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minque
post Feb 26 2005, 11:52 PM
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Ok so at last I came round to do it.....posting my story that is! I must thank all of you who have encouraged me to do it (oh yes you know who you are!)

Special thanks to Treydog who has helped me with editing and also for being a sounding-board, and thus kept me writing.

I now start with the prologue of my story just to see if you think you like it and want to read more

Enjoy!

Dedication


This work is dedicated to Treydog, whose enthusiasm encouraged me to really write this story.



Prologue.

Alone at last, I close the door behind me as I enter the small room which serves as my private library. I’m proud to say that I probably have the most complete collection of books in Vvardenfell these days, though it has taken me the last seven years to get it.

As I tucked my daughter into bed a while ago, I decided that now the time had come to write down my story. Mostly for her sake, but also for me; I need to get it off my mind, in order to continue with my life and to be able to fulfill the tasks that lie before me. Then there are the numerous questions asked by the little girl lying in the next room, unaware of the fact that she’s a miracle of the Age. . Questions about why there are so few children around and why they all seem to be nearly the same age, that is, age 5 and lower. Questions about why everyone she meets looks at me, her mother, with admiration and respect. Questions about why there is a non-ending row of visitors who want to see me and so keep me from being with her, like a normal mother would be.

I know the answers to her questions, but providing those answers means I will have to tell her the whole story, the story about me, Serene of Cyrodiil, a legionnaire’s daughter of uncertain heritage, who has become one of the most powerful and famous people in Vvardenfell….

So there it is......feel free to comment, it´s a short one I know but I have to start somehow.....


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Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)

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minque
post Mar 5 2005, 02:29 PM
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The next time I opened my eyes I encountered darkness. I found myself lying on a bed-like thing on a filthy mattress. I didn’t see anything at first but when my eyes got used to the weak light I noticed that I had to be in a cell. Damp stony walls, the worn bed I was lying on and the compulsory bucket in the corner. The smell was …well, interesting.

I tried carefully to move, first my head from side to side, then my arms. The left arm was still hurting me and the sleeve of my shirt was soaked with blood. I closed my eyes and tried to concentrate all energy to the wound. By doing that I also got my mind off the dull pain in the lower part of my body. It was hard this time; I was totally worn out by the last hour’s events. Then I felt the arm getting warm, and I noticed the bleeding had stopped. Now I just would need some marshmerrow and wick wheat to close the cut and heal it…..Very possible that would be in my current situation! In the meantime I unwrapped the belt from my waist- it was made of a broad piece of cloth so I could easily tear off a strip and tie it tight on my arm.

The broken ribs would heal easier, I just had to lie still and try to focus on the ribs as I slept; oh how grateful I was to Marthona who taught me of all these healing skills! She used to say that I had the “gift”…and also claimed that there must be a drop of Elfish blood in me somehow…..

Well I wouldn’t know about that anyway, but thinking of my origin made the tears run again and I didn’t want to cry anymore, wouldn’t give the legionnaires the pleasure of seeing me broken.

Then the door was flung open and a young boy entered the cell with a tray in his hands.
“Some food for you mistress Serene” he said and looked away from me. Well I must look really awful then, if my guards didn’t even dare to put eyes on me. The food was gruesome- some watery soup with something undefineable floating around in it, and a piece of bread, shaggy with green mould. My hunger, though, was greater than my distaste for the food, so I ate it all.

Why the boy had called me “Mistress”…..maybe my father had arrived; it should be common knowledge by now that I was imprisoned. Oh what a dishonour to him having an illegitimate daughter who also had committed murder…

I fell asleep…..concentrating on my broken ribs…

The next morning I felt a lot stronger. When trying to take a deep breath I didn’t feel the broken ribs dig into my lungs anymore…..so my healing skills were functioning quite well! I did wish I had my alchemy- gear and my collection of herbs and plants with me…because I realised that I had to do something about the other bleeding. It had slowed, but not stopped and my trousers and the mattress were soaked with blood.

Breakfast was as delicious as last night, only this time it wasn’t brought to me by a young shy legionnaire but by my Uncle Varus!!

The time has come to tell you about my Uncle Varus. Rufus and Varus Vantinius were brought up in the Imperial City by their parents, Julianos and Antonia, to honourably serve the Emperor and the Imperial Legion. Both boys were ambitious and became skilled soldiers. But when it came to social matters, Rufus was the most successful, for he was attractive to women, strong, honest, intelligent, considerate and most of all he had the looks! He could converse with anyone about anything, he read books, took an interest in music, theatre, and all cultural events going on in the City. And so he found Larissa and got married, purchased a stately mansion and continued a full social life. His personal courage and good works made him highly respected in the Legion as well as among the citizens. He was even running for councillor’s election this year.

