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jack cloudy
post Aug 7 2006, 09:16 PM
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You know the drill, I finish one story and begin with the next. Meet my latest character and headremover, Morvayn Dres.


In the service of a fallen god.

Morvayn Dres took two deep, silent breaths. He filled his lungs till they were about to burst. In one smooth motion, he stepped out of the shadows behind the pillar and drew his sword at the same time, already swinging it at his first victim before the Orc could blink. He pressed the point of his saber in the arm beneath the pauldron, just deep enough to draw blood. Smoothly, he pulled his sword back a bit, flicked his wrist to aim the blade and performed a backhanded slash that neatly separated the head from the neck.

The entire time between Morvayn stepping into view and the Orc’s head flying away could be counted in a single heartbeat. The other Orcs in the room hadn’t noticed anything yet. Morvayn calmly walked towards the back of the nearest one. He enjoyed the look of surprise and then horror when the Orc turned around. Behind Morvayn, the corpse of his first victim noisily dropped to the floor.

,,In the name of my lord, I bring justice! You will join your unholy master in Oblivion!” Morvayn shouted and raised his saber. He ducked the Orc’s warhammer and cut through his opponents legs. He raised himself, cut off another head and turned towards his next victim. Magical mist poured out of the two Orcs and entered the man who had slain them.

Morvayn felt the mist filling his veins and with it, the power it gave him. When he was two steps away from the third Orc, he acted. He moved faster than anything the Orcs had seen before. In their eyes, he was death turned into flesh and blood, with a grim face they only knew too well. All three remaining Orcs died before they could raise their weapons.

The power his sword had granted him fled and he turned to watch how the corpses fell to the floor. Morvayn removed his helmet and wiped the sweat from his forehead. His red eyes blazed with a fanatical anger when he turned to the statue that dominated everything else in the room. If it was meant to intimidate, it failed to serve its purpose on the Dunmer.
,,Mehrunes Dagon, this shrine shall no longer worship you. For the glory of my lord, I have brought justice.” He said to the four-armed statue of the Daedra and walked out of the room.

Outside the shrine, his face was covered by his helmet again. He gave a few quick orders to the group that had waited outside for his return. Morvayn had concluded they would only get in the way during the fight and told them to stay at the entrance.
,,You, pick up the heads of the outlanders and put them on stakes in front of the entrance. That should serve as a warning to any cultist who wishes to rebuilt the shrine. The rest of you, destroy the shrine. When we leave, I want that accursed place to be in pieces.”




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jack cloudy
post Sep 2 2006, 09:02 PM
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Comical enough like this? smile.gif



,,You call that food?!” Even if the smell hadn’t told him he had found the kitchen, the voice did. Morvayn couldn’t help but be amused at the whole situation. Jarik was clearly unhappy. His face also bore the distinct markings of several slaps. Still, he defended himself with stubborn pride.
,,I eat this whenever I am away from civilization! It is food, very nutritious!” He barked back at his captor. The sound of a hand slapping across his cheek echoed through the room. Jarik brought up a hand and touched the stricken area.
,,You bwoke my cweekbwone, stuwpid Elb.” He mumbled angrily.
,,Well that’s your own fault. For as long as I’m here, this place is part of civilization so you dare to talk to me like that! I want food that tastes good, not this rotten Cliffracer dung!”

Morvayn didn’t know what the Nord was going through, but he could imagine. It wasn’t often that someone could casually break the bones of someone almost twice as big with nothing but a simple slap across the face. It was very embarrassing, not to mention that Jarik’s pride would suffer from it for a long time. The Dunmer stepped into the kitchen and cleared his throat.
,,Excuse me for intruding. I understand that you are not pleased with the actions of my companion but I would be grateful if you are a bit more careful with him. I kind of need him to be in a not so injured state for my mission.” He said with a cool and forced tone.

Jana looked away from her victim.
,,I thought I told you to stay where you were. I know you Ordinators love to say the word scum but that doesn’t mean you have to act like scum.” She complained.
,,Now if you know what’s good for you, you will leave and let me handle this. Don’t worry, I’ll be gentle to the big hormonefreak here.” She continued, calming down a little.
,,Now if you can’t even do something as simple as that, grab a towel and start cleaning the floor!” Morvayn heard barely after he’d stepped through the door.
,,Phew, I can’t believe everyone thinks that the most frightening thing about vampires are their teeth and the risk of becoming one. The last thing I’m scared off would be her teeth. Her anger, now that’s scary.” He thought to himself.

