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jack cloudy
post Apr 17 2006, 12:25 PM
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Alright, this is my next fan fic. Know that I don't have the whole storyline thought out yet, so it might become a bit messy.

Also, it takes place approximately 2 years after the events of Oasis.


The cursed blood.

Chapter 1: The Celebration.

Seas around Vvardenfell.

Slowly, the ship drifted amongst the waves. The only sign of life were the torches burning on the bow and stern. Or was that all? No. At the bow one man stood, gazing at the sky. He was old, with long flowing hair as white as snow. He stood there like a statue, only moving on his heels to compensate for the boat’s movements.

A High Elf opened the door and looked over the deck. There was the man he’d been looking for. He took a quick glance at the sky and sighed. Then, he moved over to join the old man.

,,In a few nights, the moons will be full again.” He said. The Old man remained silent. Finally, after two long minutes, he spoke.
,,You know I don’t fear the servants of the moon.”
The High Elf touched an amulet hanging around his neck, lost in deep thought. The amulet was beautifully crafted and looked just like the moon.

,,I know, how could I forget? I was merely speaking to myself.”
,,Yes, so I noticed. We should reach the island before the moon is full. It has been a long time. Perhaps you should join the hunt once more.” The old man said.

,,I will think about it. We are drinking a bottle of whine below deck. If you like you may join us.” With those words, the High Elf left.

The old man however, remained behind. He didn’t go downstairs and instead waited till he saw the land appear on the horizon. The land had called him and he realized he had much to do with only little time. He smiled at the thought. It had been many years since he had last worried about not having enough time at his disposal.
,,So we’ll meet again, old friend.” He muttered and finally joined the people below deck.

Venim Manor.
The room looked as if a tornado had passed through it. Actually, that was exactly what had happened, with the only difference that the tornado was made out of two people rather than wind. One of the two was a Redguard who wielded her sword with precision, making sure that not a single movement was wasted. Her opponent, was different. Much younger, the Dunmer girl fought with the enthusiasm and unlimited stamina of youth.

The two went back and forth as their swords clashed over and over. In the end, the Dunmer girl got the upper hand and forced the Redguard against the wall. She smiled as she prepared to land the final blow. Her sword hit the wall instead of the Redguard who had dove around the blade and was now behind the Dunmer. Instead of feeling her sword hit the Redguard, the Dunmer felt the tip of a sword on her own neck.

,,Not bad, mylady. For a moment, I really thought I had much work to do. Most mainland people aren’t very experienced.” The Redguard said and smiled.
,,Admit it, you were worried that you were going to lose for a moment.” The Dunmer replied.
,,Now don’t go too far with your pride. Your technique still needs a lot of work and it will take a while before I can truly call you a warrior.”
The Redguard took the two swords and returned them to their weaponrack, after putting the rack back in the position it stood in before it was knocked over.

There was a polite knock on the door and after a few seconds, a Dunmer entered the room.
,,Tsk, are you busy again.” The man said and shook his head.
,,I know I can’t stop you from doing this, Jana. But please, don’t go challenging people to duels in the middle of the night. You two are keeping everyone awake with all that noise.”
The man continued with a smile that took the sharpness out of his words. He then turned to the Redguard.

,,So Neminda, how is she?”
,,Not too bad, but not too good either.” The Redguard responded. She didn’t knew what to think. Maybe it was stupid for her to have gone along with the idea of the young Dunmer, but that enthusiasm was simply contagious.

Athus Mirhtri had recently arrived from the mainland and taken residence in Venim manor. He was a high-ranking member of House Redoran but also a man who didn’t quite fit in with the rest of the house. The biggest problem that most people had with him was the fact that despite being in a House that demanded of its members that they knew how to fight, he’d never held a weapon in his entire life.

,,I see. Could you, teach her a few tricks perhaps? That should keep her satisfied and out of trouble. But not before the sun rises.” Athus turned around to leave.
,,By the way, your dress for the celebration just arrived. You might try it on to see if it fits. But first, go take a bad.” He said and walked out.


