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jack cloudy
post Nov 15 2006, 05:37 PM
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Yesterday was my birthday so here's my belated gift to all of you. The start of a new fanfic! (Wings of Light will be continued as well.) You may notice a shift of focus compared to my earlier fanfics.




Agent.
Chapter 1: In training.

My knees were shivering. For a good reason, I might say as the Duke towering over me looked very intimidating in his heavy suit of Ebony armour. Just to compare the two of us, the helmet would have been enough to crush me. Also, being dressed in cheap rags has never been a good source of courage. As it was, I had more than enough reasons to be afraid of him.

Who am I? I no longer use the name I was born with. I changed it upon my arrival here on Vvardenfell. Now I finally I have a name I can spell. Anyway, my name is Ro-El Frost. Sounds Khajiit? Maybe, but I am really closer related to the Nords, though without the muscles, the alcohol tolerance, the noise and without the size. Go figure.

The Duke turned to a man wearing some sort of golden armour. Probably the boss of the guard who was blocking the only way out of the room.
,,Is this the kid you were talking about?” The Duke asked with a stern voice. This did not sound well.
,,Yes, that’s the one.” Was the equally stern reply. This was one of those moments that your life would start to fly past your eyes.

How did I get here? Well, I don’t really know to be honest. People claim I must have been on the Skooma to have forgotten how I ever found myself in that mine. I didn’t like it there. The slavers forced me to do hard labour every day. I could feel my life slowly seep away with every single egg I harvested. I had to get out.

My plan took time but it worked in the end, except for one small detail. I harvested some poison one of the Kwama warriors had been spitting at the wall and mixed it with my food for the day. The day after that, I dumped it into the lake that was somehow inside the mine. The food had been swallowed by the Slaughterfish before I’d stepped away. The next part of my plan was the hardest. I’d been warned that the smell of their queen’s blood puts the Kwama into a killing frenzie. This information was meant so that the slaves were careful not to kill themselves, but it could also be used to my advantage.

So as you might guess, tapping blood from the queen is a potentially lethal act. Fortunately, I knew that by tapping just a little through a tiny wound made with my fingernail, the Kwama would not even notice. I carefully kept the blood sealed away inside a bottle till after four days, I’d finally collected enough. That night came the last part of my masterplan.

I managed to convince the slaves to go swimming in the lake, after showing them that the Slaughterfish had died through my act of poisoning. Next, I sprinkled the collected blood on the clothes of the slavers. I managed to get out to the lake before the killing started. I’d never been so glad that Kwama can’t swim. Those things were completely out of control. Which leads me to where I am now.

,,You have caused the death of three Dunmer and would have escaped if my Legionaires weren’t performing a raid at the same time.” The Duke spoke directly to me. Remember the little detail that went wrong? Well two dozen heavily armed soldiers who found a whole angry bunch of Kwama in their face, that’s what went wrong.
,,I thought they would run when the Kwama went mad. I didn’t expect them to die.” Was the weak defense I managed to whisper.

My arm was brusquely grabbed by the guard. The slave bracers I’d been forced to wear clattered on the floor.
,,Ro-El Frost, you have closed down an illegal egg mine and punished those who were responsible. You have further freed their prisoners who are being returned to their families as we speak. All that without harming the Kwama themselves, my men are responsible for that. As such, it is my pleasure as a servant of the great Emperor, Uriel Septim, to grant you your freedom and to take you into my service as an agent in the order of Ebonheart. Serius will escort you to your room.” The Duke now said with a smile and pointed at the guard who had released me from the symbol of slavery.

In a flash of inspiration, I snatched the bracers from the floor before I was dragged out of the room by Serius. We ascended many stairs before he finally threw open a wooden door and pushed me inside. ,,Consider everything in this room to be yours. You’ll be summoned tomorrow at 6 am. Wait inside your room till we come for you.” Serius ordered me before slamming the door shut. Not the nicest guy in the world.