Apart from the trauma, the physical damage he received in the village turned out to be no big deal in the end. He’d just arrived back at the Telvanni tower when an Argonian came to him and handed over a potion. He sniffed it cautiously, who knew what those lizards would put in their potions. A careful taste of a single drop made him conclude that he was dealing with a harmless healing potion. He swallowed the liquid and winced as his bones grew back together.
,,Now I know why most healers add painkillers to their healing potions. Accelerated healing hurts as much as being stepped on by a Kagouti.”

He noticed later that he’d fallen asleep. He instantly realized that the healing potion also caused him to fall asleep. Why, he could only guess.
,,Back up again? Good Daedra, I don’t understand how you people ever managed to beat the Dwemer and make a bunch of gods when you sleep half of your life away.”
Morvayn rolled his eyes behind his closed eyelids. Being woken up by the Redguard was definitely not on his list of favourite moments of the day.
,,I’m sorry, it appears that someone here has slipped up during his alchemy. That healing potion knocked me out.” He grunted as he opened his eyes.

Luper grinned and shrugged.
,,Hey, it wasn’t me. Ever since I figured out that the only potions I make are the ones that make you sick and have you vomit throughout the day, I kept clear of the mortars and pestles.” He joked.
Morvayn thought of snapping something back but changed his mind. Luper had changed.

Not in his looks or his personality. His attire was different. The weathered clothes he wore were the same, except they now clearly covered a suit of armour. The iron sword was gone. Now, there was Daedric longsword to take its place as well as a large Claymore on his back. Two gauntlets of Dwemer steel covered his hands. The air around the man seemed to be buzzing with the power of enchantments.

,,Where did you get all that? Stolen from the invisible tower?” He asked out of curiosity.
,,No, this is mine. All honestly looted out of caves, tombs, ruins and other places. I left it behind when I travelled to Sentinel. It would be such a shame if something got stolen. Then I’d have to chase the thief, whack him on the head and give some stupid speech about why it is not smart to steal from someone like me.” The answer was a typical one that only someone like Luper would give.

Morvayn stood up and took in his surroundings. He was no longer in the village. The view that graced him was that of the Black Marsh. Jarik was sleeping on a tree root nearby. His face still bore the souvenirs from his encounter with Jana.
,,Thinking about that, just why do you live with vampires?”
Luper didn’t answer immediately. He then frowned with a strangely serious expression.
,,No good reason really. I met her a few years ago when I was still young and only half the swordswinger I am now. She insisted on running off into trouble so I started giving her sword lessons so I wouldn’t have to watch her back all the time. After she no longer ran into trouble, we learned of some more trouble that hadn’t revealed itself yet. I continued the lessons when I wasn’t beating up trouble all over the place and well, I never got around to leaving.”

His expression turned back to the normal arrogant one.
,,Oh yeah, I had to give you a message. Jana is really sorry that your visit was so rudely interrupted by the greedy Nord over there. She also says that you are quite attractive and she would really like it if you pay her a visit again sometime.” He said, grinning as usual.
,,Can I trust your words? This sounds a lot like one of your jokes again.” Morvayn responded in a sour tone.
,,Well, I admit that she didn’t say the attractive bit and the part about coming back. But I know her better than you do. I can tell you, you’ve got a good chance with the girl. So trust me.” Luper told him and winked.
,,Besides, after all those years, she’s turned into one of the three people I know who can beat me in a fight. I wouldn’t dare to lie……too much.” He added.

,,Now come on, the ruin is a good days march from here. Hey, you big blond bodybuilder who pumped up his muscles with Netch gas. Get up, we’re leaving.” It wasn’t long before the two men were flinging insults back and forth again.


