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Revan part 1, My first fan fic. |
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Lord Revan |
May 26 2006, 08:44 AM
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From: Texas, USA

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A tall brooding figure looked over the landscape, from the atop a sigil keep in Oblivion... The man reflected on how many years ago he was made the ultimate pawn of the Deadric princes.
That was 113 years ago, yet it felt like yesterday. Orphaned shortly after birth, he had grow up as an assassin of the Morag Tong, in Vardenfell, one of the best among his peers. But when the Dark Brotherhood came to Morrowind, it all went wrong. The small enclave that he was being trained at was raided.
Though he and the other Morag Tong fought and killed many of the intruders, Revan was separted from the Morag Tong by the Dark Brotherhood assassins. Disheartened by the deaths of those he'd grown up with, he refused to go to another guild hall. For many years, Revan moved restlessly, his heart hardened until he became solitary and distrusting of others in general.
Over those long 120 years I've worked with almost every Deadric Prince. He thought to himself.
Azura, Maphala, Mehrunes Dagon, and Hurcine had used him to accomplish things beyond their devine influence. Revan had done much: plundering, medling with other lord's affairs, and such. As he stalked down the hallway several dramora were gorging themselves on roasted flesh. Revan despised them and saw them as simple brutes in that repulsive, jagged armor of theirs. In contrast, his armor was light-wieght, smooth, and flexible. The woven underlayer of the armor was as black as the ebony, while the pauldrons, greaves, boots, gauntlets, cuirass, and helmet were a light red shade.
The hellish landscape of Mehrunes Dagon's domain greeted him as he exited the keep. While the mortal world was still protected from Oblivion, Revan could summon a small tear in the devine barrier. The journey from Oblivion by these means was as comfortable to say the least. There was no light, but it was not the sacred darkness of night.
The rift opened a few feet of the ground and Revan landed feet-first in a patch of snow. The cold didn't bother him, he couldn't feel it through his armor. I should take my time, anything to stall returning to find another job....
Despite his dislike of snow, Revan found the Jerall Mountains more appealing than Lord Dagon's realm. Casting a glance up the road, he spotted his targets' not-so-secure hideout: Bruma. So, an entire vampire clan, should be interesting.....
This post has been edited by Lord Revan: May 24 2007, 06:40 PM
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Lord Revan |
Jun 19 2006, 05:01 AM
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ok sorry for making you guys wait, but here it is.
--- Revan chapter 1/part 2: The Massacre
Revan opened his eyes, and saw the full moon almost at it's peak; it was time. As he leaped over the walls of Bruma; he rooted out the two other parties of combatants.
They were both converging outside of Echo Cave; as the shadow watched the carnage unfold.... the vampire's had three archers perched on the long branch of a tree, several summoners, and the mother and father themselves clad head to toe in glass armor. The werewolves entered the clearing with inhuman speed, as the the two groups fought the battle split into several small head-to-head brawls.
It was a mortal's worst fear realized: a werewolf, impaled with a dwarven arrow of burning, vaulted and tore a mer archer from the branch by her leg and snapped her neck with a flick of it's head. The other vampiric archers then nocked and fired their arrows in unison at the wolf, which became encrusted with icicles and burst into flames and fell dead. The summoners conjured deadra and undead, all of which fell quickly before the blood-crazed wolfs.
Soon all fighters that remained were the Vampire mother and father, the Werewolf Chiefton, and ,of course, the shrouded observer, all but the latter were exausted. However the wolf (who possesed the strength and primal fury of an animal) was all over the to panicking vampires, and first the patron.... and the as the matron fell to the beast, the shadow made his move.
Revan releashed a flock of throwing knives and ninja stars, all guided by their throwers's will, to strike the ailing survivor..... not one missed their mark. The wolf, pooling blood, released a pained howl of pain and fell to its knees. Then the shadow leaped from his tree branch, landing on the dying monster, loped his arms over the wolfs neck, wrung it..... and then it was all over just as the sun came into sight.
