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Lord Revan
post Sep 12 2006, 04:14 AM
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Well, for anyone who's read Revan don't worry I'm not abandoning it. I just decided to do a story on my actuel oblivion character. So I'm hoping you guys like it.

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Prologue: Vice and Graft

It was "happy hour" in the Flowing Bowl of Anvil. Most of the patrons were sailers on leave, "leave" in drunk sailer meant: take a break and get broke by drinking 'til you pass out. Beanlorn glanced around the crowds, and saw a familiar shape stride through the door.
Beanlorn knew the man and had even expected him. Ian did favors for certain people, and those people often did transactions in the Flowing Bowl. It steered some paying customers Beanlorn's way, so he kept quiet about the shady work going on in his establishment.

Ian spotted Beanlorn at the bar, and approached him. He casually dropped a pouch of coins on the counter, which Bealorn peeked into (he never was very subtle) to check that those were septims not some trash before he gestured to the rooms. As Ian stood in front of the 'wall' a board slid aside to let two eyes appear and make sure it wasn't some drunk Nord or something. The board closed again, and then a crawlspace revealed itself. The small meeting room, which was was illuminated by four blue lanterns in each corner, was occupied by his Argonian client and his two handmaidens.

Ian distained such flaunty displays of wealth and power (although he himself was a wealthy Imperial), but this was an Argonian, after all most were poor or only slightly rich. The client -Hurmun- squinted at him, with his lizard eyes. "Have you recovered to artifact? Or are you just wanting a chance to annoy me?" touchy little lizard, he thought. Reaching into his satchel, Ian removed a spherical humming rock. Yeah I got the sigil stone for you, Hurmun. Now do you have my fee? Or are you trying to waste my time?" Hurmun stared at the deadric artifact in his hands, then nodded at Ian. One of the Argonian maids brought a huge bag of gold, and handed it over.
"Now, Ian, I have a little matter that you can help me with before we depart." Ian furrowed his brow and frowned, "What would that be, lounge lizard?" Hurmun gritted his teeth (he did that when he was losing his patience) "A few of the bar patrons here don't want me to leave the inn.... alive anyway. I want you to.... dispose of these drunks." "Fine, but this had better be worth it." Then as an afterthought, he said "If you got gutted, it would be no skin off my bone -I have other clients"

Ian made his way down the stairs, there were four target he would have to kill: two Nords, an Imperial, and a Redguard. They were all leering at him, as he strode out the door. There weren't many bystanders on the docks, but the four brigands followed him out. He spun on his heel and unsheathed his elven shortsword, which was met by three cutlasses. The drunks were bigger and stronger, but they weren't thinking straight, and were clumsy. The commotion caused all the other patrons to come and watch in earnest. Ian held his sword loosely before him; the two nords tripped when they met less resistence than expected, and were caught between the hammer and anvil. Suddenly shouting came from the city gates and five guards charged toward them. The Redguard and Imperial, in a drunken frenzy, charged screaming at the watchmen, but were stabbed by the Anvil guard. Not eager to make a similar mistake, Ian sheathed his blade and set it on the ground along with his bow and arrows. "You have been found illegally brawling in the city limits, but you surrendered without conflict; that will be recognized by the judge, come with us...."


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post Oct 12 2006, 04:21 AM
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ok guys, here's a short post for you all.....

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Chapter 4 (cont.)

Ian opened his eyes and peered critically around the cabin. There was a tall robed man standing in front of the door, Ian didn't need to guess what the intruder was. The man said, "Greetings, murderer. You've just begun a new chapter in your life's dark journey, my name is Lucien Lachance" Ian got up and acted cordial. "Good to meet you, Mr. Luchance." He smirked, "Ah, you are obviously experienced in minipulating people by word. Now, formalities aside, the Dark Brotherhood extends an invitation to join our exclusive family." "What must I do?" "Listen closely," He replied. "On the Gold Road, south of here, there lies the Inn of Ill Omen. Wasting away his remaining days there, is an old man called Rufio. He must die for you to gain acceptence among the Night Mother's children. Now take this dagger and gold, as gifts from your new family. I bid you farewell, my Imperial brother." With that luchance dissappeared, no doubt due to some powerful spell or item. Welcome to your new family. Ian rolled his eyes, he never had a family....... except for Sarquin, Valkarez, and Raphiel....... and he didn't want another one.

Ian walked all the way to pells gate, before taking a small break. Luchance had given him five hundred septims, a sizable fee, but a small bone compared to his inheritence. He didn't know how much his own liniage had left for him, but it was a great deal. Ian had graduated six years ago, when he was fifteen...... but none of his friends had.
They had all died in the ambush. It hadn't been deliberate attack. Ian lit a small hackle-lo and looked up at the blue sky. It turned out that the group had just been in the wrong place at the wrong time...... there had been a turf wars between the lizards and cats, with the agents in the crossfire. Some managed to escape into the woods, and wait the battle out. The only reason that Ian had survived was because of that darn poisoned arrow. He slept for the entire fight, and nobody bothered to check if he was really dead. It hadn't been skill our deviousness that saved his skin, no a stupid arrow knocked him out. The others just got massacred. After the fighting ended some of the survivors found him as he was consious......... Ian, thirty appretices, and one sensei, that was it. The others had fought their way out, but he had just fallen asleep and ignored.......
He arrived at the Inn at dusk, and stepped inside....... There was a Nord for a bartender talking to a female Redguard, both were disgustingly drunk. Ian rolled his eyes, and slid silently through a trap door. There were two rooms, the farthest one had an "ocuppied" sign on it. Ian slowly opened the door, an old man was laying on the bed. Ian simply nocked his arrow and let it fly. He slowly walked away from the Inn of Ill Omen, and hoped, hoped, that the dark Brotherhood would be of some help for finding the rogue agent.......

