First fan art; Mountain Lion, please criticize Options

[Saffas Missionary]

Check out my hand drawn mountian lion! It took me days. There IS a body to go with it but I just decided not to scan it on. Now, just so you dont think it is plagerized, the stance was taken out of a drawing book by Norman Adams and Joe Singer, but it is greatly modified in color and shading.

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/6339/mountainlion5lf.png

there is a link to it...this is my FIRST fan art show . Please, constructive criticism is accepted but please be easy on me

the scan cut out a lot of the shading etc so realize it looks a lot better than it does in the image.

Even though he's not very nice, my brother helped me a little on him. I did most of the drawing though

This post has been edited by FafsaTheElf: Jun 13 2006, 11:11 PM

[milanius]

Here is the whole picture now.

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/2967/wh...tainlion6ya.png

Sorry it's a little light due to the fact it's done in pencil and my scanner doesn't catch most of it

I'm not constructive and I'm no godamn critic - but I know what I like... and I like this. The Mountain Lion here looks powerful, massive and really ready, at the apex of his (hers?) strenght and agility. I like the pose, although I wonder: are those cats really that massive ? I thought they were more slender, like pumas ? Oh, nevermind it - the picture looks great.