I sat down on the bed and looked around, still unable to believe what had just happened. Instead of being branded as the bad guy and possibly executed, I had been turned into some sort of hero. Not exactly something that happened to me every day.

After I finally admitted to myself that things had turned out alright, I took a look around the room they’d given me. Apart from the bed, there was a closet, a mirror, a desk with several books on it and a sturdy wooden chest. It wasn’t big, but not small either. I opened the closet with the intention of swapping my dirty old rags with something more comfortable. It was cold this time of the year. The closet did not disappoint me. It was filled with all kinds of clothes ranging from simple but sturdy to downright extravagant and fit for a noble. There were shirts, pants, robes, shoes and even a few skirts, though I did not know what I was supposed to do with those. Men don’t wear skirts where I come from. Finally there were a few gloves on a separate rack.

I choose for a simple blue shirt with matching pants and a pair of shoes fit for indoor use. As the last action of the day, I picked up the book lying on top of the pile. ‘History of the Empire, part 1’ it said on the cover. If my idea of an agent was somewhat correct, these books had been placed here for a reason. I had some reading to do.


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post Dec 29 2006, 08:14 PM
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Shortest update ever! ohmy.gif Reason? I need to figure out a good look for the third blade. I already have a name, now I need the visual aspect. Also, I know nothing of Chimer or Dwemer marriage ceremonies, so I'm just making this all up.





They all looked expectantly at the sky. There it was, blocking out the sun. The strange machine descended towards the land with a slow graceful spin. Ropes were thrown down, Dwemer rushed up to secure the Airship to the rings embedded in the rock. Now a trapdoor opened, revealing a ladder.

Dumac climbed down and set foot on the ground.
,,Ah, finally arrived. It may not be as quick, but I’ll take the Cloudcleaver over teleportation any day.” He chuckled as he waved a greeting at the collected Chimer and Dwemer. He moved quickly over the carpet towards the door, eager to get inside before it would start to rain. The metal doors opened without a sound, their hinges being regularly oiled.

,,You’re late, Dumac.” Was the first thing Nerevar said to his friend. The Chimer was dressed in a traditional suit of armour that had been in his family for generations. It was too heavy and uncomfortable to use in real battle but for a ceremony such as today’s, it was perfect. Dumac wore a much more comfortable version of Dwemeric chainmail with Glass decorations. Finally, there was Almalexia who wore an exquisite dress as opposed to a suit of armour. Dumac greeted the woman politely before stepping onto the platform that had been built just for the occasion.

,,Chimer, Dwemer! I thank you for coming to join us on this glorious day! It is with a great sense of pride that I witness how this man and this woman will pledge their oaths! Well, I’ve never been a great lover of pompous ceremonies so let’s make it quick, shall we?” The king of the Dwarves shouted over the crowd, causing a few laughs. Dumac’s distaste for ‘pompous’ ceremonies was nearly legendary.
,,Nerevar Indoril, I grant you the hand of this woman, Almalexia. Almalexia, you have renounced your name and now lay claim on the name of Indoril. I grant your hand to this man, Nerevar Indoril. Do the both of you, swear that you will support each other? In peace and in war, in prosperity and in poverty?”
The Chimer answered as one.
,,Yes.”

Dumac smiled.
,,Good, then let’s get this over with and move on to the good part. It is time for the gifts!” A Dwemer stepped up to the king. In his arms he held a pillow. Three sheathed blades rested on the soft fabric. Dumac pointed at them and frowned a bit.
,,Why three?” He asked curiously.
,,Kagrenac couldn’t stop after two. He felt he needed to use all three elements. The third is for you.” The Dwemer explained. Dumac’s frown vanished.
,,Oh, I like receiving gifts. Give him my thanks.” He told the Dwemer who dropped the pillow with the swords on a pedestal and stepped back into the crowd.

