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In service of a fallen god., Yup, I don't know how to quit. |
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jack cloudy |
Aug 7 2006, 09:16 PM
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Joined: 11-February 06
From: In a cold place.

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You know the drill, I finish one story and begin with the next. Meet my latest character and headremover, Morvayn Dres.
In the service of a fallen god.
Morvayn Dres took two deep, silent breaths. He filled his lungs till they were about to burst. In one smooth motion, he stepped out of the shadows behind the pillar and drew his sword at the same time, already swinging it at his first victim before the Orc could blink. He pressed the point of his saber in the arm beneath the pauldron, just deep enough to draw blood. Smoothly, he pulled his sword back a bit, flicked his wrist to aim the blade and performed a backhanded slash that neatly separated the head from the neck.
The entire time between Morvayn stepping into view and the Orc’s head flying away could be counted in a single heartbeat. The other Orcs in the room hadn’t noticed anything yet. Morvayn calmly walked towards the back of the nearest one. He enjoyed the look of surprise and then horror when the Orc turned around. Behind Morvayn, the corpse of his first victim noisily dropped to the floor.
,,In the name of my lord, I bring justice! You will join your unholy master in Oblivion!” Morvayn shouted and raised his saber. He ducked the Orc’s warhammer and cut through his opponents legs. He raised himself, cut off another head and turned towards his next victim. Magical mist poured out of the two Orcs and entered the man who had slain them.
Morvayn felt the mist filling his veins and with it, the power it gave him. When he was two steps away from the third Orc, he acted. He moved faster than anything the Orcs had seen before. In their eyes, he was death turned into flesh and blood, with a grim face they only knew too well. All three remaining Orcs died before they could raise their weapons.
The power his sword had granted him fled and he turned to watch how the corpses fell to the floor. Morvayn removed his helmet and wiped the sweat from his forehead. His red eyes blazed with a fanatical anger when he turned to the statue that dominated everything else in the room. If it was meant to intimidate, it failed to serve its purpose on the Dunmer. ,,Mehrunes Dagon, this shrine shall no longer worship you. For the glory of my lord, I have brought justice.” He said to the four-armed statue of the Daedra and walked out of the room.
Outside the shrine, his face was covered by his helmet again. He gave a few quick orders to the group that had waited outside for his return. Morvayn had concluded they would only get in the way during the fight and told them to stay at the entrance. ,,You, pick up the heads of the outlanders and put them on stakes in front of the entrance. That should serve as a warning to any cultist who wishes to rebuilt the shrine. The rest of you, destroy the shrine. When we leave, I want that accursed place to be in pieces.”
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Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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jack cloudy |
Aug 13 2006, 08:53 PM
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Master

Joined: 11-February 06
From: In a cold place.