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Lord Revan   Ian   Sep 12 2006, 04:14 AM
The Metal Mallet   Multitasking eh Revan? I wish I could do that but...   Sep 12 2006, 10:06 PM
Lord Revan   he he, you would be right on imprisonment MM, but ...   Sep 12 2006, 10:24 PM
Lord Revan   Ok, well here's another update on Ian ---- ...   Sep 14 2006, 01:27 AM
The Metal Mallet   Ah! Rats! Those rats scared the bejesus o...   Sep 14 2006, 02:08 AM
Lord Revan   Well I have a song I'd like to sing about that...   Sep 14 2006, 02:42 AM
The Metal Mallet   No idea, I use the PC version. I don't really...   Sep 14 2006, 07:38 PM
Kayla   Yay for multitasking! Turning out to be a grea...   Sep 15 2006, 04:15 AM
Lord Revan   Well I'll try the digital camera thing MM. ...   Sep 15 2006, 10:02 PM
Lord Revan   Ok continuing chapter 1 :D ---- Chapter 1...   Sep 17 2006, 01:27 AM
The Metal Mallet   Well it certainly seems that Ian is a very capable...   Sep 17 2006, 03:52 AM
Lord Revan   Indeed Metal Mallet..... ----- Chapter 2 (...   Sep 17 2006, 10:42 PM
The Metal Mallet   Oooo this note sounds like an interesting twist, I...   Sep 17 2006, 11:04 PM
jack cloudy   Good story, but I don't quite like the start o...   Sep 18 2006, 08:52 PM
Lord Revan   Chapter 2(cont): Starting Over Again..... Ian...   Sep 21 2006, 02:54 AM
The Metal Mallet   Well it seems that Ian has uncovered a plot of som...   Sep 21 2006, 07:59 PM
Lord Revan   well, continuing with the story..... ----- ...   Sep 22 2006, 04:32 AM
Lord Revan   Chapter 3(cont.): Tussle and Murder.... Ian b...   Sep 24 2006, 05:55 AM
The Metal Mallet   A lot of new information is revealed in this updat...   Sep 24 2006, 06:43 AM
Lord Revan   Ok here is a short update tonight....... ------ ...   Oct 7 2006, 05:38 AM
The Metal Mallet   Hmmm a very interesting dream, sounds like a past ...   Oct 7 2006, 02:31 PM
Lord Revan   Well MM, it was a dream, and it was a past recolle...   Oct 7 2006, 05:52 PM
The Metal Mallet   Yes I certainly am! :D   Oct 7 2006, 06:26 PM
The Metal Mallet   And so begins possibly a lot of future killing for...   Oct 12 2006, 07:26 PM
Kayla   Yay! The Dark Brotherhood! I can't wai...   Oct 13 2006, 10:14 PM
Lord Revan   Chapter 5: Among Kin.... Ian lit a hackle-lo ...   Oct 22 2006, 06:20 AM
Lord Revan   Chapter 5 (cont.): Ian strode into the main ...   Oct 27 2006, 01:21 AM
The Metal Mallet   Well it seems Ian is integrating reasonably well w...   Oct 27 2006, 04:27 AM
Lord Revan   Chapter 6: The Death of a Certain Soldier of Fort...   Nov 19 2006, 05:28 AM
The Metal Mallet   Murder, murder! Murder most foul! Hehe, ...   Nov 19 2006, 08:55 AM
Lord Revan   thanks Metal Mallet, but Ian's relationship wi...   Nov 19 2006, 05:22 PM
Lord Revan   Sorry, this is a short update for now....... enjoy...   Dec 8 2006, 03:42 AM
The Metal Mallet   Hehehehe... I knew what that was all about.   Dec 8 2006, 09:23 PM
Lord Revan   Chapter 7 (cont.): The night air was cold eno...   Dec 9 2006, 06:14 AM
The Metal Mallet   Hmm... that's an interesting way to have someo...   Dec 9 2006, 03:47 PM
Lord Revan   Ok, here's a short update........ ------- Ch...   Dec 10 2006, 09:40 PM
jack cloudy   A finder's reward? :D Heh, I like the part wit...   Dec 10 2006, 09:58 PM
Lord Revan   Chapter 8: The Quest..... The walk to Weynon ...   Dec 13 2006, 04:33 AM
The Metal Mallet   The plot increases... I look forward to what happ...   Dec 13 2006, 04:46 AM
Lord Revan   Chapter 8 (cont.) The conversation was quite ...   Dec 14 2006, 12:52 AM
The Metal Mallet   That last sentence has the exact same sentiments a...   Dec 14 2006, 04:34 AM
jack cloudy   Oh, suspicions eh? I like Ian. He thinks about his...   Dec 14 2006, 07:14 PM
Lord Revan   Sorry, but this is a short one for now. :D -----...   Jan 9 2007, 01:08 AM
The Metal Mallet   The Daedra cometh! And it certainly looks lik...   Jan 9 2007, 01:59 AM
Lord Revan   Another short one, I hope to get a nice long updat...   Jan 10 2007, 04:18 AM
Lord Revan   As he strode down the road, Ian looked over his cl...   Jan 14 2007, 01:35 AM
Lord Revan   Chapter 9: This is sacred ground, it was built for...   Feb 13 2007, 04:42 AM
The Metal Mallet   Oh boy. Ian looks like he's in trouble. But ...   Feb 13 2007, 04:50 AM
jack cloudy   I'm surprised he managed to creep up that clos...   Feb 13 2007, 09:09 PM


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