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An Ashlanders Tale Chapter 3 |
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jonajosa |
May 4 2005, 02:41 AM
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Some of you may have read my first two chapter in this little adventure and enjoyed it. Well i've got alittle twist for yall. Let me introduce to you another charcter that is very important to this story. Her name is Johannes.
Chapter 3
[size=18]Johannes's Story
Here we come to a part in this adventure when another character’s plot begins to unfold. This character’s name is Johannes. She is a young female nord who grew up in the new settlement of Dagon Fel. So far her life has been completely unscathed by the war that was going on right outside her small village. However, as we all know nobody can escape war when it is already at your own doorstep. Let us begin Johannes’s story.
“Father.” Johannes asked when she saw her family rushing past them in the streets of Dagon Fel.
“Father!” He turned to look to see who was calling. When he saw Johannes his face lit up and he hurried towards her.
“Hurry daughter. A army is marching this way and I fear they have death and destruction on their minds.”
“What army? Who would want to attack our village?”
All I know is I saw a large group of soldiers coming this way and that I need to get my family out of here before the reach us.” He said in a very urgent tone.
I stared at him in disbelief but his face should too much worry and strain for him to be lying. “Ok. I must get home to gather my stuff.” I started to walk off but he grabbed my arm.
“No there isn’t enough time for that. They will be upon us at any moment we must hurry.”
I nodded and began to follow him through the village. Several people stopped to watch us in our hurry to leave but nobody looked too suspicious of us. I wondered why my father was not telling the others about this approaching army. Thy must know about them. My father would not condemn them all… would he?
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jonajosa |
May 7 2005, 12:11 AM
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I started to move towards the cave but the sight of the mud still coming at me made me falter and stop. I turned and ran up the hill behind me and climbed on top of a rock just before the river of mud ran past me. I stood there in the rain watching the mudflow pass me. It was washing away parts of the rock I stood on with it. I realized that if I did not get off my butt and move to another place of safety I would be washed away very soon.
I looked around me for a place to jump to but I saw nothing. Finally, I saw something floating down with the mud river. It was a group of trees caught together by the branches. I knew this was my last chance for escape from this rock so I got ready to jump when the trees got closer. I counted the seconds until I had to jump. Five…four…three…two…one. I jumped with all my might, sailed through the air, and landed right on top of the group of trees. I had made it.
I was filled with relief because right after I jumped the rock I was standing on got washed away under a sudden rush of water. I looked for the source of this sudden rush and saw that a rockslide had caused a large wave to come up behind me and push me faster down the river. I held on tight to the branches and prayed to the gods for mercy. Suddenly I ran aground. I looked around and saw I had been lodged on some sort of steep hill.
I had to climb it if I was to going to escape this deadly river. I jumped up, grabbed a small ledge, and tried to pull myself up. However, my upper body strength was not very good and it proved unsuccessful. I was about to drop down when the group of trees below me washed away.
“No!” I cried. “Come back!” The trees continued to float downriver until they were out of sight. My arms started to ache and I knew I could not hold on much longer. I was about to let go when a rope dropped beside me. Not thinking I grabbed onto it and held on with all my strength. I started to rise away from the river. When I looked up, I saw a white tattooed face looking down at me. He grabbed me and pulled me up over the edge. I looked around me, I was completely surrounded my nords and they were all glaring at me.
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jonajosa An Ashlanders Tale Chapter 3 May 4 2005, 02:41 AM Soulseeker3.0 hmmm interesting good job with keeping it alive. :... May 4 2005, 02:48 AM jonajosa Tears began to form in the corners of my eyes as I... May 4 2005, 03:01 AM Soulseeker3.0 crud that sucks... good job Jonajosa May 4 2005, 03:07 AM Fuzzy Knight Yupp! Good job JonaJosa keep it up.. :goodjob: May 4 2005, 03:06 PM minque
Johannes is a male name.......but if you remov... May 4 2005, 06:40 PM jonajosa Yes johannes is a male name but i like to prnouce ... May 4 2005, 08:40 PM minque ok....then it´s even more interesting.....so keep ... May 4 2005, 09:13 PM Dantrag I love this story. Glad you didn;t give it up. May 5 2005, 10:30 PM jonajosa I got a long one this time.