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jack cloudy
post Apr 30 2006, 09:12 PM
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It is always pleasing to hear that people like it.

Oh come on, Taillus. Please let me enter him. Nah, just joking. smile.gif I've played with the idea myself but decided not to. For one, it wouldn't be fair for the other competitors. And the other thing is his personality. Knowing him, Aureus would smile and go straight for Hircine. And knowing his powers, Hircine doesn't stand a chance. evillol.sml.gif

And your Xander story isn't bad at all.





Argonia

The town was empty when Aureus teleported them to the platform. Most of the huts had been burned down to the ground. The place was filled with an eerie silence.
,,No!” Jalin shouted and ran towards one of the few huts that were still standing. He’d never looked so angry. Inside, he came to a halt in front of the bodies of two death Altmer and fell on his knees.

No one said a word. They all just looked at the carnage. Whatever had happened, the two Altmer hadn’t died peacefully. Repul walked over to a basket that stood in one corner and lifted its cover. He then reached inside and pulled out a sobbing Breton girl of about six years old. ,,Well, looks like your hide and seek games paid off. You alright, Amarie?” The man said in a surprisingly friendly tone, like everyone’s favourite uncle.

,,Lup? You came back? Bad people came. I got scared and hid.” The girl managed to say between the sobbing. Repul cast a quick glance at Jana who was openly staring at him. She knew it wasn’t the time to worry about that, but there just was something familiar with that name.
,,Don’t worry. Everything is alright. I’m here now and I’ll have a small chat with these people in a language they understand. A language that includes the business-end of Chrysamere.” The Redguard said with a grim voice and put the Breton down next to where Jalin sat.
,,Why don’t you take care of your sister for now. You’re not in the mood for fighting.” He told the Altmer before walking outside.

,,Now come on out and play, you bloody cowards!” He shouted a second later. Aureus shook his head and walked out of the hut.
,,They’re not going to come if you shout, my friend. They want me, not you. Now that means they’re likely at my tower.” The old man said before walking away to the edge of town. The tip of a large tower could be seen over the treetops.

The vampires were indeed at the tower. There were five of them and they were all camping in front of the locked gates. They were feasting on the corpses of the people they killed while the surviving townspeople had apparently fled to the tower. Several of the survivors were now standing on top of the wall. Jana couldn’t believe what she saw. Was that a zombie with a bow up there?

The zombie nocked an arrow and fired it at one of the vampires below. The vampire caught the arrow and then threw it back at the zombie. Several arrows that were embedded in the zombie’s flesh showed that this had already happened before. The arrow flew straight at the zombie who made no attempt at avoiding it. Just before the arrow hit its target, it sailed to the left and bounced of the wall. The vampire looked at the arrow and the zombie without knowing what had happened before looking behind him and seeing what caused the arrow to change its course.
,,You have invaded the sanctuary that I’ve built and now you shall face the consequences. I have chosen your fate!” Aureus said while he stepped towards them with one of his katanas in his hand. Jana and Repul followed him.

Jana’s hand went to the broadsword on her back but she remembered what Aureus had told her and used Repul’s ring instead. A mighty Daedric Longsword formed in her hand which she looked at in amazement. It was the first time she saw anything made of Daedric. She shook her head and focussed her eyes on the approaching vampires. This wasn’t the time to admire a weapon. It was three against five, not exactly nice odds.

One vampire decided to pick the Dunmer as his target and he raised his sword above his head. It appeared to be a simple and easily avoided chop, but the vampire changed the angle of his attack with lightning speed and got under her sword. Jana felt blood flowing down her arm.
The pain caused her to panic and she wildly swung at the vampire who stepped back before stabbing at her leg. The second wound shook her awake and she went into a defensive stance.