Varus, on the other hand, was not at all intellectual, took no interests in any cultural events, and did not read books…he was an arrogant and highly skilled warrior, that’s all. Women were attracted to him at first, for he was also rather handsome, but the relationships didn’t ever last. Underneath the good looks lurked a cruel and jealous spirit. Therefore he envied his brother Rufus for having achieved a home, a wife and…..a child; me!
The rumours said that he used to beat the women when they didn’t do exactly as he said, or if he was just in the mood for beating somebody.

I believed that rumour as I looked up in my Uncle’s face when he came into my cell that chilly morning.

He stared at me with cold blue eyes and an expression of loathing on his face. Then he snapped his fingers and an elderly woman entered. My eyes widened…it was a Dunmer woman…why on earth would the Legion have Dunmer working for them?

“See to it that this…this person will be presentable for the trial this afternoon,” he ordered the woman.

She nodded and approached me. Even if she was affected by the state I was in, she didn’t show it at all. She had brought sload-soap, fresh water, and some fragrant herbs and plants. I’ve said before…a little hygiene does wonders for me. I was neatly washed, my wounds were treated with medical herbs, and, the best of all, my bleeding was arrested. She dressed me in a clean shirt and skirt and added a brown woollen robe that made me feel warm and fairly comfortable considering the situation. Through it all, Uncle Varus stared at me coldly and with hatred.

When I was finished he handed a bottle to the Dunmer woman and growled,

“Give her this to drink.”

His voice was harsh and sounded evil. I hesitated at first; usually I don’t drink potions I don’t know the effects of, but this one smelled rather good and I was thirsty….

After swallowing the unknown potion I first experienced a warm nice feeling in my throat and the taste was also very nice…..but then!! My tongue seemed to grow and stuck to my palate; I couldn’t move it…and could not utter one word!!
When I looked at the Dunmer I saw she was crying…so I now understood I was enchanted with a Silence spell, I wouldn’t be able to defend or even speak for myself at the trial…..
What a terrible set-up! When I looked at Uncle Varus, I saw an evil grin on his face and I knew I was doomed……..


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Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)

