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Revan part 1, My first fan fic. |
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Lord Revan |
May 26 2006, 08:44 AM
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Joined: 6-May 06
From: Texas, USA

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A tall brooding figure looked over the landscape, from the atop a sigil keep in Oblivion... The man reflected on how many years ago he was made the ultimate pawn of the Deadric princes.
That was 113 years ago, yet it felt like yesterday. Orphaned shortly after birth, he had grow up as an assassin of the Morag Tong, in Vardenfell, one of the best among his peers. But when the Dark Brotherhood came to Morrowind, it all went wrong. The small enclave that he was being trained at was raided.
Though he and the other Morag Tong fought and killed many of the intruders, Revan was separted from the Morag Tong by the Dark Brotherhood assassins. Disheartened by the deaths of those he'd grown up with, he refused to go to another guild hall. For many years, Revan moved restlessly, his heart hardened until he became solitary and distrusting of others in general.
Over those long 120 years I've worked with almost every Deadric Prince. He thought to himself.
Azura, Maphala, Mehrunes Dagon, and Hurcine had used him to accomplish things beyond their devine influence. Revan had done much: plundering, medling with other lord's affairs, and such. As he stalked down the hallway several dramora were gorging themselves on roasted flesh. Revan despised them and saw them as simple brutes in that repulsive, jagged armor of theirs. In contrast, his armor was light-wieght, smooth, and flexible. The woven underlayer of the armor was as black as the ebony, while the pauldrons, greaves, boots, gauntlets, cuirass, and helmet were a light red shade.
The hellish landscape of Mehrunes Dagon's domain greeted him as he exited the keep. While the mortal world was still protected from Oblivion, Revan could summon a small tear in the devine barrier. The journey from Oblivion by these means was as comfortable to say the least. There was no light, but it was not the sacred darkness of night.
The rift opened a few feet of the ground and Revan landed feet-first in a patch of snow. The cold didn't bother him, he couldn't feel it through his armor. I should take my time, anything to stall returning to find another job....
Despite his dislike of snow, Revan found the Jerall Mountains more appealing than Lord Dagon's realm. Casting a glance up the road, he spotted his targets' not-so-secure hideout: Bruma. So, an entire vampire clan, should be interesting.....
This post has been edited by Lord Revan: May 24 2007, 06:40 PM
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Lord Revan |
Jun 15 2006, 05:35 AM
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Joined: 6-May 06
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His marks were a vampire patriarch and matriarch who intended to use Bruma as a new feeding (and breeding) ground for a upstart clan. Revan would have to play a crusader on a 'mission of mercy'. However, he knew a way to get some help. It would be a full moon tonight, and a migrating pack of werewolves would be passing by right about now. Revan planned to use the monster's predudice to cause a conflict, then he'd come in and eliminate the stragglers. It was noon when he entered the city, Revan quickly spotted a begger sulking behind a building.
"A coin for an ol' begger?" the begger whimpered as soon as the armored figure. "I'll pay you fifty if you spread a little rumor for me"
"FIFTY!" the begger exclaimed grinning, but then his expression turned unexpectedly shrewed. "What's the catch?" "The 'catch' is that it spreads quickly and people believe it" Revan replied casually. The begger stared at him warily for a few seconds, "All right let's hear it". "Inform everyone you meet, that a dying Imperial forester told you that a pack of werewolf attacked him near here", Revan ordered. The begger looked doubtful, but accepted the gold saying he would do as instructed.
As the peasent retreated with the bag; Revan allowed a concealed smirk, if this worked the fledgling vampires would confront the werewolfs and he would have a much easier task and entertainment.
Many of his other jobs had been conducted in similar ways; even though he was perfectly capable of doing all this on his own, Revan had not been raised as a full-fladged warrior who bashed every breathing entity with a warhammer the size of his head.
Now Revan simply had to would wait until tonight, the moon would be full and the werewolfs would arrive and the vampires would rise to defened their property, niether knowing that to fight would only lead to death.
Revan sat on one of the walls that separated the city from the castle, and meditated. He had no regret for what he had become after his life had been destroyed; Revan had never felt love for another or vice versa.
Never had he met a woman whom he had felt any fondness, yet despite his clarity of purpose, Revan felt... hollow. He had no friends or companions; he stood alone without the luxuries, with demons, and without.....
