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Serene of Cyrodiil, her true story, chapter 1 |
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minque |
Feb 26 2005, 11:52 PM
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Wise Woman

Joined: 11-February 05
From: Where I can watch you!!

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Ok so at last I came round to do it.....posting my story that is! I must thank all of you who have encouraged me to do it (oh yes you know who you are!)
Special thanks to Treydog who has helped me with editing and also for being a sounding-board, and thus kept me writing.
I now start with the prologue of my story just to see if you think you like it and want to read more
Enjoy!
Dedication
This work is dedicated to Treydog, whose enthusiasm encouraged me to really write this story.
Prologue.
Alone at last, I close the door behind me as I enter the small room which serves as my private library. I’m proud to say that I probably have the most complete collection of books in Vvardenfell these days, though it has taken me the last seven years to get it.
As I tucked my daughter into bed a while ago, I decided that now the time had come to write down my story. Mostly for her sake, but also for me; I need to get it off my mind, in order to continue with my life and to be able to fulfill the tasks that lie before me. Then there are the numerous questions asked by the little girl lying in the next room, unaware of the fact that she’s a miracle of the Age. . Questions about why there are so few children around and why they all seem to be nearly the same age, that is, age 5 and lower. Questions about why everyone she meets looks at me, her mother, with admiration and respect. Questions about why there is a non-ending row of visitors who want to see me and so keep me from being with her, like a normal mother would be.
I know the answers to her questions, but providing those answers means I will have to tell her the whole story, the story about me, Serene of Cyrodiil, a legionnaire’s daughter of uncertain heritage, who has become one of the most powerful and famous people in Vvardenfell….
So there it is......feel free to comment, it´s a short one I know but I have to start somehow.....
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Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)Facebook
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minque |
Mar 3 2005, 01:44 AM
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Wise Woman

Joined: 11-February 05
From: Where I can watch you!!

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As I slowly walked along the Nibenay River I thought about how this day had forever changed my life. I’d never go back to Vantinius Manor; I didn’t belong there anymore, not being the legitimate daughter of Rufus and Larissa. I also wondered why I never had any brothers and sisters…..Why would an Imperial General settle for only one heir? And that heir being a GIRL? Something was very wrong here and I couldn’t figure out what it was. I then noticed a flickering light to my left. My first thought was that my father’s men had found me, because I was sure they were sent out looking for me. No way would General Vantinius cope with the humiliation of a run-away daughter, even if that daughter was not of his own blood-line.
I quickly hid myself behind a gigantic cork-bulb plant growing beside the winding path. Not a sound could be heard, but the light was still there. I sneaked slowly towards it and then it was all clear… It was a lit-up window in a small shack and the flickering was just the trees waving in the chilly breeze….. I also by then knew what house it must be; I had found the Dunmer-settlement that was known to be somewhere in the Valley. Very few people actually knew about this little “village,” but as Ranya and I had become friends, she had told me about it. The Dunmers that inhabited this settlement were working in The City as underpaid semi-slaves, doing all the dirty work that the native Cyrodiils were too high-up to do. I remembered that I actually had been here, once or twice, together with Ranya, when I was a little girl, naturally in secret; my father would never allow me to mix with, as he used to say, “Minor races.”
When I entered the settlement I looked for the shack where Ranya´s family lived; at least they had met me and hopefully wouldn’t try to chase me away. As with all Dunmers there were a lot of people living in the same small building, so when I entered there were seven pairs of reddish eyes glaring at me with suspicion. I removed the hood of my robe to reveal my face.
“Serene!” Tamara, Ranya´s elder sister, flung herself up from her seat near the fire. “What in the name of Almalexia are you doing here? What’s happened to you? You look awful!”
“Thank you,” I replied with a twisted grin and felt the tears rising in my eyes, “now I know I’m with friends”
Tamara embraced me and held me tight to her chest while I cried my eyes out. When I calmed down a bit I thought of how wonderfully friendly these people were, considering they had not seen me for quite some years. I dried my face and sat down by the fire. It was early morning; the family had just started their breakfast and I was treated with what food and drink they had; hot Hackle-lo-tea, freshly made bread and some boiled ash-yam. Sitting there, warm and satisfied, I began to tell what happened to me last night. I watched the faces of the people around me- there was Tamara and four more of Ranya´s sisters, and their mother, all six with the beautiful red hair that obviously ran in the family, and another elderly woman who I didn’t recognize.
I spent the day in the hatch, resting, recovering from the events of yesterday. In the evening we all assembled by the fireplace, drinking strong tasty comberry-wine that made me very drunk and very sleepy….
When I woke up the following morning I had very vague memories from last night; I must have fallen asleep sitting by the fire. Now I was lying on a bedroll with a somewhat dirty blanket wrapped around me. The smell of Hackle-lo-tea brought me to my senses. Liana, one of Ranya´s younger sisters, brought me a cup and sat down beside me, watching me sadly. She told me that there had been some soldiers sneaking around the settlement during the night. “They were looking for you, Serene,” she said quietly and turned her face away from me. I nearly fainted when I heard this and cold sweat ran down my back and my mouth went completely dry. The thought of staying at the settlement for a couple of days, which was my original plan, was not an option anymore. I had to leave as soon as possible, so I gathered my things together, leaving the red bridal-robe behind as a thank-you for the hospitality shown to me.