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jack cloudy   In service of a fallen god.   Aug 7 2006, 09:16 PM
jack cloudy   The people of Vivec respectfully cleared a path fo...   Aug 8 2006, 11:31 AM
The Metal Mallet   Oooooo, a very promising start to your next fic. ...   Aug 8 2006, 07:40 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry for the holdup, writer's block. Ahem, no...   Aug 11 2006, 11:53 AM
The Metal Mallet   That Redguard must have some great endurance to ha...   Aug 11 2006, 05:38 PM
jack cloudy   Well, he's a tough guy alright. Sorry about th...   Aug 12 2006, 07:30 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hmmm... no... It can't be... This Luper isn...   Aug 12 2006, 08:07 PM
jack cloudy   No, he's not lying. :D   Aug 12 2006, 08:21 PM
Kiln   Man Jack, the frequency at which you pump out thes...   Aug 13 2006, 04:27 AM
jack cloudy   Kiln, I will accept your apology if you promise me...   Aug 13 2006, 08:53 PM
The Metal Mallet   Awww, I wanna see more Luper, but it's going t...   Aug 13 2006, 09:06 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry, but the duel will start tomorrow. The intro...   Aug 13 2006, 09:39 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hooray for cameos! That's the neat thing ...   Aug 13 2006, 10:37 PM
jack cloudy   Ah yes, cameos. Well I did have to pull them out s...   Aug 15 2006, 07:01 PM
The Metal Mallet   It all worked out nicely for Morvayn it seems. Th...   Aug 15 2006, 09:11 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry, just a short one today. :( Luper wasn’t...   Aug 17 2006, 09:15 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hehe, a bit of a comical (and frustrating for Morv...   Aug 17 2006, 09:19 PM
jack cloudy   Not a lot of perils. Remember, Luper is pretty muc...   Aug 20 2006, 03:05 PM
Kiln   ,,Trying to surprise us, Redguard?” Morvayn respo...   Aug 20 2006, 07:15 PM
minque   Luper Luper! Always fun to follow his adventur...   Aug 20 2006, 04:21 PM
The Metal Mallet   Excellent update Jack. Nice one liners as usual t...   Aug 20 2006, 08:13 PM
Avego   Nice story, gonna do some reading of the original ...   Aug 21 2006, 10:11 PM
minque   yes indeed! excellent writing!   Aug 21 2006, 10:21 PM
jack cloudy   Gah, I hate real life. Gotta go. At first glanc...   Aug 27 2006, 08:29 PM
The Metal Mallet   Yay! More cameos! Hopefully Jarik doesn...   Aug 27 2006, 08:49 PM
jack cloudy   I think my cameos are getting a bit overdone. So t...   Aug 31 2006, 07:14 PM
The Metal Mallet   That cameo was definitely used well, jacky boy. T...   Aug 31 2006, 09:32 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hehehe comical indeed, Jack, good work! I won...   Sep 3 2006, 02:54 AM
minque   Yay....heh a bunch of updates .....nice Jack! ...   Sep 3 2006, 04:50 PM
jack cloudy   *yawn* Sorry, but I'm really in need of a soft...   Sep 9 2006, 10:00 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hmm I see a pattern with Nord characters.... It s...   Sep 10 2006, 12:29 AM
jack cloudy   Yeah, Nords can be evil. I first thought of an Orc...   Sep 18 2006, 08:55 PM
The Metal Mallet   Sorry, have to do this: DUN DUN DUN!!...   Sep 18 2006, 10:12 PM
jack cloudy   Alright, it's time for the massive battle...   Sep 26 2006, 05:34 PM
The Metal Mallet   So many of our speculations are revealed, Luper IS...   Sep 26 2006, 10:40 PM
jack cloudy   Sorry, I just can't say goodbye to the old guy...   Oct 2 2006, 08:11 PM
The Metal Mallet   Gasp! Oh no! Morvayn stuck in Oblivion...   Oct 3 2006, 03:13 AM
jack cloudy   Muhahaha! I'm back, get ready for the pain...   Oct 14 2006, 05:09 PM
The Metal Mallet   Take that Mehrunes! That feat that Luper did ...   Oct 14 2006, 05:42 PM
jack cloudy   Wow, a bit messy this one. I know that this is a m...   Oct 15 2006, 07:30 PM
The Metal Mallet   Really creative thinking with the advanced vampiri...   Oct 15 2006, 09:42 PM
jack cloudy   Morvayn drifted on the verge of consciousness for ...   Oct 17 2006, 10:24 PM
The Metal Mallet   I wasn't expecting such a thrilling end as thi...   Oct 18 2006, 12:10 AM
jack cloudy   Thank you for reading it. And yeah, I know that I ...   Oct 19 2006, 04:19 PM
The Metal Mallet   Ohwell, it'll be interesting to see what you d...   Oct 19 2006, 07:52 PM
minque   Thank you for sharing this excellent story with us...   Oct 19 2006, 09:59 PM


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