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minque   Serene of Cyrodiil, her true story, chapter 1   Feb 26 2005, 11:52 PM
General Edor Crespin   It's rather short, but I am looking forward to see...   Feb 27 2005, 12:23 AM
minque   It's rather short, but I am looking forward to see...   Feb 27 2005, 12:41 AM
Alexander   well I've said it before minque. excellent work :g...   Feb 27 2005, 01:54 AM
OverrideB1   And you were worried about posting this... why? ...   Feb 27 2005, 10:29 AM
Elongar   It's not that hard after all, is it? I'm not sure ...   Feb 27 2005, 11:26 AM
minque   Thank you all for your kind comments....I´ll soon ...   Feb 27 2005, 11:52 AM
treydog   After much anticipation, we finally get to see the...   Feb 27 2005, 09:45 PM
Soulseeker3.0   great job minque to bad i didn't see this earlyer....   Feb 27 2005, 09:56 PM
minque   Ok so here you are then.....the first part about S...   Feb 27 2005, 10:46 PM
minque   Just want to show some more pictures of Serene... ...   Feb 27 2005, 11:01 PM
Alexander   excellent work minque. really off to a great start...   Feb 27 2005, 11:55 PM
jonajosa   Good job. I liked it. Keep it up.   Feb 28 2005, 01:40 AM
Soulseeker3.0   way to go Minque! one question though, she whent ...   Feb 28 2005, 02:37 AM
minque   yes..she was ..her life was totally upside down an...   Feb 28 2005, 02:40 AM
Soulseeker3.0   oh well like i said, and everyone else that posted...   Feb 28 2005, 04:27 AM
treydog   One of the things I really enjoy about this story ...   Feb 28 2005, 03:11 PM
OverrideB1   Like Treydog, I think it's great that you're givin...   Feb 28 2005, 09:42 PM
Soulseeker3.0   hey minque i wanted to ask this yesterday but forg...   Feb 28 2005, 10:37 PM
minque   Ehh noo I cant say I did..in fact I do not even kn...   Feb 28 2005, 11:24 PM
Soulseeker3.0   oh nothing its just i'm reading the searies and in...   Feb 28 2005, 11:40 PM
jonajosa   Alittle of topic but did you use mods to create yo...   Feb 28 2005, 11:52 PM
Ze Milanio   I haven`t red the story (yet) but since I`ve seen ...   Feb 28 2005, 11:53 PM
Soulseeker3.0   I haven`t red the story (yet) but since I`ve seen ...   Feb 28 2005, 11:54 PM
minque   Alittle of topic but did you use mods to create yo...   Mar 1 2005, 12:15 AM
jchamber   Ok.. so the prologue showed that Serene in fact ...   Feb 12 2006, 02:50 AM
Elongar   I'm afraid I can't enlighten you but I can tell yo...   Mar 1 2005, 06:45 PM
Ze Milanio   OK... first, sorry for the late reply - I red the ...   Mar 1 2005, 07:01 PM
minque   OK... first, sorry for the late reply - I red the ...   Mar 1 2005, 11:28 PM
minque   As I slowly walked along the Nibenay River I thoug...   Mar 3 2005, 01:44 AM
Soulseeker3.0   wow good job minque i fell sorry for the dunmer, a...   Mar 3 2005, 02:08 AM
Ze Milanio   I feel... sorrow. Sorrow and rage, the two compani...   Mar 3 2005, 12:26 PM
treydog   Moving scenes- I have always said that "art" is so...   Mar 3 2005, 02:29 PM
General Edor Crespin   Nice job, minque. Two thumbs up.   Mar 3 2005, 02:40 PM
Elongar   :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: Make that three th...   Mar 3 2005, 07:02 PM
OverrideB1   This is excellent Minque. I'm really enjoying this...   Mar 5 2005, 03:02 PM
Ze Milanio   GRRRR :evil5: I feel like munching on some sewered...   Mar 5 2005, 05:17 PM
treydog   I like the fact that we have an "enemy" to focus u...   Mar 6 2005, 05:32 AM
jonajosa   Amazing. Your characters personalitys are done rea...   Mar 6 2005, 03:55 PM
Soulseeker3.0   i liuke your characters, well, not her uncle Varus...   Mar 6 2005, 06:04 PM
Elongar   More please. Encore, encore! :goodjob: :goodj...   Mar 6 2005, 06:07 PM
Magefire   This has the potential to be something wonderful -...   Mar 7 2005, 11:56 PM
minque   I was left alone in my cell again, sitting on the ...   Mar 8 2005, 11:20 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow great minque!! i like the parts were Serene is...   Mar 9 2005, 03:37 AM
treydog   Enjoyed the trial scene- also the way we get a sen...   Mar 9 2005, 02:15 PM
minque   I opened my eyes, and sat up in my bed, still shiv...   Mar 11 2005, 09:52 PM
Oozae   A professional writer you are my young padawanhttp...   Mar 12 2005, 05:04 AM
treydog   I like the way you make the cell-mates individuals...   Mar 13 2005, 02:26 AM
minque   We ate our meal in silence. Almina helped herself ...   Mar 14 2005, 12:41 AM
Ze Milanio   The scenes and events are almost alive in my head,...   Mar 14 2005, 11:35 PM
Elongar   Let's hope she gets to wield a DDK sometime then!   Mar 15 2005, 03:06 PM
jchamber   ah thank you lots ____ V V   Feb 12 2006, 04:26 AM
minque   Aye..she will....in due time, but now the last par...   Mar 16 2005, 11:14 PM
Soulseeker3.0   great story Minque! i just read the last three par...   Mar 17 2005, 02:26 AM
minque   great story Minque! i just read the last three par...   Mar 17 2005, 08:46 AM
Elongar   If not, I'll start a petition to get him back! ...   Mar 18 2005, 07:23 PM
Soulseeker3.0   lol just have fun... i feel like an adult talki...   Mar 18 2005, 11:34 PM
jonajosa   I wrote alot at your story at ES so if you wanna k...   Mar 20 2005, 02:23 AM
Elongar   Copy an' paste?   Mar 24 2005, 05:23 PM
jonajosa   um you have to forgive a slow person of his mistak...   Mar 24 2005, 07:08 PM
Tellie   DDK= a Daedric Dai Katana. It's one of the mor...   Feb 12 2006, 11:15 AM
Daedroth   That was great! I'll be reading more from ...   Feb 28 2008, 09:03 PM
SubRosa   I just finished reading Chapter 1. Serene is a ver...   Mar 28 2010, 08:32 AM
minque   @SubRosa! I'm very flattered you took your...   Mar 28 2010, 06:25 PM
SubRosa   In the words of Kid Rock, it's not bragging if...   Mar 28 2010, 10:37 PM
minque   Ah yes...the hair-mod I used hadn't the exact ...   Mar 29 2010, 09:23 PM
mALX   I have been amazed and hooked by this story - and ...   Apr 4 2010, 11:58 PM
minque   mALX, Thank you for your kind words, I really appr...   Apr 5 2010, 12:42 AM
Remko   Just finished reading chapter one. I like it! ...   Apr 7 2010, 04:09 PM
mALX   I have to admit I cried when she was sentenced and...   Apr 7 2010, 11:38 PM
minque   mALX, Remko! i'm so glad you like my story...   Apr 8 2010, 11:08 PM
Grits   Wow, Serene has had a rough start! I’m enjoyin...   May 12 2011, 03:44 PM


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