’t done in a long time. He was getting drunk. ,,Why couldn’t the young fool tell me exactly what was going on in that letter instead of simply saying that there was big trouble. If he did, I wouldn’t have taken a nap in the inn right outside his house.” The man muttered and stared blankly ahead.

A wounded Dunmer with a huge scar covering part of his face sat at the other side of the table. ,,Sorry, but there is no free table left. Mind if I sit here?” He asked and put a short sword on the floor.
,,No, go ahead.”

,,Thank you. Stupid Cliffracers. If they didn’t exist, I would be so much happier. And less wounded.” The Dunmer continued, oblivious to the fact that Aureus wasn’t in the mood to talk.
,,Sure, I know a way to get them off the island. I’ll write it down on a piece of paper for you.” Aureus responded.

The Dunmer looked at the piece of paper he got and let out a cry of joy.
,,Brilliant! I, Jiub, am in your debt. Now I can make those accursed Cliffracers leave Vvardenfell.” Jiub shouted and ran out of the door. It was then that Aureus realized what he’d done. But he couldn’t be worried about it, not now.
,,I wonder what will happen to the ecosystem without any Cliffracers. Every creature has its place. Oh well, it’s time to bring the girl some diner.” He muttered and emptied his cup.


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jack cloudy   The cursed blood.   Apr 17 2006, 12:25 PM
Agent Griff   Oh, so you're continuing that tale you started...   Apr 17 2006, 01:21 PM
minque   Nice Mr Cloudy-man! This is very promising, I ...   Apr 17 2006, 02:42 PM
Tellie   Whohoo...thanks for starting up so soon again clou...   Apr 17 2006, 10:06 PM
jack cloudy   Thank you all. Since it is rather confusing to wea...   Apr 18 2006, 04:39 PM
minque   Ahhh Cloudy-man! Great work....very interestin...   Apr 18 2006, 09:27 PM
jack cloudy   And the next part with the Dunmer girl. Umm, I am ...   Apr 19 2006, 05:45 PM
Tellie   O_oh...this is interesting...an angry Dunmer girl ...   Apr 19 2006, 06:09 PM
jack cloudy   Glad you like it. But, which of the three men is t...   Apr 19 2006, 07:06 PM
Taillus   Ahh Cloudy. Starting anew much like myself. I real...   Apr 19 2006, 10:28 PM
jack cloudy   Alright, things are heating up. Ald’Rhun, in fr...   Apr 20 2006, 04:23 PM
Tellie   Yes...another update...*celebrates...:cake:* A wo...   Apr 20 2006, 09:06 PM
minque   Ouch! getting smashed into the wall doesn´t so...   Apr 20 2006, 11:14 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry, but I've got a role laid out for the li...   Apr 21 2006, 06:17 PM
minque   Oh my! This IS getting veeery thrilling, I lov...   Apr 21 2006, 07:45 PM
DarkHunter   very good man, it's getting interesting, (very...   Apr 21 2006, 09:02 PM
jack cloudy   Agh, I diffused the whole situation too fast. Damn...   Apr 22 2006, 08:10 PM
jack cloudy   Balmora In Balmora, Aureus said goodbye and enter...   Apr 23 2006, 09:03 PM
minque   Brilliant Mr Cloudy! Just sheer brilliant........   Apr 23 2006, 09:19 PM
Agent Griff   As was said by the wise woman of the forum, excele...   Apr 24 2006, 09:04 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry about not updating. I promise I'll work ...   Apr 25 2006, 06:50 AM
Agent Griff   I'll wait, don't worry. Reading your story...   Apr 25 2006, 06:58 AM
Taillus   Aureus really and truly kicks so much A$...   Apr 25 2006, 03:16 PM
