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In service of a fallen god., Yup, I don't know how to quit. |
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jack cloudy |
Aug 7 2006, 09:16 PM
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Master

Joined: 11-February 06
From: In a cold place.

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You know the drill, I finish one story and begin with the next. Meet my latest character and headremover, Morvayn Dres.
In the service of a fallen god.
Morvayn Dres took two deep, silent breaths. He filled his lungs till they were about to burst. In one smooth motion, he stepped out of the shadows behind the pillar and drew his sword at the same time, already swinging it at his first victim before the Orc could blink. He pressed the point of his saber in the arm beneath the pauldron, just deep enough to draw blood. Smoothly, he pulled his sword back a bit, flicked his wrist to aim the blade and performed a backhanded slash that neatly separated the head from the neck.
The entire time between Morvayn stepping into view and the Orc’s head flying away could be counted in a single heartbeat. The other Orcs in the room hadn’t noticed anything yet. Morvayn calmly walked towards the back of the nearest one. He enjoyed the look of surprise and then horror when the Orc turned around. Behind Morvayn, the corpse of his first victim noisily dropped to the floor.
,,In the name of my lord, I bring justice! You will join your unholy master in Oblivion!” Morvayn shouted and raised his saber. He ducked the Orc’s warhammer and cut through his opponents legs. He raised himself, cut off another head and turned towards his next victim. Magical mist poured out of the two Orcs and entered the man who had slain them.
Morvayn felt the mist filling his veins and with it, the power it gave him. When he was two steps away from the third Orc, he acted. He moved faster than anything the Orcs had seen before. In their eyes, he was death turned into flesh and blood, with a grim face they only knew too well. All three remaining Orcs died before they could raise their weapons.
The power his sword had granted him fled and he turned to watch how the corpses fell to the floor. Morvayn removed his helmet and wiped the sweat from his forehead. His red eyes blazed with a fanatical anger when he turned to the statue that dominated everything else in the room. If it was meant to intimidate, it failed to serve its purpose on the Dunmer. ,,Mehrunes Dagon, this shrine shall no longer worship you. For the glory of my lord, I have brought justice.” He said to the four-armed statue of the Daedra and walked out of the room.
Outside the shrine, his face was covered by his helmet again. He gave a few quick orders to the group that had waited outside for his return. Morvayn had concluded they would only get in the way during the fight and told them to stay at the entrance. ,,You, pick up the heads of the outlanders and put them on stakes in front of the entrance. That should serve as a warning to any cultist who wishes to rebuilt the shrine. The rest of you, destroy the shrine. When we leave, I want that accursed place to be in pieces.”
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Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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jack cloudy |
Aug 11 2006, 11:53 AM
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Master

Joined: 11-February 06
From: In a cold place.