Jana managed to cast a quick glance at her surroundings before returning her attention back to her opponent. Both Repul and Aureus were both fighting two vampires at the same time. Multiple magical shields were coming from the Redguard’s gauntlets and pauldrons, which made his defence nearly impenetrable. She saw how one vampire managed to pass the man’s sword and two shields, but his weapon bounced of the third, causing the vampire to lose his balance. Before he got his balance back, he’d already been cut in three different pieces.

Aureus didn’t had any shielding spells, but he didn’t need them as he moved just as fast as the two vampires he was fighting. He parried the attacks of one vampire with his katana while avoiding the attacks of the other. He then used a large wave of ice to make the vampires step back.

Jana didn’t had time to see more as her own opponent went into the offensive. Only the improved reflexes she’d received from her own vampirism allowed her to avoid the first attack. She fell on her back and the vampire stepped forward for the finishing blow, when a bolt of magicka shot from her glove. She rolled out of sword’s path and stood up. Blinded, the vampire never noticed how she got behind him.
,,Burn in Oblivion.” She said when she drove the Daedric blade through the vampire’s spine.

When she looked up, it was all over. Repul was standing near two piles of Vampire parts. The two vampires Aureus had been fighting with where nowhere to be found.
,,Where did yours go?” She asked and looked around warily.
Aureus smiled and pointed at the ground.
,,I buried them. They shall suffocate in the soil they wanted to drench with blood.” He said.