jack cloudy   Jana was having the same dream again. She was back...   Apr 25 2006, 08:02 PM
Agent Griff   Wow! Now this guy is too damn invincible! ...   Apr 26 2006, 05:26 PM
jack cloudy   Yeah, I think I just went a bit overboard there. W...   Apr 26 2006, 07:07 PM
Kiln   Great update Jack, interesting way to end that las...   Apr 26 2006, 07:15 PM
HyPN0   This is a very nice fan fiction B) But seriusly,t...   Apr 27 2006, 02:36 PM
minque   Mournhold! City of Light City of Magic.....yea...   Apr 27 2006, 10:24 PM
Agent Griff   You really are a master writer! I hope you wri...   Apr 29 2006, 09:25 AM
jack cloudy   Last time I checked it seemed as if all the battle...   Apr 29 2006, 11:46 AM
Agent Griff   Repul Dakla? It isn't quite an original name i...   Apr 29 2006, 12:58 PM
jack cloudy   Well actually, I used quite a long time while thin...   Apr 29 2006, 01:59 PM
HyPN0   OMG! More,More,More! This is just becoming...   Apr 29 2006, 02:24 PM
Agent Griff   Oh, I think I know what this Repul's real name...   Apr 29 2006, 04:06 PM
Taillus   This is an amazing story Jack! Far better then...   Apr 30 2006, 04:26 PM
jack cloudy   It is always pleasing to hear that people like it....   Apr 30 2006, 09:12 PM
minque   As I commented on Mr Oven´s story...what can i sa...   Apr 30 2006, 09:23 PM
jack cloudy   Alright a small update with a small surprise. (Or ...   May 1 2006, 07:12 PM
DarkHunter   Thats suicide... both what you did to Vivic and wh...   May 1 2006, 11:42 PM
Agent Griff   I knew Repul was bound to be Luper from the moment...   May 2 2006, 08:22 AM
Taillus   I definately have my suspicions that Aureus used t...   May 3 2006, 04:37 PM
Agent Griff   A good chalenge? With his 1337 skills Aureus would...   May 3 2006, 05:26 PM
jack cloudy   Tsk, young people just haven't seen true wisdo...   May 3 2006, 06:56 PM
minque   Oh la la Mr Cloudy! very interesting.....It´s ...   May 3 2006, 08:03 PM
Agent Griff   Brilliant writing Jack! I just loved the discu...   May 5 2006, 06:26 PM
jack cloudy   *Bows humbly in front of the audience.* Thank you,...   May 5 2006, 08:11 PM
Agent Griff   Strange village that is. Anyway, some things were ...   May 6 2006, 07:02 AM
Taillus   I do agree that it is wisdom that is true power. T...   May 6 2006, 04:52 PM
Agent Griff   Weren't there some awards given to writers? I ...   May 6 2006, 06:26 PM
Sirin   Holy Cow!!! I started reading this yes...   May 7 2006, 02:34 PM
jack cloudy   First of all, thank you for liking this. Now I...   May 7 2006, 03:14 PM
Sirin   Clever little trick, there, with the ranged Mark s...   May 7 2006, 03:22 PM
Agent Griff   The Redguard in the Arena is the local Blademaster...   May 7 2006, 03:50 PM
jack cloudy   I'll be sure to buy Oblivion someday. But then...   May 8 2006, 08:24 PM
Agent Griff   Interesting, Luper goes to help Aureus. I hope it...   May 8 2006, 08:40 PM
Sirin   Brilliant! Keep going! Onward!   May 10 2006, 01:22 PM
Taillus   I think the cursed blood story has become my favor...   May 10 2006, 05:00 PM
minque   Ah yes..sweet Jana has really got right to me...   May 10 2006, 06:47 PM
jack cloudy   My computer has crashed so I won’t be on for a whi...   May 12 2006, 12:51 PM
minque   oh....I´m sorry to hear that! But keep up your...   May 13 2006, 04:09 PM
DarkHunter   :D Yeah, I do that too Jack :) The librairians hat...   May 13 2006, 04:51 PM