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Sorry for the holdup, writer's block. Ahem, no story of mine is complete without a Redguard waving a sword and kicking behinds. So here he is, Redguard waving sword and kicking....nothing.
The sun was at its peak and the temperature in the city was as hot as a forge in Oblivion itself. Most people had sought the shadows to stay cool. Not the leatherclad Dunmer who walked through the city at a brisk pace. Morvayn had been in Sentinel for a week now and was frankly, bored. There just wasn’t anything for him to do. He was really just waiting till this so called best warrior of Tamriel had been chosen. At least things were about to end now. The semi-finals were busy right now and the finals would be tomorrow.
No one stopped him at the entrance to the castle. Why should they? Half of Tamriel wanted to see the fighting. If a guard would have tried to stop the flood of people, he would be cushed like an insect. He passed merchants trying to sell their wares, gamblers, beggers, a few members of the thieves guild and a lot of spectators. Pushing a path through the mass, he managed to get himself a place where he could see the arena.
The arena was really just a big patch of sand with a white circle around it. The rules were simple. Two contestants would fight within the ring. Crossing the white line or harming spectators would lead to defeat. Other than that, the fight would continue till one fighter gave up or got killed, whichever came first. The only other rule forbid the use of Magicka. This was a competition to find the best warrior, not the best mage.
Morvayn took on a casual pose and prepared for another boring day. The current match was between a Redguard and an Altmer. The Altmer was tall and dressed in expensive clothing. He weaved two Silver Wakizashis in a complex dance-like pattern. All of his movements were calculated and calm, a slowness that hid lightning-fast strikes.
His opponent was pretty much the opposite. Instead of two Wakizashis, the Redguard had chosen a simple Iron Longsword as his blade. He was a head shorter than most of his kind and wore cheap, dust-covered clothing. He looked like a nomad who lived in the dessert. His movements were crude but effective, switching from a one-handed grip to a two-handed at times.
The two stared each other down for a few seconds, looking for a potential weakness. The Redguard stepped forward and delivered a low thrust, using the longer range of the longsword to his advantage. The Altmer stepped to the side, parried with one Wakizashi and stepped closer before slashing at the Redguard’s neck. The Redguard dropped and performed a backwards roll, stopping at the edge of the arena.
The same thing repeated itself a few times. The Redguard would try to attack from a long distance and the Altmer would counter with his exotic dual-wield style. Morvayn was about to turn away and find something more interesting when something caught his attention. All this time, the Redguard had been surpressing a grin. Now that grin revealed itself and he launched himself forward. Morvayn continued to watch.
The Redguard got as close as he could and wildly began to hammer away at the Altmer’s left side. This was no longer a contest of skill. It was pure hack and slash. The Altmer almost looked bored while he blocked and parried the longsword again and again with one of his Wakizashis.
Morvayn ignored the rest of the crowd and the words of disappointment. There had to be a trick somewhere. There was simply too much difference between the style the Redguard had been using first and his hacking right now. He looked closely at the situation and a thin smile crossed his lips. He might actually start to respect an outlander like this. The Redguard’s plan was ridiculous, simple but it might just work.
The Redguard did just what Morvayn had expected. After almost two full minutes of hacking at the Altmer’s left side, he suddenly switched to the right side. The Altmer had gotten used to defending his left Wakizashi and tried to do so. Left Wakizashi collided with right Wakizashi bringing the Altmer out of balance and creating a huge opening. The Redguard stepped around his opponent and calmly tapped the Altmer’s neck with his longsword. ,,Give up?” was the first thing the Redguard said since the start of the match. The Altmer nodded and hung his head. ,,Good. Now if you just keep yourself from falling into a pattern, you might win the game next time. I doubt I’ll be competing so you’ll stand a chance.” The Redguard commented before walking away through the crowd. Morvayn waited for a moment and then followed. He hoped to get a conversation with the man.
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Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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jack cloudy In service of a fallen god. Aug 7 2006, 09:16 PM jack cloudy The people of Vivec respectfully cleared a path fo... Aug 8 2006, 11:31 AM The Metal Mallet Oooooo, a very promising start to your next fic. ... Aug 8 2006, 07:40 PM The Metal Mallet That Redguard must have some great endurance to ha... Aug 11 2006, 05:38 PM jack cloudy Well, he's a tough guy alright. Sorry about th... Aug 12 2006, 07:30 PM The Metal Mallet Hmmm... no... It can't be... This Luper isn... Aug 12 2006, 08:07 PM jack cloudy No, he's not lying. :D Aug 12 2006, 08:21 PM Kiln Man Jack, the frequency at which you pump out thes... Aug 13 2006, 04:27 AM jack cloudy Kiln, I will accept your apology if you promise me... Aug 13 2006, 08:53 PM The Metal Mallet Awww, I wanna see more Luper, but it's going t... Aug 13 2006, 09:06 PM jack cloudy Sorry, but the duel will start tomorrow. The intro... Aug 13 2006, 09:39 PM The Metal Mallet Hooray for cameos! That's the neat thing ... Aug 13 2006, 10:37 PM jack cloudy Ah yes, cameos. Well I did have to pull them out s... Aug 15 2006, 07:01 PM The Metal Mallet It all worked out nicely for Morvayn it seems. Th... Aug 15 2006, 09:11 PM jack cloudy Sorry, just a short one today. :(
Luper wasn’t... Aug 17 2006, 09:15 PM The Metal Mallet Hehe, a bit of a comical (and frustrating for Morv... Aug 17 2006, 09:19 PM jack cloudy Not a lot of perils. Remember, Luper is pretty muc... Aug 20 2006, 03:05 PM Kiln
,,Trying to surprise us, Redguard?” Morvayn respo... Aug 20 2006, 07:15 PM minque Luper Luper! Always fun to follow his adventur... Aug 20 2006, 04:21 PM The Metal Mallet Excellent update Jack. Nice one liners as usual t... Aug 20 2006, 08:13 PM Avego Nice story, gonna do some reading of the original ... Aug 21 2006, 10:11 PM minque yes indeed! excellent writing! Aug 21 2006, 10:21 PM jack cloudy Gah, I hate real life. Gotta go.
At first glanc... Aug 27 2006, 08:29 PM The Metal Mallet Yay! More cameos! Hopefully Jarik doesn... Aug 27 2006, 08:49 PM jack cloudy I think my cameos are getting a bit overdone. So t... Aug 31 2006, 07:14 PM The Metal Mallet That cameo was definitely used well, jacky boy. T... Aug 31 2006, 09:32 PM jack cloudy Comical enough like this? :)
,,You call that f... Sep 2 2006, 09:02 PM The Metal Mallet Hehehe comical indeed, Jack, good work!
I won... Sep 3 2006, 02:54 AM minque Yay....heh a bunch of updates .....nice Jack! ... Sep 3 2006, 04:50 PM jack cloudy *yawn* Sorry, but I'm really in need of a soft... Sep 9 2006, 10:00 PM The Metal Mallet Hmm I see a pattern with Nord characters.... It s... Sep 10 2006, 12:29 AM jack cloudy Yeah, Nords can be evil. I first thought of an Orc... Sep 18 2006, 08:55 PM The Metal Mallet Sorry, have to do this:
DUN DUN DUN!!... Sep 18 2006, 10:12 PM jack cloudy Alright, it's time for the massive battle... Sep 26 2006, 05:34 PM The Metal Mallet So many of our speculations are revealed, Luper IS... Sep 26 2006, 10:40 PM jack cloudy Sorry, I just can't say goodbye to the old guy... Oct 2 2006, 08:11 PM The Metal Mallet Gasp! Oh no! Morvayn stuck in Oblivion... Oct 3 2006, 03:13 AM jack cloudy Muhahaha! I'm back, get ready for the pain... Oct 14 2006, 05:09 PM The Metal Mallet Take that Mehrunes! That feat that Luper did ... Oct 14 2006, 05:42 PM jack cloudy Wow, a bit messy this one. I know that this is a m... Oct 15 2006, 07:30 PM The Metal Mallet Really creative thinking with the advanced vampiri... Oct 15 2006, 09:42 PM jack cloudy Morvayn drifted on the verge of consciousness for ... Oct 17 2006, 10:24 PM The Metal Mallet I wasn't expecting such a thrilling end as thi... Oct 18 2006, 12:10 AM jack cloudy Thank you for reading it. And yeah, I know that I ... Oct 19 2006, 04:19 PM The Metal Mallet Ohwell, it'll be interesting to see what you d... Oct 19 2006, 07:52 PM minque Thank you for sharing this excellent story with us... Oct 19 2006, 09:59 PM
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