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Kiln, I will accept your apology if you promise me one thing. Please continue your excellent work with the Eldest councillor. Alright, time to continue. I might post another update tonight if I'm lucky. I'm going to do the best I can with the finals. Why? Because a Luper is in it and guys called Luper deserve a good fight. Morvayn spent the rest of the day in his room. His conversation with Luper had made him feel uneasy. ,,Did he lie to me?”He shook his head at that thought. During the years he’d learned when people lied and when they didn’t. Luper hadn’t lied, but he hadn’t told the full truth either. One thing was sure, the Redguard was a lot more than he was willing to show. With more questions than he could answer, Morvayn fell asleep. ,,Morvayn of House Dres. Heed the call of your master!” Morvayn opened his eyes. He found himself floating in an empty space, suited in his Ordinator armour. In front of him, the divine shape of Vivec revealed itself. Morvayn kneeled in the air and bowed his head. ,,Lord Vivec.”
,,You are in a place I myself have created for the sole purpose of communicating with those who serve me. In here, time has no meaning. If I could, I could teach you my lessons for a thousand years and not a single second would have passed in Tamriel. Now, have you reached Sentinel?” The god spoke and waited. ,,Yes, lord. I have successfully made the journey. The competition has been fierce. Out of fivehundred competitors, only two remain. The finals shall be held tomorrow, in front of king Arthago.”
,,Good. Now Morvayn, do you believe you can find the right men to accompany you into the treacherous Black Marsh?” The god asked. ,,I do have several candidates. One of them shall fight in the finals tomorrow.” ,,Refuse him if he wins. With victory comes pride and glory. You will not be able to travel fast when your companion is well known. Now rest, Morvayn of House Dres. Tomorrow, the journey shall begin. The High Ordinator shall require all of his strength for the challenge that awaits. Fear not, for my blessing shall be with you.” The living god faded from view and Morvayn returned to his slumber.
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Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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jack cloudy In service of a fallen god. Aug 7 2006, 09:16 PM jack cloudy The people of Vivec respectfully cleared a path fo... Aug 8 2006, 11:31 AM The Metal Mallet Oooooo, a very promising start to your next fic. ... Aug 8 2006, 07:40 PM jack cloudy Sorry for the holdup, writer's block. Ahem, no... Aug 11 2006, 11:53 AM The Metal Mallet That Redguard must have some great endurance to ha... Aug 11 2006, 05:38 PM jack cloudy Well, he's a tough guy alright. Sorry about th... Aug 12 2006, 07:30 PM The Metal Mallet Hmmm... no... It can't be... This Luper isn... Aug 12 2006, 08:07 PM jack cloudy No, he's not lying. :D Aug 12 2006, 08:21 PM Kiln Man Jack, the frequency at which you pump out thes... Aug 13 2006, 04:27 AM The Metal Mallet Awww, I wanna see more Luper, but it's going t... Aug 13 2006, 09:06 PM jack cloudy Sorry, but the duel will start tomorrow. The intro... Aug 13 2006, 09:39 PM The Metal Mallet Hooray for cameos! That's the neat thing ... Aug 13 2006, 10:37 PM jack cloudy Ah yes, cameos. Well I did have to pull them out s... Aug 15 2006, 07:01 PM The Metal Mallet It all worked out nicely for Morvayn it seems. Th... Aug 15 2006, 09:11 PM jack cloudy Sorry, just a short one today. :(
Luper wasn’t... Aug 17 2006, 09:15 PM The Metal Mallet Hehe, a bit of a comical (and frustrating for Morv... Aug 17 2006, 09:19 PM jack cloudy Not a lot of perils. Remember, Luper is pretty muc... Aug 20 2006, 03:05 PM Kiln
,,Trying to surprise us, Redguard?” Morvayn respo... Aug 20 2006, 07:15 PM minque Luper Luper! Always fun to follow his adventur... Aug 20 2006, 04:21 PM The Metal Mallet Excellent update Jack. Nice one liners as usual t... Aug 20 2006, 08:13 PM Avego Nice story, gonna do some reading of the original ... Aug 21 2006, 10:11 PM minque yes indeed! excellent writing! Aug 21 2006, 10:21 PM jack cloudy Gah, I hate real life. Gotta go.
At first glanc... Aug 27 2006, 08:29 PM The Metal Mallet Yay! More cameos! Hopefully Jarik doesn... Aug 27 2006, 08:49 PM jack cloudy I think my cameos are getting a bit overdone. So t... Aug 31 2006, 07:14 PM The Metal Mallet That cameo was definitely used well, jacky boy. T... Aug 31 2006, 09:32 PM jack cloudy Comical enough like this? :)
,,You call that f... Sep 2 2006, 09:02 PM The Metal Mallet Hehehe comical indeed, Jack, good work!
I won... Sep 3 2006, 02:54 AM minque Yay....heh a bunch of updates .....nice Jack! ... Sep 3 2006, 04:50 PM jack cloudy *yawn* Sorry, but I'm really in need of a soft... Sep 9 2006, 10:00 PM The Metal Mallet Hmm I see a pattern with Nord characters.... It s... Sep 10 2006, 12:29 AM jack cloudy Yeah, Nords can be evil. I first thought of an Orc... Sep 18 2006, 08:55 PM The Metal Mallet Sorry, have to do this:
DUN DUN DUN!!... Sep 18 2006, 10:12 PM jack cloudy Alright, it's time for the massive battle... Sep 26 2006, 05:34 PM The Metal Mallet So many of our speculations are revealed, Luper IS... Sep 26 2006, 10:40 PM jack cloudy Sorry, I just can't say goodbye to the old guy... Oct 2 2006, 08:11 PM The Metal Mallet Gasp! Oh no! Morvayn stuck in Oblivion... Oct 3 2006, 03:13 AM jack cloudy Muhahaha! I'm back, get ready for the pain... Oct 14 2006, 05:09 PM The Metal Mallet Take that Mehrunes! That feat that Luper did ... Oct 14 2006, 05:42 PM jack cloudy Wow, a bit messy this one. I know that this is a m... Oct 15 2006, 07:30 PM The Metal Mallet Really creative thinking with the advanced vampiri... Oct 15 2006, 09:42 PM jack cloudy Morvayn drifted on the verge of consciousness for ... Oct 17 2006, 10:24 PM The Metal Mallet I wasn't expecting such a thrilling end as thi... Oct 18 2006, 12:10 AM jack cloudy Thank you for reading it. And yeah, I know that I ... Oct 19 2006, 04:19 PM The Metal Mallet Ohwell, it'll be interesting to see what you d... Oct 19 2006, 07:52 PM minque Thank you for sharing this excellent story with us... Oct 19 2006, 09:59 PM
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