Sirin   I just watched Chronicles of Narnia. I'm prett...   May 15 2006, 01:04 PM
jack cloudy   Well, I know it is pretty annoying and really frus...   May 21 2006, 09:59 AM
jack cloudy   The Lich led her to one of the few buildings that ...   May 24 2006, 11:28 AM
Agent Griff   Wonderful updates! With what you've writte...   May 25 2006, 06:15 PM
DarkHunter   ... ... ... YAAAAAHHHHHHOOOOOO!!!...   May 25 2006, 08:21 PM
jack cloudy   Update alert, don’t you love school? Anyway, a big...   May 31 2006, 08:42 AM
DarkHunter   :lol: No keys for Luper... Cauis, Eh? hmmm this sh...   May 31 2006, 11:08 AM
mplantinga   Just found this one, and read it straight through....   Jun 1 2006, 09:47 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry, but no more vamp vs vamp. I just didn't...   Jun 3 2006, 02:50 PM
Agent Griff   Um, is Caius really held in a cell ingame? You got...   Jun 4 2006, 01:28 PM
jack cloudy   I have no idea where he is in Oblivion. Besides, t...   Jun 4 2006, 07:00 PM
mplantinga   Intriguing developments. I would have thought they...   Jun 5 2006, 08:36 PM
jack cloudy   Hmm, I totally forgot about the Battlemage traditi...   Jun 8 2006, 08:43 PM
Kiln   Great story as usual mate, good descriptions and d...   Jun 8 2006, 09:08 PM
DarkHunter   :O hmmm... Good writing... puzzle.. hmmmm....   Jun 9 2006, 11:21 AM
jack cloudy   Wow, the only scene that I have firmly and complet...   Jun 11 2006, 07:56 PM
treydog   This is a quite wonderful story- ambitious and wid...   Jun 12 2006, 01:44 AM
minque   Yes, what treydog said just about sums it up! ...   Jun 12 2006, 11:49 PM
mplantinga   I was intrigued by the part about the sword contai...   Jun 14 2006, 05:54 PM
jack cloudy   Glad you all like it. I don't know how to add ...   Jun 16 2006, 08:52 PM
minque   Ok..short, but nevertheless a very good one! I...   Jun 17 2006, 06:18 PM
jack cloudy   Funny, the closer I get to the end, the harder it ...   Jun 18 2006, 08:21 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well now, hopefully Aureus makes it. Being the cr...   Jun 18 2006, 10:29 PM
Tellie   I am so sorry for not having kept up with your sto...   Jun 19 2006, 11:46 PM
DarkHunter   Whoa... so much happened since last time I check ...   Jun 20 2006, 11:18 AM
jack cloudy   Oh boy, the final battle! :D Enjoy the update...   Jun 20 2006, 06:12 PM
minque   Uj uj.......brilliant Mr Cloudy! Fast moving, ...   Jun 20 2006, 06:51 PM
DarkHunter   :O how will it end?!? :O Must see ending..... ...   Jun 20 2006, 08:32 PM
The Metal Mallet   I forsee an epic battle... of course, wouldn't...   Jun 20 2006, 10:03 PM
jack cloudy   No update yet, sorry. This is a battle I want to t...   Jun 21 2006, 09:48 PM
jack cloudy   Finally the update has arrived. As for the posting...   Jun 24 2006, 10:09 PM
The Metal Mallet   Wooo!!! Semi-heart attack action!...   Jun 25 2006, 12:48 AM
DarkHunter   Ooooo... The evil dude (I'm not good on typing...   Jun 25 2006, 01:09 AM
jack cloudy   Update! The battle continues! Who knows, I...   Jun 27 2006, 09:30 PM
The Metal Mallet   Time for me to sound really cheesy.... DUN DUN DU...   Jun 27 2006, 10:04 PM
jack cloudy   And another one. A cheap ending, but I've been...   Jun 27 2006, 10:14 PM
The Metal Mallet   Woo! Nice ending of the conflict, poetic for ...   Jun 27 2006, 10:23 PM
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