Just as I was ready to exit the shack I heard terrible screaming from outside and with a crash the door was flung open and three bodies were cast inside. It was Tamara, her mother, and Kira, the youngest of the sisters. All three were badly injured, and covered with blood. I opened my mouth to ask what was going on when four imperial soldiers in heavy armour broke through the door, swords unsheathed. A distinct smell of cyrodiilic brandy filled the room and I instinctively dragged Liana to me and tried to shield her with my body
“So, there you are, Mistress Serene,” one of the soldiers took a step in my direction, with his hand stretched out to grab me. “The filthy bastards thought they’d get a neat ransom for kidnapping you, huh, but no way, they’re going to pay for this…..in blood!”
I then was grateful for my ability to sneak because as the drunken soldier was speaking I managed to get hold of the steel dagger that we used for cutting the bread last night.
“Stay away from me,” I shouted, pointing the dagger at the soldier’s belly. ”Just leave me alone!”
The soldier hesitated for a moment, then turned to his companions, laughing, “See boys, there we go……going to have some fun with that one huh?”
I tried to keep my hand steady, but I was shaking vigorously, sweat running down my back as I slowly moved sideways, to see what had happened to my Dunmer friends.
The soldiers argued among themselves about what they were going to do next; apparently they had different opinions, and were terribly drunk….
I kneeled by the three wounded Dunmer women and saw that Tamara and her mother were not breathing anymore; their throats were cut from side to side. Kira, on the other hand, seemed not to have been injured until I saw the blood emerging from between her legs. She had been severely molested, and she was only 7 years old. In unthinking rage I threw myself on to the nearest soldier and buried the dagger deep in his neck. With a roar he slowly sank to the floor with me still clinging to his back.
Then sheer hell broke loose. I luckily lost consciousness- maybe that saved me from going totally insane. The next thing I remember was pain, the most terrible pain I ever encountered. I was lying in a carriage on a dirty blanket that smelled of unspeakable things. The carriage was tossing and turning and I turned my head aside and vomited. With every movement of the carriage, the pain made me wish I could die, or at least pass out. I could feel that some of my ribs were broken; every breath caused the ends to dig into my lungs, and a deep cut in my left arm made it useless; but worst of all, my body below the waist was on fire, abused and tormented…..I could imagine what they’d done to me. Just before I finally passed out again, I wondered what had happened to my Dunmer friends and why nobody tried to save us…. And then, I happened to see the face of one of my tormentors, and that filled me with sheer horror…..I couldn’t believe it was him…
“Uncle Varus!” The words that came from my wounded lips were a bare whisper, but he looked at me with loathing and hatred from the back of his horse, and I knew I’d made a most powerful enemy.
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Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)Facebook
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minque Serene of Cyrodiil, her true story, chapter 1 Feb 26 2005, 11:52 PM General Edor Crespin It's rather short, but I am looking forward to see... Feb 27 2005, 12:23 AM minque It's rather short, but I am looking forward to see... Feb 27 2005, 12:41 AM Alexander well I've said it before minque. excellent work :g... Feb 27 2005, 01:54 AM OverrideB1 And you were worried about posting this... why?
... Feb 27 2005, 10:29 AM Elongar It's not that hard after all, is it? I'm not sure ... Feb 27 2005, 11:26 AM minque Thank you all for your kind comments....I´ll soon ... Feb 27 2005, 11:52 AM treydog After much anticipation, we finally get to see the... Feb 27 2005, 09:45 PM Soulseeker3.0 great job minque to bad i didn't see this earlyer.... Feb 27 2005, 09:56 PM minque Ok so here you are then.....the first part about S... Feb 27 2005, 10:46 PM minque Just want to show some more pictures of Serene...