Dumac picked up the first sword. It was a vicious, toothed scimitar. The moment he unsheathed the blade, bright flames erupted. Through the flames, Dumac read the inscription.
,,I present this sword to you, Nerevar Indoril. It’s name is Trueflame. May it always show you the right pad.” He spoke as he resheathed the blade and attached it to Nerevar’s belt. He then picked up the second blade. While Trueflame had been a brutal fang of flaming steel, this sword was sleeker and wrapped in crackling lightning.
,,I present this sword to you, Almalexia Indoril. It is called Hopesfire. May it bring hope to you in dark times.” He spoke with and attached it, with some trouble, to the belt of the woman’s dress.
,,Why is it called Hopesfire when it holds the element of lightning?” The Dwemer muttered to himself as he now reached for the third and final blade.


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jack cloudy   Agent   Nov 15 2006, 05:37 PM
Taillus   I would definately say we have a winner on our han...   Nov 15 2006, 06:16 PM
The Metal Mallet   This is definitely a new style for you Jack. I...   Nov 16 2006, 04:14 AM
Kiln   I've noticed that you've taken a first per...   Nov 16 2006, 05:52 AM
canis216   I like it... There are certain things you can do i...   Nov 16 2006, 06:36 AM
jack cloudy   I'm glad you like it. Yes, first person feels ...   Nov 16 2006, 05:12 PM
Taillus   Wow. Leroth is one hell of a talker. haha, poor gu...   Nov 16 2006, 05:57 PM
mplantinga   It would seem that Leroth's strategy is to flo...   Nov 16 2006, 06:46 PM
Kiln   The encounter with Leroth was rather interesting a...   Nov 16 2006, 08:11 PM
minque   Yay, Jack! You´re doing excellent!, Now fi...   Nov 16 2006, 08:24 PM
The Metal Mallet   You're definitely weaving this story really ni...   Nov 16 2006, 11:02 PM
Black Hand   Ahh. So Jacky has joined the ranks of the First Pe...   Nov 17 2006, 08:19 AM
Taillus   Yikes Black, watch out for those coat racks! T...   Nov 17 2006, 03:10 PM
jack cloudy   Need a light, Hand? I love fireballs. :D Now enjoy...   Nov 17 2006, 07:40 PM
The Metal Mallet   Uh oh, I sense we're going to be down a Bosmer...   Nov 17 2006, 08:51 PM
jack cloudy   I stared at the ceiling without seeing a thing. I ...   Nov 18 2006, 05:37 PM
Lord Revan   You're still doing well Jack, keep it up! ...   Nov 19 2006, 02:48 AM
Black Hand   You're just mad cuz you're godlike charact...   Nov 19 2006, 07:22 AM
The Metal Mallet   Glad to see our Bosmer buddy survived, though by a...   Nov 19 2006, 08:57 AM
Lord Revan   Maybe Ian would like to meet this new prodigy........   Nov 19 2006, 06:27 PM
jack cloudy   Update time! A longer one. :) I arrived tw...   Nov 19 2006, 08:04 PM
canis216   Interesting chapter... I wonder how Ro-El will get...   Nov 19 2006, 08:17 PM
The Metal Mallet   Ack! The dreaded cliffhanger! How I desp...   Nov 19 2006, 11:25 PM
jack cloudy   Consciousness slowly ebbed back to me. The first i...   Nov 20 2006, 10:31 PM
The Metal Mallet   Lucky Ro-El was captured by a Dunmer who was overc...   Nov 20 2006, 11:05 PM
Taillus   Man-oh-man is Ro-El a crafty sort! I loved the...   Nov 21 2006, 06:03 PM
jack cloudy   Hmm, debriefings seem to be ahrd to write. Nothing...   Nov 27 2006, 10:28 PM
Taillus   Wow! What an amazing update. I have to say I d...   Nov 27 2006, 11:00 PM
