First fan art; Mountain Lion, please criticize Options

[Saffas Missionary]

Check out my hand drawn mountian lion! It took me days. There IS a body to go with it but I just decided not to scan it on. Now, just so you dont think it is plagerized, the stance was taken out of a drawing book by Norman Adams and Joe Singer, but it is greatly modified in color and shading.

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/6339/mountainlion5lf.png

there is a link to it...this is my FIRST fan art show . Please, constructive criticism is accepted but please be easy on me

the scan cut out a lot of the shading etc so realize it looks a lot better than it does in the image.

Even though he's not very nice, my brother helped me a little on him. I did most of the drawing though

This post has been edited by FafsaTheElf: Jun 13 2006, 11:11 PM

[Fuzzy Knight]

Looks great Fafsa, really nice drawing - guess it look a lot of time If you would want some critisme I guess I could say that too, even thought it's not much. Ehm, let's see... for me, the back foot (the right one) seems a little small and not all in line. A mistake I even do myself quite often is that things sometimes doesn't fit inn that good, but it's just a minor mistake here cause it's not really that easy to see...

Hmm, anything else - well if I look at some pic's of different cat animals and Mountain Lions, then all I can say is that everything looks pretty perfect except that the back-hight drops a little much before it reaches the tail... If there would be a little more straighter line from the neck to the tail, only having a few bumps for the shoulder blades could look good...

Anything else... NO. Great work Fafsa, I really hope you can draw some more - because this is really good.

BTW, remember that Neela makes 3D stuff on a program - hard work that too, but you draw by hand, something very different At least when it comes to simple mistakes as shadow, size and stuff...