This post has been edited by Lord Revan: Jun 19 2006, 08:51 PM
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Lord Revan Revan part 1 May 26 2006, 08:44 AM Lord Revan {edited}-post moved Jun 14 2006, 03:54 PM Lord Revan ..... uh any constructive critic would be appricia... Jun 14 2006, 10:44 PM Mazelure Man... you have good discriptive skills... but you... Jun 14 2006, 11:35 PM Lord Revan thanks for the critic; I'm not used to this an... Jun 15 2006, 04:30 AM Lord Revan His marks were a vampire patriarch and matriarch w... Jun 15 2006, 05:35 AM Kiln Not bad, the only thing that I wish is that you... Jun 15 2006, 05:53 AM Lord Revan sorry, but I've a had a good night's sleep... Jun 15 2006, 07:20 PM jack cloudy Ah, interesting story. Divide-and-conquer, a class... Jun 16 2006, 08:45 PM Lord Revan Thanks guys :D I've read alot of fan fics fo... Jun 16 2006, 09:46 PM The Metal Mallet I certainly agree that was a massacre. It was def... Jun 19 2006, 05:47 AM Mazelure Hell yeah that was a massacre... more like a slaug... Jun 19 2006, 02:38 PM Lord Revan thanks guys
Metal Mallet I've read some of ... Jun 19 2006, 08:19 PM The Metal Mallet Well thank you. Hopefully I can consistantly keep... Jun 19 2006, 08:36 PM jack cloudy Ah, someone who lets others do the dirty work. (we... Jun 19 2006, 08:48 PM Lord Revan
Well Revan enjoys subtlety....... but he does ... Jun 19 2006, 08:54 PM y101 I like it. Your character very cunning. He acts li... Jul 2 2006, 08:46 PM Lord Revan
I use a lot of sources for inspiration.
O... Jul 5 2006, 04:04 AM jack cloudy Hmm, emotional. :) So he's going to Valenwood... Jul 5 2006, 08:40 AM The Metal Mallet Ooooo, some of Revan's mysterious background i... Jul 6 2006, 12:52 AM Lord Revan Well here's an update, sorry it took so long.
... Jul 11 2006, 03:22 AM The Metal Mallet Interesting duel between Revan and this mysterious... Jul 11 2006, 10:05 PM jack cloudy Interesting indeed. I'll be waiting to see wha... Jul 12 2006, 02:36 PM minque
Interesting indeed. I'll be waiting to see wh... Jul 12 2006, 09:53 PM Lord Revan Ok guys heres a little explanation for you,
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... Jul 12 2006, 11:50 PM jack cloudy Interesting. Very interesting. And now I want to s... Jul 13 2006, 08:33 AM Lord Revan ok Jack you asked for it and you got it
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Re... Jul 13 2006, 07:22 PM jack cloudy Oops, trouble. :) Jul 13 2006, 07:54 PM The Metal Mallet The suspense strikes again!
I wonder how this... Jul 13 2006, 11:56 PM minque
The suspense strikes again!
I wonder how thi... Jul 15 2006, 10:07 PM Lord Revan I'm to tired to update, I'll write it afte... Jul 16 2006, 06:17 AM Lord Revan Trouble???....... well yes, but not the way you th... Jul 16 2006, 07:48 PM The Metal Mallet This time I see things going less nicely, unlike t... Jul 16 2006, 09:02 PM Lord Revan Ok, another update everyone
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Revan part 1/ ch... Jul 18 2006, 03:47 AM The Metal Mallet Drama, drama, drama. A few surprizing twists in t... Jul 18 2006, 04:27 AM Lord Revan
Drama, drama, drama. I'm glad no limbs were l... Jul 18 2006, 08:15 PM minque Yay....thrilling it is.....wait for more I do........ Jul 18 2006, 10:45 PM Lord Revan Ok here's another update everyone, this is the... Jul 20 2006, 10:03 PM The Metal Mallet Oooooo, I expect a good duel Revan, don't disa... Jul 20 2006, 10:15 PM Lord Revan ok, ok Metal Mallet i'll try to get some gore ... Jul 20 2006, 11:13 PM The Metal Mallet Woooo!! Drama and gore, the best of both w... Jul 20 2006, 11:30 PM Lord Revan ok everyone, first part of the fanale right here... Jul 25 2006, 05:29 AM The Metal Mallet Excellent Finale! Revan made quite a daring e... Jul 25 2006, 06:08 AM Lord Revan my next post will be the 2nd half to the fanale of... Jul 25 2006, 07:14 AM Lord Revan Ok this is it :D
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Revan part 1/ finale
... Jul 26 2006, 04:25 AM The Metal Mallet An excellent conclusion to a beginning of a very s... Jul 26 2006, 06:08 AM minque This has been a very interesting story.....now it ... Aug 20 2006, 03:19 PM
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