The Metal Mallet   Looks like Ro-El didn't have too rough of a ho...   Nov 27 2006, 11:03 PM
jack cloudy   No update yet, sorry. I just wanted to say that wi...   Nov 27 2006, 11:05 PM
Taillus   Mmm It would be a shame to not have Luper in the s...   Nov 27 2006, 11:14 PM
Black Hand   Nice update there Jack! I liked the de-breifin...   Nov 28 2006, 02:01 AM
Kiln   Even hearing of Luper as a background character st...   Nov 29 2006, 05:07 PM
jack cloudy   Did anyone ask for an update? As for this one, I n...   Nov 30 2006, 09:44 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hehe, Leroth fancies a little Bosmer lass. And th...   Nov 30 2006, 10:53 PM
Black Hand   Wait you mean Galbedir? Stuck-up b......osmer.   Dec 2 2006, 05:33 AM
jack cloudy   Hey, you can't argue about taste. Me, I wouldn...   Dec 10 2006, 10:59 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hmmm that's was an interesting vision, I'm...   Dec 10 2006, 11:42 PM
jack cloudy   Update time! The people in my vision were ...   Dec 12 2006, 09:53 PM
The Metal Mallet   Psst! Ro-El!! There's more than ...   Dec 12 2006, 10:27 PM
Black Hand   Oh Man, Jack, I'm still chuckling over that gr...   Dec 13 2006, 01:45 AM
jack cloudy   Heh, the note will play a role later, not now. ...   Dec 14 2006, 07:18 PM
The Metal Mallet   Who could the agent possibly be!? I want to k...   Dec 14 2006, 09:16 PM
canis216   I hate to be the one to bring it up, but... probab...   Dec 14 2006, 11:58 PM
jack cloudy   I'll let you wonder about it for a bit longer....   Dec 17 2006, 09:52 PM
canis216   Interesting. I honestly have no idea where this is...   Dec 17 2006, 10:01 PM
The Metal Mallet   Wow, these dreams/visions of Ro-El are really, rea...   Dec 17 2006, 10:09 PM
jack cloudy   Muhahaha! Cower in fear before the wrath of th...   Dec 21 2006, 03:41 PM
The Metal Mallet   Excellent update Jack! So we find out the ...   Dec 21 2006, 09:28 PM
Black Hand   Fargoth? NOOOOOO!!!!   Dec 22 2006, 11:05 AM
canis216   Fargoth? NOOOOOO!!!! Yes, Fargo...   Dec 22 2006, 06:50 PM
jack cloudy   No, Canis. The tax collector you speak of is the u...   Dec 22 2006, 07:03 PM
canis216   Oh, I don't blame you. It's a worthy inter...   Dec 22 2006, 07:13 PM
jack cloudy   Also a funny thing is, is it just me or is Seyda N...   Dec 22 2006, 07:17 PM
canis216   Also a funny thing is, is it just me or is Seyda ...   Dec 22 2006, 11:10 PM
jack cloudy   Ok, I guess that works. That leaves only a few oth...   Dec 25 2006, 01:40 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hehehe, Zarador seems quite the character Jack. I...   Dec 26 2006, 05:19 AM
jack cloudy   A long one. Enjoy. Our trip to Balmora was as ...   Dec 26 2006, 11:01 PM
minque   Ahhhh......nice Jack! Indeed very nice....   Dec 26 2006, 11:58 PM
The Metal Mallet   Now, hopefully Ro-El decides to continue on and he...   Dec 27 2006, 12:53 AM
jack cloudy   I just wanted to explain here that Pelinal and kni...   Dec 27 2006, 06:32 PM
The Metal Mallet   Oh boy, oh boy! Ro-El is in quite the predict...   Dec 27 2006, 06:54 PM
canis216   I've got a feeling about this reincarnation bu...   Dec 27 2006, 07:55 PM
jack cloudy   Short, so an update may follow later. I had a ch...   Dec 28 2006, 07:11 PM