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jack cloudy   The cursed blood.   Apr 17 2006, 12:25 PM
Agent Griff   Oh, so you're continuing that tale you started...   Apr 17 2006, 01:21 PM
minque   Nice Mr Cloudy-man! This is very promising, I ...   Apr 17 2006, 02:42 PM
Tellie   Whohoo...thanks for starting up so soon again clou...   Apr 17 2006, 10:06 PM
jack cloudy   Thank you all. Since it is rather confusing to wea...   Apr 18 2006, 04:39 PM
minque   Ahhh Cloudy-man! Great work....very interestin...   Apr 18 2006, 09:27 PM
jack cloudy   And the next part with the Dunmer girl. Umm, I am ...   Apr 19 2006, 05:45 PM
Tellie   O_oh...this is interesting...an angry Dunmer girl ...   Apr 19 2006, 06:09 PM
jack cloudy   Glad you like it. But, which of the three men is t...   Apr 19 2006, 07:06 PM
Taillus   Ahh Cloudy. Starting anew much like myself. I real...   Apr 19 2006, 10:28 PM
jack cloudy   Alright, things are heating up. Ald’Rhun, in fr...   Apr 20 2006, 04:23 PM
Tellie   Yes...another update...*celebrates...:cake:* A wo...   Apr 20 2006, 09:06 PM
minque   Ouch! getting smashed into the wall doesn´t so...   Apr 20 2006, 11:14 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry, but I've got a role laid out for the li...   Apr 21 2006, 06:17 PM
minque   Oh my! This IS getting veeery thrilling, I lov...   Apr 21 2006, 07:45 PM
DarkHunter   very good man, it's getting interesting, (very...   Apr 21 2006, 09:02 PM
jack cloudy   Agh, I diffused the whole situation too fast. Damn...   Apr 22 2006, 08:10 PM
jack cloudy   Balmora In Balmora, Aureus said goodbye and enter...   Apr 23 2006, 09:03 PM
minque   Brilliant Mr Cloudy! Just sheer brilliant........   Apr 23 2006, 09:19 PM
Agent Griff   As was said by the wise woman of the forum, excele...   Apr 24 2006, 09:04 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry about not updating. I promise I'll work ...   Apr 25 2006, 06:50 AM
Agent Griff   I'll wait, don't worry. Reading your story...   Apr 25 2006, 06:58 AM
Taillus   Aureus really and truly kicks so much A$...   Apr 25 2006, 03:16 PM
jack cloudy   Nah, I still pay attention during classes. It is j...   Apr 25 2006, 07:08 PM
jack cloudy   Jana was having the same dream again. She was back...   Apr 25 2006, 08:02 PM
Agent Griff   Wow! Now this guy is too damn invincible! ...   Apr 26 2006, 05:26 PM
jack cloudy   Yeah, I think I just went a bit overboard there. W...   Apr 26 2006, 07:07 PM
Kiln   Great update Jack, interesting way to end that las...   Apr 26 2006, 07:15 PM
HyPN0   This is a very nice fan fiction B) But seriusly,t...   Apr 27 2006, 02:36 PM
minque   Mournhold! City of Light City of Magic.....yea...   Apr 27 2006, 10:24 PM
Agent Griff   You really are a master writer! I hope you wri...   Apr 29 2006, 09:25 AM
jack cloudy   Last time I checked it seemed as if all the battle...   Apr 29 2006, 11:46 AM
Agent Griff   Repul Dakla? It isn't quite an original name i...   Apr 29 2006, 12:58 PM
jack cloudy   Well actually, I used quite a long time while thin...   Apr 29 2006, 01:59 PM
HyPN0   OMG! More,More,More! This is just becoming...   Apr 29 2006, 02:24 PM
Agent Griff   Oh, I think I know what this Repul's real name...   Apr 29 2006, 04:06 PM
Taillus   This is an amazing story Jack! Far better then...   Apr 30 2006, 04:26 PM
minque   As I commented on Mr Oven´s story...what can i sa...   Apr 30 2006, 09:23 PM
jack cloudy   Alright a small update with a small surprise. (Or ...   May 1 2006, 07:12 PM
DarkHunter   Thats suicide... both what you did to Vivic and wh...   May 1 2006, 11:42 PM
Agent Griff   I knew Repul was bound to be Luper from the moment...   May 2 2006, 08:22 AM
Taillus   I definately have my suspicions that Aureus used t...   May 3 2006, 04:37 PM
Agent Griff   A good chalenge? With his 1337 skills Aureus would...   May 3 2006, 05:26 PM
jack cloudy   Tsk, young people just haven't seen true wisdo...   May 3 2006, 06:56 PM
minque   Oh la la Mr Cloudy! very interesting.....It´s ...   May 3 2006, 08:03 PM
Agent Griff   Brilliant writing Jack! I just loved the discu...   May 5 2006, 06:26 PM
jack cloudy   *Bows humbly in front of the audience.* Thank you,...   May 5 2006, 08:11 PM
Agent Griff   Strange village that is. Anyway, some things were ...   May 6 2006, 07:02 AM
Taillus   I do agree that it is wisdom that is true power. T...   May 6 2006, 04:52 PM
Agent Griff   Weren't there some awards given to writers? I ...   May 6 2006, 06:26 PM