“There is no tim... May 6 2005, 02:39 AM minque Holy crap Jona!......What an awful fate for the fo... May 6 2005, 02:03 PM Soulseeker3.0 dang that must suck like Minque said May 6 2005, 09:29 PM Fuzzy Knight Nice! Great work JonaJosa :goodjob: Now who can th... May 7 2005, 08:42 AM minque Thank you JJ for posting that soon again.....Hmm i... May 7 2005, 11:15 AM Soulseeker3.0 yes good and whos Nords are they, hmmm. May 7 2005, 04:04 PM jonajosa Small part to finish this scene. Then we can get o... May 13 2005, 11:09 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job Jona. i wonder what will happen to Johann... May 13 2005, 11:29 PM minque Great! An addition about Joannes, I like that you ... May 14 2005, 03:30 PM jonajosa It was sometime before I had the blindfold taken o... May 15 2005, 04:51 AM jonajosa Intermission May 15 2005, 06:50 AM minque Ah great....more about Johannes the sweetheart, an... May 15 2005, 02:30 PM Soulseeker3.0 great job Jona! May 15 2005, 05:14 PM minque Ok so I post in your story again...you know why? w... May 18 2005, 09:28 PM jonajosa I was not going to be sad. I was joking. DO not po... May 18 2005, 09:45 PM burntsierra Pity? No, not pity. I admire the story, your willi... May 21 2005, 11:10 AM Ryden294 Great story here jona. Easy to read, of course, an... May 21 2005, 11:58 PM minque Great story here jona. Easy to read, of course, an... May 22 2005, 12:05 AM jonajosa What do i do to show that i havn't been listening?... May 22 2005, 02:41 AM jonajosa “Take to the lines! Bowmen, at ready! Pikemen, for... May 29 2005, 08:34 PM minque Thank you for updating this.....i was very happy t... May 29 2005, 08:45 PM jonajosa “Run my lady!” My new escort shouted as we ran thr... May 30 2005, 07:58 AM minque whew.....that was a close one.....Imagine the Nord... May 30 2005, 08:40 AM burntsierra I'm going to say it here as well. Brilliant. You'v... May 30 2005, 11:09 AM burntsierra Aargh, how on earth did I double post? sorry. Oh, ... May 30 2005, 11:09 AM Dantrag I catch up on this soon, even though I haven't rea... May 30 2005, 04:09 PM jonajosa “We must evacuate the city general! The nord army ... May 31 2005, 06:54 AM treydog An excellent action/adventure story. Good fight s... May 31 2005, 01:33 PM Soulseeker3.0 yay finnaly read those last parts, great job Jona!... May 31 2005, 10:45 PM minque I usually agree with treydog in writing-matters...... May 31 2005, 11:29 PM jonajosa She has never been fond of the nords since the tim... Jun 1 2005, 04:29 AM minque Ok..then I missed something here, i just read the ... Jun 1 2005, 01:37 PM jonajosa Re: An Ashlanders Tale Chapter 3 Jun 1 2005, 09:37 PM minque But Jona!!! I did.....I said she was a nord then s... Jun 1 2005, 09:42 PM MerGirl So, wait, she is a Nord, right? Just not raised wi... Jun 1 2005, 09:44 PM jonajosa There are people you hate the way their own race a... Jun 1 2005, 09:46 PM minque Woaahhh.....erhhmm..sorry usually don´t scream...e... Jun 1 2005, 09:52 PM MerGirl Oh, okay. Kind of like a Dunmer raised in Cyrodiil... Jun 1 2005, 09:54 PM jonajosa I was not screaming Minque. I was imatateing the p... Jun 1 2005, 09:59 PM minque Jona! I screamed..not you.... ;) i was just hopin... Jun 1 2005, 10:01 PM jonajosa Wells its only been two days since my last update.... Jun 1 2005, 10:06 PM minque oh don´t get me wrong....i don´t force you i just ... Jun 1 2005, 10:15 PM jonajosa I looked at Galos and saw his hand caressing the h... Jun 3 2005, 05:13 PM jonajosa “Faster! Faster!” A young sub commander shouted at... Jun 6 2005, 06:08 AM minque Magnificent battle-scenes! And the multiple approa... Jun 6 2005, 08:41 PM treydog An exciting battle taking place, with tactical sur... Jun 7 2005, 04:05 PM Fuzzy Knight Nice Jona... Like the battle-scene, very very good... Jun 7 2005, 04:37 PM burntsierra Nice Jona... Like the battle-scene, very very good... Jun 7 2005, 09:17 PM jonajosa “Sire, all forces are advancing upon the city. The... Jun 18 2005, 08:13 PM minque Beautifully written, touching, oh and i liked the ... Jun 18 2005, 09:09 PM Dantrag no update :( I did catch up though... :) Jun 25 2005, 10:30 PM jonajosa Let me do this then so people can see that my last... Jun 26 2005, 10:24 PM Dantrag I give you a.....you.
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great as e... Jun 27 2005, 12:49 AM minque There can be nothing but very good writing coming ... Jun 27 2005, 08:07 AM Fuzzy Knight Nice update Jona... Keep it coming! :goodjob: Jun 27 2005, 10:09 AM treydog Beautiful! And now Johannes has joined the battle... Jun 27 2005, 02:20 PM jonajosa This was supposed to go in the last post but I mis... Jun 28 2005, 12:15 AM Dantrag thanks for remembering :goodjob:
edit: now tha... Jun 28 2005, 12:16 AM jonajosa Marit stood the ridge that overlooked the valley t... Jun 30 2005, 10:55 PM Fuzzy Knight Oooh... More more!!! :goodjob: Jul 1 2005, 09:43 AM jonajosa “Sir! The nords have broken through the valley def... Jul 2 2005, 04:15 AM Fuzzy Knight ... :drool: Jul 2 2005, 11:01 AM minque I just got this update from jonajosa so enjoy... Sep 19 2005, 10:46 PM Dantrag Jona! Sweet update. I'll give you a...umm.... Sep 19 2005, 10:55 PM Soulseeker3.0 I'm sure its great but havn't the time to ... Sep 20 2005, 12:00 AM
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