Abyss, the destruction... the demise Options

[Mazelure]

Abyss


God how much I love this… how they scream… how they beg for mercy… as there lives are slowly consumed by darkness… they twist and turn to try and lighten the pain… but it is always in vain…

Abyss could hear the bones of the small boy crack… his agony filled screams sounded like magnificent notes of music to Abyss’s ears … the boy cried… the boy begged… the boy died… but only after an eternity of torture and pain…

Abyss loved killing children more than anything else in the world… even more than killing infants… infants could only cry and whine… but children… children begged for they’re mothers and fathers… they cry out for help even if they are alone and no one is around to listen… they scream out in complete anguish and cry tears of horror when Abyss stared them in the eyes… and the kid Abyss just got finish killing was of no exception… he begged and cried… he bleed and he died… nothing is more beautiful than the passing of life…

A guard heard the screams of the small boy before he died… he came running to the direction where he last heard them… and instead of finding a boy in need of help… he found a monster toying with a dead corpse…

“By the Divines”… was all the guard could muster… before Abyss descended on him… the screams of the guard were not as sweet and as pretty of the one’s of the boy…but it did just fine for Abyss…

Abyss extended his left arm… and the tattoo in his arm came to life… it moved through the air like a shadow with the edge of the sharpest of daedric weapons… it pierced through the guard’s throat… and then it came back around and pierced through the guards marvelous bone mold armor and through his kidney… so he would bleed to death… and no matter how much he tried to scream to lighten the pain… he could not… instead Abyss just heard little bubbly sounds coming from the guards mouth…

The guard’s corpse fell on the stone floor… Abyss stared at it for a while… absorbing the beauty of death… and then he started walking down the stony path towards the center of Suran…

He took a step… and then he heard the sound of wood breaking… he looked down to see a broken lute… a once beautiful lute… he had forgotten all about it… he was having to much fun torturing the child that he forgot that the child was holding on to a lute the entire time Abyss was killing him…

Abyss threw one last look at the child’s lifeless corpse… there was not a drop of the child’s blood in him… it was splattered all over the wall of the city and the stony floor… not to mention the blood splattered all over his exquisite pitch black pants…

He looked at the beautiful night sky… and took a deep breath… “This is going to be fun”… Abyss thought… and then he started marching towards the heart of the village to destroy all life that exsisted in it… to slowly bleed the life out of this city’s beating heart…



Man I haven’t written a story like this for a while now… I think I am going to enjoy writing it… anyways… like always I would appreciate some criticism and to know if you like this story… or the character… by the way this picks of where A DEAD MAN'S TALE left off... and yes... that was the small boy from the other story who played his lute for the old man... am I evil or what?...

Kudos Mazelure… Kudos

P.S. The character's name is Abyss... kinda weird I know... but I like it...

[Mazelure]

Alright I think I have the story figgured out... to a certain point... so here is what I got so far...


Abyss


Abyss laughed uncontrollably… his laughter boomed inside the head’s of his victims like thunder… his smooth but terrifying voice was enough to make the blood of his victims stop cold… and as they laid their eyes upon him… all became petrified with fear… with unimaginable fear…

Abyss was completely drenched with blood… his pitch black pants now looked scarlet red… and even his eyes were consumed by his bloodlust… his eyes once being a bizarre gray now transformed to a fierce red…

The sun was now coming up… he looked at the devastated town of Suran one last time… it’s houses and shops were burning to the ground… the smell of burning flesh filled the air… and the river near the city ran red with the blood of the dead…

Abyss started to chuckle… he chuckled since he knew that Vivec’s water will be tainted red by tomorrow… he could imagine the terrified looks of the priest as they will gaze into the gooey red water… and how they would all prey to their false god…

Abyss was now entering the Daedric Ruin that belonged to his father… Molog Bal… he walked pass his father’s worshippers and down the dark and sinister corridors of the ruin… he reached the last room with the giant statue of his father’s image… and Abyss sat down in one the corners of the dark lair… he slowly yawned as he saw his father’s priest approached him…

“Did you have a good time mighty one?” she try to say with her most tender voice… because the fact was that Abyss terrified her to her very core… he was nothing more than a monster of unimaginable evil that haunted her very soul…

“A good time… yes… a great time… no… no matter how many villages I burn… or how many lives I claim… the joy never lasts long enough…” Abyss said with his calm and mesmerizing yet sinister voice…

“I’m sorry for your discontent mighty one…”

“No you’re not… well at least not yet…” Abyss coldly said… he was now getting up from his corner and growing closer to the frighten priestess… his tattoo on his left wrist came to life… this time it consumed his entire arm… it covered his left hand so it looked as if it was pitch black… and then a giant dark claws replace the human fingers that where there once before… he kept getting closer and closer to her… step by step…

She started walking backwards until her back hit the dark wall of the lair… her heart was consumed with despair and beating gallons of blood at a time… her voice had disappeared from her throat… replace by panicking little shrieks of terror… Abyss was now an inch away from her… he stared her right in the eyes and raised his claw up in the air… but before he could bring it down with all his might…

“What do you think you are doing… you are the son of the great Molog Bal… not the son of the wretched Mehrunes Dagon… how dare you raise your filthy little hand against your mother!”

“Calm down father… I was just having a little fun… I wasn’t going to kill her… just frighten her a little…” Abyss said while backing away from his terrified mother… and staring up at the statue of his father that had come to life… he could not help but chuckle in the inside…

“I don’t know what to do with you sometimes… you already destroyed yet another town… even banishing you to oblivion for a century was not enough for you…”

Abyss stood in the darkness of the ruin all day long… listening to his father nag and nag… until he had enough… until he could contain his lust for destruction no more…

“That is it father… all you ever do is complain… I guess it’s time for me to put you out of your misery…” Abyss proclaimed with a dark and sinister voice…

“You little fetcher…” was all the mighty statue was able to say before Abyss destroyed it…

Abyss raised his right arm and the demonic tattoo came to life… it took the form of a giant dark scimitar connected to a pitch black chain… he threw it with all his might at the giant statue… it reduce the statue’s head to a pile of rubble… before returning to it’s masters arm as a tattoo…

Abyss turned around and looked once again at his terrified mother… his left arm took the form of a dark claw once again… the priestess backed against the wall for a second time… but this time around there was nothing or no one to stop Abyss from his fun…

He raised his claw and let it come down… he loved how it felt… how it feels when your bare hand cuts through flesh and bone… when blood gushes out and splatters all over the place…

He sat in the darkness of the ruin… watching and absorbing the beauty of death… until his mother’s heart was drained of life… until not a single drop of blood was left in the corpse… the corpse that stared at him from the darkness… with cold dead eyes…


I kinda think this chapter sucks... but wether it is good or bad depends on you... tell me if you liked it... or if I went overboard with it... I would appreciate that alot... I would also request that everyone who reads this tells me how they feel about Abyss... the character...


Kudos... Kudos

This post has been edited by Mazelure: May 28 2006, 08:50 PM