Sirin   Holy Cow!!! I started reading this yes...   May 7 2006, 02:34 PM
jack cloudy   First of all, thank you for liking this. Now I...   May 7 2006, 03:14 PM
Sirin   Clever little trick, there, with the ranged Mark s...   May 7 2006, 03:22 PM
Agent Griff   The Redguard in the Arena is the local Blademaster...   May 7 2006, 03:50 PM
jack cloudy   I'll be sure to buy Oblivion someday. But then...   May 8 2006, 08:24 PM
Agent Griff   Interesting, Luper goes to help Aureus. I hope it...   May 8 2006, 08:40 PM
Sirin   Brilliant! Keep going! Onward!   May 10 2006, 01:22 PM
Taillus   I think the cursed blood story has become my favor...   May 10 2006, 05:00 PM
minque   Ah yes..sweet Jana has really got right to me...   May 10 2006, 06:47 PM
jack cloudy   My computer has crashed so I won’t be on for a whi...   May 12 2006, 12:51 PM
minque   oh....I´m sorry to hear that! But keep up your...   May 13 2006, 04:09 PM
DarkHunter   :D Yeah, I do that too Jack :) The librairians hat...   May 13 2006, 04:51 PM
Sirin   I just watched Chronicles of Narnia. I'm prett...   May 15 2006, 01:04 PM
jack cloudy   Well, I know it is pretty annoying and really frus...   May 21 2006, 09:59 AM
jack cloudy   The Lich led her to one of the few buildings that ...   May 24 2006, 11:28 AM
Agent Griff   Wonderful updates! With what you've writte...   May 25 2006, 06:15 PM
DarkHunter   ... ... ... YAAAAAHHHHHHOOOOOO!!!...   May 25 2006, 08:21 PM
jack cloudy   Update alert, don’t you love school? Anyway, a big...   May 31 2006, 08:42 AM
DarkHunter   :lol: No keys for Luper... Cauis, Eh? hmmm this sh...   May 31 2006, 11:08 AM
mplantinga   Just found this one, and read it straight through....   Jun 1 2006, 09:47 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry, but no more vamp vs vamp. I just didn't...   Jun 3 2006, 02:50 PM
Agent Griff   Um, is Caius really held in a cell ingame? You got...   Jun 4 2006, 01:28 PM
jack cloudy   I have no idea where he is in Oblivion. Besides, t...   Jun 4 2006, 07:00 PM
mplantinga   Intriguing developments. I would have thought they...   Jun 5 2006, 08:36 PM
jack cloudy   Hmm, I totally forgot about the Battlemage traditi...   Jun 8 2006, 08:43 PM
Kiln   Great story as usual mate, good descriptions and d...   Jun 8 2006, 09:08 PM
DarkHunter   :O hmmm... Good writing... puzzle.. hmmmm....   Jun 9 2006, 11:21 AM
jack cloudy   Wow, the only scene that I have firmly and complet...   Jun 11 2006, 07:56 PM
treydog   This is a quite wonderful story- ambitious and wid...   Jun 12 2006, 01:44 AM
minque   Yes, what treydog said just about sums it up! ...   Jun 12 2006, 11:49 PM
mplantinga   I was intrigued by the part about the sword contai...   Jun 14 2006, 05:54 PM
jack cloudy   Glad you all like it. I don't know how to add ...   Jun 16 2006, 08:52 PM
minque   Ok..short, but nevertheless a very good one! I...   Jun 17 2006, 06:18 PM
jack cloudy   Funny, the closer I get to the end, the harder it ...   Jun 18 2006, 08:21 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well now, hopefully Aureus makes it. Being the cr...   Jun 18 2006, 10:29 PM
Tellie   I am so sorry for not having kept up with your sto...   Jun 19 2006, 11:46 PM
DarkHunter   Whoa... so much happened since last time I check ...   Jun 20 2006, 11:18 AM
jack cloudy   Oh boy, the final battle! :D Enjoy the update...   Jun 20 2006, 06:12 PM
minque   Uj uj.......brilliant Mr Cloudy! Fast moving, ...   Jun 20 2006, 06:51 PM
DarkHunter   :O how will it end?!? :O Must see ending..... ...   Jun 20 2006, 08:32 PM
The Metal Mallet   I forsee an epic battle... of course, wouldn't...   Jun 20 2006, 10:03 PM
jack cloudy   No update yet, sorry. This is a battle I want to t...   Jun 21 2006, 09:48 PM
jack cloudy   Finally the update has arrived. As for the posting...   Jun 24 2006, 10:09 PM
The Metal Mallet   Wooo!!! Semi-heart attack action!...   Jun 25 2006, 12:48 AM
DarkHunter   Ooooo... The evil dude (I'm not good on typing...   Jun 25 2006, 01:09 AM
jack cloudy   Update! The battle continues! Who knows, I...   Jun 27 2006, 09:30 PM
The Metal Mallet   Time for me to sound really cheesy.... DUN DUN DU...   Jun 27 2006, 10:04 PM
jack cloudy   And another one. A cheap ending, but I've been...   Jun 27 2006, 10:14 PM
The Metal Mallet   Woo! Nice ending of the conflict, poetic for ...   Jun 27 2006, 10:23 PM
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