The Metal Mallet   Oooo, I wonder what Dumac's Ice enchanted swor...   Dec 29 2006, 08:45 PM
jack cloudy   This weapon was straight where its two siblings ...   Dec 30 2006, 12:52 PM
Black Hand   OOhh! NICE Blade there, Jack! **Sneaks in...   Dec 30 2006, 01:06 PM
The Metal Mallet   Mmmmm sexy sword ya got there Jack. I wish I was ...   Dec 30 2006, 04:28 PM
jack cloudy   Heh, Forgeheart won't be in Mournhold, trust m...   Dec 30 2006, 10:50 PM
The Metal Mallet   Fine! I wish I was Dumac, but not one destine...   Dec 31 2006, 10:55 PM
jack cloudy   Dang, mallet. You just don't give up. And all ...   Jan 2 2007, 10:13 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hmm... Interesting update Jack. It seems Ro-El is...   Jan 3 2007, 07:54 AM
jack cloudy   That night I was working on my studies. Specifical...   Jan 3 2007, 07:17 PM
canis216   That was rather nasty of the Sixth House... it...   Jan 3 2007, 07:24 PM
The Metal Mallet   Yes, it certainly seems the Sixth House is getting...   Jan 3 2007, 10:43 PM
minque   Ehh what they just said...really great job Jack...   Jan 4 2007, 06:05 PM
jack cloudy   Dang, I wasn't planning on updating today. But...   Jan 4 2007, 11:41 PM
The Metal Mallet   And so the charge has been issued; Ro-El's que...   Jan 5 2007, 03:44 AM
jack cloudy   The tall man’s preparations took much longer than ...   Jan 5 2007, 11:03 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hehe, Nels is quite the character, I remember with...   Jan 6 2007, 12:59 AM
jack cloudy   I rarely talk to random people on the road. If the...   Jan 7 2007, 09:29 PM
The Metal Mallet   It seems that Ro-El always seem to run into pests....   Jan 7 2007, 10:23 PM
jack cloudy   Another short one. I bet you didn't see this o...   Jan 10 2007, 06:28 PM
The Metal Mallet   I kinda always thought that "Type 1" ref...   Jan 11 2007, 03:17 AM
jack cloudy   Umm, I do remember that either Trey, Serene, Telin...   Jan 14 2007, 09:56 PM
The Metal Mallet   I'm enjoying all these new Dwemer contraptions...   Jan 14 2007, 10:51 PM
jack cloudy   They'll show up, soon. First though, it is abo...   Jan 18 2007, 10:01 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well, it looks like Orvas will be getting a rude a...   Jan 18 2007, 10:17 PM
jack cloudy   Rude awakenings? Maybe yes, maybe no. Just read on...   Jan 22 2007, 10:45 PM
The Metal Mallet   Hehe, neat. I all ready have a good idea of who h...   Jan 23 2007, 12:56 AM
jack cloudy   This is called retconning I believe. The original ...   Jan 23 2007, 10:58 PM
The Metal Mallet   Great update Jack. It seems that an odd relations...   Jan 24 2007, 01:03 AM
jack cloudy   Daedric armour? Where? Not on Dren, I thought he w...   Jan 26 2007, 09:33 PM
The Metal Mallet   Well, I do know there are daedric greaves in Dren...   Jan 26 2007, 10:37 PM
DarkHunter   Well, I do know there are daedric greaves in Dren...   Jan 27 2007, 05:09 AM
jack cloudy   I was sitting on a throne. Several Dwemer were gat...   Jan 27 2007, 10:34 PM
jack cloudy   Nerevar walked through the door, followed by four ...   Jan 27 2007, 11:14 PM
The Metal Mallet   Wow, this vision is really cool. And I think the ...   Jan 28 2007, 12:10 AM
jack cloudy   Correct, first person. Let's just say that Ro-...   Jan 28 2007, 09:53 PM
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