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The Tale of Sudhendra Vahl: Part Seven

Darius, according to Master Demnevanni, ran his office out of the Madach Tradehouse in Gnisis. So, after translocating there after breaking my fast, I made my way into the lower half of the “shell” that comprised the Tradehouse. Darius was short, stocky, and clad in gorgeous armour – all gilded metal with a flowing red cape. He looked up at me and said, “So, you want to join the Legion do you Citizen Vahl? Well, it’s true that we have a shortage of Manpower ~ and Merpower for that matter. You look capable enough. Tell me, are you capable of following orders?”

“Excellent,” he said when I assured him I was. “It’s a Mer’s life in the Legion. Every day a walk in the park, every meal is a banquet, every pay check a fortune. It’ll make a Ma... Mer of you. Right, Recruit Vahl, here is your regulation-issue chain cuirass. You will wear it when you address a superior officer, do I make myself clear?”

“Yes… sir,” I replied.

Darius shook his head. “The first and last word I want to hear out of your mouth when you address me is ‘Sir’. Now sound out like you got a pair. Do you understand me?”

“Sir, yes Sir,” I said in a clear voice, desperately trying to ignore the sniggering Orc in the corner of the room.

“Outstanding,” he said. “Now get that cuirass on and I’ll give you your orders.

“You might be wondering,” he said once I’d got the chain cuirass in place, “why I am billeted in the Tradehouse? Well, it’s because we have no room to expand. The widow Vabdas has a parcel of land the Legion needs to expand. I want you to come back to me with the deeds as quickly as possible. Is that understood?”

“Sir, yes Sir,” I replied, turning to march out of the room. As I went up the stairs, I heard General Darius addressing the Orcish Trooper, “gro-Khazor, what is your major malfunction?”

Vabdas had a house just west of town, out past Arvs-Drelen, so it wasn’t difficult to get to. Her reaction, when I spoke to her about the land-deed was to slap me across the face ~ hard. I suppressed the spells that roared into my mind and, speaking carefully, said, “you would be wise not to do that again.”

“Why?” she snapped, and now I could see the tears in her eyes. “Because you’ll kill me like you did Mansilamat?”

“I assure you ma’am,” I told her, “I had no part in the death of Mansilamat. Tell me what happened…” Bit by patient bit, I dragged the story from her. It seems that her husband, the aforementioned Mansilamat, had gone to the Egg-Mine at Gnisis to get some eggs. There, according to the widow, the Legion had killed her husband.

As I walked back towards Gnisis, I reflected that whatever power controls my life has an infinite capacity for capriciousness. What should have been the simple acquisition of a deed to some land had now become a murder investigation. Of course, that was how General Darius saw it and he told me to obtain proof that the Legion had been involved. Fortunately, the guard at the door of the Egg-Mine proved amenable to my charming behaviour and, after checking that there was nobody watching, he gave me the key to the door.

There was a familiar stink about the mine, one that I remembered from the Mudan-Mul Mine. Drawing my sword, I advanced with some care. Fortunately, whatever was blighting the mine was confined to the lower quarters and the Scribs in the upper chambers were not aggressive. I wish the same could be said of Trooper gro-Ogdum. The Orc gave me a three count to get the Oblivion out of the area he was guarding. As quickly as I could, I chose one of the passages and headed off down it. From up ahead I could hear the drip-drip of water and a strange noise ~ like wind. As I rounded the corner, I came upon the source of the sound. There, in the middle of the passage, was an Ancestral Spirit.

“Hear me Mortal,” it moaned, as I made ready to swing my sword, “Stay your hand ~ I am Mansilamat Vabdas, I was murdered, most foully, by the Orc Lugrub gro-Ogdum. I beg you, avenge me…” The last syllable was drawn out as the spectre faded from view. I knew that the word of an apparition would carry no weight with General Darius: I needed more proof. I found it in the depth of the pool nearby ~ the corpse of Mansilamat and a notched Imperial axe.


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OverrideB1   The Tale of Sudhendra Vahl: Every Day a Walk In The Park...   May 3 2005, 06:37 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Great! Very nice Override, keep this up! :lickingl...   May 3 2005, 07:09 PM
jonajosa   Last one was kinda short... But as long as it keep...   May 3 2005, 08:45 PM
minque   Oh yay.....another chapter, how wonderful... Th...   May 3 2005, 09:05 PM
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Fuzzy Knight   Ahh great Override! :goodjob:   May 4 2005, 07:18 PM
Wolfie   cool :D   May 4 2005, 07:42 PM
Aki   :lol: Funny. ^_^   May 5 2005, 12:01 AM
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minque   Very nice and neat handling of this task...our lit...   May 5 2005, 07:24 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Hehe, nice :goodjob:   May 6 2005, 08:14 AM
OverrideB1   “I’ll have a word with Mast… the wizard, sir,” I s...   May 6 2005, 05:01 PM
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minque   Yay..this was an interesting part.....I did like t...   May 8 2005, 10:40 AM
OverrideB1   There isn't, as far as I remember, any text on the...   May 8 2005, 11:44 AM
Alexander   I simply took a scrap of the text from the Imper...   May 8 2005, 12:52 PM
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OverrideB1   Lord Zumars, I thought to myself as I stood up. Th...   May 9 2005, 06:02 PM
Wolfie   cool. But what's she gonna do with the armour? i m...   May 9 2005, 06:06 PM
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minque   Now wasn´t that a crying shame???? :D oh yay...   May 10 2005, 06:46 PM
Wolfie   that was great :D   May 10 2005, 07:01 PM
OverrideB1   Once again I found myself sailing out of Hla Oad t...   May 11 2005, 06:47 PM
Wolfie   cool   May 11 2005, 07:50 PM
OverrideB1   Since the last one was a bit short...   May 11 2005, 07:57 PM
OverrideB1   Imsin the Dreamer was, as her name implies, a Nord...   May 11 2005, 07:57 PM
Wolfie   Brilliant :D   May 11 2005, 08:09 PM
minque   Definitely seconded.... :goodjob:   May 11 2005, 08:19 PM
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