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Taillus
post Apr 29 2006, 04:26 AM
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Chapter 2 already? Man and I thought that this was going to be a short fic.... oh well I really got a ball rolling with this one and I have just decided what I want to do with it evillol.sml.gif Oh yeah am I ever excited about this one. Anyway here is the beginning of Chapter 2 and I promise everyone things will pick up just bear with me...

Chapter 2 - Kvatch is a Good Place to Visit But...



I distinctly remember myself saying that I would be ready for anything that was thrown at me in Kvatch. I could not be so wrong. In fact, I doubt there would be anything that could brace me for what I would experience. As I traveled the winding path that led to Kvatch I could tell that there was something out of the ordinary happening there today and I was sure it wasn’t a town celebration or holiday.

Usually holidays do not involve the smell of burning…everything. A dark black smoke rose from the city and billowed overhead to the point of making the sky appear later then it actually was. As I continued down the path, I could see some tents and such littered in a clearing not far from town. There was a small fire in the middle and the people around it didn’t look very happy at all.

Looking up the hill I could see that Kvatch itself had seen much better days. From what I could see from my vantage point, the Castle was on its last legs and was probably about ready to crumble. Something was horribly wrong here.

Children crying and mothers weeping it seemed as though no one was very happy at all. There were people that were wounded badly and some that were just barely clinging to life itself. Something was happening in Kvatch indeed and I was about to find out exactly what.

“Dear sir it is not a day to be sightseeing at all. Kvatch is completely destroyed and many are dead. It is a sad time for all indeed.” A man says as he breaks down into tears. I console him for a few moments until he calms down enough for me to find out what is going on.

“They appeared almost out of nowhere. Fiery gates containing evil Daedra that burned our houses and killed all of our loved ones without even an ounce of remorse for our people. We had no time to retaliate at all. They just slaughtered us all before we had any clue.” The man says as he points to his town.

“There are a few soldiers left up there trying to hold them back but I don’t think I can fight anymore. Part of me just wants to walk through one of those gates and be done with it!” He sobs as he walks away.

I broke into a run as I quickly made my way up the hill to what was left of Kvatch. There is no way that Martin is dead. I refused to believe it. I didn’t even take the time to check if he was amongst the people that I had met. I just focused on getting up the hill to help the last soldiers push back the Daedra. I met a few men that were standing on the other side of a wood and rock barricade but they were barely able to keep back the forces of evil.

I ran by them knowing that time was of the essence. I could hear one of the men saying that there were some that hopped into the gate and that exactly was my plan as well. After downing some lesser scamps as I knew them to be called, I leapt through the gate without a second thought


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“Worry not, young Breton. This will be over very quickly but I wish I could say that it would be painless. You will suffer greatly before you join the countless other souls that fuel my power.” - Taillus
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DarkHunter
post Apr 30 2006, 09:33 AM
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Yay for Tallius! ummm... Xander goodjob.gif Good job as usual.


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Taillus   The Hero in Disguise   Apr 29 2006, 04:26 AM
Agent Griff   Martin is such a lame name. Shame on your Bethesda...   Apr 29 2006, 09:00 AM
jack cloudy   Oh, now those Daedra will find a new meaning to th...   Apr 29 2006, 10:40 AM
DarkHunter   ummmmm... Jack, you did read the Tallius Finally, ...   Apr 30 2006, 04:13 AM
Taillus   Alrighty, where did we leave off? Oh here we go. ...   Apr 30 2006, 04:56 AM
jack cloudy   Haha, 1-0 for Xander! Take that, you stupid Da...   Apr 30 2006, 09:56 AM
DarkHunter   Hmmmm... but Xander's body was... well pretty ...   Apr 30 2006, 09:58 AM
minque   Och aye....wonderful Taillus.....I give you the S...   Apr 30 2006, 04:12 PM
Taillus   Thanks for the award! Thanks as well to every...   Apr 30 2006, 04:35 PM
DarkHunter   Mythic Dawn? I thought it was the D. Brotherhood.....   Apr 30 2006, 04:53 PM
Taillus   No way, the Brotherhood is in Oblivion but the Myt...   Apr 30 2006, 04:59 PM
DarkHunter   No worries, i've already read most of the spol...   Apr 30 2006, 05:30 PM
jack cloudy   Another nice one. Keep going.   Apr 30 2006, 08:59 PM
minque   Ohhh aye Mr Taillus.....very nice and descriptive....   Apr 30 2006, 09:33 PM
Taillus   Here is today's update everyone. I may end up ...   May 1 2006, 07:29 PM
DarkHunter   good update! so a creepy cave, a scared Talli....   May 1 2006, 08:32 PM
Kiln   I'm playing catchup today Taillus, for some re...   May 2 2006, 03:44 AM
Taillus   I apollogise if I am moving quickly on this story ...   May 2 2006, 06:57 PM
Kiln   Or maybe you're just a passionate writer and ...   May 2 2006, 09:52 PM
DarkHunter   Uh oh, Xander/Tallius is in trouble... Sweet!   May 2 2006, 08:36 PM
minque   Ahh excellent as always, you know how to keep us w...   May 2 2006, 09:52 PM
jack cloudy   Don't give up, Xander! Go for their nose...   May 3 2006, 06:47 PM
Taillus   Here is the next update. I am really eager to mak...   May 3 2006, 08:18 PM
minque   Never apologize for long entries! :D We like...   May 3 2006, 08:26 PM
DarkHunter   Good work Taillus :) this is 4 / 5 cause this ain...   May 3 2006, 08:28 PM
Taillus   What? Two updates in one day? This is crazy! I...   May 3 2006, 10:13 PM
DarkHunter   YAY! two in one day, thats excellent! :goo...   May 3 2006, 11:02 PM
jack cloudy   Is it just me, or is every blade a prisoner fresh ...   May 5 2006, 08:00 PM


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