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Mazelure
post May 26 2006, 09:37 PM
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Abyss


God how much I love this… how they scream… how they beg for mercy… as there lives are slowly consumed by darkness… they twist and turn to try and lighten the pain… but it is always in vain…

Abyss could hear the bones of the small boy crack… his agony filled screams sounded like magnificent notes of music to Abyss’s ears … the boy cried… the boy begged… the boy died… but only after an eternity of torture and pain…

Abyss loved killing children more than anything else in the world… even more than killing infants… infants could only cry and whine… but children… children begged for they’re mothers and fathers… they cry out for help even if they are alone and no one is around to listen… they scream out in complete anguish and cry tears of horror when Abyss stared them in the eyes… and the kid Abyss just got finish killing was of no exception… he begged and cried… he bleed and he died… nothing is more beautiful than the passing of life…

A guard heard the screams of the small boy before he died… he came running to the direction where he last heard them… and instead of finding a boy in need of help… he found a monster toying with a dead corpse…

“By the Divines”… was all the guard could muster… before Abyss descended on him… the screams of the guard were not as sweet and as pretty of the one’s of the boy…but it did just fine for Abyss…

Abyss extended his left arm… and the tattoo in his arm came to life… it moved through the air like a shadow with the edge of the sharpest of daedric weapons… it pierced through the guard’s throat… and then it came back around and pierced through the guards marvelous bone mold armor and through his kidney… so he would bleed to death… and no matter how much he tried to scream to lighten the pain… he could not… instead Abyss just heard little bubbly sounds coming from the guards mouth…

The guard’s corpse fell on the stone floor… Abyss stared at it for a while… absorbing the beauty of death… and then he started walking down the stony path towards the center of Suran…

He took a step… and then he heard the sound of wood breaking… he looked down to see a broken lute… a once beautiful lute… he had forgotten all about it… he was having to much fun torturing the child that he forgot that the child was holding on to a lute the entire time Abyss was killing him…

Abyss threw one last look at the child’s lifeless corpse… there was not a drop of the child’s blood in him… it was splattered all over the wall of the city and the stony floor… not to mention the blood splattered all over his exquisite pitch black pants…

He looked at the beautiful night sky… and took a deep breath… “This is going to be fun”… Abyss thought… and then he started marching towards the heart of the village to destroy all life that exsisted in it… to slowly bleed the life out of this city’s beating heart…



Man I haven’t written a story like this for a while now… I think I am going to enjoy writing it… anyways… like always I would appreciate some criticism and to know if you like this story… or the character… by the way this picks of where A DEAD MAN'S TALE left off... and yes... that was the small boy from the other story who played his lute for the old man... am I evil or what?...

Kudos Mazelure… Kudos

P.S. The character's name is Abyss... kinda weird I know... but I like it...


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post Jun 4 2006, 08:55 PM
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Abyss


All was silent… not a sound… the Abyss look alike was still standing in the same position… staring at where the true Abyss was a few moments ago…

Out of the darkness of the night came a giant roar… then a shadowy snake flew across the air and pierced through the lung of the Abyss look alike… blood fell to the ground… but not one single shout of pain was heard… the look alike only move his head at the direction where the snake had come from… to only see a smiling Abyss staring him back with joy screaming in his eyes…

The snake returned to Abyss as the form of a tattoo… “So father did not dare to face me… instead he cowers behind creatures such as you and me… to do his dirty work… well I must agree… you are one handsome looking monster…” Abyss said all the meanwhile chuckling in the inside…

The creature only stared at Abyss… as if it was deaf to him… then he levitated in the air and started charging at Abyss with two flaming fireballs in his palms… he threw both of them at the same time at the spot where Abyss was… it then exploded with tremendous force… Abyss was now in the air as well… his hand was holding his giant black scimitar… he descended on the look alike with all his force… the creature did not have time to react… all it could do is put up his right arm to shield himself… the arm fell on the ground… creating a small pool of crimson blood around itself…

The creature did nothing else than stare Abyss in the eyes… the creature eyes were emotionless… so very much unlike Abyss’s eyes… they were filled with anger and hatred… “Why does he not scream… why does he not despair…” Abyss thought to himself…

The creature held up his left arm… his only remaining arm… and the same shadow snake as Abyss came forth… but Abyss was faster… he swung his mighty scimitar and cut the damn thing in half… he then came charging at the look alike with all his might… with another swing he cut the creature in half… the look alike fell from the sky and landed on the ground… it’s torso laid ten feet away from his legs….

Abyss came down beside the creature… he stared at it in the eyes as he does with all his victims before they die… but this one did not scream… this one did not despaired… it only stared at Abyss back with empty eyes… it filled Abyss with incredible anger… anger that he has never felt before in his life…

The creature died… just one more life claimed by Abyss… but his one left the world with a bit of Abyss with him… his joy…



I hope you guys can understand the battle... I must admit... it is pretty confusing at times... so just let me know if you liked the battle or not... or if you could understand it... that will be helpful...


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Mazelure   Abyss   May 26 2006, 09:37 PM
Kiln   No stranger than what the character likes to do f...   May 26 2006, 10:24 PM
Mazelure   I had to kill the kid from the other story... he k...   May 27 2006, 02:06 AM
DarkHunter   :O That guys a monster... oh right... You know w...   May 27 2006, 02:18 AM
Mazelure   Actually that was one of my original thoughts... s...   May 27 2006, 02:24 AM
DarkHunter   ummmm... theres just one little thing... The Nerav...   May 27 2006, 04:18 AM
Mazelure   Hey man... who said anything about him dying... ma...   May 27 2006, 05:01 AM
Kayla   Mmmm Mmmmm children killing. :P   May 27 2006, 06:18 PM
Mazelure   Alright I think I have the story figgured out... t...   May 28 2006, 05:10 AM
Joryn   Oh dear, Abyss is certainly a bad little monkey. ...   May 28 2006, 12:58 PM
DarkHunter   :O :O This should be amusing... Malog Bal is going...   May 28 2006, 02:33 PM
Mazelure   This is going to be a short update… since I am cur...   May 30 2006, 10:45 PM
DarkHunter   :O What's Malog going to do? Lock him in a roo...   May 30 2006, 11:03 PM
Mazelure   They can get angry... and very angry at that... Ab...   May 30 2006, 11:37 PM
Kiln   Lol, doubt we'll guess. :lol: We'll ju...   May 31 2006, 03:11 AM
DarkHunter   send him to oblivion all by himself without anythi...   May 30 2006, 11:49 PM
Mazelure   Alright... let's see if anyone guessed right.....   May 31 2006, 10:02 PM
Kiln   So thats the end then? Destroyed by his opposite ...   May 31 2006, 10:36 PM
DarkHunter   :lol: those politicians.... Hmmm I have a feeling ...   May 31 2006, 10:52 PM
Mazelure   You are right my good friend... he is not dead... ...   May 31 2006, 11:10 PM
jack cloudy   Hmm, bloody. But I think we've just seen a wea...   Jun 4 2006, 09:00 PM
Mazelure   Yeah... that is pretty much the only thing I could...   Jun 4 2006, 09:05 PM


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