Abyss, the destruction... the demise Options

[Mazelure]

Abyss


God how much I love this… how they scream… how they beg for mercy… as there lives are slowly consumed by darkness… they twist and turn to try and lighten the pain… but it is always in vain…

Abyss could hear the bones of the small boy crack… his agony filled screams sounded like magnificent notes of music to Abyss’s ears … the boy cried… the boy begged… the boy died… but only after an eternity of torture and pain…

Abyss loved killing children more than anything else in the world… even more than killing infants… infants could only cry and whine… but children… children begged for they’re mothers and fathers… they cry out for help even if they are alone and no one is around to listen… they scream out in complete anguish and cry tears of horror when Abyss stared them in the eyes… and the kid Abyss just got finish killing was of no exception… he begged and cried… he bleed and he died… nothing is more beautiful than the passing of life…

A guard heard the screams of the small boy before he died… he came running to the direction where he last heard them… and instead of finding a boy in need of help… he found a monster toying with a dead corpse…

“By the Divines”… was all the guard could muster… before Abyss descended on him… the screams of the guard were not as sweet and as pretty of the one’s of the boy…but it did just fine for Abyss…

Abyss extended his left arm… and the tattoo in his arm came to life… it moved through the air like a shadow with the edge of the sharpest of daedric weapons… it pierced through the guard’s throat… and then it came back around and pierced through the guards marvelous bone mold armor and through his kidney… so he would bleed to death… and no matter how much he tried to scream to lighten the pain… he could not… instead Abyss just heard little bubbly sounds coming from the guards mouth…

The guard’s corpse fell on the stone floor… Abyss stared at it for a while… absorbing the beauty of death… and then he started walking down the stony path towards the center of Suran…

He took a step… and then he heard the sound of wood breaking… he looked down to see a broken lute… a once beautiful lute… he had forgotten all about it… he was having to much fun torturing the child that he forgot that the child was holding on to a lute the entire time Abyss was killing him…

Abyss threw one last look at the child’s lifeless corpse… there was not a drop of the child’s blood in him… it was splattered all over the wall of the city and the stony floor… not to mention the blood splattered all over his exquisite pitch black pants…

He looked at the beautiful night sky… and took a deep breath… “This is going to be fun”… Abyss thought… and then he started marching towards the heart of the village to destroy all life that exsisted in it… to slowly bleed the life out of this city’s beating heart…



Man I haven’t written a story like this for a while now… I think I am going to enjoy writing it… anyways… like always I would appreciate some criticism and to know if you like this story… or the character… by the way this picks of where A DEAD MAN'S TALE left off... and yes... that was the small boy from the other story who played his lute for the old man... am I evil or what?...

Kudos Mazelure… Kudos

P.S. The character's name is Abyss... kinda weird I know... but I like it...

[Mazelure]

I had to kill the kid from the other story... he knew to damn much... but in reality I kinda come up with this stuff up as I go... like yesterday I knew I was going to start a fan fic about this guy... but I had no clue that he was going to kill the boy and destroy the city of Suran... plus I needed to prove how evil this guy truly is by showing that he would kill a innocent little child... and his atrocities get bloodier and bloodier as the story unfolds... well at least that is what I'm hoping for...

This post has been edited by Mazelure: May 27 2006, 05:07 AM