... Feb 27 2005, 11:01 PM Alexander excellent work minque. really off to a great start... Feb 27 2005, 11:55 PM jonajosa Good job. I liked it. Keep it up. Feb 28 2005, 01:40 AM Soulseeker3.0 way to go Minque! one question though, she whent ... Feb 28 2005, 02:37 AM minque yes..she was ..her life was totally upside down an... Feb 28 2005, 02:40 AM Soulseeker3.0 oh well like i said, and everyone else that posted... Feb 28 2005, 04:27 AM treydog One of the things I really enjoy about this story ... Feb 28 2005, 03:11 PM OverrideB1 Like Treydog, I think it's great that you're givin... Feb 28 2005, 09:42 PM Soulseeker3.0 hey minque i wanted to ask this yesterday but forg... Feb 28 2005, 10:37 PM minque Ehh noo I cant say I did..in fact I do not even kn... Feb 28 2005, 11:24 PM Soulseeker3.0 oh nothing its just i'm reading the searies and in... Feb 28 2005, 11:40 PM jonajosa Alittle of topic but did you use mods to create yo... Feb 28 2005, 11:52 PM Ze Milanio I haven`t red the story (yet) but since I`ve seen ... Feb 28 2005, 11:53 PM Soulseeker3.0 I haven`t red the story (yet) but since I`ve seen ... Feb 28 2005, 11:54 PM minque Alittle of topic but did you use mods to create yo... Mar 1 2005, 12:15 AM jchamber
Ok.. so the prologue showed that Serene in fact ... Feb 12 2006, 02:50 AM Elongar I'm afraid I can't enlighten you but I can tell yo... Mar 1 2005, 06:45 PM Ze Milanio OK... first, sorry for the late reply - I red the ... Mar 1 2005, 07:01 PM minque OK... first, sorry for the late reply - I red the ... Mar 1 2005, 11:28 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow good job minque i fell sorry for the dunmer, a... Mar 3 2005, 02:08 AM Ze Milanio I feel... sorrow. Sorrow and rage, the two compani... Mar 3 2005, 12:26 PM treydog Moving scenes- I have always said that "art" is so... Mar 3 2005, 02:29 PM General Edor Crespin Nice job, minque. Two thumbs up. Mar 3 2005, 02:40 PM Elongar :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: Make that three th... Mar 3 2005, 07:02 PM minque The next time I opened my eyes I encountered darkn... Mar 5 2005, 02:29 PM OverrideB1 This is excellent Minque. I'm really enjoying this... Mar 5 2005, 03:02 PM Ze Milanio GRRRR :evil5: I feel like munching on some sewered... Mar 5 2005, 05:17 PM treydog I like the fact that we have an "enemy" to focus u... Mar 6 2005, 05:32 AM jonajosa Amazing. Your characters personalitys are done rea... Mar 6 2005, 03:55 PM Soulseeker3.0 i liuke your characters, well, not her uncle Varus... Mar 6 2005, 06:04 PM Elongar More please.
Encore, encore! :goodjob: :goodj... Mar 6 2005, 06:07 PM Magefire This has the potential to be something wonderful -... Mar 7 2005, 11:56 PM minque I was left alone in my cell again, sitting on the ... Mar 8 2005, 11:20 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow great minque!! i like the parts were Serene is... Mar 9 2005, 03:37 AM treydog Enjoyed the trial scene- also the way we get a sen... Mar 9 2005, 02:15 PM minque I opened my eyes, and sat up in my bed, still shiv... Mar 11 2005, 09:52 PM Oozae A professional writer you are my young padawanhttp... Mar 12 2005, 05:04 AM treydog I like the way you make the cell-mates individuals... Mar 13 2005, 02:26 AM minque We ate our meal in silence. Almina helped herself ... Mar 14 2005, 12:41 AM Ze Milanio The scenes and events are almost alive in my head,... Mar 14 2005, 11:35 PM Elongar Let's hope she gets to wield a DDK sometime then! Mar 15 2005, 03:06 PM jchamber ah thank you lots
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V V Feb 12 2006, 04:26 AM minque Aye..she will....in due time, but now the last par... Mar 16 2005, 11:14 PM Soulseeker3.0 great story Minque! i just read the last three par... Mar 17 2005, 02:26 AM minque great story Minque! i just read the last three par... Mar 17 2005, 08:46 AM Elongar If not, I'll start a petition to get him back!
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lol just have fun... i feel like an adult talki... Mar 18 2005, 11:34 PM jonajosa I wrote alot at your story at ES so if you wanna k... Mar 20 2005, 02:23 AM Elongar Copy an' paste? Mar 24 2005, 05:23 PM jonajosa um you have to forgive a slow person of his mistak... Mar 24 2005, 07:08 PM Tellie DDK= a Daedric Dai Katana. It's one of the mor... Feb 12 2006, 11:15 AM Daedroth That was great! I'll be reading more from ... Feb 28 2008, 09:03 PM SubRosa I just finished reading Chapter 1. Serene is a ver... Mar 28 2010, 08:32 AM minque @SubRosa! I'm very flattered you took your... Mar 28 2010, 06:25 PM SubRosa In the words of Kid Rock, it's not bragging if... Mar 28 2010, 10:37 PM minque Ah yes...the hair-mod I used hadn't the exact ... Mar 29 2010, 09:23 PM mALX I have been amazed and hooked by this story - and ... Apr 4 2010, 11:58 PM minque mALX, Thank you for your kind words, I really appr... Apr 5 2010, 12:42 AM Remko Just finished reading chapter one. I like it! ... Apr 7 2010, 04:09 PM mALX I have to admit I cried when she was sentenced and... Apr 7 2010, 11:38 PM minque mALX, Remko! i'm so glad you like my story... Apr 8 2010, 11:08 PM Grits Wow, Serene has had a rough start! I’m enjoyin... May 12 2011, 03:44 PM
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