This post has been edited by Lord Revan: May 24 2007, 06:58 PM
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Lord Revan Revan part 1 May 26 2006, 08:44 AM Lord Revan {edited}-post moved Jun 14 2006, 03:54 PM Lord Revan ..... uh any constructive critic would be appricia... Jun 14 2006, 10:44 PM Mazelure Man... you have good discriptive skills... but you... Jun 14 2006, 11:35 PM Lord Revan thanks for the critic; I'm not used to this an... Jun 15 2006, 04:30 AM Kiln Not bad, the only thing that I wish is that you... Jun 15 2006, 05:53 AM Lord Revan sorry, but I've a had a good night's sleep... Jun 15 2006, 07:20 PM jack cloudy Ah, interesting story. Divide-and-conquer, a class... Jun 16 2006, 08:45 PM Lord Revan Thanks guys :D I've read alot of fan fics fo... Jun 16 2006, 09:46 PM Lord Revan ok sorry for making you guys wait, but here it is.... Jun 19 2006, 05:01 AM The Metal Mallet I certainly agree that was a massacre. It was def... Jun 19 2006, 05:47 AM Mazelure Hell yeah that was a massacre... more like a slaug... Jun 19 2006, 02:38 PM Lord Revan thanks guys
Metal Mallet I've read some of ... Jun 19 2006, 08:19 PM The Metal Mallet Well thank you. Hopefully I can consistantly keep... Jun 19 2006, 08:36 PM jack cloudy Ah, someone who lets others do the dirty work. (we... Jun 19 2006, 08:48 PM Lord Revan
Well Revan enjoys subtlety....... but he does ... Jun 19 2006, 08:54 PM y101 I like it. Your character very cunning. He acts li... Jul 2 2006, 08:46 PM Lord Revan
I use a lot of sources for inspiration.
O... Jul 5 2006, 04:04 AM jack cloudy Hmm, emotional. :) So he's going to Valenwood... Jul 5 2006, 08:40 AM The Metal Mallet Ooooo, some of Revan's mysterious background i... Jul 6 2006, 12:52 AM Lord Revan Well here's an update, sorry it took so long.
... Jul 11 2006, 03:22 AM The Metal Mallet Interesting duel between Revan and this mysterious... Jul 11 2006, 10:05 PM jack cloudy Interesting indeed. I'll be waiting to see wha... Jul 12 2006, 02:36 PM minque
Interesting indeed. I'll be waiting to see wh... Jul 12 2006, 09:53 PM Lord Revan Ok guys heres a little explanation for you,
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... Jul 12 2006, 11:50 PM jack cloudy Interesting. Very interesting. And now I want to s... Jul 13 2006, 08:33 AM Lord Revan ok Jack you asked for it and you got it
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Re... Jul 13 2006, 07:22 PM jack cloudy Oops, trouble. :) Jul 13 2006, 07:54 PM The Metal Mallet The suspense strikes again!
I wonder how this... Jul 13 2006, 11:56 PM minque
The suspense strikes again!
I wonder how thi... Jul 15 2006, 10:07 PM Lord Revan I'm to tired to update, I'll write it afte... Jul 16 2006, 06:17 AM Lord Revan Trouble???....... well yes, but not the way you th... Jul 16 2006, 07:48 PM The Metal Mallet This time I see things going less nicely, unlike t... Jul 16 2006, 09:02 PM Lord Revan Ok, another update everyone
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Revan part 1/ ch... Jul 18 2006, 03:47 AM The Metal Mallet Drama, drama, drama. A few surprizing twists in t... Jul 18 2006, 04:27 AM Lord Revan
Drama, drama, drama. I'm glad no limbs were l... Jul 18 2006, 08:15 PM minque Yay....thrilling it is.....wait for more I do........ Jul 18 2006, 10:45 PM Lord Revan Ok here's another update everyone, this is the... Jul 20 2006, 10:03 PM The Metal Mallet Oooooo, I expect a good duel Revan, don't disa... Jul 20 2006, 10:15 PM Lord Revan ok, ok Metal Mallet i'll try to get some gore ... Jul 20 2006, 11:13 PM The Metal Mallet Woooo!! Drama and gore, the best of both w... Jul 20 2006, 11:30 PM Lord Revan ok everyone, first part of the fanale right here... Jul 25 2006, 05:29 AM The Metal Mallet Excellent Finale! Revan made quite a daring e... Jul 25 2006, 06:08 AM Lord Revan my next post will be the 2nd half to the fanale of... Jul 25 2006, 07:14 AM Lord Revan Ok this is it :D
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Revan part 1/ finale
... Jul 26 2006, 04:25 AM The Metal Mallet An excellent conclusion to a beginning of a very s... Jul 26 2006, 06:08 AM minque This has been a very interesting story.....now it ... Aug 20 2006, 03:19 PM
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